Pale Hands

Teeth, your book is a hit. Don't deny it. The biggest problems are two: 1. The protagonist is unknown and the writing is scattered, making each protagonist less prominent; 2. The main plot is unclear, the plot is too jumpy, and readers cannot follow your ideas. Rewrite it, I suspect you have no intention... Tell your own conscience, how is this book? We also came here after reading your previous books. Maybe you don't remember it, or we changed our accounts... But you really didn't write this book carefully. You are perfunctory with readers, and readers are perfunctory with you... I am advising you very seriously.

I particularly dislike Nina. The protagonist's temperament fluctuates. It was obvious that they were using each other in the beginning, but when did they become a couple? The problem is that this Nina is just seeking higher status and interests around the protagonist. She is weak and gave up when she saw this. The setting of the planeswalker and card summoning system is great, but it is a mess.

I like this book by the author very much. It has plot, imagination, and writing style. It is very similar to the style of "Fantasy World Travel". They are all my favorite books. I looked through the author's works and found that there are only two complete works with hundreds of thousands of words. Are there other works that have been blocked? I hope friends who know can tell me the names of the author's other works. I missed the recharge event during the Spring Festival holiday. I stayed at home for almost a month, and there is no time to return to work. I have spent all my money on graduation. When the next recharge event is fully recharged, I will give 1,000 coins to this book, and I will provide evidence here.

Let me ask you a question. In the previous chapters, what was the reason why you got up in the middle of the night to look through the owner's things after entering the mage tower? To advance the plot, forcefully de-intelligence the protagonist? Is there any clear reason behind why this is done? Is this something a normal person can do?

I kept watching it because of Planeswalkers, but to be honest, I was quite disappointed.

It's written in a mess, with no logic at all.

Does the author have any ideas to write a novel with the same theme? This is the only novel with elements of planeswalkers that I can read. I also thought about writing one myself before but didn't insist on it.

I just want to ask, what about the lineage of the epic legendary props that I got at the end of the game?

Crusoe where Robinson Crusoe died?

The author is good at writing Western fantasy, and his imagination is also good! The writing is fine too But the more I write, the less I know what it means, and the power system is chaotic. Also, sometimes for self-interest, the author may be full of emotions when writing, but the readers find it incomprehensible. It's really getting more embarrassing the more I look at it

I really like the structure, but the storyline is getting boring the more I watch it.

The author's experience fully illustrates the dangers of this world🌹

Magical time travel, automatically understanding the knowledge and interpersonal relationships of a mage without reading a book and no one to guide you. Inexplicable settings, revealing your own knowledge at will, but without corresponding combat power. Who gave you the courage to wander around in other people's mage towers in the early morning? Given by the author! Wasn't he knowledgeable just a second ago? The next second he looked like a fool, and there were so many poisonous points in just a few chapters.

By the way, did this book become a dark novel in the later period? I used to read it as a dark novel, but I read some changes in the early stage and it was pretty average, so I abandoned it.

Strengthen the character creation ability and design interesting plots. Don't let the spark-igniting planeswalker participate in the bidding for building roads, and don't let the Japanese planeswalker, and the girl is simply unattractive.

Like this book very much. I wonder if the author will explore new fantasy themes...

Have the author's other books been blocked?