There's Something Wrong with This Assassin

A classic light novel with rich characters, the male protagonist is all about flirting but not marrying, the plot gradually collapses, and the dialogue explains the setting. I really don't understand why a novel with a beautiful girl in the introduction has to add a line afterwards that there is no female protagonist, and the ancient beauties who took the initiative to express their feelings are not worthy of the modern male protagonist, right? Martial arts and martial arts, either writing about martial arts or writing about chivalry. If you don't plan to have a female protagonist, then you have to get the plot right. It's nothing more than being the best in the world, good versus evil, and the country is in turmoil. After reading the whole story, I can only say that it is an excellent light novel, but it is just a martial arts novel.

I have just finished reading the first volume. As a reader who resonates with the author's characters, plots, perspectives and emotional details, this book may not be perfect, but I enjoyed reading it. I really like the author's atmosphere in writing this novel. This is a world as big as a country as small as everyone's own. Therefore, this book not only shows the story of the protagonist Fang Bi, but also has all kinds of people with different outlooks on life colliding in the world created by the author. Each person's personality is combined to drive different plots, and finally a force is formed to gather around the protagonist. The subjective initiative and rationality of this book are actually better than what many people say and most other novels. Moreover, the rhythm is relaxed and relaxed in combination with daily life, and it is very comfortable to watch. Some people blindly seek speed, and martial arts may only be fast, but this is not necessarily the case for novels. Haste makes waste. This novel doesn't need to be fast all the time, and wouldn't you know the style of the book just by looking at the title? This is a light novel-style martial arts story that is a bit fun and has some love between children, but also shows the whole world and returns to one point. "And", I like the author's tone ~ I saw in this chapter that the author tried to give more than one serious explanation to some people who did not understand the reason why he created a certain plot and arranged a certain character's role, and some even thoughtlessly insulted and attacked people. I think it's all right. For people who really calm down and read your story and resonate with it, I don't think there is anything obscure. I even like each character you gradually revealed through the story, from the heroic girl to the ordinary people, like Shang Jiuge (don't give me a knife?), Xie Changfeng, Peanut Oil, and the policeman with a foreign name, etc. I think it is very successful, and I am increasingly looking forward to what new characters you will create next, how you will gradually reveal the protagonist and others and the subsequent plot. Therefore, I hope that the author will always insist on writing stories that he wants to write and like. This is your novel. First of all, you need to impress yourself, so that you can attract more people who have the same interests as you. "And", you must always have and will have more and more people who like to see you stick to your original intention and insist on showing the lovely characters in your works~ As for other immature people who like to criticize and extreme and even attack other readers, who restrict and threaten the author according to their own preferences, why should you care if they have different opinions and do not agree with each other? Take the essence and discard the dross. I hope this book can have a happy ending that makes people smile. Good luck, author! "And", I believe I am definitely not the only one who can get you. Ps: To be honest, when I was reading the book, I didn't expect that the comment area would be so full of flowers, because I think people who really like this novel and can resonate with the characters, plots and attitudes presented by the author will at least not be so violent when commenting, no. They will attack even a cute and distinctive character, and they will not force the author to distort and change the personality and behavior of the characters in the novel, or impose their own preferences on the author and other readers. This is not what is called "for the sake of the work", it is just extremely selfish and exclusive.

The setting doesn't match the plot. The more the protagonist is cautious, the more serious the separation from the development of the plot will be. Because many of the protagonist's actions do not conform to the setting of caution. In fact, the protagonist's character is set to be very cautious and stubborn, which can easily lead to a sense of division, because this character requires the protagonist to stay away from right and wrong and avoid trouble. But in order to advance the plot, one person had to be arranged to constantly cause trouble for the protagonist. Although this reduces the sense of division between the protagonist's character setting and the plot, this reduction is limited. This kind of passive acceptance of trouble while insisting on caution is very awkward. After all, the protagonist can choose to stay away from people who cause trouble for him. Set your own goal for the protagonist, it can be revenge, it can be the pursuit of immortality, it can be purely for strength, you can set the protagonist to be insecure and need force to protect himself. In this case, the protagonist pursues it with a cautious character, and turns danger into danger with full preparation along the way. Don't think it's an old routine, but it still feels good and satisfying. Now, if you say that the protagonist can't walk when he sees a pretty girl, the protagonist still has some sense. Call the protagonist sane, but he is unwilling to get rid of the source of trouble. Very hypocritical. Everyone has different tastes in reading books. Some people like multiple female protagonists, while others like no female protagonists. But no one likes the plot and protagonist settings to be split. It's just that some people care and some people don't. For those who don't care, it doesn't matter if the plot is driven by other factors. But for those who care, this way of promoting the plot seems very awkward

