The Grand Official of Dream of the Red Chamber

I have read a lot of Red Mansions fan fiction, and all of them have described Jia Baoyu as worthless, a sissy, hypocritical, stubborn, self-righteous, and always stupidly opposed to the protagonist. You are going too far. Although he has some shortcomings, he also has shining points✨ For example, his defense of women's rights, and, well. Besides. . . . . . . Um. . . . Anyway! Baoyu is not that bad, he just likes to have a little temper, isn't he just a naughty kid, isn't he a bit of a sissy, isn't he a bit irresponsible, isn't he a bit ignorant of worldly affairs, isn't he hooking up with Lin Daiyu and many beauties, and even harming them. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Damn it, it really would have been better to just kill him!

There are so many girls in the Red Mansion. Why do you want to write about Aunt Mei and the red plum blossoms all day long? Next time, do you want to write about Chunmei maid? There is also that Yang Zhi who is seeking death all day long. My sister doesn't have as many scenes as them. As a time traveler, Pig's Foot is easier to bully than anyone else. He doesn't have a golden finger, and he doesn't know the plot. The only role of his status as a time traveler is to reduce the psychological burden when he gets involved with Aunt Mei in the future?

I think the author really struggled to write this story about Qin Keqing. There are all kinds of inexplicable tricks. Why is the father-in-law so awesome? The Jia family has been weak for a long time. What's more, there is only one Jia Zhen. If he is killed, he will be killed. Who can say anything? Who can find the cause of death for him? Jia Zhen is a person with five poisons. Everything is complete. Countless people were ruined at his hands. He died while doing harm to the people. The author made the protagonist soft and soft all the way. He flirted with girls in various ways before. Now he has left it alone. Now he wants to send troops to fight. It is a good Red Mansions fan fiction that turns the story into an alternate history. What's the matter? Dream of Red Mansions is a wonderful book. It has nearly a million words in it. It's not enough for you to write. You insist on talking about useless things.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I am currently unable to detoxify and resigned. Xue Pan himself has absolutely no ambition for mischief. Not to mention how funny his methods of dealing with troubles in the Xue family are, I will say that he is quite poisonous at the moment. When I came to visit Lin Ruhai, an interception was arranged at the agreed time? When visiting the host, it is the host's business whether they see him or not. How dare a visitor make trouble at the door? At first I thought it was some high-ranking official, but it turned out to be a wealthy businessman? The funniest thing is that in order to arrange for the protagonist to be in the limelight, I can even guess that this is a foreshadowing of dealing with Lin Ruhai, and the protagonist is forced to fight with the other party in literature and poetry? Regardless of winning or losing, what does Lin Ruhai think? Is the protagonist still a stupid overlord? In addition to being drunk and drunk, there is still poison

I only read the beginning. Let me talk about a few points. First, you are writing about Red Mansions, so it must be consistent with the original work. Look at how many other households of the Xue family you wrote earn money. Aunt Xue and Baochai can be said to have no power to fight back. Xue Pan is another idiot in the original work. If the protagonist did not travel through the past, how did Aunt Xue keep the family property? 2. A person travels to ancient times and is in a strange environment. As long as he is not stupid, he should be careful in his words and actions, right? And how can the protagonist you write say the words of King Qin Baojia? Why do you say that men and women are equal? Shi Lezhi? Do you think the emperor does not exist? Is it really good for the protagonist to talk about equality between men and women in an ancient society where power is dominated by defenders of male rights? No matter how modern the protagonist's thinking is, it can't be expressed externally. If you write a book just for your own entertainment, then I won't say anything. If you want to achieve some results in your writing, you should be more rigorous in the future!

Is there something wrong with the protagonist? To make amends for a maid, but also to have an aunt, does she want to go to heaven? I have read so many novels, but I have never seen one more aggrieved than the protagonist. Does the protagonist want to promote equality for everyone?

Baochai's brother who traveled through time is just like Lin's sister and her father who traveled through time. They are all idiots. Baochai can't even time-travel you🔨

I feel like the protagonist has a bit of a mean streak and likes to be a bit unruly. Not to mention that the personal girl chose Yang Zhi, but she was very proud of Qingwen. I don't remember anything about being ridiculed by Qingwen before. A master is often scolded by a girl and looks down on him. What a unique character. It feels like this master is holding his breath a little. Do you feel the same way?

Um, I feel like Qingwen is too proud of her favor. In ancient times, if a maid really dared to hit her master and disfigure her, she would be beaten to death. The protagonist can't spoil her too much, really.

I came here to watch a garden show, but it turned out that they were fighting for the family property and Aunt Mei. It was not interesting. They were a group of living people. How could the protagonist be smart enough to outwit them? Who from a wealthy family and businessman would lose to the protagonist in a intrigue and intrigue, like a clown?