Laying Low in the Mortal World to Live Forever

Don't you know that if you build a giant panda, you will have to poison a lot of people?

I have to say that this longevity book is very good and can be said to be outstanding among its kind. In terms of plot promotion, it not only has the calmness and smoothness of the classic longevity novel routine, but also can effectively stop losses in time before stepping on the poison, which satisfies the reading needs of most readers as much as possible. Looking at it as a whole, although the plot sequence of the first ten chapters is a bit stiff and the details are not perfect, in the later stages it gradually becomes smoother, the writing becomes more concise and skillful, and the climax plot is masterfully grasped. Finally, in terms of length, I can only say complete! No! Enough! Look!

When I first saw the giant panda, I felt it was so inconsistent that I couldn't stand it anymore.

In this kind of immortality novel, why do people always argue about whether the protagonist should find a woman? Just write it like this next time. The protagonist finds out that he is immortal, cuts off his son with a knife, and says: "I am already immortal, what is the use of my son!" In this way, no one will argue. Those who don't like women can continue reading, and those who like women can just abandon the book and everyone will be happy.

This kind of eunuch literature is so anti-human and disgusting

Articles that imitate tomatoes, I am a cow, you are a giant panda

I wonder, are you just being stubborn? You can either be a heartless person and live happily, or you can control everything by yourself and just stay behind. Are you a fire-fighting hero like this?

I found that in many longevity questions, the protagonist becomes inaction, which is the inaction of Lao Tzu. He doesn't care about anything, does nothing, and just waits and sees what happens. Since you want to wait and see what happens, why do you enter the game? Since you are already in the game, what's the use of waiting and watching what happens, playing in the world? Wow! The game of gods does not break the common rules in the world, and breaking the rules will become a sinful evil way. This kind of writing is a prehistoric version. You can't make a TV series by doing nothing, and the second reader will feel aggrieved after reading it. Are you here to write for fun or to make money? To make money, you write something like this, and you won't buy it after reading it. After all, there are many articles like yours on the market now.

The front is okay, but the back is severely fragmented. It doesn't look like it was written by one person. The back is just a piece of shit.

Judging from the works, the character of the protagonist is not very good.