I was dizzy. After reading this book all the way through, I felt that Xue Ling was the protagonist, rather than the pure old man who Xue Ling grew up in.🙂

The writing style and writing techniques of this book are excellent, but the biggest drawback is that the plot is too scattered and jumpy. Also, the author particularly likes to create mysterious plots. I believe that this book will not do well. As a first-generation hardcore reader who has read novels every day for 23 years and handwritten 1.3 Million words of novels, I say from the bottom of my heart: The author should learn to make the rhythm more compact, instead of one chapter and one paragraph. The author has a bit of an ancient style, and relying on solid writing techniques, he can barely attract some readers. However, although the mystifying style also has a certain appeal, it definitely does more harm than good. This book will definitely be treated fairly by the market because of its loose plot and disgusting mystifying attitude!

I have seen about fifty chapters, and the first ones are all okay. Both the plot and the character settings are just right. There are some good parts and they are full of interesting discussions among netizens. I can probably think of the grievances and grievances between the heroes and heroines when the plot unfolds later, and the conflicts between various characters and character factions are in my mind. The imperial court and the beehive, Sister Ping's background, the male protagonist's strongest sword... Even the pleasure of the male protagonist fighting against the imperial court and killing the imperial court for the female protagonist even appeared in his mind. The result has been flat until now. There is no chivalry in the long story. The small interaction between the male and female protagonists is not bad, but why is a little monk suddenly introduced? It's okay to sell sweetness with the slogan of no heroine. I learned that I can go back and use it on my girlfriend. You sell sweetness but still tell me that this sweetness is poisonous. It's so disgusting. This plot will undoubtedly reduce the favorability of the heroine. I believe you must have thought that in order to advance the plot, you can change it to someone else. I don't know how you arranged it later. My idea is that this article is about Jianghu but not Jianghu, love but not love, royal way but not royal way. Although I have my own unique style, I want to make my soul tremble and resonate with others. You are too private, which makes me disgusted. Tell me about the plot behind it. If this kind of plot is used to promote development and shape the image, I will not tolerate this tone.

This novel is very interesting and vividly describes a person's life. A thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets. Although I have not read Hamlet, the character descriptions in this book are very interesting . The author's writing style is great. I look forward to the next book to be even more exciting.

Seeing the end of the author's second volume, let me tell you about my experience. Of course, I have to admit that the recent plot was depressing, but I personally can still accept it. I personally feel that other reviews have always had some problems with the male protagonist's strength positioning. Until this book, I have never regarded the male protagonist's comprehensive frontal combat power as one of the top ten in the world, so I actually never thought about the male protagonist's frontal victory over Teacher Huan. The male protagonist said that he is closest to the first because his cultivation path is relatively more correct than others. This male protagonist is like an action game player without a save file. He likes to think about his own response after watching the boss's action module. Let me give an analogy like this. The male protagonist feels that he is playing a meat pigeon game in single-life mode. He does not know how to fight the boss without knowing any attributes. He does not want to directly fight the boss and cannot escape from the battle to fight for strength. However, the male protagonist believes that he is Wang Yuyan. He can analyze the strategy as long as he has seen the boss battle live. Regarding the recent plot of Ling and Xia, I personally viewed these two characters as beautiful female passers-by and did not regard them as binding objects to the male protagonist, so at least I did not dislike the recent chapters. As for the skills practiced by the male protagonist, I think it can be regarded as a fighting game. As long as you are not fighting with teleportation, then I will practice taking the lead and then suppressing you so that you cannot get out of the second stage. After all, even if it is a boss in this world, if you are hit by a sword, your physical fitness will decline to the point where you cannot beat the opponent. Regarding guns, this is my personal understanding. This is something that everyone who wears it will think of getting. Whether it can be made practical and usable is another matter. Firearms are of course part of the strength. When playing games, I think it is too brainless and unskilled to make party pictures, but it is fun to use. The main thing is that the author wants to give an explanation that can actually make a gun with a certain accuracy. Another thing to say is that if you don't use the current cylindrical bullet, don't even think about using rifling. If you use it, be careful about the chamber explosion. According to the mysterious material science in the novel, there are various magical materials. I think the material of the gun barrel can be made. Even anti-cut metal gloves can be processed. I think it is not impossible to have rifling with local methods. In short, I can accept it under the novel's "Don't Be Realistic" buff. As for what others have said about the non-gun-free game, I feel that between force and life, I would still choose life in reality. The non-savable game is still not suitable for me. I said a lot of nonsense. In short, I don't regard this book as a sacred book. If you can give me a reasonable explanation, I won't take it seriously or object. Well, anyway, the author, please work hard and write well. It's quite messy and it's going to hurt your eyes.

