Naruto: The Palm That Shook the World

Yan Feng? The name is too inconsistent. Why can't I come up with a more reliable name even though I have decided to write a book?

I want to complain about the Chuunin Exam. The protagonist, a person who uses the limited ability of blood inheritance, can actually become a Chunin in the Chunin Exam. I am speechless. This is a ninja exam, not a battle in the ring. ←_← The author obviously did not understand the situation. This kind of person who uses the meat ball fruit to carry it out can also become a Chunin. . . . . . It wasn't war time at that time.

The protagonist killed Senju Toyobayashi. Kato wasn't dead at this time. His feelings couldn't be weak and he was still laughing. How little did Tsunade take the Senju tribe seriously?

To be honest, the protagonist has no male friends in Konoha. Even Gai can hang out with everyone. Moreover, the seal is really unreasonable. The elders sealed the protagonist without considering how to live in the future. He basically has no chakra and cannot go to school. The protagonist is dead. The protagonist ran to Tsunade and said, "Teach me to become stronger. I don't want to die like the rope tree. I think it's too much for Tsunade to kill him. From the beginning, he made his ability so strong. Do you plan to be a Jonin in one year, a Kage in two years, and a Super Shadow in three years?"

What kind of gadgets are there? The fruit is obviously activated by physical strength and requires a lot of chakra. Author, were you sleepwalking when you watched One Piece? You don't even know what devil fruit you're writing about.

I found that this book does have some poisonous points. It always emphasizes one or two female protagonists and several girls to socialize with. This is fine. After all, everyone will have friends of the opposite sex. However, in many places, some warm or ambiguous scenes are specially written, which makes people want to complain. In the first few chapters, it was written that Tsunade's naked body was accidentally seen. There was no further description of this ambiguous scene except to highlight it because of the need of the scene. When going to save Kushina in more than sixty chapters, it was specifically pointed out that when Kushina accidentally knocked down the protagonist, she blocked Kushina's mouth with her hand and was about to kiss the protagonist, and also specifically pointed out that she felt Kushina's breasts at this time. The even more sinister thing was that Minato next to him was lucky that he did not kiss. This sentence clearly shows that the author is giving Kushina to Minato. It's like you had a girl and then turned around and gave it away. Also, the relationship between Kushina and Minato as mentioned above was normal, but it was so sudden that the protagonist was asked to go rescue people with Minato. When did the relationship between Kushina and Minato improve? It would have been better for the author to mention it casually in the previous article than to come out suddenly like this. This operation felt like it was shoehorned in for Naruto's birth. In fact, the reason for reading doujins is very simple. I just want to get involved in my favorite anime. As long as the scenes are reasonable, it will make people feel more involved. However, due to the bad treatment of the female protagonist in this book, I really can't stand it. Maybe the later part of the book will be more exciting, but I really couldn't keep up with the rhythm of giving away a girl in the early part of the book, so I canceled it first.

Whether in Naruto or One Piece, as long as you are touched by the Meat Ball Fruit, you will basically lose. Because it can bounce away fatigue, it can bounce away physical strength, which means it can bounce away your strength. If you are more imaginative, you can pop up your chakra or fruit abilities.

I would like to ask the bear whether the negative effects in the body can be eliminated after the fruit awakens, or can it be done from the beginning?

His talent is not as good as Uzumaki Kushina and Ushiha Miyuki, come on, these two are geniuses. And that seal, his grandmother sealed it because she didn't want him to be a ninja! ! ! Naruto is not a safe world, so how do you think civilians are safer with so many orphans?

In fact, after watching the original version of One Piece, I really want to know how the Meat Ball Fruit can be developed like this, and why there are no such awesome things as the Bounce Fruit, the Bouncy Fruit, and the Bounce Fruit.