The Two-Dimensional Star System

I knew it, I knew it! When I first saw that Su Nan was going to participate in a music talent show or something like that, this salty fish absolutely had to use the lyrics to get the word count (ಥ_ಥ)

The novel is very good and great. I am not a troll, but I have something to say. The biggest problem is probably the character issue, it feels like they are just new characters with anime character names. Misaka Mikoto's arrogance, strength, and childishness are not reflected, and Uchiha Sasuke feels less cold at 18 years old than at 12 years old. What made me write these words was the author's wrong understanding and wrong character description of Kamijou Touma. With all due respect, most male protagonists in harem comics are not Touma. Others are either Long Aotian or mentally retarded. Touma relies on his own abilities to fight with his life. He has been to the hospital many times in two months and has been tortured by the devil many times. He always helps others but never considers himself. No matter what, I am attracted by Touma's personality charm. The demon destroyed the world, leaving Touma alone. One eye wanted Touma to surrender to him, but Touma refused. Then Yan Yan created a perfect world, a world where everyone can coexist beautifully. In this world, the sisters did not die, Xiao Huangshu did not lose his memory, but Touma did not exist. One Eye said to Touma, "Let's try denying this world." Touma lost his self-confidence for a time. Maybe this world is better. Without Kamijou Touma, a world where everyone can coexist happily may be better than the world that belonged to Touma. When Touma wanted to kill himself, the overall consciousness of Misaka Network appeared in front of Touma with the help of number 10031 (the last sister killed by one party). After that, Touma was persuaded to give up suicide (the overall consciousness is not affected by the devil, and it will not change even if the world is reset) Touma decided to give up suicide and confront One Eye. Touma's fighting power is amazing, but he cannot compare with the devil. One eye wants to conquer Touma, so he must resurrect him every time he kills Touma. The endless battle disappointed One Eye, and she decided to kill Touma directly and give up continuing to resurrect. Before Touma died, he left Fantasy Killer to One Eye to complete One Eye's goal. (Here the demon can destroy and create the world at will, but he cannot create a world that has been destroyed. That is to say, if One Eye destroys the current world, it will never be able to create it again, but Fantasy Killer can assist the demon to do this. One Eye wants to create the world he lived in before, but he cannot do it. He can only use Fantasy Killer, and Fantasy Killer resides in Touma's body. , This is the reason why Toma wants to convince Touma. The host of Fantasy Killer will be transferred once he dies. Touma created his own world and would inevitably destroy the original world, but Touma finally gave up Fantasy Killer before his death to realize Toma's wish. ) After that, Toma did not go according to the original plan, but fulfilled Touma and restored the original world. After recovering, One-eye lost the power of the devil (I forgot how it happened...), And at this time, the whole world regarded One-eye as a public enemy. One eye must return to Northern Europe (still don't remember why...), And one eye that has lost the power of the devil is simply unable to fight against the world's top combat power. At this time, Touma stood up and returned to Northern Europe to protect One Eye and became the enemy of the whole world. (Among them is Mikoto's first head-on defeat of Touma, "It's more empty than imagined") In order to save the girl he had only met once, he lost all the memories before the age of sixteen. In order to protect the smile of another girl, he resolutely challenged the strongest person. The voice and smile of a certain girl turned into eternal fragments in his memory When the Bethlehem Fortress was about to collapse, he gave up his only escape hatch to the person who started it all. His right arm has been broken four times. He has been seriously injured and hospitalized numerous times. He was once confused, he was once helpless, he once collapsed and committed suicide under the torture of infinite hell. He is not a gentleman. Even though his right hand has innate magical power, he is still just an ordinary high school student with a flesh and blood body and a fragile heart. He has experienced hundreds of millions of deaths. He once personally gave up the perfect world that would make everyone happy. In order for the girl who was named the Demon God to get a fair trial, even if she had tortured herself, even if she had destroyed the world in which she existed, when she lost her power and faced the pursuit of the whole world, in his eyes, she was not a proud god full of evil and powerful, but a helpless and helpless poor girl who was about to be swallowed up by the torrent of justice. For this reason, he chose to be her last resort, even if he was the enemy of the whole world. He never said that she was not guilty. All he wanted to do was to let her receive a fair trial. From now on, no matter how many years she would stay in prison, he would not stop her. As for the other girl, his steps were so tight. She always tried to catch up with his back, but found that it was so difficult and out of reach. "'There is no reason not to help my friends, because I want to help others, so I took action.' A person who even said such stupid words even when he was forced to die, actually saved more than 10,000 people in the end. That guy, that fool who was in a panic but helped, is still I want to help others as always! So I can't stop him, right? The so-called good woman clearly doesn't want him to take risks, but she still slaps him on the back and says goodbye!" I saw the protagonist's attitude toward Touma. I don't know if there was any whitewashing in the rest of the article, but I was a little unhappy about it. I was busy for several hours to find the above words on station B. I hope the author would at least give him a positive review if he didn't whitewash him. Sorry for the trouble.

Good guy, skip to the end, you are still a piece of trash, bye bye

Your opening setting is quite speechless and disrespectful to those cartoonists Not to mention that your articles are full of water after that, copying and pasting like crazy You really think you wrote them yourself Don't stitch together so many other people's excellent works Those two chapters that completely plagiarize an article without character description To put it simply, you are trying to persuade them to quit.

Hehe, it would be fun if this Sunan awakened the memory of Sunan in your book "Second Two Returns Secondary Two" (ಡωಡ)

This book is refreshing and full of laughs. But I think it obscures the highlights. The main theme of this book is that the second dimension is a separate world, and animation is just their work. But if I replace all the names of the two-dimensional characters, for example, with the name of a certain star, the book can still be written, but it will become an ordinary copycat. Therefore, compared with other literary works, this book only has the reputation bonus of a two-dimensional character, which is different from what I want to see. I hope the author can consider my opinion.

Everything else is good, but the emotional scene is disgusting. It doesn't explain the good points of Sister Pao at all, nor does it explain how deep the understanding of the second dimension was before the time travel. As a result, after coming here, he chose Sister Pao as his girlfriend based on his wishful thinking, which made me feel disgusted.

Let me share my experience playing King of Kings: Stop playing games when you have a cold, especially when you still have a runny nose! Stop playing games when you have a cold, especially when you still have a runny nose! Stop playing games when you have a cold, especially when you still have a runny nose! Because when you are playing in a group, you don't have the energy to wipe your nose, so you can only hang like this, and then it gets longer and longer, until you reach the mobile phone, holy shit

Ever since I read this book, I have been fascinated by this subject, but I can't find a book that is a hodgepodge of two-dimensional things. If anyone knows, please leave a title. Thank you

Logically speaking, should I call him a dead eunuch?