Pirate Ninja

The pirates were written as too weak. Although Naruto was very powerful in the later period, he did not destroy a continent casually!

The name of the protagonist makes me feel embarrassed and cancerous. Even if you call me Li Goudan, it will be more down-to-earth than that name...

I always feel that the level of pirates is higher than that of Hokage. For example, Aokiji can freeze the sea. For example, at what age can a pirate weigh several tons... Is there any data emperor who can help me clear up my doubts?

Xuanyuan d Maoshu,,, why don't you directly Xuanyuan Shennong d Fuxi. The three big guys' names together look awesome. The four emperors kowtowed after hearing this. After hearing this, the beauty threw herself into my arms.

This name is Xuanyuan D Shumao. Well, I'm telling you the name of the protagonist. It's up to you whether you want to read it or not.

…………Xuanyuan…………D…………Shu Mao………………. This is the most disgusting protagonist name I have ever heard, even more disgusting than Long Aotian

I'll do it! I'm really speechless. I didn't want to complain, but I was drunk for such an ending... Don't tell me that there will be a sequel. The World Government has not been destroyed, and the Ten-Tails has not been restored. Haha, I still want to return the Xuanyuan family, and say that the World Government is not simple. It is really a shame for the Xuanyuan family. 😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰

Click X immediately when you see the name of the protagonist in One Piece World

After reading chapter 370, let's summarize it. The author is just writing nonsense. He changed the original setting randomly in the world of Bleach. In the later period of One Piece, he actually wrote about Whitebeard in order to get the OP to break up with the protagonist. Come on, Whitebeard has no interest in the treasure at all. The protagonist saved Whitebeard's life and broke up with the protagonist. As for Whitebeard's dignity, there must be a limit to nonsense writing, okay?

I was also dissuaded. I only read the first few pictures, so I'll just talk about what I saw. If you're a latecomer, don't scold me. I won't write anything if you have the ability to write it yourself, but I will express it from my personal point of view. The worst thing is that names, in current novels, people with compound surnames and people with the surname Long can basically persuade many people to turn away, which is a bit poisonous. The second worst point is the problem with the character attribute panel. In my opinion, it is actually not as good as just showing what level the protagonist has reached and what ninjutsu he knows. It is also a CD, and it also displays numerical values, which is a bit unreasonable. The third worst point is that since you can summon the ninjas from the Naruto world to fight, there is no need to go to Windmill Village. You can just give a novice gift package and an Iruka comes out to teach the protagonist basic ninja knowledge, and that's it. Worse point four, since ninjas can be summoned, why not set up which ninjas can only be summoned? And these ninjas can be all genin level when summoned for the first time, and they will gradually improve later. Why are Naruto and Sasuke not allowed to be summoned? The main reason is that they are too perverted, but since they are afraid of perverts, why can't they help Kaguya Otsutsuki, the Rokudo brothers, Toneri, Momoshiki and the others? After all, these people are more perverted than Sasuke and Naruto. Worst point five, what the protagonist said in the tavern was too poisonous. Let's not talk about whether Shanks became the Yonko at that time. Considering the protagonist's age at that time, it was actually okay. Keep a low profile and practice with Garp first. It's totally fine. Why bother to gain a sense of presence? The above is my opinion, and please don't criticize me. Thank you. I am not capable of writing novels, but I have read online articles for more than ten years, so I admire every author. What I am complaining about is not the author, but the book. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Let's be Naruto. Who are you trying to bury?

Is this three disasters going to defeat the general? You haven't seen One Piece and you're writing about it? The general is weaker than the four emperors, Garp is stronger than the four emperors, and the boss of the three disasters is Jhin. What the hell are you writing blindly? Aren't you just looking for a slut?

I came in after reading the title of the book, and exited immediately after reading the name of the protagonist.

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You wrote this passionate novel into a dialogue text, and everyone in the audience was chatting. I was convinced.

Rubbish novels 🙂🙂🙂ruin my time.

It's hard for the author to finish this kind of novel that has problems with the setting from the beginning. For the first time, he couldn't even stick to the first chapter.

The start is toxic. You obviously came from the Naruto world, but you still have to systematically hand over chakra and the Three Body Technique?

Keep cheating and give the protagonist wood escape, but you have to complete the task and get five basic escape techniques to open it. The drawn Naruto character can only be summoned at the same age as the host. There is also a CD for the three-body technique, 30 minutes for the transformation technique, 2 minutes for the clone, and 1 minute for the substitute. Are you a god-level substitute?

What a rubbish setting, tolerance and CD time. Chakra is also just a little bit. What I don't like the most is the time it takes to count the CDs. A completely insane setting.

Hahahaha, book reviews are better than writing

Go in and see the protagonist's name at first glance, then go back and put the book into the trash category.

This is no ordinary poison. I can't even finish the first chapter.

This name is so terrifying that even the four emperors trembled when they heard it.

It's outrageous. The dozens of chapters are all about the influence of the navy and some Narutos on the world of pirates. There is no way to lay out the foreshadowing. Normally, these things can be explained in more than ten chapters at most. But there is one thing to say, at least there is no inconsistency. Some novels start to slap themselves in the face a few chapters after the setting of the first chapter.

This book is written to death at the beginning. It is obvious that I have experienced things in Naruto.

Even if he is simply called Xuanyuan or Shumao, it would be fine. The main character must be called Lao Shizi "Xuanyuan·D·Shumao", which is neither fish nor fowl, which is very dramatic.

Emmm, I came here to watch Naruto conquer One Piece. The author went too far into the topic of the world situation that can be summarized in a few sentences. Instead, he decided to use two or three chapters to summarize it. It's too clumsy.

It's too early to write, the protagonist is not ready yet

If you compare the One Piece world and the Naruto world separately, the great swordsman in the One Piece world can easily split meteorites like the Tenzhao Zhenxing, which should not be possible in the Naruto world. If it is capable, Aokiji freezes the sea in an instant (in more than 300 episodes, Aokiji once froze the sea between two islands without melting for seven days. It takes seven days to walk from one island to that island, and I don't know how far it is) There is no such thing in the Naruto world, right? You can drive Gundam in the Naruto world, and there are giants in the One Piece world. After all, it seems that One Piece is indeed more powerful, and Water Release is not invincible. For example, Akainu once boiled the sea in the Navy Headquarters Harbor with magma. No matter how powerful Water Release is, it cannot be compared to that large harbor, right? Aoki can freeze the water in the sea. With Kizaru's speed, no one should be able to beat him, right? In other words, the world's top natural powerhouse in One Piece has long since escaped the threat of the sea.