The Second-Generation Cultivator's Comeback

When I saw Chapter 87, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I like to start cultivating immortality slowly, but this is too slow. In Chapter 87, I just practiced Qi for one level, and then I went to the trial after the first level of Qi training! ! It took such a long time for the heroine to introduce Qi into her body, and it would take thousands of years to cultivate to Nascent Soul. After all, generally speaking, it becomes more difficult to ascend as you go further, and the amount of spiritual Qi required should be at least exponential. Also, I saw that this sect has as many Nascent Souls as dogs (each elder is at least a Nascent Soul, and True Lord should be the honorific title for Yuanying, and I have seen at least ten True Lords), and many True Lords are rushing to get the first-level servant disciples! The highest level of Qi training in the handyman peak is only the fourth level, and there are a bunch of Qi training level one. These are all accepted as personal inheritance (should it be? Elder Yuan Ying directly selects them). They are really free. Ps: The levels of the characters that appear are very different. They are all either at the first or second level of qi training, or they are all the true kings of Yuanying. Where have all the foundation-building golden elixirs gone? Generally speaking, the backbone of the sect should be the foundation-building elixirs, and Yuanying's are relatively rare! Shouldn't the upgrade article be improved step by step? After one level of Qi training, it was taken in by Yuanying. I feel that there is no motivation to upgrade. After all, you are not showing that you are a Five Spiritual Root genius, but a Five Spiritual Root waste. Although your performance is not bad. Secondly, isn't it said that alchemy is in decline and elixirs are precious? Why did Brother Zhu get the Bigu Pill not long after he entered the outer peak? It seems that he gave it to the heroine. I don't know if I remember correctly. Tianqi's Nascent Soul master would ask her to make an ineditation list or exchange it with spirit beasts every time. Although it was specially refined, it wouldn't be so precious if it was special. In addition, the master of the heroine said that the five spiritual roots used to be geniuses, but I saw that the author wrote that there were many five spiritual roots in a village, or that among the handyman disciples, there were many five spiritual roots. In this case, in ancient times, geniuses with five spiritual roots were running around, and there were very few other spiritual roots. I think that to highlight the heroine's extraordinary five spiritual roots, you can not set up so many five spiritual roots, but more three or four spiritual roots. Just like the ideal distribution of people in a society is a rugby-shaped one, with small ones at the ends and big ones in the middle, fewer rich and poor people, and a large middle class, then this society will be relatively stable. Is it possible that the five spiritual roots, single and double spiritual roots are less, and the third and fourth spiritual roots are more. Of course, the author has his own ideas. I am just raising the doubts that I have had since I saw this chapter. In general, after reading Chapter 87, I feel that the heroine does not work hard enough, has little ability, and is a bit spontaneous (the first level of Qi training has to face the fourth level of Qi training. Although there are teammates, don't you look at your teammates, which are only on the second level of Qi training? There is also Yu Jiao who makes trouble. When you are not strong enough, can't you keep a low profile and find the right opportunity to regain the position in secret? If the fourteen of you really go up against the fourth level of Qi training, the momentum will be too great, and there are still people around. What to do next. As mentioned before, He Haoran had no idea when he was robbed of his spiritual stone when he first came to fight, but now the heroine did this on her own... At that time, if you couldn't fight in the sect, you thought it was okay to fight back with the law enforcement hall. Now it's a trial. It's not normal for a bunch of people to grab a hundred tokens. Who told you that you are not strong enough in the modern society?! Okay, I'm so excited, author, keep it up

If you are lucky enough to read this article, please read on. The heroine is not a noob, has no luck, and does not exude a bastard spirit. If you like no cp, you can also read this article. Although he said there is cp, the male protagonist is not obvious, and it is like soy sauce. The emotional line may become more obvious in the later stages. After all, it is a long article about cultivating immortals. It is easy to give up after reading for a long time in the middle. However, if you persist in reading this section, you will find that the later chapters are getting better and better. When will the author release an update? Poor little thing, very pitiful, not enough to look at, eh eh eh

