Reborn, I'll Grind My Way to an Angelmon and Crush You All

1 Rebirth, foresight 2 Rich second generation, reincarnation is a technical job 3 Absolute saints and wisdom, I am invincible in the late game, you can do whatever you want 4 Absolute probability of fate skills, you are the son of luck at most, I am the lucky father 5 Unprecedented, I am also invincible in the early game 6 I later thought, ah, sorry, this is the game guide my son gave me 7 Peerless Killing Star, yours is mine Personal opinion: In terms of the game text, the protagonist is invincible in the later stage. With so many hangups, he is already invincible in the early stage. The pleasure of upgrading the dungeon and exploding equipment is gone. It's not like the otherworldly novels where a big boss can pop up if you lag too much. It's not like the past where you could use ghs to make up the word count. The reward in the game for a reborn person who has a strategy is just to lose the opportunity. If you open so many lag players to fight against each other, you can only mow a large area of grass with one skill. This kind of game theme 👍, but I feel like the author can't grasp it

Although setting is your strong point, the setting of this country's entry into online games is too retro (implicit)

I haven't read a few chapters, but two principled issues have arisen. The first is the supermodel issue. The attribute supermodel can understand it, but is the equipment wearing level really just for viewing? Since the equipment wearing level does not restrict wearing it, why add it? Also, the professional equipment and skills are too confusing for the protagonist. You can wear whatever profession you want, and you can learn which professional skills you want. Supermodels also have to have a logical limit, right? Don't forget that your profession is a beast tamer, and you focus on one beast! When talking about your profession, you have to talk about talent. Is this the mythical talent? Apart from letting you contract more summoned beasts, it is of no use, and according to what you write, you will get as many summoned beasts as you get first, so what is the point of talent? If you don't add the strength of the summoned beast to a summoner talent, you will just add some useless stuff! On the contrary, the skill of being able to wear other professional equipment is regarded as a super model! Don't forget, you are the auxiliary, and the summoned beast is the main force. Does what you wrote mean that in the later stage, you want to be both an assassin and a mage, all in one? You've completely missed the point! The most taboo thing about professional logic-structured novels is that career boundaries are blurred and confusing. Those that fail to catch the readers' attention at the beginning will either collapse in the later stages of the writing, or be forcibly extended, which will only bring a sense of disgust to the readers! Those novels that start with all the professions joining in do not end well. The second question is, the protagonist is written like a fool. If nothing else, let's talk about the section about selling equipment, because I only saw that part. Regardless of the protagonist's way of speaking or inner monologue, what is it? Just like the little puppy in the female video, don't you think it's too innocent? It can be said that he is effeminate, but Pigfoot is a reborn person after all. How can he be innocent? What you wrote is like, the whole world knows that I am the boss, but the way I write it is that I don't know it. No matter how unreasonable it is, it is reasonable in the eyes of the protagonist, and it suppresses the protagonist's IQ.

Personally, I feel that the biggest problem with this book is that the title is "Vulgar Development Gou Dao Liu", and the content is cheating and invincible flow. As a result, the people attracted by the title are those who like to see the protagonist's obscene development. As a result, "Invincible" is cheated at the beginning, and there is no desire to continue reading 😥

It's hard to comment. I know it's hard for you to do the settings, but most of the three updates are about background, settings, and equipment data, and it's done frequently. Isn't it a bit too much? It's really cool. Now you're more than 130 years old, and you're still in the growth stage. The plot hasn't even officially started and even Novice Village hasn't been released yet. You have such a cool book and you don't have thousands of chapters to finish it. But how many people do you think can insist on accompanying you on this journey?

The Pokémon chapter of the Dimensional Forum is really a masterpiece, but unfortunately the boy's mother is really messed up. Read this one first, if you don't feel like homey enough, forget it.

After reading five chapters, I feel... It's hard to describe, it's very retro style, the background, characters, and plot make me dream back to game writing around 2010. Let's take a look again!

The free cover has no soul. The cover of this book is personally illuminated and photographed by Bendong, and processed by Comrade Xianyu P-picture, which reflects the creative concept, philosophical thinking, and takes into account aesthetics! The superposition of the second dimension and the third dimension reflects the purpose of the book's dimensional fusion, and the deep processing after the self-consistent fusion reflects the cultural connotation of the book...

I still like stories like Dajianghu, where the protagonist has no background, but is capable and finds opportunities on his own. The protagonists of the later books are inherently outrageous, end without any effort, and tire easily.

If it weren't for your reputation as a gentleman, I would have left after reading the first five chapters. While cheating desperately, you are also trying your best to keep the level down. Are you planning to have a high-level sidekick try to slap the protagonist in the face when his level is low, but he is counter-killed?