Tomorrow Has Not Come

The plot of Liu Yan seducing the male protagonist really disgusted me. I don't care what excuses she has, "tired", "no one likes me anyway", "I'm a bad girl", "only looking at the results and not the process"... This kind of behavior of forcing others to do things they don't like is wrong. Does she have no moral bottom line in her heart? No sense of shame? If there really wasn't, why didn't you just find someone to take care of her when something happened at home? In the final analysis, it is just a seduction plot that the majority of male compatriots like to see. To this end, the law can make concessions, science can make concessions, morality can make concessions, and our women's mysophobia can make concessions. If I see this kind of plot in those pure pornographic novels, I can accept it. Because you don't need to think so much, just do it. But here, in a serious story, it is very inconsistent to have such a character. If common sense existed, Liu Yan would have fallen long ago. Either you gradually like this feeling of disguise and no longer want to be attached to anyone. It just happens to be Lu Yuan, our male protagonist. There are many people richer than the male protagonist. I don't believe Liu Yan won't have such temptation after becoming famous. I hope there won't be such disgusting plots in the future. But regardless of whether the male protagonist was successful or not, Liu Yan's character has collapsed in my heart. She is a person who wants to destroy other people's feelings, is vicious, selfish, and self-contradictory. "Repaying tens of millions in three years" is just a character imposed by the author. The traces of sympathy and admiration in my heart just disappeared. Oh, maybe the meaning of her existence is just to promote the relationship between Lu Yuan and Su Mei. If this is the effect Qiu Ming-chan wants, then I have nothing to say. Maybe I took it too seriously. I like Liu Yan who supports his dream alone and finally returns "home". So I am extremely disgusted with this kind of seductive behavior that I don't agree with. If I thought of myself as a male, I might not have this trouble. I might shout "so cool" to those fragrant descriptions. But now I just feel it's against the grain. I have criticized it a lot, but I like the relationship between Su Mei and Lu Yuan and the perfection of the game. Come on, author!

A quite excellent piece of work. The bright line (and also the main line) of this book is to save the earth and climb the technological tree. The pace of this aspect is relatively slow, and it is estimated that it will be fully launched in the middle and late stages of the third volume. Another important part should be the emotional line, which is why this book is called a science fiction romance novel. This part accounts for at least 30%, but it does not feel artificial or routine. The characters are well drawn, fresh and refined, and vivid on the paper. It is an important lubricant for the development of the plot. It gives people a sense of relief in a future that seems (note this word) tense and crisis, and gradually develops with the in-depth development of the game. It is worth mentioning that there are many descriptions of life situations in the book, which can be used as a buffer when the plot needs to be expanded or is too compact. This is a touching work, and I hope the author will continue his work. PS: 1. Although the slow pace of the plot gives people a comfortable reading experience, I still hope to get to the state mentioned in the introduction of the book quickly, because it is more enjoyable this way. 2. The mobile phone code is so touching, please add some details~

I quite like this book. Actually, you sometimes think of time travel as too mythical. The author has already said about the male protagonist's experience, he is just an ordinary person. Ordinary people encounter the end of the world, and ordinary people wander the world with their daughters. You always put the male protagonist into a state of invincibility and explosive IQ. But have you ever been in a crisis as an ordinary person? I tried it, but it was powerless, my hands and feet were weak and my brain was blank. This is a state that everyone will definitely have if they have never experienced it. Not everyone will be motivated to fight when faced with a crisis. No matter how you criticize me, at least I, a 7-year-old bookworm, like it very much. I hope the author can stabilize his mentality and well describe the world he thinks in his heart.