I have been reading books for almost 8 years. To be honest, I have seen all kinds of weird and strange articles, and I have also watched a lot of female videos. In the end, I found that I still like this kind of ordinary articles that contain life. Recently, a small number of readers feel that they cannot adapt to the comings and goings of the little monk, but without the daily life of the male and female protagonists, the human warmth of the little monk and the old monk... What fun would there be in reading? It can only be fun for the sake of fun, without the truth. A colorful world is not only the current environment where the protagonist is, but also the individual characters that make up this environment. The characters have no emotions, no IQ, and can only be poisonous points. When reading a book, you shouldn't just read about grudges! Understand the facts and understand the characters, so that you can gain more from the book. Maybe you think there is no future in reading novels. Although these novels are not that profound, people like García Márquez wrote the novel "One Hundred Years of Solitude", which can also capture the significance of the times. Any meaningful book must contain emotions. Only such emotions can satisfy and complement the spiritual world! If you simply want to feel refreshed, and reading a book only satisfies your imagination, which is not relevant to real life, then you will have no soul in reading the book, and the road to emancipating your mind will never be a journey. You may not like to go away, but if you point fingers and make judgments based on your own narrow-mindedness, I can only say that you are awesome!       ，，，，，

It is a very good book, giving people a gentle feeling. The characterization of each character is very realistic. Although the protagonist does not appear many times, it does not lose points. On the contrary, other descriptions show us a world that makes people unable to extricate themselves. I hope the author will continue to keep it up and not write a book. This is the first time I write a review after reading the novel in so many years. .

The wine enters the heart of sorrow and turns into the wine of lovesickness. The latest chapter really makes people think a lot, but it is difficult to say a word!

Thoughts: 1. Swallows Returning to the Nest is unilaterally described by Ning Huaiyuan and Yue Pingshan from their perspectives, but judging from the three characters appearing in the scene, Swallows Returning to the Nest is actually a symbol of the tortuous fate of the three characters. 2. From Ning Huaiyuan, I saw that the swallows have not yet returned to their nests. To Yueping Mountain, I saw that there were no swallows in their nests until the swallows returned to their nests. This shows that the metaphor of swallows returning to their nests for Ning Huaiyuan and Yue Pingshan is dynamic. 3. The return of swallows is a detail of the scene in the mountain temple, but this detail reflects the completely different fates of the three characters. Answer: Through the method of seeing the big from the small, it reflects the completely different fates of the three characters. First of all, Ning Huaiyuan's defection from Huashan to his death in the mountain temple reflects the sad fate of being unable to return to the nest at the beginning and then dying outside the nest; Yue Pingshan was forced into a desperate situation by Ning Huaiyuan at the beginning and Fang Bu saved his life, which is reflected in the difficulty of the swallows returning to the desperate situation. (If you feel something is missing, you can still add it below, and the dog's head will save his life)

The characters are well described, but the word "and" is used too much. I suggest the author use less and, so that the reading will be less strange.

The feeling of the first volume is completely different from that of the second volume

I feel like there are no flaws in the plot. The reason why Xue Ling was retained was explained later. Are the words * and * used a lot? Anyway, it didn't affect my reading!

