Heaven’s Finest Gift

Oh, my God, even though I have only read two or three chapters, the comments section of the article is full of monsters and ghosts, and it is a mess. This is originally a novel. Whatever the author wants to set is her own idea. As readers, we should respect other people's settings and ideas. If there are really problems, we can point them out (such as the issue of amnesty in the article), but please don't comment in a condescending or even impolite manner! I don't owe you anything! Also, I don't know what people who make blind comments think. There are so many opinions. Go downstairs and go to the supermarket to buy a bunch of stationery and write it yourself. There should be nothing in the world that is more intoxicating and makes you feel more perfect than writing an article yourself. As a reader, read carefully, understand the author's foreshadowing and foreshadowing, finish reading the article, truly understand the plot and direction of the story, and then comment, it is a sign of respect for the author. There are some things that make you feel problematic or doubtful in the early stage. If you find that this is indeed wrong after reading the entire article, then comment and point it out to give the author the greatest respect! There are also those who criticize the author when they see that the setting written by the author does not meet your expectations and cognition, and forcefully popularize it. To be honest, this does not show that you are very knowledgeable, it only shows that you are uneducated and disrespectful to others! This is a novel. It's other people's ideas how they want to set it up. After reading two chapters, I didn't even finish the follow-up story. I made random conclusions and always wanted to be a teacher, haha! The trouble with people is to be a teacher. This is a disease and must be cured! I found this book when I was searching for books today. This is the first book by this author that I have read, but I didn't expect that the comments in the article were so chaotic, and some of them couldn't even show the most basic respect for others. Read the article carefully, don't comment casually, take care of your fingers, and be careful that the phone keyboard will become obsolete too quickly. Just one sentence, please respect others!

I have been following this article for a year and I really like it.

The author is great👍 There are many Chinese literature that have applied it It's not very hard, and it doesn't feel boring either Some novels use history or poetry from textbooks It will feel weird, but in this book it is very vivid

The most amazing thing about this book is... The characters who could be the male and female protagonists in other books are all supporting characters in this book. And it's worthy of it, and it doesn't feel like it overshadows the protagonist's brilliance at all. Among the male characters, Cui Jing (the handsome and upright type) and Wang Xu (the smiling and sinister type) were once very popular male protagonists. Even Xie Shu, who had no sense of existence, was a golden match in some detective stories. Among the female characters, the most typical Miss Xue is the perfect legitimate daughter who has long been ranked No. 1 In Zhai Dou Wen. But in this article, although the author did not deliberately belittle them, it still makes people clearly feel that their characters are less charming than the real male and female protagonists. I thought about it and felt that the reason may be that the children of aristocratic families and the legitimate daughters of famous families in the author's works not only have a colorful side of the protagonist, but also a correspondingly dark side. Most of the stories with them as male and female protagonists basically focus on the bright parts and selectively ignore the dark parts. The biggest manifestation of this "gloom" is "weight bearing". As the mainstay of our children, "family" is a burden they cannot shirk, and the inevitable result of carrying this burden is to be restricted everywhere and lose their freedom. For example, no matter how outstanding and outstanding Cui Jing is, she can only say that "Jing's marriage is arranged by the family" when it comes to marriage; for example, no matter how smart and favored Wang Xu is, deceiving Wei Liu's grandfather once is the maximum resistance; This is the complete personality of our children that is intertwined with brightness and darkness. No matter how charming their external conditions are, their light is very limited. Therefore, Wei Yaoqing and Pei Zongzhi, who are freer than them and can control their own destiny better than them, shine even more.