The author's description of the doomsday is great, and the graphics are excellent, which made me feel like I was there. The setting of saving my daughter in the game is also very good, giving players the motivation to explore the game world. I discovered this book when I saw it recommended by the APP today. It is a good book worth reading. I couldn't help but write a book review after reading it halfway. As long as the author is not supervising, I will definitely continue to pursue it. Already fully ordered, please continue coding and write more chapters😁😁😁

I occasionally read this book today, and I have an inexplicable sense of compatibility, just like Sakura said to Haruki in the co-morbidity library, I kept making choices in order to meet you, and I have lived until now.       ，，， I think the author wants to, as an ordinary person, after going through the dark doomsday, use his own power to instigate the future bit by bit. After going through the darkest moments, he yearns for the light even more. (Take a different approach) There is a high probability that it will be a HE (happy end) ending, but since I am a strong supporter of HE, I think this is good. What I like very much is that Su Mei's writing is very spiritual. Maybe Su Mei is the transliteration of soulmate (referring to soul mate). Although I always feel that some parts are not completely rounded out (maybe an illusion). In short, I, Ye Sanqiu (some fat house, maybe one day a "wolf warrior" will find out who I am after reading this), like this book very much.

Come here for free. It seems that the logic is difficult to explain. The shelter cannot be completed in half a year. There must be an ecosystem inside. You only have a few years left before the disaster, and you are still procrastinating on the practice of teaching people and fishing. They were probably thinking that the first wave of disaster would reduce the population by more than half, so don't pretend to be too much of a virgin.

First of all, let me explain that the subject matter of this book is science fiction-interstellar civilization. Everyone knows the introduction. It is about a person who has experienced the apocalypse and is reborn in the past, determined to save the world. I was attracted by the subject matter and introduction. Writing a book review is not to criticize the author. It's just that as a bookworm of the past 10 years, I can easily fall into the drama while reading the book, so I've read about 260 chapters now, and some words really have to be vomited before I feel happy. This book is very creative as a science fiction doomsday conjecture, and the protagonist's entry point to save the world is also unique. Personally, I think the writing is good and the emotional scenes are deeply portrayed. However, the shortcomings are also obvious, that is, the outline is completely skewed, the branch lines are almost finished, and there is no movement in the main line. More than five years later, the world will be destroyed and the human population will become extinct. However, I have read about Chapter 260 and personally feel that the probability of human survival in the future has not increased. Even for those around the protagonist who has a golden finger, their chances of survival are not much improved. Because the rescue plan in the introduction has not been promoted, the level of science and technology has not been improved at all. The game of saving the world is just a simple game and cannot bring benefits. It also makes the protagonist rich and can better cheat people's faces. The protagonist is indeed an ordinary person, but I feel that the author has forgotten that he is a survivor of a desperate doomsday that has caused thousands of people to commit suicide for decades. This is most of his life experience. He cannot change the environment, he should have adapted to the environment and made changes. Although it will not turn black, killing it in advance may be dangerous, and it is a brainless killing. But just because you are reborn as a young boy, you cannot really become a young man with love, plenty of food, and everything to do with love. After all, the apocalypse he experienced should be more profound. Don't say that he is an ordinary person, so his love is profound. If this is the case, those who have regained what they once lost should desperately want to retain and save them. The result is Chapter 260. There are many supporting characters, but the distribution of scenes is unreasonable. The main plot is too little, and only 2/3 of it is dog food. This does not mean that there cannot be emotional scenes, but the priority must be reasonable. The emotional scenes interspersed with the main plot can attract the reader's attention, and the readers will look forward to the next emotional exchange. Please don't fall in love with it enough at one time. The shaping of the protagonist should be consistent with the setting. Do not forcibly reduce the intelligence in order to pave the way for the follow-up. Please make the protagonist's thinking more reasonable. The portrayal of the supporting characters was not done well in one step, and the supporting characters were completely revealed too quickly, and the dust settled on the supporting characters. Finally, to summarize, if this book is an urban novel or a romance novel, I can really praise it as a good book, but to be honest, this is not a good apocalyptic technology novel. I was torn about reading it, but I didn't want to give up halfway. It wasn't that the book was not good, it was just that I didn't get the original and wonderful science fiction novel that attracted me to start reading. However, he was fed overflowing dog food until his stomach became bloated, and he complained a few words. I hope the author can advance the main plot as soon as possible. You still have to have dog food, which is more exciting, but please reduce the quantity. I can still read books, but I have been fed too much dog food, and I am tired of aesthetics, so I can only temporarily close the book to gain weight.