It's very down-to-earth, and the characters are very fleshed out. However, every female supporting role must deliberately create some foreshadowing that may have an emotional line or make readers feel this way. To be honest, it is really disgusting and very conflicting with the current feeling of this book. Has the martial arts arena turned into a harem novel? Wouldn't it be nice to have less emotional drama between men and women and more passionate love affairs?

It is indeed a very good book. There are only three or five books in the martial arts category that can be read in a year. I believe this book is one of them. 👍 Use the perspective of supporting characters to depict a vivid Jianghu. Each person in the Jianghu has his or her own story. Wherever there is sunshine and white snow, there are people from the lower reaches of the country. Who would have thought that the innocent-hearted female swordswoman in white would pick her feet as soon as they met 😭, and who would have thought that the six-door secret agent working undercover in the killer organization is actually a tough guy who is naturally cute when he is in the depths [fn=34 ], and the protagonist who is actually a great master but is as stable as an old dog and is often called a coward 😵, and the goddess in my mind, Sister Ping 😍... Maybe this is the living world. In this complicated world, how can we tell who is the protagonist... I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to the next plot 😁

Is there nothing that can restrain Shang Jiuge's existence? I'm really looking forward to seeing her confront the imperial power, or in other words, I'm really looking forward to seeing when she encounters troubles that she can't use her sword to solve! ! ! I am not a good person, I am the beneficiary of the gray area, so I don't like black and white. Also, the presence of this court is too bad! Whether it's Jinyiwei, Dongchang or Liumen, I feel like it has no deterrent effect on Jianghu! And that Mr. Zhao, you are a member of the state agency of the violent department, so you are just groveling to the people you manage? Even if she is senior to you, you don't have to kneel down directly! You represent the imperial court! What you do is equivalent to the court kneeling down to the martial arts! After all, you are still a cadre of Liumen. How did you get in there without any political awareness? ? ? And how did you take sides? No matter how outrageous the county magistrate is, his actions before the court confirms them will always represent the imperial power and the herdsmen on behalf of the emperor! You're just slapping the emperor in the face like this! The approach of anyone with some political experience at that time should be to control the situation, especially to control both sides, and then wait for the decision. If you don't side with the court, just forget it, and deal with the court officials directly as soon as you go up? This kind of person either has no political experience or has lost his mind. So how did he climb to this position? It's so embarrassing that you might even get cancer! Also, the book always emphasizes that the protagonist cherishes his life. Don't you know that keeping Shang Jiuge will only cause more and more trouble? Anyone with a little bit of intelligence knows that the way to deal with such a person is toshow respect and then stay as far away from her as possible! I don't know how the plot will develop. Anyway, in real life, this kind of person will definitely bring you one train problem after another: either you watch her go further and further down the road of seeking death for impeccable reasons and noble reasons, and finally commit suicide and implicate others, or you have to face enemies who are getting stronger and more dangerous for her (personal experience). I have no intention of belittling and damaging such people, because I cannot be like them. I respect such people very much but I will keep a distance from them. Because those who choose to go against the trend will eventually be abandoned by the trend, regardless of whether the trend is just or not.

Come on, this is one of the few novels I have read that I like the four character labels. Each one has its own image, which is quite profound. Why can't I vote for it monthly?

To be honest, don't spread the plot of the novel too thinly. If it spreads too thin, it will stretch your legs. It's easy to build a complete framework like Xuezhong's writing style, but if it's not compact and spread out, it will look a bit boring.