I have read Chapter 112 so far. Overall, I can only say that the author's writing is very ink-written and unclear. There are many words that obviously will be over soon, but the author spends a lot of space to talk about these very simple things. The following contains spoilers One of the passages is about the master of the heroine, who once became enlightened and wanted to ascend. Before ascending, he wanted to explain something to the heroine. He rambled on for a chapter to the heroine. However, after you finish reading this chapter, Recalling the contents of this chapter, you will find that the heroine, her master and the heroine didn't say anything at all, it was just like, your master and I have enemies, and then you don't reveal your identity, and then wait for you to practice well, just such very basic and very basic words. As for the heroine's parents, I don't know what happened anyway. Then one of the heroine's senior sisters sent the heroine to the mortal world and told her not to enter the world of cultivation. After that, the heroine responded to her master's words and returned to the world of cultivation. Knowing that there was something wrong with the sect of her parents, she finally went to her parents' sect. The reason was that when I left the sect, I was about five or four years old? (I don't remember) Anyway, I'm 6 years old now, so they shouldn't recognize me, right? Just outrageous. The author basically introduces new characters every few chapters. There are too many characters and there is no preliminary foreshadowing, which leads to a mess of characters and it is easy for people to not see clearly what the author is writing. The main problem is still the verbosity. I couldn't stand it anymore when I read about 60 chapters. Then I started jumping from chapter 5 to chapter 5, and then my plot continued without any lag at all. If you don't use it, you are right.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was worth reading.

I would like to ask, can you practice elixir at the first level of Qi training? But why doesn't the heroine practice well and sell noodles? Moreover, it took one hundred chapters to reach the first level of Qi training. Even if it heats up slowly, is it too slow? '

I think it's pretty good. The heroine's parents, the powerful head of Yuanying, have tried their best to improve her physique, but to no avail. After their accident, the heroine will skyrocket! Even if the heroine travels through time, does modern scientific knowledge have anything to do with cultivating immortality? The master also repeatedly emphasized that the heroine should be patient. Her qualifications can be said to be useless in the eyes of the world. Only perseverance, patience and determination can stand a chance. After seeing too many awesome omnipotent protagonists in rebirth and time travel, I think this is only reasonable.

2 Likes and favorites! Although he was labeled as a five-spirited waste from birth, but with a pair of powerful Nascent Soul cultivator parents, Xiao Chang felt that as long as he did not leave the sect, the Minghua Sect could go sideways.

Combining this novel with some of the content in the book review area, I would like to share my personal reading experience. The general idea is based on several points mentioned by the author. First of all, regarding the writing style, I am a little embarrassed. In fact, there are some typos or sentences that are not fluent in the article that I would like to comment on, but sometimes I forget after reading them. But overall it's okay and doesn't affect reading. It's just that if you have time after finishing it, you can revise the text carefully, and the overall quality will be improved a lot! But don't put any extra pressure and just take your time. Regarding the settings, I don't think there's any big problem. Some changes in the heroine's early, middle and later stages are also determined by the objective environment and realistic conditions. I think the heroine is a person without great ambitions, but she has her own ideas and principles. This is probably the main reason why she can be driven step by step by the gears of fate without collapsing. Advance to attack, retreat to defend. I suddenly discovered that the heroine is really a very adaptable person. When he needs to be low-key, he is calm and restrained; when he is high-profile, he is not timid, decisive and has an online IQ. The character and quality of the heroine greatly affects the path she takes, and also directly affects the perception of the article for readers. For example, due to my personal preference, I read this novel in one sitting. There were places where I wanted to complain, places where I wanted to clap my hands and applause, and there were also places where I gritted my teeth at the characters in the novel and stared at the sky speechlessly. But overall, it's a good story that makes people not tired of reading it and makes them want to continue reading (for now, I look forward to the follow-up! O(≧v≦)o). As for the golden finger, based on my superficial experience, it is not very big. It is even because I have laid the groundwork early that the later explosion appears natural and reasonable. As for some people in the book review section who dislike the poor heroine, I don't think so. On the contrary, I think that the number of soldiers is not too many, but the quality. Just enough is enough, and there are still some hidden writings. (The author must fill the hole he dug himself!) What else is there, feeling aggrieved. To be honest, if you still feel aggrieved by a novel of this level, then you probably haven't read a more aggrieved article? As a peace-loving, civilized and loving young man in the new era, I have really read something that made me think that the author wanted to take revenge on society, so he wrote such an article... Although I can't remember the title of the book, I still remember some of the plots. When I read it, I felt that there is no end, there is no end to the darkness of life, and it is not suitable for people with a tight chest, shortness of breath, and a weak heart. (It's not good to criticize, but that article left such a deep negative impression on me that I couldn't help but mention it.) I digress, let's get back to the novel, and I won't mention the feeling of being aggrieved. The protagonist doesn't even feel aggrieved. Why are you aggrieved? Don't be impatient~ The next point is what I want to say most, that is, you must grasp the progress and rhythm of the article and do not be affected by other people. But there are some things I still want to mention...

The plot idea is very good, I am interested in reading it. But it hurts to start fighting at six years old. They are all ten-year-old children, so their thoughts are so heavy. In the plot of returning to the mountain gate, the age should be raised a bit, at least to 15 years old or later. Children's thoughts are simple and not that complicated. Adult thoughts are substituted too early.

🌹 The book is still good, and the plot is also very good. Although the jokes are old ones, they have new ideas. Good job!