In fact, I have been reading this book for a long time and have always wanted to read it. However, the book reviews from Qidian and Chuangshi showed that this book is very toxic and I have never dared to read it. Recently, I gritted my teeth and read almost 200 chapters. Overall, it is still a good read. Many people say that this book is all about romance and does not write about the end of the world. There are all kinds of noob routines emerging in an endless stream. In fact, this contradiction should be looked at separately. This book is in the science fiction category, and books in the science fiction category are basically poorly written and focus on creativity. Readers who read science fiction also come here to read science fiction. The importance of characterization comes after fantasy. They will naturally be impatient when watching the protagonists fall in love. Readers who don't read much about science fiction will naturally feel very toxic when they click on it, because the routines are all poorly used in urban categories. I can completely understand the author's ambition to add urban romance to science fiction, because once written, it will be a masterpiece, such as Grilled Fish's Galaxy Nobles, which was the number one book in the world at that time, and it is not a novel that won the first place, which shows that this kind of science fiction with romance is completely feasible, but Grilled Fish itself is a veteran of urban romance. The author has full and rich character creation, and is extremely good at promoting characters through the plot. Unfortunately, the author of this book has obviously failed in character creation. All the characters are reverse character behaviors. What the author says is what he says. If the urban part can reach the level of "countercurrent", no one will criticize it at all, right? Fortunately, the author's description of the game part is very good. The original doomsday game is very attractive. It contains the only flesh-and-blood character created in the book, the mecha sergeant. In just a few strokes, he outlines a soldier who is helpless in the face of the doomsday, but sticks to his humanity. It can be said that the description of the game is the essence of this book. Readers who feel that the beginning is toxic can skip it and watch the plot of the game directly. It is still quite good. If it is divorced from reality, it will not be so toxic. Finally, let's talk about Liu Yan. In fact, I completely understand the author's idea of ​​writing this character. I can feel that the author has spent a lot of pen and ink on this character. Although I don't know the significance of the 190 chapters, there should be arrangements later. It's still the same problem. It's really a pity for the author's character creation, so The actions of the characters are all because of the author's needs, because the author has arrangements. In this way, no matter how detailed the scene description is, it will still be false. The readers will only feel embarrassed when they look at your comic-style exaggerated Queen Liu Yan. Why is she so powerful? Why are the protagonist and Zhao so afraid of her, let alone being overheard in the bathroom. It is obvious that the author had a picture in mind when he wrote it. His idea was very emotional and consistent with the comic style. However, it is impossible for readers to figure out the logic of the character's behavior by themselves. The author omitted this part, which is why readers find this character embarrassing.

Speech on the launch to persuade people to quit 🙂 It is written about science fiction, but there are too many daily main plots in the early stage that are unclear (I give you a hook as big as the Transportation Commission, which is used to slap your parents in the face at parties, tease your wife and play with your gay friends every day to show off) The plot of the game is awesome, the realistic plot is very poisonous Then go to the launch speech, what? Only write about daily life and not the story after the sun goes out? The biggest attraction for us is that we look forward to the blood and tears of struggling to survive in the apocalypse. Then you tell me that the protagonist should eat, drink and save the world The end of the world is so shameless? Is it so bad if the sun goes out?

Any questions? ? ? The end is not coming, which can be understood as the end is not coming. If you gather all your strength, work hard, create, and work hard to the end, the end is not coming! That's not bad! But now the protagonist is taking his time and slowly, as if he knew from the beginning that the end was coming! ! ! The protagonist was also 53 years old before, 18+35. As a senior engineer, the transportation committee, the tombstone of humanity, speaks volumes for the protagonist, either the leader or the main force in development. Is this how you behave? ? ? There is also repayment. This person has his own ideas, but giving shares is haha. Should it be given to Wen Zhong's father or not to Wen Zhong's mother? ? ? It's fine to only give it to your mother, but you're only giving it to your father? ? ? As mentioned earlier, my father had a fight with my mother over the real estate certificate! ! ! And take all the money! ! ! The protagonist said that when the house was sold, his mother gave it to him directly! ! ! So the prodigal son comes back with gold? ? ? Ha 🙂 Absolutely awesome! Has the mother's contribution disappeared? ? ? 👍👍👍 There are many others, such as teacher Shen Xin. Although being a teacher is just a profession, you have your own life after get off work. But this does not prevent us from giving teachers a lot of honor as a profession. Just like an ordinary person, a teacher, we always tend to be teachers. Off topic! Alas, a little angry, so be it. All in all, good luck to the author. That's all, see you again.

