Naruto's Blood Successor Snare

Yi Hei absolutely loves his mother, will he leave alone regardless of the protagonist? The protagonist is so arrogant when he first arrives in Konoha. Who among Naruto dares to be so arrogant in Konoha except Naruto? If Danzo wants to attack you, do you really think that the Sandaime will protect you?

Uchiha possesses Yin Escape spiritual power, and those who open their eyes have stronger spiritual power. If they are easily succeeded by the Yamanaka clan's "body-body conversion puppet curse seal", then Uchiha will not be able to mess around in the Warring States Period.

People who see the Hokage series will think of Naruto's 100% success in killing masters, which was fulfilled in the third generation, Jiraiya and the fourth generation respectively. Orochimaru is half of them. If you think that the first generation and the second generation are lucky, you are wrong. Facts have proved that even if there is no master-killer, they can trick the master. For example, the third generation and Danzo took the initiative to dig the grave of the first generation. . . Otherwise, where would the cell samples come from? For example, watching Senju die. During the Warring States Period, the Senju clan, which had been at odds with the Uchiha for many years but still had a prosperous population, was left with only one seedling after decades of building a village? Look at the Uchiha who have become a village within a village (although it still ended up in single digits). Finally, I lamented that my apprentice is my debt to my senior.

To be honest, as long as you don't distort the character of the original characters when reading fan fiction, isn't it just fun to read fan fiction? Of course, it would be better if the various tragic characters in the original work could be slightly changed or saved. 🙂🙂🙂

Congratulations to the protagonist for obtaining the rare achievement [MISS (Thunder)]. The conditions are met: escaping the fatal blow of the shadow. Reward? ? : Obtain Raikage's resentment. Note: Look at my Liuhe. Big MISS. Magic. Achievement lit: [MISS (Earth)] Unachieved achievements: [MISS (Water)], [MISS (Wind)], [MISS (Fire)]

I just don't understand. The protagonist, as a member of the Otsutsuki clan, wants to lick Konoha. You are not starting in Konoha, so you can't write without Konoha? It's not impossible to recognize Kuro Zetsu. Hei Zetsu can get the training experience that Konoha has. Hei Ze still has Yin Yang Dun training methods that Konoha doesn't have. With the talent of the protagonist's body, as long as he has a lot of chakra to break through the blood-stained snare, he can do whatever he wants. Dragon Vein Chakra, Grayl's Stone, if you are brave enough, go grab the sprites or the Bliss Box, no one will say anything.

Rubbish article, when you are fighting with an enemy country, you will kneel down and lick it when you see a woman. The main character is so disgusting

When the Seven Ninja Swordsmen encountered a large force of 3,000 people, they struck first? ? ? Still think that three thousand people can't defeat you? ? ? ? Do you have a misunderstanding about Chuunin? ? Three hundred people crowded them to death! ! ?

First, Otsutsuki Kaguya's sons all start with the character "Feather", so the protagonist's name is very funny. (Hagoromo Otsutsuki and Hamura Otsutsuki) Second, the protagonist has problems with his IQ and emotional intelligence. (Everyone who has seen it knows) Third, the supporting characters have all been dumbed down. (Destroying the original work) Don't look at it, it's just a shoddy outline that hasn't been written yet.

The author's other book is also not good to read, called Naruto and Sengoku Warriors Thankfully, the author still recommends Naruto and Sengoku Warriors in this article. Look what I saw? A time traveler, during a war with ninjas in which the death rate is as high as 90%, instead of trying to survive, he actually wants to pick up girls? ? ? ? ? Still got dumped? ? ? Is there still room? ? ? And Ningxianlu helps ordinary people gather chakra? . ? Wtf? ? ? ? ? What the fuck is this? ? ? ? This should have to be changed to Naruto Fighting Through the Sky, right?

After reading a chapter, there is a very simple theory. Black Zetsu found out that the pig's foot is his younger brother, and ran away when the Sannin of Konoha came. If Black Zetsu can't run away with others, leaving the pig's foot behind, I understand. The problem is that it can be taken away. An old Ginbi who has been alone in the ninja world for a thousand years, finds out that his fourth child is born, will he not take it with him? I understand that the author wants to leave the pig's feet to Konoha and then go to Konoha to show off. Then don't write that Black Zetsu discovered the pig's feet first, and just be brought back to the village by the people of Konoha. Such a rubbish arrangement, you appear in the first chapter, you deserve to be thrown into the street

What is the difference between the protagonist, Otsutsuki, and a civilian ninja? For the protagonist, the immortal body is just a noun and is useless. He even has no basic healing ability.

Hashirama is a mere reincarnation of Asura with chakra, and the protagonist is a natural immortal with a human body, but this is his chakra? Asura is only the third generation of Otsutsuki bloodline!

This author is simply a poison. It's like he only has those poisonous routines left over ten years ago in his mind. But the subject matter is time travel, fandom, etc. Let's just say that the ultimate invincible suture monster is ruined.

