One Piece: Pirate Commander

This is too low-key. . . Kaitou Kidd goes to be Luffy's little brother (vice-captain). He is poisonous and can't be offended. He can't be offended. He's leaving.

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Don't just meet a girl and have an affair with her, okay?

Pirates brings us more friendship and touch. Having more female protagonists gives it the feel of a YY novel, which may be somewhat contrary to the author's rigorous writing attitude. I think it is not necessary to have a female protagonist. If there is one, one is enough. There is no need to force her, just let everything take its own course. I hope Yunfei is a person who can truly integrate into the world of pirates. Personally, I really like the author's current writing style and the shaping of Yunfei's character and image (I like Kidd very much, haha). I hope the author can keep it up. Ah, to put it simply, I think the fanfic you wrote is quite nice! I originally wanted to reply to the comment "About the Hostess" but ended up having to open a new one. I hope you don't mind.

In the original book, Kebi and Luffy learned the Six Styles within a few months of each other. Moreover, Kebi's physical fitness was so fat that he could learn the Six Styles in just a few months. The book actually says that the Six Styles are very demanding to practice. How can this be called high? ? ? ?

Alas, it's still on the shelves. As a student, I can't read the original version. I'm sorry, Ruka.

Follow the boat, if you don't like it you can leave and say goodbye.

Exist? Why do you all like to use Chinese names when writing fan fiction? Not awkward?

I'm really convinced. Hasn't the protagonist watched One Piece? Bucky the Clown didn't even know what he was capable of, and he was injured in a sneak attack. Do you think Bucky will die if he is cut into half?

I like following the boat flow hehehe, the author will update soon hehehe, come on Oli!

I keep reading pirated copies of this novel. . . Well written, I deliberately came to Qidian to reward the only thing I have. . . Don't despise me. . . Poor students expressed reluctance to spend money😭

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction either. Third, the plot of the original story can be briefly described, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work should be able to roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions and other plots, and make appropriate modifications or extensions to the original story plot. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand abuse and stick to principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing, and do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to drastically change the plot. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and release packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, the chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. Fifteenth, try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

Follow the boat? ? ? Dodge decisively!

U. Qidian. Com/z8DufroP Misaka No. 19090 Was experimented in advance, and was killed by Accelerator without any suspense. Death, this is Misaka's destined fate—— Misaka has a self, repeats her own destiny in different forms of existence, and in other forms in countless dimensions, but she has the desire to change her own destiny. Can Misaka girl's wish come true? Why would she have such an opportunity? Stay tuned——

Auntie, this book seems to be running out of stock. . .

It means that Sun Wuhan is not that his potential has been stimulated and cannot become Super 3, but that he wants to be a scholar without exercising.

Successful people are not without reasons, no matter how disgusting, ruthless, and dark,

No wonder the author's name is very familiar, and it feels like the author's name who wrote Peak Summons. It turns out that it is a person who directly collected the votes.

In the comics, the prisoners in Impel Down were not under Boss because they couldn't see his strength. Those guys took a fancy to him because of his identity as a member of the Pirate King crew, his ability to stick together, and his identity as the Shichibukai. They could be sheltered under Boss, so that they could avoid further pursuit by the navy and escape from Impel Down. When you come to the Navy, you will definitely want to capture it... The first one who escaped from Impel Down was the Golden Lion. He couldn't catch it while flying in the sky, but he was chased away as soon as Luffy appeared. Blackbeard took him away because it was too N~B and the Navy couldn't hold it, so why didn't Boss's men catch him? So no prisoner is stupid. It is better to be popular and drink hot food outside than to be in jail...

To eliminate it, all you need to do is erase the memory of One Piece. Write to let the protagonist change his mind and recognize that this world is not a game. The protagonist should accept the erasure of One Piece's memory. Erase your memory and you are still you? There is still not enough strength, there is no message from the strong ones, just waiting to be played to death.

"The Great Refiner" Reward, subscribe, collect... You can do it.

Come on! ! ! 😚

If I could travel through time, the Celestial Dragons would be so sweet! Rubbish haha, in the real world, when you have no money, you will think about making money. When you are rich and very poor, just to eat, you will think that money can solve 90% of current affairs.

You must know that the empress ate the fruit when she was 16 years old and had no fighting ability at all. But two years later, she went on her first expedition at the age of 18 and received a bounty of 80 million. . .

Why is this very good book ranked so low among fans? 12 Recommendation votes support! ........................! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

You should bring a stabbing sword or a dagger or something, otherwise the attack power will be too weak.

Hello, author. I like your work very much, but I always feel that something is missing. I thought about it for a long time before I remembered it. I think your plot jumps very quickly and has a sense of maturity. It looks like I want to see it but feel a little empty! I hope the author will not jump too fast. I feel that more people will read it and it will be better if the foundation is laid!

Use your mental power to control sea water or entangle the user with sea floor stone powder (particles). You can also use sea floor stone to make weapons to create an "infinite sword system". Mental power is a good thing for a Yin person 🤓.