Konoha's Strongest Flesh Escape

The writing is very good and I have been a bookworm for many years. I have seen a lot of fresh articles, and many of them are almost the same under the common formula. You can often know the potential of the book and the author's skill by reading the first three chapters. After all, what are the so-called three golden chapters? Nowadays, many people don't have the time to read chapter by chapter, and often choose chapters with better titles that they find enjoyable. I hope the author can optimize this aspect. Of course, you are a mudslide in a two-dimensional book, and the word "flesh" is used throughout your book. Think about it, when someone beats you hard for a long time, but in the end they didn't even break your defense, and you break up and KO with one punch, how exciting it is. It's the author who makes me think twice with two chapters a day. What's going on? Little brother, am I unable to hold the knife, or are you drifting? You are a "short" and "weak" author~ Hehe, just kidding, please subscribe and support~No eunuch~

Naruto is written with too little depth, the nonsensical comedy is too forced, the supporting characters have no IQs, and the middle two is written as young and childish. I am really curious as to why this book ranks so high on the rankings.

The poisonous ninja in front passed, and when he saw the war with the sand ninja, the protagonist gave Shikamaru some face and released the Kazekage, the killer, and suddenly felt like returning home and wanted to go back to find Izumi? ? ? Is your brain going crazy? This is a war. You capture the enemy leader and then let him go for no reason? Why don't you kill Feng Ying because he will die sooner or later? Well, even if the protagonist has no sense of belonging to Konoha, then Shisui's death was in vain? He is also very kind to the protagonist Izumi, and doesn't want to take revenge on Shisui? I'm going to let the blame king take all the blame, so it's none of Suna Ninja's business anymore?

After reading nine pictures, I died of poison.

I lost interest after reading the second chapter. Are you a soft-footed shrimp in fresh water? The setting is so boring that I wouldn't want to watch it even if there is pudding at the end. When Shu Huang wants to watch Naruto again, I'll come back and have a look. Golden Chapter 3: I admire you for being so awesome. Author, you are awesome.

Why! What a pity, what a great idea! But it was ruined by the pretense of 10 years ago, although many people complained about me and Xiao Xixi. It's a pity that I lost it, but I survived until Chapter 77 when I died of poison!

Children should like to watch it.

To be honest, now it seems that the protagonist is stronger than the four emperors combined, but in fact Mao Yong is not. A fight here, a fight there, basically no change to the plot 😅

I read Chapter 20 and found one word poisonous. It is really poisonous, especially when you constantly mock various ethnic groups and then continue to stay in Konoha. Author, your writing IQ is worrying. If you offend people, you will not change places and continue to stay. Even if Danzo can protect you, he will go out to do missions and mess with you in various accidents. So it is better to be a judge than to be a chicken. If you set the main character to be Hokage from the beginning, I would still be able to bear it, but you are not Hokage and you still want to cause trouble. You said that you can continue to stay in Konoha so that the heroine can be fooled and judge, who doesn't know that you have a girlfriend who is obviously the mastermind, and the timeline is also messed up. It is obvious that Kurenai and Kai, Asuma are the same age and in the same class.

Chapter 6: Defeat, it feels like changing skins and fighting for victory, a typical novice novel.

Why do you want to kill Zefa and tear him apart like this? Zefa is such a handsome character?

Alas, I have run out of books to read recently and have to choose to follow up on it. But I have only read a few chapters of this book. I will not complain about the part about the ninja shop owner. I will just talk about the teacher's evaluation of the toy. I just want to say that in the ninja world in such a big environment, you have completely lost your awe, the toy? So in order to highlight the protagonist, I don't know how many people's blood has been touched in the hands of those ninjas? Brother, even if this is your first time writing a novel, it's not our first time reading a novel. It's your first time to kill someone but you didn't kill someone else, so you still have to endure it and let me stab you again?

Konoha Orphans Start Itachi Same Time Combat is the main story flow Compared to other time travellers, it is still very brainless. I keep emphasizing that the protagonist just doesn't like to use his brain, haha. It seems that the protagonist can't use more than one C ninjutsu in the early stage The main line is the paranoid pursuit of being the strongest. , The handling of the emotional line in the middle is not satisfactory In terms of plot, the author is very bold, there are many adaptations, and it is very interesting Reading essay: Although the protagonist is very strong, it is also very unpleasant to watch. It feels like the whole village is plotting against him. The third generation of Danzo Hyuga, Uchiha, Orochimaru, Itachi and Kabuto Orochi are plotting against the protagonist. Even his ninja school teacher plotted against him, and they all succeeded. Weibo VS Cloud Ninja has a super fast pace but is very detailed The small theater feels very good The author has very good control over the description of the battle. Every battle seems to be evenly matched, and there is no crushing situation I learned a sentence from reading this novel, are you thinking about something very rude? The heroine was arrested? It's really cruel at times. I watched it for 20 episodes and I made myself sick. Every chapter, including the battles before and after a group chapter is named, is written very well Summary: If you look at it from a brainless perspective, it's still almost meaningless. Generally speaking, this is a combat description written through the storyline of Naruto. The protagonist has been passive (or not written out) in the development of the plot, except for the battle, which has been led by others. But the description of the battle is really nice.