Miss Xue, Zhen Bailian, was born in Duke Huaiguo's Palace. It was not her fault that she was forced to settle family secrets, but she was right. She was also aware of the bad things in Duke Huaiguo's Palace. She also criticized Wei Liu for being willful and harmed the people around her. Isn't it ridiculous? When Xue San harmed people, why didn't she say that it was Xue San's willfulness that caused the cinnabar in her house to be investigated? After being slapped in the face by Wei Liu and claiming that she didn't know these things, is she the most innocent person in the world? He was still complacent about kidnapping an innocent woman using unscrupulous internal tactics. The pattern was only so big. It was strange that Cui Jing could put his treasure on her. If you ask me, Miss Xue is a typical person with high vision and low ability. She was afraid of Wei Liu, and was sad that Cui Jing was more optimistic about Wei Liu. Essentially, she felt that a leading lady in the capital like herself was enough to be on an equal footing with the heirs trained by Cui Wang and Xie Sanjia. Before Wei Liu appeared, she was the only one. A noblewoman from the capital who had the intelligence and means to deal with the most outstanding aristocratic families, she even positioned herself not in the inner circle, but in the circle of the top heirs of aristocratic families - she originally thought that she and Cui Jing and Wang Xu were the same type of people. That's why Wei Liu's words "Cui Jing, Wang Xu and the others will not dislike her" completely touched Miss Xue's bottom line, making her unable to even put on the most basic disguise - this was telling her that she, Wei Yaoqing, was the same kind as that group of aristocratic families, while Xue Da had long been abandoned by that circle - in fact, she had never integrated into that circle at all. This was a devastating blow to Miss Xue's superior self-positioning. In fact, although Miss Xue despises her two younger sisters for being stupid and weak-minded, she herself is not necessarily very smart. At least in terms of the overall situation, she will be left behind by the three descendants of King Cui and Xie's family, let alone compared with Wei Liu who has the ability to stir up trouble in the court. After all, asking Chen Shan to put pressure on his father in order to return to Beijing smoothly is something that no one with a little bit of overall perspective would be able to do. Xue Da thought that he was on equal footing with Cui Jing and others, but it was really a beautiful illusion. Judging from the fact that she was only considered as a marriage partner by the old men from the beginning to the end, but Mrs. Wang was willing to use a quarter of his family property to conquer Wei Liu, we knew who was capable of competing with Cui Jing and Wang Xu. If Xue San is stupid and bad, and Xue Er is stupid, then Xue Da is definitely a "self-righteous smart man". She is not without intelligence or means, and even compared to her sisters, she is not without conscience - at least so far, her enemies with Wei Liu are mostly due to the limitations of her birth, rather than her own desire to cause trouble, but I feel that according to the current development of the plot, she is not far away from losing her bottom line. Compared to the sanctimonious behavior of Xue Da and even the entire Duke Huai State pretending to be a good person, I still appreciate Wei Liu's directness and frankness more. If you are a bad person, you will be a bad person, and if you are a bad person, you will be a bad person. When the two parties fight, no matter what the reason is, they will fight. Victory or defeat depends on their own ability. What reasons can be used to label them? Moreover, when it comes to the bottom line, Xue Da, a lady known for her virtues, is not as good as Wei Liu, who is known for his stubbornness.

I fell into the trap when it was just finished, so it's been quite a while. First of all, let me explain that this is not a novice article. The author has writing skills and his own writing style. The emotional drama is a bit late. Although there are ghost elements, the description is close to reality, the main line is clear, and it tells a good story The so-called bugs are actually explained by the author in the article. This is the author's story setting and world view. I don't know. It tells what some people are arguing about, with self-consistent logic and self-justification. This is enough for a novel story, and the author has also realized these with qualified writing skills Many characters in the story are written very realistically, with flesh and blood, enemies and friends, everyone gets what they need for cooperation, and there are also sincere emotional contributions and rewards. The heroine relies on her own resourcefulness and ability to deal with various powerful figures, and realizes her goal step by step. The plot of praying for rain to liberate the tribe is really heart-stirring and heart-wrenching. Of course, the pace is slow in some places and less exciting; the emotional scenes are not obvious and are late, but it is over after all, so it doesn't hurt. 90 Points, worth reading

