One Piece: Purgatory Demon Dog

When I read One Piece fics, the most annoying thing is the time issue. For example, about the Yonko, those authors didn't know how to read it again and remember the time before writing it. The red hair ran around the world in 1510 just to pass on the hat, and then he officially went to the New World, and he only reached the top in about 1516.17. Roger died at the correct time in 1498. Some fans also wrote that Luffy did not leave the East China Sea until 1522.

The Desert Grim Reaper is not the Grim Reaper. . . This weird error occurs at the beginning. If translated literally from English, Nasus should be the librarian (the desert god of death was translated this way purely for the sake of being handsome, right)? If you come from a substitute, please read below first. At least this small mistake will not affect your reading.

If Devil Fruits have souls, then the protagonist should cut more fruits. Using an axe, not only increases the attack but also gives the ax multiple abilities.

Anyway, there is no one here, so I secretly eat shit

Why is the popularity so low? I'm sorry about the quality of this book.

Soft iron, hard iron, don't mess around with it, it's a combination of iron and paper painting, don't make up your skills.

It feels so confusing that I don't even know what the protagonist is doing.

Is the author not here? Can the author not see me? Readers can't find me, can they? Then I'll eat my shit as soon as possible!

It sounds fresh, but I never understood what you were doing. If you cut out some nonsense, your expression would be much better.

I've read dozens of chapters, but I can't find any sense of involvement.

I don't know why I can't read the book, it's so sad.

The writing is so poor... I feel like I can't even use punctuation, and it's often broken into paragraphs for no apparent reason. 😅In addition, many plots are embarrassing to watch.

I don't like this, it seems like it doesn't feel like anything. The protagonist doesn't want to watch anymore after arriving at Windmill Village.

Damn, has the author never studied Chinese? It's so awkward to read🤢

It's not a piece of writing. I'll read it when I go back and bring my brain with me.

Chapter sixty-six is ​​so well written!

It's like a pirate traveling through time. Standard configuration. Overlord and domineering. The devil fruit that is not afraid of water😄

Life is difficult, but you still have to be a dog. Are humans inferior to dogs?

The protagonist relies too much on his werewolf form! Training makes you deeper! Transform even during fights! You have to understand that even the CP guys only eat the fruit when they hit a bottleneck after polishing their bodies to a perverted state! And when fighting, he only transforms when he encounters a worthy opponent!

Jackals are just jackals. What are you doing with dogs? They are in the same subject but in different subjects. I thought there was a novel about Akainu, but it slipped away. The title is poisonous.

Chapter 207: The 10% discount made me laugh so hard. Didn't the author make a price? ? ?

Are you trying to persuade me to quit Chapter 1 🤫? You are actually stupid enough to commit suicide and become a navy traitor 🤤

After reading Chapter 177, I can only say that the following plot is not to my liking. The book is still very good. Come on, author, don't give up.

Kick it to Guoguo who has been updating silently

It doesn't look good. If there is a soul fight between three people with that Gar as the leader, it would be better. One of them has a dog head and can absorb the soul. One is a modern person who knows history and pays attention to methods. One is a local and protects the country. A conflict between three people, all of whom are the protagonists, is quite interesting. As a result, now, traveling through time, bringing a golden finger, and showing off are no longer fun.

The plot is too drawn out and unimportant things should be brushed off. If you want to retain the audience in the early stage, you either need to properly demonstrate the intense plot or the special abilities of the protagonist.

The work is very tiring, just update it once a day.

The author's profile is exactly the same as the main character I want to write a book about, and the chosen subject is also the same, which is a coincidence. They are all three souls coexisting in one body, and they are all pirate novels. It's just that the original bodies of the three souls are different. The main soul I want to write about is a thousand-year-old emperor from another world, a prince whose mother was drowned by the queen, step by step from the wilderness to the capital, and finally fought a battle between humans and gods with the church, avenging his mother and burying the gods. He is a truly ruthless man. The second one is someone who was reincarnated on Earth. He knows a little bit about the future direction of the pirates and provides intelligence support. The third one is the soul that has traveled back 20 years after coexisting in the body. He has a blood feud and is the only one in his family to die. He also provides the main mission, which is revenge. I have written the previous chapter now, but there is a problem that I really can't solve. With three souls, three consciousnesses, and one body, what will happen when I get along with the heroine? If it happens once a day, it will definitely be extremely poisonous. Is there any master who can help me think of a solution? I won't consider the heroine's problem before taking revenge, so I have plenty of time.

The fruit that became the arm of the teardrop

It was me who actually thought Nasus was Anubis. Anubis is still awesome.