Becoming a Writer in Azeroth

Although I only read 20 chapters, it feels a bit boring. (It should be described as white) First of all, the choice of subject matter and the introduction of the title of the work are both good. The story background of Azeroth should be considered more, such as the speed of spread of the work, the size of its impact, etc. (This huge response after only two volumes of a long series is a bit exaggerated) There also seems to be some shortcomings in the protagonist's personality. At the beginning of the chapter, the waiter who sleeps in the stable immediately quits the job (it seems better to describe the boss's attitude with some politeness, otherwise adding the aspect of the stable will be a forced show). After the interview, he was so arrogant and arrogant. Generally speaking, the twist type is relatively hard, and it is too much like a mindless and enjoyable article (the key is not the combat type).

Sure enough, the daily recommendations are all divine books. . . When I saw the title of the book, I didn't even want to read it. It was about showing off with zero force in a high demonic plane. . . If you can imagine it, you might be handed over to Hog as soon as you step out of the city gate. . . .

I just read the first few chapters, and the protagonist is so confident~ The author plans to write about Long Aotian?

I was persuaded to give up and persisted for 30 chapters.

From my perspective as a reader, putting aside the evaluation of gorgeous rhetoric, your book is just one word, watery, and there are only a few routines. It felt quite fresh at first, but then it stopped. There is no new author's passion for forging ahead and trying different stories.

It's so childish. After reading ten chapters, I felt like my IQ was lowered to the level of a primary school student. . .

Although the novel is a failure if I take it seriously, I still want to say that the Black Dragon Princess slept with almost all the great nobles in Stormwind City🤐🤐

The entertainment we have here is of no use in a place like Azeroth where you can die at any time.

I've seen about 200 pictures, and the protagonist is still a weakling.

The character of pig's feet. . . . . I'm too lazy to complain. If it were the hero from the culture next door who invades another world, the results of this book wouldn't be so dismal. .