Naruto: the Uchiha Remnant of the Senju Family!

I feel like every Naruto fanfic goes to Tsunade to learn medical ninjutsu. This stuff is no longer needed in the later stages, and is rarely used in the early stages. After learning it in every novel, it turns out that it's hard to use it yourself.

Thinking of Dong Fist, thoughts are like a spring👊🏻😭👊🏻 Thinking of Dong Sword, never forgetting🗡️😭🗡️ Haodong Palm, life after life🤲😭🤲 Dong'er, Dong'er! Donger! ! ! Withering in brilliance, the golden road! ! 🌅🌅🌅 The blazing heat in the extreme cold, the hammer of the Emperor of Heaven! ! 🩵🔨❤️‍🔥 Dancing alone in the frost, the colorful dress of light! ! 🧊️🤹🏻‍♀️💡 The mantra in nothingness, the storm of the soul! ! 💓🌪💣

After reading Chapter 143, there is no progress at all for the multi-female protagonist, and the love plot is neither sweet nor erotic. The battles are even more messy. The main character has become stronger and the enemy is easy to fight, but he has already participated in three battles. When talking about the main character, he still praises the genius Kakashi for defeating him. He has not killed a named character, and has not participated in a high-level battle. It cannot be said to be overpowering, but it is really boring to watch. Give it to an NPC.

The male protagonist doesn't have much of a personality, and the same goes for the previous book. In short, it's very mediocre. If something is bad, it will be bad and thorough; if it is good, it will be thorough. If a mouse gets on the lampstand, it cannot get up or come down 🙂

It's a bit too big to write. I know the plot. I have the top bloodline of Senju and Uchiha, and I'm Tsunade's apparent cousin. However, I still have to make up an entry. These 16-7 should be as invincible as Naruto Hashirama in the ninja world, or else they are pure trash.

Why doesn't the author transfer the royalties to the readers? Do you know if the property returns to its original owner?🙂🙂

Everything else is fine for me. When I saw the protagonist's kaleidoscope, I really didn't hold back. It's garbage among garbage. It's better not to open my eyes. Among all the novels I read by my classmates, the kaleidoscope is not one of the most garbage. According to the original work, Ben may have this kaleidoscope to enhance the power of ninjutsu. You can get a simple enhanced water shield 🙂, which is a weakened and low-end version of Uchiha Madara's single eye. What about the other one? I want to do a time ninjutsu, but I am afraid that it will exceed the limit. Give me 0.1 Seconds. In this 0.1 Seconds, can you tell me where e is? If a person cuts you with a knife or stabs you with a bone, do you mean that the knife will leave your body after 0.1 Second of replay? Have you misunderstood 0.1 Seconds? Do you think it's fantasy? Gao Wu fantasy can be distinguished in 0.1 Seconds. To put it bluntly, ninjas and ninjas are still human beings, unless you reach the Sixth Path. Do you mean you can react in 0.1 Seconds? Or, after someone stabs you with a knife, you go back 0.1 Seconds. What's the point? Let me just assume that after the knife stabs you, you want to play it back, then what? After you play it back for 0.1 Second, you find that the knife is still in your body, or has left your body, but is very close to you. Do you mean you can dodge it? Even if you write that it exceeds the standard, I will accept you, but in the end, you pull something as big as one end.

With the blood of Senju and Uchiha, the blood chakra eyes were opened at birth, or reincarnated as Hokage from a young age, not learning at all for 6 years and 6 years old, and being so stupid that he couldn't beat the first-year Kakashi? Do you feel that I am the protagonist of FW?

It's too watery. I often use meaningless descriptions to fill the number of words, such as body shape, feet, and psychological activities. To be honest, it's quite baffling. There is no problem with normal writing, but suddenly writing a section about body shape is very abrupt. He didn't write it here naturally, but forced it in. I don't know where I copied a bunch of sentences describing body shapes. Whenever a female character comes out, I have to add a paragraph

Tsunade in the Naruto novel is like Liu Yifei in the entertainment novel. She either licks or masturbates, and then the cycle goes on endlessly, so I don't dare to do it. I don't know why there is such a big filter for the two of them, and I don't even dare to write a novel.

The entry has been added so much that it has no use other than the word count. The protagonist has a passerby personality. There is no plot conflict before it is released. Because she is young, there is nothing written about the heroine. I don't know what will happen after it is released.

Caged Bird

The author is cool, have you read it? I keep spraying it.

Wash three generations, the three generations are too good in the author's writing

I was also convinced. After reading so many fan stories, it was the first time I saw a label scam. They talked about a lot of female protagonists, but so far I haven't found any of them. The entries have been superimposed. As a result, the strength is like this. I won't say anything, but you can finally win a female protagonist! What I want to read is the harem, not the BYD cultivation novel!

I feel that the protagonist's combat power is too low. The protagonist's entries are stacked up, but his combat power is just that of a jounin.

Basically, every chapter is about what qualities you have acquired, what ninjutsu you have acquired, and how much chakra you have increased. It's not interesting, it's better to focus more on writing the plot

Neither Nawaki nor Tsunade inherited Senju's surname. How could a Kushiro named Uchiha deserve to inherit Senju's surname?

I can't stand it any longer. Isn't your stupid trait growing too slowly? Did the author write wizarding novels before? Million words official wizard?

Just like a graduation thesis, the evaluation is a defense

Summon Shennong! ! ! How does it look good?

The most rubbish Mangekyō Sharingan Eye Technique in history has appeared, everyone is celebrating, it's disgusting

It's like what was said in the comment section. It's been more than 100 chapters and it's still ambiguous. There's no progress at all. It's not as good as the original.

To be honest, the writing is not very good, especially when the protagonist is given a bunch of abilities, which will definitely collapse in the end, and the characteristics are also hard to remember at all. There is no progress at all in the main plot of more than 100 chapters, which is pure water. The only advantage is that the data is quite sophisticated. He is not Unhokage. The author has at least read comics and anime and does not have many conspiracy theories.

So many years before the system awakened, the protagonist had not practiced at all. He had the blood of Senju and Uchiha, and he was still a useless waste when school started.

Why did Genma, Obito, and Rin form the team with Kakashi, Gingka, and the protagonist at the beginning, but then inexplicably Kakashi was present in both teams? Left and right brain fighting?

There are many female protagonists, whether to accept Danzo or not, or whether to accept Akamaru.

The main characters in the back are awesome to a few people, but there are too many so I won't watch them. At present, it is certain that Jiraiya is awesome, and Obito and Asuma should also be awesome. I'm afraid if there are too many cows 😅

After the protagonist triggers various traits previously, it will take a long time to upgrade regardless of the difficulty of the task. When calculating abilities, many important bonuses are often missed. It can be said that the combat power is already obvious. The plot is also slow to advance. To put it bluntly, any character with ideals and beliefs in the original work will be much better developed than the protagonist. It doesn't matter if the combat power has reached this level. Now that the kaleidoscope is released, it is really over, and it is completely gone. The rare few comments are all urging the author to make changes. If he still refuses to make changes in this case, I would suspect that the article was written by AI, or even that he copied someone else's work from some small website.

This is the heroine from the previous book... List? It can be said that this book is almost a running account.