Starting from Naruto's Substitute

So this is a novel in which the protagonist is a bad guy, a villain, or a scoundrel? A novel in which bad guys defeat good guys and evil defeats justice?

In one sentence, it's cool and it's over (the second half is cool) This is a story-based fanfic that covers half of the main plot, and it's an anti-routine and cool novel. It's quite dark and the protagonist has no whitewashing. The interspersed stories adapted by myself are quite good, and there is no abruptness between the main plot and my own story. The writing style is generally above the line. The only thing is that the description of the battle is a bit cliché, and there is a suspicion of watermarks. Actually, I feel that the portrayal of some characters in this novel is quite in line with my own wishes. Tsunade, Danzo, Kakashi, etc. Are all in line with my personal thoughts. The only thing is that the description of Naruto and Sasuke is still lacking, and it's not good either. Overall, it's pretty good. The outline of the plot is not sluggish, the battles are a bit boring, and the end is a bit climactic (but okay, it's a matter of course). I see a lot of comments in the comment area, so I would like to share my opinion on the protagonist's childhood. First of all, the protagonist traveled very early (probably at birth) and separated from his brother (Naruto). Before he was six years old, he always thought that he was the protagonist (although his name was different), he worked hard and had a good attitude. When he was six years old, he saw Naruto, wanted to understand some things, and began to plan to leave Konoha. At this time, he felt resentful in his heart. He was living in a tight situation (all the money had been saved) and was even more worried. Moreover, the huge contrast (from the protagonist to the substitute) was a bit unacceptable. Special reminder, Naruto will be tortured to death throughout the whole process. And there's Uncle Snake nb!

How can I put it, it really suits my taste. The so-called hot-blooded manga is actually a conspiracy theory with a conspiracy. Probably, maybe, if I write about Naruto, no matter who he is, I will let him turn against Konoha. Well, this world is too dark, so it is better to just kill them all ~ How good, in the end there is only Tomie left ~ perfect ~ So, this is really the only Naruto that is the most comfortable to watch, and the other one is not as satisfying as this one. Although I'm a little embarrassed to say it, I have to say that my tear point was very low. During the first half of the movie, my tear glands probably secreted too much hormone. . In general, I hope the author can use another novel with similar themes, such as Conan, Pirates, Bleach... It will all feel good~

Why did Naruto die? I am really convinced. Is it just because he was unhappy? I really admire the author's mentality

In fact, the author wanted to write a dark story, but his writing skills were insufficient and he could not adequately pave the way for Pig's Foot's experience. There was a problem with Pig's Foot's background setting. At the time of time travel, the outlook of a person who was almost thirty years old had basically been fixed. As a result, Pig's Foot was portrayed as an inexplicable lunatic who often had manic attacks, leaving readers feeling baffled!

If the identities are reversed and Hong Ming becomes the elder brother and becomes the prince, what will happen if the original Naruto is still the same as in the original book? I think Naruto will still be Naruto, he will not hate anyone, he is who he is, Little Sun, not this Hong Ming who has the so-called time traveler identity but is still so naive.

The beginning is strange. The protagonist's two lifetimes add up to thirty people. After the same experience, his life was not as good as the original Naruto's, and he had to compete with wild dogs for food. It's okay to say it's just a matter of interest. You really shouldn't hate Konoha so much. That little brat throws rocks at you. Just go and beat him until he doesn't even recognize his mother. He can't beat him who doesn't exist. You have to find a decent reason for hatred. This will only show that the author's protagonist is far inferior to the original Naruto. It's hard to watch.

Please don't recommend this kind of kindergarten writing style to me again, okay?

Saying that you hate Uzumaki Naruto and then quarreling with him is just like two children fighting each other. You are not a person who has lived for more than 30 years. There is no one more poisonous than quarreling with Uzumaki Naruto.

Chakra cannot be practiced like internal energy (at least there is no practice in Kishimoto's paintings). You can only practice chakra extraction. Chakra is composed of physical energy and mental energy. Chakra is composed of: 1. Body energy absorbed cell by cell from the 130 trillion cells in the human body. 2. Spiritual energy that has been tempered through many practices and accumulated experiences. 3. If you practice immortality, one part will be natural energy. The improvement of chakra is generally caused by the improvement of physical fitness (children grow up, physical training, etc.) And the improvement of the spirit through activities such as fighting, practicing ninjutsu, and physical training that train the mind/will. Therefore, it should not be possible to increase the amount of chakra through practice. At most, it is possible to practice chakra refining to improve the speed and efficiency of chakra extraction. Because chakra is not an internal force that can always be stored in the body. Chakra is refined instantly during combat, so it is a bit of a trap for the protagonist to improve chakra through practice.

