One Piece: Kaitou Kidd

Regarding Eniro's question, I want to say something about the author. You said that the Heart Net is a weakened version of the Haki of Seeing Color. It's really a bit much. After all, the Heart Net is too big and too strong. It can cover the entire Sky Island (you must know that Sky Island is a large island, and there is basically nothing bigger than it in the early stage of One Piece). When others scold him, he can instantly sense it. You must know that there are many people on Sky Island, and they can also hear it. At this stage of the human inner voice, I think it is already an advanced stage of hegemony. If Luffy is not the protagonist, even if he has the strength of a general, he may not be able to defeat Elnilu because he is simply too invincible. The electricity of 200 million volts does not produce the electric heat that kills Luffy in a second. You must know that Elnilu has a very mature electric heating ability.

Just because the protagonist is competing for the title of Pirate King, it is a breath of fresh air in One Piece fan fiction.

Is the author of LV.3 Still playing eunuch?

Author, are you a replica of One Piece?

If you have time, you can read "One Piece: The Vice-Captain". This book follows the story of a ship and has a female protagonist. The plot follows the trajectory of the original book, but some of the details are still good. You can refer to it.

If you mess in, it's best not to mess with too many characters, otherwise you will collapse. I can recommend a few popular characters here, including Saber Arturia Pendragon, the flame-haired and scorching-eyed conqueror Shana, and the Queen of Ice and Snow Fighting Ace. Des, the shining Asuna who has an outstanding background but no sense of discrimination, can you also make a small request, that is, add a younger sister to Sanji's brothers and sisters in the original work. In May, she has a gentle heart that cares for the weak, just like Sanji. That kind of soft-hearted but unsentimental character, not a virgin but never implicating innocent people. Unlike her sister Reiju, she belongs to the kind of upright action group. Like her brothers, she has successfully transformed her body, but when others bully Sanji, she is always the first to do so. He stood in front of them, so he was isolated by other brothers, but their father didn't say anything and basically ignored him. Later, he went berserk due to his awakening of power and disappeared. Later, he joined the revolutionary army and took on some tasks of assassination and espionage investigation.

Even the Celestial Dragons have a desire for power, just like the epitome of overt and covert struggles among various countries and business executives, so I think my king will definitely be persecuted by other Celestial Dragons, with some unfounded charges...

Regarding the characters and settings that will appear in the future, I personally suggest that you read the comprehensive pirate novel "Originally Was a Marine But Became the Pirate King". Some of the settings in it should be able to give you some good reference suggestions...

In addition, the fruit abilities of other characters who interfere must be considered. For example, Esdeath can use the frost fruit or the ice dragon fruit of the fantasy beast system. Shana can use the Seraph Fruit of the Renren Fruit. Asuna can use the fluorescent fruit. Chitong can use the cursed fruit to match her demon sword. My king can use the mist fruit to create her skills, etc.

Speaking of which, Kidd's plot may be developing a bit too fast, so Asuna and the others' roles will be relatively reduced.

Work hard and you won't regret it! Encourage!

I think the range of races in this work should be expanded. For example, the mechanical race, which is completely artificial, and the very rare three-eyed race that also appeared in the original work, and the more mysterious elves and other races. It should be better to add them. The machine race basically has The elves are a race of robots with their own minds. The elves are born with a certain special ability. For example, the fur race in the original book has the ability to release thunder and lightning. The fish-men race can control water molecules in the air and turn them into power to fight, etc. You can think about it appropriately...

Eunuch, I have come to visit the grave to pay my respects.

The previous "One Piece: The Thief Commander" came into the palace to rewrite this one, and now it comes into the palace again.

Looking at the introduction, Arturia can't beat Hawkeye? Hawkeye can't even break through defenses, right?

As long as there are updates, don't be a eunuch.

I think it's better not to have too many people in the protagonist's team in One Piece. Fifteen people are enough to play the role. Starting from the protagonist, Karina, Asuna, Shino, Ou, Sanji, Sakura, Shana, Akahomi, and adding some candidates with suitable professions, such as Misaka Mikoto, Inuyasha, Nura Rikuo, Sharaku Hosuke, Wendy Mabel, Esdeath and other extremely popular characters, that's it. Sharaku Hosuke - a shipwright or historian, the reason for recommendation - there is a three-eyed clan in the original work, Wendy Mabel - the popularity of Fairy Tail is also obvious to all, Inuyasha - a classic, Misaka Mikoto's ability can make her a suitable helmsman, what do you think, and Sanji has already joined, then it is necessary to create a character with the same background in Straw Hat to make up for it, but I am very early The original roles I suggested to you are currently the main essential occupations on the ship - captain, deputy captain, navigator, cook, sniper, helmsman, ship's doctor, shipwright, musician, historian (need to unlock historical texts), lookout (responsible for cooperating with the navigator's work to accurately report and reflect the surrounding situation in a timely manner). Necessary mobile personnel, that is, sailors, are also needed.

By the way, do you want to try writing articles about Fairy Tail in the future? Although it is not as popular as One Piece, it is still a very popular work. In addition, the manga has been completed, so it should be easy to write. If you are interested, you can try it out then...

I personally suggest that you update Pirates weekly, concentrate on writing about the Three Kingdoms first, and then write about Pirates after the Three Kingdoms is officially over. Moreover, the original plot of Pirates will be advanced a lot by then, which just leaves enough time to buffer and think about the plot. What do you think?

The author really dares to mess with anything. . -_-||

In fact, I think that each kind of selfless temple also has certain differences in realms, such as awakening, control, subtlety, meticulousness, and full power. These five aspects are better. As for the protagonist, I personally feel that he is between control and subtlety. He can use it skillfully and arrange his power reasonably. But if you want to achieve To be meticulous, you still need higher knowledge and strength, but full power can break away from the boundaries of physical strength. Even if you just use your full strength or fight for a long time, the physical and mental losses are almost negligible. I suggest you discuss it with the author of "Dragon Ball: The Strongest Myth", you should be able to gain something.

Speaking of which, are you sure you want a harem as a auxiliary? I think it's better not to have a harem, because writing too much will easily ruin the article, otherwise it will look like a harem on the surface, but the actual relationship between them is just a partnership of life and death. What do you think? I suggest you watch "Conan Nightwing" by Ito Tenmai, which is almost in this style...

The protagonist's team should be larger than Luffy's. What's the number in your mind? In the original book, Luffy needs to find 10 partners. Including him as the captain, there are 11 people in total, which is exactly the standard number of people in the World Cup. So, the protagonist, shouldn't he have to use the number of regular team members in Slam Dunk's hand, which is 15 people?

Update soon! No, there are no recommendation votes!

Do you still remember the popular character recommendation I sent you before? The one you classified as the best, just like I suggested at the beginning, add another original character like that to the original character, and then slightly modify it according to the background.

I would like to ask, is this Kinomoto Sakura the original character, or is she based on the image of Louise from Zero: Familiar? If I remember correctly, is Sakura's hair color coffee or bronze? Moreover, the Bounty Guild should also have Fairy Tail, right?

Now it is basically stable and updated every month, right...

Just watch, about 400,000 words will enter the palace.