I read the first few chapters, but I had to abandon the article. I really want to support the second book. I really liked Dada's first book, and I came to read this one out of the thought that it was so good to write a novel for the first time, so the subsequent ones should be good as well. I was a little disappointed. When Dada wrote "The Female Supporting Girl", I wrote it as a hobby, but the result was very good. Anyway, I had a refreshing feeling when I read it. But the first few chapters of this book (I haven't read the latter ones) made it difficult for me to stick to it: Not to mention that a century-old family like the Zhang family was destroyed so easily and in such a trivial way in just a few sentences; a group of second-generation officials and young girls beat another official lady to death in broad daylight? They were of the same class. Even if her family wasn't very prominent, they wouldn't be beaten to death like this. How dare two mothers-in-law use beatings on an official lady? Qingyang is just a county head. How powerful the county head is is because she is so favored by the emperor. There is also the one who has two wives. If you want to stay, you can adopt another one. You have to marry another one. If you want to have a two-bedroom house, you don't need to ask your in-laws for permission. It's not mentioned. This kind of thing was too insulting in ancient times. Why don't you make enemies? There is the younger brother of the heroine. He is such a lustful evil spirit, and the people around his sister are not spared. This kind of situation is not unheard of in ancient times, but here it only gives people a very disgusting feeling. At the same time, it feels that the family tradition is not right. It is difficult to imagine that there is a third-rank official. It just feels imprecise, and at the same time it feels unnatural. Is the character supposed to behave like this? There doesn't seem to be anything wrong, but it's a little weird. Perhaps the requirements of ancient poetry are much higher than those of cultivating immortals in this aspect, and if it is slightly inconsistent with the background of the times, it will cause trouble. Comparing the two articles, my feeling is that when I wrote this article, I may have done a lot of homework, maybe I looked for a lot of ancient sayings of the same type to read (but maybe they were not high-quality products with deep writing and exquisite settings, but a bunch of weird things that people can't complain about. There are too many such articles, many of which are on the rankings), and then I fell into a routine, and the articles I wrote lost their original flavor and smelled like trying to join the same production line. I feel like I need to stick to myself and don't be led astray by some crappy and low-level writing (it really feels like a strange familiarity) and don't be led astray by the tastes of younger readers. In fact, readers are still very picky. I would like to give some advice, don't be trapped by some of the frames of this circle (this is just a feeling, several favorite authors change the subject and write something with the same flavor in the subject, it is simply a strange circle), it is better to have more of your own stuff, or be more rigorous. Having said that, Da Da's book has been finished a long time ago, and it's the first time I've tried an ancient Chinese subject. I shouldn't have had such high demands on Da Da. Such comments are a bit too much. Sorry, I can just treat them as my opinions and just make boring complaints. The author also has a growth process, and I hope that the quality of his writing will get better and better, and that there will be more good books in the future. 🙂

Am I too picky? So many people have praised it. After reading 18 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The heroine's character is contradictory. The author uses other people's words to forcefully improve the heroine's character. The writing style is also not good. Three "my pearls" are mentioned in one sentence, making it look like Long Aotian. In short, the reading is full of contradictions.

