A Nobody in the World of Movies

After seeing how he was successfully persuaded to quit during the special forces training in Chapter 12, although he has never been a soldier and has watched so many movies, normal people will know that the first priority in the army is discipline. Although there will be small conflicts, the friendship between comrades is not lost. The protagonist will knock out people's teeth at every turn. Hey, there is a conflict, and he is kicked out by the army. He may have to go to jail. After all, although the army values ​​talents, it does not like individual heroism. What's more, this is not a hero at all, more like a thorn in the head and a lawless person! ! ! ! ! ! The author still needs to think more about the rationality of the plot and make people feel immersed in it!

The skills are based on Western fantasy, the power is based on Japanese comics, all Jiu Shu's teachings are prohibited, Kung Fu is Buddhist, Taoist magic is prohibited, Taoist Kung Fu does not exist, and then the Taoist temple is opened, the world is not stingy, the way of heaven is fair, the great road is simple, the setting is really poisonous.

There is no sense of immersion at all! It feels like writing a running account!

This book is poisonous. I can't bear to skip reading it. I have to go straight to the table of contents... Just pull it to the end and leave.

God Tamar is finished! If it wasn't for watching Fengshen, who would care about Journey to the West!

What the hell are you writing? I vomited when I read it.

Another piece of shit written. Toxic routines

A lot of swear words, it doesn't matter if it's a big dick or a dick.

The realm of cultivation has completely collapsed. Before the protagonist has become an immortal, he often talks about being a quasi-sage. He often crosses several realms of immortality to fight against enemies. It feels like there is no division of cultivation at all. Even if the protagonist is just an earthly immortal, he can still stare a saint to death. Moreover, the protagonist's character is too emotional. He does everything according to his temper and does not know how to calculate. To put it nicely, this is called immaturity. To be honest, he has low emotional intelligence.

You can travel and bring things with you. After passing through two worlds, he said that he had to work as a security guard because he was short of money. He forcibly started the plot of protecting the unruly young lady, poisoned people, and abandoned books.