Where did Miss Quanmei go at the end of writing? 😡

The fourth chapter is a bit toxic at the beginning. The author is a bit forced to advance the plot. You must know that the Hyuga family is a background in the plot of Konoha. It can be inferred that basically this family is not too strong at all. You know, in the comics, the eldest daughter of the Lian family is bullied by wild children outside, and the Hyuga family does not participate too much. It is not appropriate for the author to write it like this, but the subsequent plot is much more natural. I hope the author can leave these details a little bit, and maybe the writing will be better. Thank you for your hard work.

It was well written, and I felt that the characters and plot were pretty good, but it ended up being a mess in the end, but I still recommend it!

Let me state in advance that I was deceived by the number of monthly votes. Seeing the setting of the crane tail, I endured it Seeing the fear of water after eating a devil fruit (how does *** get along in Naruto?), I endured it The common plot of fighting over women (a plot from ancient times), I endured it Seeing two children fighting, the chuunin teacher blatantly sidetracked and helped the family children to bully the common people, I tolerated it... I tolerate you🐴! ***It's funny how scary the halo is when it's turned on. It makes me want to step on the protagonist when I see it. Especially the Chuunin teacher, how much hatred do you have? Risking your career to deceive the protagonist? Originally I didn't want to criticize a book that I didn't like, but... I was forced to feed Xiang by the author, and I have to take revenge Finally, for those who are bragging in the comment area, I don't know whether you are really blind, or you are just wasting money. Anyway, as long as you are happy, I won't accompany you

People from the big family are not that stupid. They will not bully anyone casually because their vision is different. And Naruto was bullied because of the nine-tailed fox. The big family did not ask the people below to restrain themselves and they would not do anything to ordinary people.

I laughed at the beginning. The reason Devil Fruits are afraid of sea water is because Devil Fruits are cursed by the sea (actually, I personally think it's because there is a trace amount of Sea Tower Stone in the sea water), and they are especially afraid of Sea Tower Stone. But if you start with a fear of water, how will you play if you get a hairy one? A water escape is enough. What kind of weird settings can I watch One Piece and then write something related to One Piece? In One Piece, Luffy and the others often have pool parties. Isn't that thoughtless of you? And what about your daily meals and drinks?

Written in 2009, I thought it was written in 2009. This halo of intelligence reduction, halo of ridicule, forced pretense, and waste of words by passers-by. It's really a routine from ten years ago. If you don't believe it, go through it and you won't know 100% of it. Eight out of ten novels have written this way. Isn't there no new routine now that it's been 19 or 20 years? There are so many new routines, please change them. You are all old-fashioned. You know everything by the time you finish writing, and you can make guesses about the subsequent plots. It will be boring in an instant. Do you think you can still be popular?

A solemn look flashed in Raikage's eyes. This kid's strength is definitely not that of a genin, at least an elite chuunin! --- Excerpted from Chapter 230 of Raikage's psychological activities when he was fighting the protagonist at a 50-50 level. I vomited, I didn't even have the brain to read this, I beg you, please stop making this metaphor.

This novel ranks second. . . . Is it so popular? I really can't stand it. There are so many contradictions and chaos. The writing style is also very average and very routine. . .

This wave of promotions successfully lured me in and poisoned me to death. Who can withstand the protagonist who looks like a schizophrenic? He may have been mentally retarded before time travel, but after the soul merging, he became a primary school student.

When I saw Chapter 6, I was laughing so hard that I couldn't stand it anymore. This book should be called Konoha's Campus Beauty's Personal Expert, hahahahaha

I thought my poison resistance was already very high, so I read it intermittently for several days and couldn't stand it until Chapter 66. There were all kinds of disgusting names, subversive blows, pretending to be slapped in the face, the timeline was messed up, and the two clan leaders were brought up by trivial things. I was wondering if the pattern could be bigger? A 6-year-old kid lost a fight and the patriarch took care of the matter? It made me want to read it as a fan, but I couldn't do it anymore. I couldn't bear it any longer, so I withdrew.

I wonder how many of them were persuaded to quit by one person. . . .

Wearing the skin of a fan, writing the story of Hedong and Hexi for thirty years

Even if you don't understand, you can PK with the Raikage, and you're at least an elite chuunin?

The most disgusting people are those who say this book is poisonous in book reviews and then do nothing else. You can say that this Devil Fruit came out of nowhere, you can say that the protagonist's ability was improved in the early stage, but after Chapter 2.3 In the later stage, the strength of a jounin went directly to the shadow level, and the rhythm was not controlled well. You can say that Konoha did nothing during the entire thunder ninja war, and the protagonist single-handedly picked off all the enemies, which is against common sense, and so on. But you have to say, what do you mean, Chapter 7 is poisonous and I'm leaving, what do you mean, this book is extremely poisonous and I'll leave quickly. Even if the reason for not liking this book is simply that you don't like the protagonist's weapons, you can at least explain why you don't like this book. Don't write anything, just write a sentence "book thief sb don't read it". Why did you write this comment? Is it lack of love or attention? It's like a table of people eating, and before the food is served, someone suddenly rushes to the table, takes off his pants, poops, tells everyone that the food is not delicious, and then leaves. This is true for all books. You don't have to like it, you can just click ❌ without commenting, and you can make suggestions for this book. I believe that no matter how poorly written a book is, one person in ten thousand will like it. I hope you can respect the author and the people who like this book. Every irresponsible comment is like using a nail to dig a hole in the author's heart. The nail can be pulled out, but the hole cannot be filled.

It's just an old-fashioned fantasy novel covered in Naruto's skin, the kind that was written ten years ago, the kind that slaps people in the face and pretends to be bad. This kind of book is ranked first, which only means that the money is well spent.