Reborn to Defy the Journey to the West

Author, are pig's feet just a mouthful? There's a lot of nonsense. When you meet, tell us your brand name first. Didn't the prehistoric people pay the most attention to the feet? Why are you telling others?

After reading Chapter 70, I can't stand it anymore, but I can tolerate many other poisonous points. After all, the book is new, so I can forgive the awkwardness in the first part, but the character of the protagonist has nothing to do with whether it is a new book, right? Why is the protagonist so furious when he sees a demon harming people, so angry that his eyes are red and he is trembling with anger? Is the protagonist's parents dead or something? The death of a group of strangers is simply more infuriating than having one's own parents killed in front of one's face. There is no one left with this Virgin's heart. This kind of Virgin's character is the most unbearable poison.

I was about to leave when I suddenly saw the author's post. Just leave some comments. I feel that the character dialogue is very stiff, especially the description of the dialogue between the two, which really does not fit the character setting. All of them are old monsters who have lived for many years. They don't have any aloof temperament. If they want to BB without nutrition for a long time. When writing novels, you should make sure that the characters in the book have a strong personality, and don't just act like a chatty and stupid person. To improve his character, I recommend the author to read the Pili Puppet Show series. I think this will greatly improve the author's portrayal of the characters' thinking, behavior and speech. It's really too white now, I really can't accept it.

I feel that in the original work, Sun Wukong is a selfish, lawless, proud, treacherous, and bullying character. I remember when the heavenly soldiers and generals went to catch the monkeys, they didn't catch any of them. They were all jackals, tigers, and leopards. No matter how many monsters were killed by the monsters from the sky, they were let go. A national master also did good things and died in the end. Among all the discussions related to "Journey to the West", the most mentioned topic is why Sun Wukong was invincible when he was causing trouble in the Heavenly Palace. All kinds of strange answers have been extended to conspiracy theories such as the so-called goblin has a backstage. But the truth is that Sun Wukong is not as capable of fighting as portrayed in the 1986 version of the TV series. The so-called havoc in the Heavenly Palace is just drunkenness, stealing peaches, and elixirs. There is no real large-scale head-on battle with the Heavenly Court. Scenes such as beating the Jade Emperor until he got under the table are even more impossible (personal feeling)

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist does not look like a time-traveler, the difference between Yuan Shen, gods, innate spiritual treasures, etc. As a time-traveler, there are usually many things in novels, can you not understand? Even if there is a difference between the novel and the reality, you shouldn't not understand it at all. The protagonist is like a novice who doesn't understand anything and is playing tricks in a place as serious as heaven. Heaven is serious and the gods value their majesty. Not to mention the Jade Emperor, will he joke with you? Watching you play tricks? And the protagonist was in his twenties after all in his previous life, just like a teenager who didn't know anything and was playing tricks in front of adults. As for the plot, it was as bland as water. Every little thing and scene took so long to write in detail. It is only right to have a detailed outline. As for the only villain in the previous dozens of chapters, Wu Qu Xingjun, it is even more inexplicable and feels mindless. Just because the protagonist is a newcomer and belongs to the Jade Emperor, and he belongs to other emperors, they want to suppress the protagonist. It's such an aboveboard and naked suppression, as if you have deep hatred and hatred towards the protagonist, and even have the intention to kill the protagonist. I feel that it's inexplicable that you have some small tricks behind your back to suppress you. After all, the factions are different, but you pursue me as if you have a grudge. He seems to have murderous intentions again and again, and he doesn't hide it and even confronts the Jade Emperor. I don't know how he survives to this day. No matter how forbearing the Jade Emperor is, a little immortal wouldn't dare to take action against him so blatantly. So all in all, the plot in the first few dozen chapters is boring, the characters are inexplicable, the protagonist looks like a time traveler, and is an idiot!

The chapter says that I really can't stand it anymore. Why are there so many novices talking about the Great Desolation? The Great Desolation is just a self-created background of Buddhism and Taoism. It is connected with some myths and some of them are made up by myself. Can you read the encyclopedia before talking?

This book is written by someone who was a college student before time travel, or a college student who has graduated and is looking for a job. Why does he feel like a mentally retarded child who knows nothing about anything? How many college students nowadays don't read novels? Feeling so embarrassed

To be honest, I can't even stand these malicious Hei Haotian novels...

There is too much nonsense and it makes me angry

It's a bit poisonous, and the writing is much worse than Fengshen Daoxing