The book is really nice, and the author's writing is very interesting, but the main selling point of this book is the setting of the world, the game, and the science fiction part. Don't get the point wrong! There are too many narratives outside of games. I hope the author can focus on games. After all, this book still relies on games and science fiction to attract readers.

I feel like this book must have been placed in the wrong category.

The early stage of this book is amazing, and the flaws don't seem to have much impact under the light of the setting. However, the two sub-plots in the past two months have been too protracted and boring. One Water Princess is not important enough and there are so many words. It took more than a month to write the two awards in a day or two. I can only see the ranking of recommended monthly tickets. When I first looked at it, it was more than 500 and now it is more than 1,000. The stamina is really lacking.

The only thing I want to say about this book now is, if you can't write emotional scenes, don't write it 😅

It's going to be an ice age. Are you thinking about money? It would be great if I could get my VR principal back. The intention is not for people to be informed in advance and adapt. The era is coming soon. You make it so expensive and civilians have no chance to experience it. Isn't it time to think about profit? Or do you want to be a philanthropist in the future?

I am a 15-year old bookworm. There is nothing wrong with your story. As far as the story is concerned, I read it deeply. It is a good book. There is nothing in particular that I want to complain about. Come on＾0＾~ It's a great story. Don't listen too much to the comment section. Then your story and your novel world will not be a good story. You are like creating a world god. You can do it according to your own needs. You need to slowly improve and add flesh and blood. Hurry up and update, otherwise I will have my legs broken and I will be locked up to finish writing this cold world full of despair but with some hope.

Normally, it takes five years to prepare, and three months are used to make money to pay off his father's debt.

I have read Chapter 5 so far, and it is still a bit toxic: 1. The sun will go out in five years, and it does not describe the urgency of the end. 2. The protagonist feels that he is still mentally immature after being reborn: 2.1 With an artificial intelligence assistant in his mind, the worry about controlling the score in the college entrance examination is too prominent (I am very curious, the world is almost gone, how to develop quickly after being unobtrusive). 2.2 Faced with the gambling father who took away the family's property and then the family was threatened by loan sharks, the protagonist is still taking care of this mess. He sees a warm family but only sees a waste of time. You have to spend 3 months to earn money to exchange for the loan sharks you owe for gambling on dogs, and it looks like you want to go to college? 2.3 After making a promise to the gambling dog, he called his future wife and said that he wanted to make up for his regrets and develop a game for his future wife. . . Seriously, it's too poisonous for the title of the book. The tension of the approaching doomsday is not described, giving the impression that the protagonist still has a lot of time to waste. If this is an urban bloody novel, to be honest, the current writing is very good. There are family conflicts, future wife settings, college entrance examinations, college life preparations, and the golden finger that comes with rebirth. The problem is that you should find a way to save your life now. If you are reborn and you can no longer be Wang Kuanglan, let alone save the world, you should at least make your life ten thousand times more comfortable. If nothing can be changed, I hope you won't write random words in the introduction. (The protagonist is reborn five years ago and is still very naive. In fact, it is still very normal. Many people are mediocre and have not made any great progress. However, this is an online article, not literature.)

