Lord of the Northlands

It's understandable for an author to have slightly poor writing skills; those skills will gradually improve. However, if the plot is illogical, it will be difficult for readers to accept it. Illogical plots indicate that the reader is not serious about the writing. If you are not serious about writing, how can readers accept your work?

It's already quite remarkable that there haven't been any useless female characters yet, nor any characters who have inexplicable feelings for the male lead. However, judging from these few chapters, it seems like Violet is being developed into the female lead. But personally, I don't think she's a good choice for the female lead given the current setup.

The author consistently portrayed the protagonist as a local, lacking both vision and courage, and incredibly greedy. He's also a clown, displaying excessive self-pity and forbearance. Without a system or identity, he's a typical lowly peasant.

A lord sees a commoner girl and immediately treats her like a princess, with everyone fawning over this little girl. This little girl acts like a complete idiot, constantly yelling and wanting to fight and cause trouble. The male protagonist, utterly despicable, is completely infatuated with any woman he sees. This loser-like behavior is supposed to be a nobleman?

I don't think opening a casino on my own territory is a good idea. If gambling is really that good, why don't governments in the real world promote it more?

So far, the author seems to have put a lot of effort into their writing, and is a promising newcomer. I won't go into the minor issues, which I'll occasionally complain about 🤭. I'll just talk about the bigger problems. Firstly, the battle at Hook Cliff felt quite awkward. Given Lancelot's supposed strength, he couldn't even reach a group of ordinary soldiers in time to rescue her.

I couldn't read any further after chapter 389. Goodbye... What a terrible book.

Let's talk about this book. The premise is good. The writing is so-so, but there are too many filler scenes. The beginning gives you a system, but instead of collecting ores to exchange for points to recruit people, you almost get killed and still don't realize you should use the system.

The very first scene of this novel is a complete rout. This author clearly has no idea how to write an opening. If you've already written about the protagonist's humble origins, then you should write a situation where the protagonist has an advantage, instead of writing this kind of "trash-to-riches" story. If the protagonist's background isn't particularly high, then you should write it like this.

It's a pity. The first half of this book was actually quite good, but it lost control of the power system later on, so it was sent away like this.