Reforging the Three Kingdoms: Only the Uphill Battles Are Fun

This book is a little more than passable but not excellent. The general framework is good, but details such as Zhao Xiang and the maid of the protagonist show the book's failings everywhere. A guest orders his servants to take the owner's personal belongings at will, and the maid listens to outsiders' orders at will. There is also a way to die. In ancient times, the word "rules" was everywhere. The background identity of the protagonist's mother is probably the daughter of a wealthy family. As a person from a wealthy family, she should be more aware of the importance of rules to a servant. They are like a few black spots on a white paper, which is extremely annoying to the eyes. In historical fictional novels, details determine success or failure. Excellent handling of details will leave many readers behind. Poor handling of details, even if the overall framework is good, will leave readers with the feeling of eating a cake and feeling like there is cockroach droppings on it. It is disgusting and uncomfortable. I hope the author will revise it as soon as possible in subsequent chapters!

He punched Lu Bu, cursed Zhuge, lay drunk on Diao Chan's knees, and Cao Liusun was his follower. Of course, this has nothing to do with this novel.

If you are a fan of Shu Han, I must help you. I know that your writing style is good, your narrative is detailed, and your foreshadowing is rich enough (other people may like it). However, at the beginning of your book, overly long foreshadowing and divergence from the main line will only consume the inner expectations of some readers. When you start to read the book, the data will not look good, and it will be difficult for you to write. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

The last volume ended at the end of the 25th year of Jian'an and the beginning of the first year of Zhangwu. It is "approaching April 25th" (quote from the original text) for the enthronement ceremony. I am also looking forward to seeing how the author will describe the grand occasion of the enthronement ceremony (supporting Jingyi, suppressing Dongwu, resisting Cao Wei in the north, etc.) Zhao Ma, Huanghuang (Gongheng), Wei Huoliu (Yin), Wang (Ping, you can mention it in one sentence at this time), Wu Liao, etc.) Are pure and let nature take its course and are delivered to the pillow. It's a good thing that "Flowers in the Imperial City" left such a big scene and ended it without writing it. I thought it would be left until the beginning of the next volume to have a climax and change the scene to the departure to Hanzhong. In the end, Zhang Wu was stabbed three years ago? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! Isn't it going to take another time to review it and show the author's skill in making mistakes? ? ? This is too deliberate! ! ! It cuts off the rhythm of the plot too much! ! ! ! ! ! It doesn't feel like a snake has a gray thread running thousands of miles away. I just feel like I want to open my mouth to eat candy but I was stabbed from mouth to buttocks by a baseball bat and got a big lump... (The words are very rough, but not so rough that I can't express my feelings as a reader) The reason why I have repeatedly called out the rhythm problem several times is because I really feel that this is a rare Three Kingdoms novel with an interesting general direction of the plot, smooth writing, and comfortable characterization. But the author's personal writing habits are really uncomfortable! ! Is it because you think it's vulgar to describe grand scenes to reach the climax of the plot? ? (I didn't write about the imperial edict or the enthronement ceremony) Or is it because I can't write about big scenes and group portraits? ? (If it's because you don't know how to write, that's understandable. It would be best if you could state it in the author's statement so that readers don't have wrong expectations.) So you always want to deliberately create a "bland yet high-end" feeling? I hope I can get a simple reply from the author, otherwise I will really have to abandon the article (although I know that the author does not care if one or two readers abandon the article)

The author's writing is good, but how old is it that a rich man from a small village can write thirty or forty chapters, plotting against the protagonist, making false promises, and fighting wits and courage? . . . There are not enough major events in the Three Kingdoms for you to write about? ? ? No one can write about the Three Kingdoms with such a petty attitude.

Procrastination. I was able to write one or two hundred chapters when I was sent as an envoy to Jiangdong, and then I was sent as an envoy to Cao Wei. He was weak and incompetent, was manipulated by Sun Shangxiang, was assassinated and did nothing, and he was still able to serve as an envoy to Wei for the Han Dynasty. The writing is inexplicable. Many times I like to set up foreshadowing and create suspense, but it is boring to bury it behind the scenes! Hundreds of them have been sitting in a group of places, and Zhuge Liang and Liu Bei have not been seen. They really came to see you cheating and pretending to be cool with the natives. Give up.

It is recommended to only see the Battle of Xiangfan. I don't know what the author did in the following content. The good Shu Shuang article was written to support a Soochow article who was reduced to mentally retarded. After riding on the horse to help the mentally retarded, he was forced to go to Wei as an envoy. I just want to laugh now when I see a message in the comment area saying that the negotiations are finally over and they are looking forward to the Northern Expedition. Yes, the Northern Expedition is about to begin after the talks are over, so why not go north alone?

Do you believe that an online article in 2024 will write: The protagonist went into the city to pay taxes and was stopped by the gatekeeper The gatekeeper said that labor and management have prevented you from entering the city and paying taxes for the past few days The woman who was closer to the protagonist has a second-generation ancestor The pursuer, this person is jealous and wants to be the protagonist, and openly sends people to deduct taxes and food from the protagonist Then the second generation ancestor makes fun of the protagonist and says that I have a noble status... ↑Thank you, the author, for making me dream back to the last century, when online articles were written like this. Oh, in the last century, the protagonist would not have been bullied like this in an online novel. After being bullied for a round, he would get angry and have no plan to fight back. He would continue to delay the slap in the face. Oh, by the way, the protagonist also has a greeting card from the prefect. I don't know how there is a creature in the world that can't enter the city gate with this thing. Then the protagonist wants to be slapped in the face, how to do it? The protagonist talked to the prefect, did not complain at all, and admitted all the deductions to himself. The second ancestor rushed in and shouted: "I bribed the tax collectors to deduct your taxes and grain. Why don't you accept it?" Then the author wrote that because the protagonist was very smart and did not complain, the second ancestor's shouting was tantamount to self-inflicted trouble, so the prefect was furious and wanted to kill him. ? ? ? ? ? If the protagonist files a lawsuit, doesn't he just bring it upon himself? Twenty years ago, there were no Internet articles about such stupid people being slapped in the face, okay! Then I thought that the second generation ancestor was sure that the prefect would protect him, so he rushed in and blew himself up. As a result, the prefect was furious and said that taxes and food are a national matter. If you dare to withhold taxes, I will kill you. …move it off the bookshelf!

When I read about going to Wei in the third volume, winning the battle of Jiangling in the second volume, and sending an envoy to Wu, I can only say that the writing was aggrieved, without the feeling of a victor, and was forced to surrender. In the end, he was asked by Sun to go to Wei. It was awesome. I almost thought the protagonist had defected to Wu. Rubbish plot, farewell

Even though he is already in his prime, the protagonist is always arguing with Mr. Liang, which is too cheap. Moreover, the plot deviates from the main line. What is there to write about Mr. Liang? In summary, the beginning is okay, but there are problems with the subsequent plot arrangement. When the protagonist points out his ambition in Chapter 8, the plot of the protagonist entering Liu Bei's circle has been introduced. The follow-up should focus on the description, rather than the master of drawing. The plot is not enjoyable because of this