I was well prepared to be the main character and marry Hinata at the peak of my life, and my foresight was definitely twice as good as the original work. The result told me that these are all my brother's, and why was there such a big difference in treatment? He actually despised me. I'm so angry. I'm not the child of destiny. I feel like myself. It's so dangerous. When will they come to capture the Nine-Tails? I'm so panicked. I don't have Asura Chakra. I won't be able to survive after being sucked out by the Six Paths old man. I have Asura Chakra, at least at the level of Hashirama, the pinnacle of the ninja world. I can't beat half a Nine-Tails. What should I do with the bunch of idiots behind me? I'm so angry! My mentality is crazy, I want to hang up and troll people (Uzumaki Hongming's perspective)

I can't understand why a time-traveler would be hungry and fight for food with dogs. When the protagonist traveled through time and became a jinchuriki, he should have understood what the villagers would do to the protagonist. Why would he still go out without makeup and not change his clothes and wear a hat and sunglasses? How about just wearing a hood? Will others still recognize you like this? If you can buy something to eat, just buy the cheapest food that can satisfy your hunger. If you are afraid that it is not nutritious, you can buy some cheap vegetables. If you want to eat meat, you can go to the forest to make a trap to catch some small animals or insert fish. With the protection of ANBU, you don't have to worry about being in danger. In a few years, you will see if anyone still recognizes you. After you become a ninja, you can live like a normal person. So I don't understand why those who traveled through time as jinchūriki have to go through what Naruto went through when he was a child, and they don't use their brains to think of a solution. Naruto was young and inexperienced, so he couldn't think of a solution. Each and every time traveler lived in vain.

The Yondaime is a commoner, I guess. He doesn't have a surname. Namikaze doesn't have a surname.

I really like Naruto, he is sunny, warm-blooded and positive, and he repays evil with kindness. That handsome look is just like when Danzo rewarded him with a Blessed God when he was a child 😐

It's true, but those squirts were a bit much

How does this protagonist look like he has become a black man? All his favorite people have been killed, and not even a useful plot mission has been killed.

I'm halfway there, and I haven't even killed a named person. Will the protagonist just exaggerate?

The author always keeps trying to show off and get slapped in the face in an infinite loop, which is very uncomfortable to watch.

Loulan is over, where is the promise of seeing you again in the future? I'm still waiting for Katsuyuki to kill Minato.

Are you sure you are writing a time travel novel? The protagonist is definitely not 14-16 years old when he traveled through time. Are you sure he is an adult? After reading those comments, I don't think the protagonist reached adulthood before time travel. As a 10-year boss commented, if you have two children, one is raised rich and the other is raised poor, the poor child will definitely be jealous. But that poor child who was born with the education and memory of 18 years or above will still hate you? He simply looks away and doesn't care about you. Even if he doesn't look away, wouldn't it be better to use a little brain and wisdom? At first glance, it seems that the author has put himself into it, but the author is definitely not very smart.

The author is not strong enough in writing. Writing dark stories is poisonous. The Nine-Tails Jinchuriki eats garbage??? I know that the author wanted to write about the dark side of the ninja world, but he didn't write it well. He just turned out to be a lunatic protagonist.

. I haven't started watching it, but after reading the synopsis, I felt that there is nothing wrong with the darkness itself. But this synopsis is hard to describe, not to mention whether it has played its due role. Just the content of this synopsis (…) To be honest, I felt embarrassed to death (it's so chuunier), it feels like a newspaper office. Anyway, the first thing that comes to mind is a junior high school student who worships darkness just to pretend and deliberately mavericks (…) It's really like the old chuuni anime (…)

I feel it suits my taste. I suggest the author write more books like this. 😃😃

Metkai's ranking is high, and multiple Jonin can solve it. Kakashi, a man who is as hot as anyone is not worthy of being on the list? 🐶

At first, I thought it was the kind of stand-in who knew how to play Euler or Euler, but then the picture appeared.

There's a sentence I've been holding back for a long time. I think the characters use "ah" too much in their dialogue.

I can't watch it anymore. There are a lot of secondary settings. Although it is expected, it is too over the top and it doesn't make much sense. Not to mention the first few chapters, just getting an Indra Chakra to open your eyes is really too much. Forget it, escape from the trap.

What you wrote in the front is barely readable. What are you writing in the back? 🤔

A time traveler who is familiar with the plot and doesn't know how to hide himself is simply poisoned to death