Personal opinion: I support the author in other aspects, but I really don't understand why the author said there is no heroine at the end of Chapter 57 of the second part. This is not a fashionable trend... It's okay if some books don't write it, but this book combines the previous emotional foreshadowing and plot with foreshadowing. After reading some book friends' comments, it should have a big impact on readers who have the same sense of expectation, resonance and sense of substitution for how they will develop like me. Moreover, a lot of ink has been spent on hinting and describing the relationship. The overall atmosphere created by the novel includes the tone of the love dialogue between the two at the beginning, the setting of their pairing, and Xue Ling's emotional changes and explicit expressions (including jealousy, etc.). Even Fang Bi's own feelings are not unchanged. With so much foreshadowing, it is like building a big cake in front of hungry people, and then suddenly saying that this big cake is not actually intended for you, so don't even think about throwing it away. 😥 This feeling of loss really had a great impact on my reading of the book. Personally, I even instantly lost most of my expectations for the subsequent plot. . . Even if it is later dealt with as a friendship/beauties relationship and eventually forget each other, or the protagonist is a cold-blooded animal who just wants to survive, there is actually a contradiction and a huge gap between the overall look and feel and the early foreshadowing. It lacks a bit of relaxation and human touch. Maybe I personally don't like the somewhat sad and regretful ending. At the same time, I personally think that such an arrangement is indeed unreasonable and unreasonable. Finally, I saw that there was a female protagonist on the character sheet? I hope the author can consider it or can you reply with some related thoughts? 🌝 Now I am going to keep it for now and read the follow-up later. It is really not easy to find a novel that suits my taste. . Or do any book friends know of any other twists or arrangements in the future? Also, if anyone knows the group number for this book, can you tell them? Thank you

I finally feel comfortable. Punk is against the law and tomorrow is poisonous. Sure enough, with the author's writing style, it's better to write about martial arts.

After it was released, I saw that there was no heroine, and I wrote down a few words I wanted to say to the author: 1. To be honest, I have not read martial arts for many years, and I have a good taste in martial arts. I rarely see such good martial arts novels. The author's writing is excellent, so it's okay; Actually, the author doesn't understand what it's like to write a novel without a heroine - like go away, if you don't use a large section of text to describe the heroine, or emphasize the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist, it doesn't matter if there is no heroine; however, there are obviously so many ambiguous plots, and there are so many interactions between men and women and then there is no heroine, I really feel that the author is suffering from literary youth disease, and it is an incurable one. I don't read books written by Wen Qingbing. Especially the one with a forced tragic ending. To be honest, there are too many articles on the Internet, and young literary writers all imagine that tragedies can actually become gods, but what? In the reader's mind, it is as uncomfortable as eating a bowl of fried rice and ending up with a mouthful of shit. 3. Finally, I suggest that if the author writes a novel without a female protagonist, he should not spend so much time embellishing the female characters and their interactions with the male protagonist. Let's be less guilty of literary youth disease. Farewell.

This book is definitely a good book, and the writing is very good. Every character is like a person rather than a character in a novel. It feels like a world, and we are looking at the story of a small point in this world. I have been reading the book for ten years, and I think this book is definitely enjoyable and interesting.

The writing is good, and the plot is well written, but actually I gave up halfway through the first time I read it. In the past few days, I picked it up and read it again. The most popular thing I read in the book review section was the debate about the heroine. I would like to express my own opinions. First of all, as a woman, I can actually accept whether there is no heroine or a single heroine. On the contrary, the stallion harem is a bit difficult to watch... The author has been constantly emphasizing that there is no heroine in this article, but he also spent a lot of pen and ink to describe the emotions of the characters. In fact, every girl in it is very interesting. They have distinctive characteristics and personalities. Shang Jiuge, Ning Xia, Xue Ling, and Sister Ping are all very likable. Any one of them can open a book on their own and become the heroine. The heroine I am talking about does not necessarily have to be in love with the hero. They can be family, friendship, comradeship, or even sympathy between opponents. I think the emotional line between Shang Jiuge and Sister Ping is handled very well, but Xue Ling, Ning Xia, the doctor, and Qin's assassins are very distracting. The female characters keep confessing to the male protagonist. The male protagonist and everyone say that I don't want to fall in love now. I have important things to do. I like each of you, but not to be together... Etc., It's very tiring to watch. If you really want to write without a female protagonist, then why do you want to write that these girls are obsessed with the male protagonist? In order to highlight the charm of the male protagonist? Personality charm can only be reflected in love, right? For example, Xue Ling meets the male protagonist when she is desperate. She can rely on and admire the male protagonist. She can regard the male protagonist as the kind of person she needs to work hard to become. She is strong, smart, and confident. She must survive no matter what and protect the people she cares about. Why do you have to fall in love with the male protagonist? Even if you really like her, you can keep it in your heart, and you can quietly work hard to become a person worthy of standing by his side instead of confessing your love every time. The same goes for the doctor and the female assassin under Qin. People who are clearly said to be very sober and understanding, turn into love brains when it comes to the male protagonist? Everyone needs to express their feelings once? The male protagonist is also very strange. Since he is not ready to fall in love now, and he keeps flirting, he seems to be telling every woman around him, "Do you like me? It's okay if you like me, but don't fall in love with me, it won't work out." He feels like the legendary green tea man, who is flirting with the girls around him, causing others to misunderstand him, while constantly emphasizing that "we are good friends and buddies" and "I just treat you as my sister". Overall, each character in this book is outstanding individually. The characters are vividly described and very likable. It is a very good martial arts novel. However, on the emotional line, it feels like the author used a harem style to write a so-called novel without a heroine 😅