I discovered a magical book before and subscribed to hundreds of chapters when it was being serialized. Recently, I saw it was finished and I have come back to it intermittently. ... Let me start with the conclusion: I can't hold on any longer when I see the bottom is about to fall. I thought the setting was interesting and the core was very stable, but the main storyline was pretty good, and it was a mess when I went abroad. The game also started to become unclear from the second chapter. It felt like science fiction for the sake of science fiction, or maybe it was simply the author's own creation. Finally, Jinghai got back on track without any drama, but ended up coming to the robot factory and crossing over with Lu Yao again... Okay, I can't accept another live broadcast in the dream, and then a bronze door popped up halfway... I thought for a moment that this book was linked to the Tomb Raider Notes next door. I won't talk about the first dungeon of Bronze Gate, we mortals can't even guess it; the second dungeon is acceptable, and shows Lu Yuan's reliable adult style; as for the third... To be honest, Happy Prince is just a large-scale intellectual dungeon. Those foreshadowings barely had the words "I'm sure you can doubt me" written on their faces, which made me more and more confused. Even! Going back to the beginning, when Cynthia asked "Do I want to seek God's help?", It wouldn't be that big of a deal to directly refuse... And insist on all kinds of new characters and all kinds of tricks... Brother, I don't know if you feel comfortable writing this copy, but you are a running team, and we are readers, two good friends with different experiences! I'm tired of typing. The titles of the remaining chapters just feel like child's play. If you don't read Liao, goodbye👋🏻

The book may not be popular enough. There are very few people writing chapters and chapters, and there is no internal flavor. But the plot I wrote recently is pretty good, and I hope it can continue to be updated steadily. (ps: How deep is the author's obsession with boys and girls! Every time the male and female protagonist's emotional scenes see this, they will act out. The supporting character's emotional scenes will seem much more natural without this.)

This novel is a sugar-coated cannonball. It's sweet on the outside, but as you get to the back, the taste gets weirder. It's like shit on the inside.

The protagonist's mother is a tool person. It's just like the lyrics, those who are favored are confident.

After reading Chapter 30, the theme is very good and the writing is very comfortable. The single female protagonist is also the type that I am looking for. It also feels good to include repaying the debt for the father. After all, it is a family. The main thing is the self-righteous emotional attitude in Chapter 30. Because I am looking for a book with a single female protagonist, I will also attach great importance to the emotional drama here, as long as it is not too pornographic and ridiculous. Chapter 30, 1. The male protagonist's emotional attitude is self-righteous. The male protagonist has a God's perspective. Indeed, the male protagonist is reborn, but you don't know the heroine's situation in the next few years. Under this premise, he looks full of confidence on paper. 2. Give the heroine an obvious hint of pursuit, know each other's contact numbers, and then hang on to each other, are you a scumbag? I can't accept the author's male protagonist's emotional outlook. Therefore, personally, the theme and background of this book are very good, the writing style is relaxed and freehand, and it seems to be a single female protagonist. However, because of this emotional relationship, I will not continue to support the author. Come on, author, I wish you better and better results.

How to put it this way, overall it's pretty good, but half good and half bad. The concept of the game and the end of the world, as well as the shaping of the end of the world, are very good. The game shows a sense of excitement like an urban writer. But the description of emotions and some daily plots are a bit toxic and need to be polished. While reading along the way, I felt like "Why don't you write about the game faster and insist on chatting here?", Which also caused me to flip through the table of contents. I hope the author can write better and better.

As a science fiction writer, I feel very ashamed when I read this novel...

When I first entered the book, the idea of ​​the book was very good, but I could tell from reading between the lines that the author still had some problems. First, typos. Sometimes typos really affect readers' reading experience. Second, regarding the formulation of the problem, some sentences are difficult to read or are somewhat convoluted. Third, there is a problem with plot development. The succession and transition are sometimes a bit stiff, and the connection between the main and sub-plots is not very coherent.

After reading this book and other books, I discovered a trend Cultivation of immortality does not necessarily mean destroying everything, killing people and grabbing treasures Apocalypse, not necessarily zombie sieges, alien invasions Science fiction, not necessarily Star Wars, the outbreak of black technology Urban, not necessarily showing off, harem wars Internet novels do not necessarily mean low-end reading, and not only readers can tell great truths. Many stories told in novels are more thought-provoking