Let's talk about the introduction first. I feel that the current introduction is not very good, too brief, and does not capture the focus of the book. The most distinctive feature of this novel is not the rebirth, nor the transformation of an ordinary big family's daughter into an ordinary girl, but the Nirvana rebirth of the naturally righteous heroine, who step by step returns to the position of the peak master. I remember that the previous introduction was much better than now... It seems More detailed and more focused... I don't know why it was changed... I seriously feel that many excellent novels are delayed by... The introduction, such as Chengluan... Okay, let's talk about the content of the book. The Legend of the Heavenly Master should be an ancient fantasy novel with a mysterious color. The story framework is very good, and it is not an ordinary ancient novel about house fighting and palace fighting. , The pattern is very large. The heroine was originally the eldest daughter of the Zhang family, the most talented onmyoji family. She was born with Taoism and extraordinary talents. She was the future patriarch trained by the whole family. She could have become the first female great master in history. However, the family was killed by traitors and the whole clan was wiped out. The heroine was reborn from the ashes and her soul returned. She was the legitimate daughter of a sixth-grade official in the same period. Although the reborn family She is not a high-ranking official or a wealthy family, but the heroine herself is very capable. Although she has lost the internal strength and martial arts that she has practiced for many years as Zhang Mingzhu, her abilities as a genius Yin-Yang sorcerer are still amazing. The most important thing is that the heroine has brains. Many things cannot be overcome head-on, and she can win by outsmarting... The heroine's skills are really powerful, she has strategy, structure, and force. Worthy, relatively scheming, very good at serious nonsense, likes to dig holes and make trouble, often sell people and people will happily count the money for her. Revenge text should have a heavy atmosphere and emotional depression, but the long journey can write this book in a humorous, cheerful and majestic way, which shows that it has deep foundation. The female protagonist had a crush on the male protagonist when there was no trouble at home. At that time, the male protagonist was not interested, and the male protagonist at that time was not I understand, if these things had not happened, the heroine would probably take over the position of the Great Heavenly Master step by step according to the clan's plan, put aside her obsession with the male protagonist, and marry a well-matched young master recognized by the clan. Since she has received the favor of the family, she has to pay for the family. She never thought that the family would suffer such a terrible disaster. The heroine can only let go of all previous emotions and live only for revenge. The male protagonist has been around since the heroine appeared. Knowing that the heroine is the former Zhang Mingzhu, he is the only person who knows who the heroine is from the beginning to the end. The hero's appearance is unparalleled in the world, and his IQ and martial arts are also astonishingly high. He is the chief disciple of the actual temple and the future national teacher. However, wisdom must be injured. The hero's strength is far beyond the maximum that he should have at his age. Therefore, he was born early, but he is a peerless beauty but always has gray hair. The hero is naturally unfeeling and unfeeling. I want to By observing the heroine, I can feel the emotions in the world. Of course, I fall in love with the heroine as I experience it. In terms of personality, she is both a worldly master who is like a fairy and a child with a childlike innocence. She is very cute. The male protagonist's emotional excess is very natural. From the beginning, his emotional intelligence was zero and he didn't understand anything. Later, he became more and more considerate, gentle and humane. The emotional transition in the middle was smooth and without any abruptness. The male and female protagonists get along very lovingly after they get together. The male protagonist doesn't know anything about emotional intelligence and is stupid and feels that he is tender to the female protagonist. The female protagonist quietly watches the male protagonist do... But dotes on him. As long as the male protagonist loves the female protagonist and treats her well in his own way, it is enough. The male and female protagonists are a natural match, complementary souls. Souls are attracted to each other, and other heroines who don't understand will slowly teach him... Now their love is getting sweeter and sweeter, haha, I don't know when they will get married hehe The character creation of many supporting characters is very brilliant. This book has many supporting characters that are worthy of liking and worthy of careful consideration. Such as Wang Xu, such as Cui Jing, such as the old man of Wang Cui's family, such as Miss Xue, such as Princess Anping... Of course, the reason why these supporting characters are important is not because they have emotional entanglements with the male and female protagonists, but because they have their own status and strength in their respective fields, and are closely related to the heroine's great cause The description of family love in this book is also very brilliant. Although the heroine in Wei Liu has no blood relationship with the Wei family, she is sincerely good to the family members. She protects the eldest sister, helps the younger brother, and helps the uncle. In every case, she does her best to protect the entire Wei family, and all family members are sincerely good for each other. The heroine is not a good person. She has killed many people for revenge, but she has also changed her life many times in order to save the common people, and she is willing to bear the backlash. The heroine originally thought that revenge was simple, and her enemy was just Chen Shan. Unexpectedly, she gradually discovered that there were more and more enemies... The fact that the Zhang family was exterminated was becoming more and more confusing. The forces involved behind it were very large and complex, and the male and female protagonists needed to do more and more things... The male and female protagonists have a clear distinction between right and wrong. The annihilation of the Zhang family is a tragedy. Of course, these forces are at fault. The reason is that the Zhang family is too upright and noble, and they have joined the world but do not follow the customs. The most chilling thing in the world is not that the enemy attacks you, but that I sacrificed my life to protect you, but you betrayed me. This is really like falling into an ice cave, and the whole body is cold. The Zhang family was too loyal and upright, but it led to the annihilation of the whole family. I don't know whether it is the Zhang family's sorrow or that time. The sorrow of the times... It should be said that the heroine thinks she is evil but is actually kind. The heroine grew up in the mountains and rivers. She feels empathy for the people in her heart and is kind. Although she has done some seemingly evil things for revenge, she is far away from evil. She has never killed any innocent person by mistake. When the people are suffering, she is the first to stand up and help. On many matters related to the righteousness of the world, this book is indeed written in a majestic, vigorous and touching way. The overall setting of the plot is really very good, but the writing is a bit immature at the beginning, not as mature and perfect as other female video masters... I have always thought that it would be better if the writing was more mature and better... This book is likely to become a masterpiece. However, the author's writing skills become more and more advanced as he goes on. Many allusions and legends are readily available. His writing style is smooth and natural, with a full classical flavor. He describes the struggle in the court and the fighting in the rivers and lakes with ease. Although it is a serious and serious matter, he can write it in a light, lively and interesting way. I've talked about a lot of advantages, now let's talk about the shortcomings of this book. First of all, the author was a bit cut off in the past and hasn't updated for a long time. Now he has resumed stable updates, and more than 800 chapters are already very fat. The plot progress is very exciting. I hope that the updates will continue to be stable until the ending. Secondly, the progress of the plot in the early stage is a bit slow. With the status of the heroine, there are more and more enemies to seek revenge, and it feels more and more difficult to fully take revenge. However, it may be because every time I update a little bit, I feel that the progress is slow. In fact, it seems that every time the plot and progress are very smooth and fast... However, I still have to consider the people who read chapter by chapter. I wonder if the author can make everyone feel passionate even if they watch it. Another point is that the heroine always calls herself Mingzhuer at the beginning, which makes people uncomfortable. It would be nice if the pronunciation of "er" could be removed. It looks a bit dramatic. Generally speaking, this is a very good female-quality video. It is different from the ordinary small-scale house-fighting and palace-fighting novels. It is very exciting and exciting. It is highly recommended.

I like the Great Celestial Master Zhang Mingzhu in the story.