#Some personal views on Shang Jiuge I will say silently first, Jiuge is the Zai'er who submitted this article She herself is a sword, sharp and fair, but also informal. To friends, she has the simplicity and gentleness of a scabbard; to outsiders, she has the sharpness and fairness of a sword. To give a high-level summary, she is an interesting person - she always behaves fairly and calmly, but always unexpectedly. She is not the protagonist, but she takes up so much space. A large part of the reason is because she is interesting. (Also, thank you Qiu Ming for giving me a lot of face) Look at these interesting people, they are always special. #Some people say that Jiu Ge is too long and drags out the plot Personally, it is interesting to have such an interesting character running the plot... This is not called off-center, but the story told by Qiu Ming itself does not have an absolute center. (Rainbow Fart must be arranged, because this writing style, this plot, and this story are worthy of arrangement.) #And (as expected, this oral habit is contagious), I am currently writing a fan of Jiuge, a kind of poem and song It is just in time for the release of Assassin, so I present this lyrics here to celebrate the release of another book by Qiu Ming / I am in a dream Capture the still unknown shadow of the sword Return to the world Look at the turbid world and I am alone Caressing the hilt of the sword Knowing that life is admirable and sad to be desolate Reciting the ancient saying It is sad to see that there is good and evil in the world I am involved in the world and want to live in the world The soaring eagle I don't know that the world is uneasy - Officialdom is muddy water People are afraid And I finally saw what was right and wrong The heart of the sword has become clear Using a human sword to tell the truth I don't know who has a black heart I am accused of killing a thief I never believe that evil triumphs over good Being magnanimous is also punished A sword heart goes to court There are always people to speak out the truth Only those who are pure can be clean Justice will last forever Or It is the human heart that disappears There will be no sorrow in the ages The despicable actions The proof of my persistence will disappear into the invisible I only wish that the world is vast The years are ruthless Or the human heart will eat itself Peace begins in the ages The despicable actions The clarification of my persistence will disappear into the invisible Only the shadow of the sword remains. / Then, at the end, he said silently, Qiu Ming, come on. No matter what the score is, I really think your book is very beautiful I hope that we can help each other, as you said ——A reader who reads masterpieces seriously

There's something wrong with this author. Does he like dual-player games so much? Do you do whatever you want just because your writing skills are good? You

Assassin is on the shelves today, but I am late So the first order is presented, a congratulatory poem as usual, matching the theme, so it is "Jiangchengzi" (It was so hard for me to flatten it) The following text: The curtains of the painting building are always bright, the silver screen is broken, and the wind is clear. A half-pipe bamboo flute, inscribed in Drunken Shang tune. Could it be that this body is scattered and lost, and it cannot be found? The rain should clear up. I stand on my eyebrows and count the green peaks, to explore the gods and pull the dust stars. A song of love, holding the head high and asking Qi Ying. In my dream, I heard that the stars were green, and I wanted to look back and see Pingting. Come on Qiu Ming! Just wait for my Jun Qianwazi to appear

He couldn't beat outsiders, and then he was said a few words by one of his own, and slapped Xue Ling... He laughed, and his three views turned from pink to bad. The protagonist has the typical mentality of a domestic violence abuser. Xue Ling didn't have any reaction or expression yet, so she just listened silently, a typical victim of domestic violence. 😒 It's not easy to write a character that I like very much like this... To be honest, the plot can be rounded, and it can be suppressed first and then expanded, but if your character's three views have collapsed, it is difficult for people to accept it.

Why do you write so many emotional scenes without a heroine? Isn't that a bit mean?