Tamu Sennin of Mt. Myouki

I really can't stand it anymore, just remove the cp, it's still so disgusting

Read Chapter 26. . . Let me talk about my feelings. When I was searching for Naruto fanfics, I would jump over it every time I saw the title of this book. . . Because that reminds me of lol's fear of being dominated by Tam. . . . Until my friend recommended this book to me. . The writing is really good. Although the protagonist is not as happy as Feng Nan (dou) (bi), he can still be regarded as the main force of sand sculpture. There is not much to see in Chapter 26 of the plot, but at least it can attract people to read further. It is true that there may be some poisonous points in the eyes of some people, but I say bluntly that it is normal for a fan novel to have a few poisonous points. For those who read one or two chapters and then post some irresponsible remarks about how this chapter is full of poisonous points, I just want to say, you are so good at finding poisonous points, why don't you write a 100,000-word fanfic for me to see without any poisonous points? Also. . I still need to spit it out. . . The author. . Have you been stimulated by anything in real life? . After all, after reading Chapter 26, I felt like I had eaten the shit out of Chapter 20. . . Although I can still hold on. . But it always feels weird. . .

I just got it out of a pirated version and I think this book is pretty good. You can give it a try.

Hahaha! I was finally released! I was banned for three months by the system fans for commenting on the back of my book. I may be the first person in history...(ToT)

After reading about ten chapters, I felt a little bit addicted. The plot between Hinata and Hinata is obviously very warm, but the author chose to write it in a romantic novel about the relationship between men and women. The whole plot suddenly seemed out of place, and the taste completely changed. A 5-year-old little lolita and a fat black toad, the relationship is similar to that of father and daughter or brother and sister, but the words and expressions used in love are chosen. It can only be said that the author writes too many routines, and uses that method to insert all the plots, without using his heart or brain at all.

The vulgar description of seven-year-old Hinata and the whitewashing of Itachi Uchiha were disgusting enough at the beginning, but towards the end, the characters from this universe were asked to go to a parallel universe to destroy the relationship between husband and wife. What kind of outrageous plot is the NTR plot between "Little Naruto" and "Naruto Naruto"? Do you think that if you don't take the last step, you can pretend that nothing happened? Vulgar and disgusting, I really regret that reading this book stained my eyes.

In one game, top laner Garen went to Pirates, support Tahm Kench went to Hokage, jungler Blind went to Jiojio, should mid laner Yasuo go to Death? Adc Hanbing (? Not sure) Do you want to go to... Um... Holy Grail? ? It's hard to find an ADC anywhere in the world. In the anime I've watched, it seems that archers are the only cheats in Fate… Miscellaneous repair~

I would like to ask the author how he can make readers identify with and identify with the protagonist as a toad.

If you can continue reading after reading Chapter 32, I would like to call you a living divine farmer.

Creative and well written. I believe it will become popular

Coming from Galen, really, the early one was really poisonous, the warm daily life of a toad and a little girl, but it ended up being written in a romantic way. I really couldn't resist it.

How did a catfish get into the toad pile?

It's extremely poisonous, and you started to become a pervert when you met a 6-year-old hoe. Please write less about the 6-year-old girl. The plot that was quite interesting in the early stage has really come to an end here. It's hard for people to think that you are not a pervert...

The obvious poisonous point of this book: copper smelting, I can't think of anything else at the moment.

The plug-in is obviously awesome, but the author writes that it is like a dog and anyone can kick it.

Although the protagonist is not a human being, the author describes him completely as a human being The supporting characters in the plot also completely treat the protagonist as a human being... Just like Danzo's attitude towards the protagonist is not at all the attitude towards psychic beasts. Instead, treat the protagonist as a person who has inherited the boundaries of blood. You also need to control and master the protagonist. He is just a psychic beast. No, really not

This author's books are all sensationalistic, and his writing style is so embarrassing. Who is praising his book? 😐

Tam is not a catfish. Although everyone talks about toad when playing games, I didn't expect that someone actually wrote it as a toad 🤔

Garen "Garen the Pirate" Tahm "Tam Sage of Mt. Myoboku" Lee Sin "Le Sin's Bizarre Adventure" Yasuo "The Happy Man of the Hatake Family of Konoha" Who is the adc? ! ?

I came to read this book after reading Li Qing's Bizarre Adventure. It was truly one of the most awesome JoJo books I've ever read, so I decided to read the author's other books. It turns out that both Pirate Galen and this book are full of vulgarity... This book doesn't even spare the little lolita, it's so disgusting... I don't know what kind of Rendu lineage the author has opened up in the book about Li Qing. Maybe it's because there aren't many women in Jojo, so there are no vulgar scenes to write about? ?

The poisonous points are very poisonous: 1. Tsukuyomi, who was hit by Itachi, was stabbed by Itachi for three days, and how could he and Itachi still be good friends? 2. Serving Danzo as a dog and Orochimaru as experimental material is just disgusting. 3. No matter how annoying Boruto is, he still won't engage in bl, right? Extensive descriptions of gay men's true estrangement 4. It's okay not to like Naru Hina, but isn't it a bit outrageous for you to make the little Naruto the cow and the big Naruto? The highlights are also very good: 1. Compared to the same Naru Hina, the plot is almost the same. The Naru Sakura in this book is eye-catching 2, and the golden finger is eye-catching 3. The cp between Sasuke and Sarana is a genius idea, right?

Who in their right mind would fall in love with a Tam? This is outrageous.

Really, this protagonist is too holy. I personally don't like it. I'll say goodbye.

Purely disgusting, male to female, father and daughter can write it

He was threatened with the life of Jue Yin Tangyin Village, but instead of killing him, he obediently went to save others. If done this way, any villain can threaten the protagonist.

Pure dog licking, the two books are exactly the same

The creativity is quite good, but unfortunately the writing is lacking. However, after reading the author's subsequent books, I have really improved a lot.

Brothers, I was a little hesitant after reading the comments. They all said it was very interesting and I was a little interested. I felt that the pace might be good and more relaxed and enjoyable, but it would really be good without a heroine. Didn't I say that I came here just for Hinata? Then I traveled through the dragon veins and looked at Boruto and the others... And gave it to Naruto? ? If anyone has seen it, tell me about it.

When I read Chapter 9, I felt overwhelmed and moisturized when I saw that the relationship between lovers is deeper and more intimate than a life-and-death friendship.

As soon as it was set up, it started releasing poison continuously. Bai Jue threatened him with civilians and was assassinated by Gen. There was no reaction at all afterwards.