Naruto the Great Master of Ninjutsu

The author notes that Kakashi did not actively use his skills to kill the "unsuspecting Rin" (the author wrote Kakashi's memories). Rin was caught by Kirigakure controlled by Madara, and then sealed the three tails in her body, preparing her to run rampant in Konoha. Rin took the initiative to run into Kakashi's Raikiri for the sake of the village, and then Madara deliberately let Obito see this scene, and then turned black. According to what you wrote, the fundamental reason of the story has changed...

I'm speechless. I feel like this book is just boring from beginning to end.

In the first picture of the opening chapter, you casually meet the Third Hokage, and then the Third Hokage actually asks you, a person whose origin is unknown and whose memory cannot even be detected in the mountains, to keep Naruto company. Haha, that's the Kyuubi.

I was poisoned when I saw Chapter 5. The protagonist, a ninja with five attributes, asked the third generation. The third generation said that all attributes are useless. The third generation is a ninja with all attributes. Do you think you are a waste? This is the third generation passed down from cultivating immortals! ? Single spiritual root system?

Are the five attributes useless? The fourth, third, second, and first generations sent congratulatory messages!

Speechless, what kind of brain does the author have? The third generation would let a person who had just been picked up be sent to Naruto? Kakashi hasn't let him go for 12 years, it's just ridiculous

The running account, but the running account still wants to talk about scientific principles, and talks about things that I can't explain clearly. There are even more logical loopholes. The most critical point is that there are so many typos that it makes me dizzy. All in all, I admire your perseverance and courage in writing this book. Don't tell me about the slow-burning type. It may not be good at the beginning, but it is wonderful in the middle. Novels are the same as women. The beginning of the novel is about a woman's appearance and figure. You can't attract others with your appearance, so why should you let others know your inner self?

The people of Konoha are so stupid. People who have so many doubts just accept it. The logic explodes because they lose interest in reading it. . .

Six-year-old Naruto is taller than Kakashi because he can keep up with nutrition. Inexplicably embarrassing

Chapter 7: The boss of Ichiraku Ramen is called Uncle Iris? !

It was probably written by a child! ! I can actually write 2 million! I'm convinced too! I wonder if the author has watched Naruto? ?

I found that this introduction has nothing to do with the content of the story.

The author may not have watched Naruto. It's too toxic to watch.

The author has changed too much of the original plot. If a fan novel changes all the original plot settings, is it still called fan fiction?

Xiaobaiwen... Shuhuangkan🙂

A novel with so many flaws that I don't know how to complain ┐('～`；)┌

Great author, I have a new ID called Bring a Buddhist Sutra to Hokage. The Will of Fire is the most powerful brainwashing. If you believe in Buddhism with me, you can go to a free country. There are milk rivers flowing on the earth, there are bread mountains there, and everything you want to have is there. The souls of those who believe in me will ascend to the land of freedom. Those who believe in me believe in the Great Compassionate and Compassionate Avalokitesvara Amitabha Buddha. Later, I will turn some of my favorite pig's feet into Buddhas. Build a Buddhist system (similar to a divine system), and then travel through the heavens, that's about it.

Please, please break the sentence, long sentences make me feel uncomfortable

The latter part is very bland and not interesting, but overall it is okay. You can still read it when you are short of books.

I have never seen Naruto before saying this 😅

The most powerful of the fourth generation is the flying thunder god space ninjutsu.

When I saw the protagonist say that Jiraiya's heart will not only belong to Steel Hand. I just find it boring.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see