Pirates: Hollow Fruit

There are now eight posts in total, five of which are complaints. It was so outrageous that I didn't dare read it. I originally wanted to give it a try, but when I saw the book review section, I thought, forget it, I'm afraid I won't be able to handle it.

I just read the first few chapters, just my personal opinion! Kong Kong Fruit, I originally thought you were some sort of superhuman Sky Fruit user, but it turned out to be Kong Kong, the master of the king. . The ability to steal pieces in a press of the king is enhanced. Then for a few chapters, the original main plot of Pirates will be changed, and the protagonist will be replaced by another person, and then random side characters will be added to the plot. I thought you could tell a magnificent story of your own in a pirate background, but it turns out. . .

The result of a large number of Tomato authors coming here is the emergence of this kind of AI article

There are a lot of inexplicable descriptions, and the plot is also inexplicable. To be honest, the writing is so bad, and the large amount of random descriptions are just superfluous.

I'm really speechless. Miaoshou's empty space is also considered a hollow fruit. Then your space system is also considered a hollow fruit. Then should I say that air is also considered a hollow fruit? It's not all one thing.

I liked three of them and couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist loves to show off too much, but he does so awkwardly. He seems to want to write something in-depth, but he doesn't have the writing style, so it's uncomfortable to read😣

It's very beautiful, brothers, watch it, I can't be the only one unlucky 😭

This introduction is not only ridiculously awkward, but also smells like a dick guide.

It's very well written, please keep writing, I won't read it anyway

It's a miracle that this thing was signed. Didn't the editor feel that the first three chapters smelled like AI?

There is no need to write this kind of fan art in a blazing way. You are not a platinum master, so you can write blazingly in everything you write.

Brother, the three golden chapters of yours are so weird and grim that people can't understand them! The characters have no characteristics and their abilities are unclear. Are you screening readers?

This writing is so bad that it can't even do the most basic fluency. You should go back and retake Chinese.

It's so disgusting, I couldn't stand it until I read less than a chapter.

Everyone, hurry up and go see it. It's really beautiful. You must see it. I can't be the only one unlucky.

What is the point of this Muggle novel?

I don't understand. Literary and artistic workers must be down-to-earth. You write about gods and ghosts. Those who know it are One Piece, but those who don't know think it is writing a genealogy.

After reading your book, I might as well learn how to use AI to write novels, and it can be customized in large quantities.

Color is emptiness, emptiness is color So, whether Kongkong fruit can be used as Sese fruit, it must be astringent. 🤓

I thought I was just using skills to replace Nami's talent, but in the end I still collected garbage the same way. Not interesting

I didn't dare to read it at all, and the title and cover of the book had some elements at first glance. Anyway, it felt like it was nothing good, and it felt tasteless. I didn't want to read it, and of course I wasn't sure, so I basically read the comment section first. The first time I saw it, it was all "rave reviews."

Just look at the introduction and you will know that there is no need to read on. It's so embarrassing. If you don't have literary talent, just don't make it up. Let the AI ​​run and it's better than you.

I don't know if this novel is an AI novel. Some people say it is. I think the only obvious shortcoming of this novel is that the general is too weak and the four emperors are too strong. When the protagonist fuses with Whitebeard's power, it is said that the protagonist was a great general before. With general-level strength, Aokiji was broken and broken by Kaido several times. It was not that he was able to defeat him after a long confrontation, but that he was unable to stop him in one face-to-face encounter. This was not like the general in the original book letting off steam during the war, but using his full strength and being really unstoppable. The protagonist and Kaido fought several times without being injured. Although the reason for this is due to the fruit ability, there were many head-to-head encounters. It is unreasonable that Ao Pheasant is a general level. The protagonist can do what Ao Pheasant cannot, but Ao Pheasant cannot.

I swallowed a piece of fruit and my head was empty!

Everyone, hurry up and read this novel. If you have read it, please don't comment. If you haven't read it, hurry up and read it 👍👍👍

Haven't you watched the anime? It's the same level as Panic

It's really not as talented as Kaido's mother. Garp has worked hard to practice, but in terms of numerical value, it's really not as good as Kaido's mother.

Pirates, why don't you change your route and make some original creations?