A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Crafting Imitations of Heavenly Treasures

There's no major poison, but plenty of minor ones. And giving away a girl—Nangong Wan is fine, but giving away Zi Ling (Wang Ning), the most beautiful woman in the Chaotic Star Sea, to Han Li is really a bit much! Giving away all the good-looking female leads to Han Li?! Exchanging resources with Han Li and constantly allowing him to owe her things...

This was Han Li's first time attending the Nascent Soul stage trade fair in Tiannan. The price of a 3,000-year-old fire-attribute Crimson Essence Ganoderma in Tiannan was 100,000 spirit stones. Han Li felt that this price was incredibly cheap. In the Chaotic Star Sea, where spiritual herbs were scarce, the price would definitely not be this high.

Wow, dual spiritual roots and a great physique, and they even force him to exchange his Foundation Establishment Pill for a new one... This is digging up the sect's roots! Does the Blood Forbidden Land have to be visited at all costs? Does the plot have to be exactly the same as the original novel?

In the world of cultivation, people talk about inner demons, and the protagonist is afraid of this and that. But this is the real inner demon.

Chapters 504 and 505 are utter garbage! The protagonist possesses several spiritual treasures, yet he hesitates and drags his feet when fighting a Nascent Soul cultivator of the same level, and even gets escaped. He claims a Nascent Soul cultivator's teleportation attack sends the treasures flying—it would be more believable if the Nascent Soul cultivator himself attacked!

I've looked through a lot of Mortal Realm fanfiction, and yours is the only one worth reading. The others are either poorly written or just ridiculous stories about stealing bottles and getting away with it. They're all just gilding the lily.

The protagonist didn't gain much benefit from joining the Hidden Moon Sect; in fact, it was all due to his own aptitude and talent for weapon crafting. In any sect, wouldn't someone like that be nurtured and trained? Moreover, the sects in the Hidden Moon Sect aren't the ones they're focusing on developing; they're just there for publicity. What normal sect wouldn't do something so easy? They actually dared to claim it was the work of the Hidden Moon Sect? That's truly hilarious.

Chapter 22: The protagonist has already reached the Foundation Establishment stage and uses a flying vehicle, three times faster than a horse. Retro style? Spiritual energy transforming into a horse? Is it true that as long as my motorcycle is fast enough, even a Core Formation cultivator can't catch up?

You've written the Hidden Moon Sect even worse than the Yellow Maple Valley. You can't even write anything outside the original plot, huh? Why did you have to send the protagonist to the Crimson Forbidden Land? Why didn't you just test their spiritual roots and let them join during the Ascension Conference? Dual spiritual roots plus a magical body!

In a world where you have to run away at any moment, in order to cultivate cultivation resources, it's recommended to have the protagonist crafted a portable magical artifact...