Otsutsuki's immediate family still has to worry about the amount of chakra, but you really have it

I suspect that the real ability of Obito Kaleidoscope is divine power and life and death. When Kakashi had Obito's eyes, he could talk to his father in the Pure Land even after he died. Obito is even more exaggerated. After death, he directly gave a pair of eyes to Kakashi and completely transformed Susan

Is the author the type who can't write without leaving Konoha? It is obvious that Hei Zetsu can take the protagonist away from the beginning, but he must let the protagonist enter Konoha. It is obvious that the idea of ​​Kaguya's fourth son is very good, but he must let the protagonist enter Konoha.

There is a problem with the setting. As Kaguya's fourth son, how could he not have a fairy body? Without a fairy body, the blood-stained snare from your place would kill the ashes together? Bloodstained Snare is a fusion of five attributes plus yin and yang attributes, among which the yin and yang attributes are the most important. The yang attribute is the physical power, the yin attribute is the spiritual power, the immortal body is the embodiment of the strong yang attribute, the reincarnation eye and the reincarnation eye are the embodiment of the yin attribute. The strong yang attribute must have the immortal body, the strong yin attribute does not necessarily have the eyes, but it must have strong spiritual power. To put it simply, without the immortal body and powerful spiritual power, it is impossible to have a blood-stained snare.

If the author doesn't know how to write pretentiously, then don't let the protagonist forcefully act awkward! 😅

After reading a third of the book, I first feel that the book has a good idea and the setting of the protagonist is very novel. I won't comment on the writing, but at least I personally feel that it is comfortable to read. As a fanfic, the writing style is comfortable to read. A big shortcoming is that the things written are easily disliked because there are some controversial plots and illogical bugs. But after all, everyone has different views on the plot and world view of Naruto. Many people will think these are poisonous points, and some will think it is acceptable. . . In short, it is not excellent compared to other fanfics, but you can take a look

This Otsutsuki is so rubbish Just do it hard Forcibly weaken Otsutsuki to go to school in Konoha The author's writing is also terrible

What the hell is your fighting power? Even the top six paths can't beat you, and you're still entangled by Jiraiya and the others.

Awesome Kaguya's son is stumped by chakra

As a descendant of Otsutsuki and a standard direct blood relative, you actually told me that I have insufficient chakra... Naruto Uzumaki can play with thousands of shadow clones at the age of 7 Uzumaki Karin has been used as a blue bottle + blood bottle since he was a child, and his status is full after one sip. Uzumaki Shinkuna fired a diamond blockade and even Kyuubi knelt down and called her mother Uzumaki Nagato...... After talking about the whirlpool, let's talk about Senju. Senju Hashirama, okay, I didn't say that he was a child, and I didn't write about it, but looking at the bunch of techniques he has grown up, which one does not require an incredible amount of chakra? The pile of ninjutsu developed by Senju Tobirama also shows that his chakra amount is also the same as the amount of heaven. Otsutsuki's bloodline, even the most inferior Kaguya's kick, Kimimaro's eruption, still created the exaggerated bone forest that can be measured in kilometers. Even the bloodline along the Byakugan line still has enough chakra. You can tell by looking at each of them. Now you are actually telling me that Otsutsuki's direct blood relatives have chakra levels of genin level. Are you kidding me? Naruto's chakra level can compete with that of several Hokages at the age of 7. Wow... Otherwise, how do you think he can suppress the Nine-Tails chakra? You can say that he has no combat experience, no control experience, no training, any reason will do. Why do you have to find a fact that is even written in the original work and everyone clearly understands it? Isn't this looking down on everyone's IQ? Why don't we find a more reliable reason?

Even if Black Zetsu's combat power is not strong, he has never had to worry about chakra... Although the settings are all given by you, it really feels inconsistent. Kaguya Otsutsuki must not have such a thing as sexual desire. The offspring is equivalent to the birth of self-awareness in a clone, so this t M shouldn't be an invincible text... Why use Ash Bones to kill together? Chakra is gone... Naruto's chakra as a member of the Uzumaki clan is 4 cards. When he was Kyuubi, it seemed to be 100 cards or so. You said you can't do senjutsu and ninjutsu, so why is there a problem of consumption?

Don't understand why you want to go to Konoha? (=_=)

Forced account ban, right?

When I read the first episode, I thought of a sentence, Protagonist: The eldest brother inherits his mother's Blood Chakra Eye The second brother inherits his mother's Byakugan The third brother inherits his mother's Yin-Yang Escape Black Jue: The fourth sister inherits her mother's appearance Dong Ge:

It's never good to follow Hei, he is his brother after all. I have to go to Konoha, and I can't continue writing if I'm not in Konoha, right? Hei Jue has been alive for thousands of years. Whatever you want to learn, you can't learn from Hei Jue!

The settings have been randomly changed, the combat power has collapsed and I can't stand it anymore, the personalities of various characters have completely changed, and the timeline is a mess. It's awesome that this author can persist in finishing the book.