There has been a lot of smoke in the comment section of "Tomorrow" recently, which profoundly reflects the fact that human beings are essentially repeaters. Why not hand over the Transportation Commission to the state from the beginning! Where is the author's logic? Why does the sun go out? Where is the scientific nature of the setting? Why do we need to set five years? Where is the rationality of time! And—why are you still writing emotional dramas? The world is about to be destroyed. Where is the protagonist's sense of urgency! Careful readers have discovered that the above four questions can summarize all the controversial posts in this book so far. In fact, the author himself has given very clear explanations on the above issues in the book review area. It's just that there are new people every day, which I really can't explain. This post excerpts the author's reply, please listen carefully - Question: Why not hand it over to the country? Qiu Ming: Internet articles are now dancing in shackles. Readers, please understand and understand this. This book was originally banned once just because it set the background of the story in 2030 instead of 2130. Please do not force the author to make things difficult. Question: Why does the sun go out? Qiu Ming: The sun goes out is a science fiction premise. My explanation in advance is equivalent to spoiling who the murderer is in the first minute. Question: Why do we set five years? Don't you think it's too short? Qiu Ming: Five years is really not a short time. The protagonist does not need pre-research, and the technological line is clear. Furthermore, unlock nuclear fusion first, and then pick up the robot... There is really not much difference between writing for five years and writing for ten years. Question: Why not hurry up and save the world, speed up the plot, and still have the protagonist fall in love even though the world is doomed? Qiu Ming: Please think carefully about whether you can give up all entertainment and socializing in the second year of junior high, study 16 hours a day, cut off all contact with parents and friends, and concentrate on studying to become a top student. After all, there are only five years left for the college entrance examination. If you honestly say you can do it, then I'm sorry, the protagonist is just an ordinary person and he can't do it. He could not give up all social relationships after rebirth, give up the opportunity to reconnect with the wife he loved most and owed the most to in his previous life, and devote himself wholeheartedly to the illusory and great cause of saving mankind. Because the protagonist is not a saint, just like all ordinary people, you will dare to die for your daughter or wife, but you will not go through fire and water and give everything you have for a stranger thousands of miles away. The end of this book will only appear in the game, and the sun goes out. As for the plot... If you take a book that costs only 200,000 yuan and ask the author where the plot will be after hundreds of thousands or even one million yuan, the author is also very desperate. The above remarks are basically excerpted from the author's speeches in the book club and in the book review area. So please, everyone, it's not easy to find food these days. As a book fan, I feel very disappointed when I look at the increasingly bad comment section. If you have any questions in the future, please reply to this post as well! In this way, people can see it later, and the author Qiu Ming will not turn into a repeater and explain the same problem over and over again.

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I was inspired to read this book while reading other books. At first, I thought it was a rebirth and salvation story with a tight rhythm, just like most other doomsday rebirth stories. But after reading dozens of chapters, I found that it was not in line with my expectations. To be honest, I was a little disappointed at the time, but I felt that the daily writing was pretty good, so I continued reading. But gradually, I began to feel that this kind of daily salvation article was not bad, and the author's writing rhythm began to get better and better, better than I expected, so I kept pursuing it. The game world written by the author is also very good, but I feel that relying on the game at the beginning to save the world is not enough. But until I saw the last few dozen chapters, the author gradually unfolded the second-stage game layout, which gave me a very amazing feeling - using real-life occupations as occupations in the game world, and the amount of knowledge mastered as the game level, and providing free educational resources in the game, allowing game players to "upgrade" through learning. And the settings of the main world and Utopia in the game world are also wonderful, which makes the game form a positive feedback. Then let the game affect reality and promote people in reality to master knowledge, thereby changing the world and achieving the purpose of saving the world. I feel that the recent dozens of chapters have suddenly given this book a sense of sublimation, making this book completely different from the previous main body of doomsday rebirth and salvation stories. Even the previous daily life has become a major feature of this book. I don't have much to say. In fact, I just want the author to know that I like this book very much. Please continue to maintain the characteristics of this book and keep writing. I think more people will like this book in the future. And I will always support the author!           PS: I am a Buddhist in reading and rarely write reviews, just because this novel is really good-looking, but the results are not as good as I thought, and I am poor, so I have to write this long review. Kudos to the author 😰😰😰 (In addition, this is my first long review, so I will cherish it!)

If I could sum up my feelings in one sentence, it would be that I have regained the original touch of reading. I really didn't expect that a book I picked up would make me so immersed in it. I haven't felt this way for a long time. I'm so excited.