A Book of Immortal Scripture

It was very tiring to watch, and I felt that the heroine was doing it from beginning to end. She knew that the bracelet given by her brother had been tampered with but still followed him, let him frame her and used it as a reason to kill her brother. She also made so many twists and turns, and always said she hated trouble. Since she didn't want to get into trouble, wouldn't it be better not to give her brother a chance to frame him in the first place or to expose him later? Does she still need to kill so many people? Does she still need Gu worms? Does she still need to do so many tricks? Will there be so much trouble if I go to college? Speechless

Dark, depressing, long-winded, authored... This book is poisonous, please read with caution

I feel that the outline of this novel is actually a good story, but I don't know why it seems to be a headache. Sometimes the author writes too many side details, and the heroine has too many thoughts when she sees a person encountering something, which makes it tiring to read. I basically took advantage of the limited exemption and read most of the novel. The information is large but relatively fragmented. There are many introductions to the characters and inner activities written from different angles. In fact, it is not necessary. My thoughts on this novel are that I am tired, it was written with great care, and there are too many other things. I would like to speed up the main line of the story a little, and occasionally use the Spring and Autumn style of writing.

I haven't read the article yet, so I read the comments first… eh! Whether there is a male protagonist depends on what the author thinks, how he structures it, and what kind of story he wants to tell! How you feel when you write it down is what readers should express! Even if some readers want no male protagonist, that shouldn't affect the author's setting! Of course the author should take suggestions from the readers, but they must not let the readers influence your setting! Readers can't cross the line either! This is a matter of principle! Otherwise, the readers can do whatever they want, then they can just write it themselves, why would the author do it? Whether a novel is good or not does not depend on whether it has a male protagonist or not! In order to cater to some readers, some novels specifically emphasize that there is no male protagonist. In the end, it is better to add a male protagonist and change the romance! I once read a novel about an adult who traveled through time and space into a lolita. There was no male protagonist in the Taoist cultivator! And it's very popular! As a result, the adult soul heroine is cute throughout the whole story, and by practicing Qi with her golden fingers, she can transcend the Nascent Soul, causing the Nascent Soul monks to abandon Taoism and practice Buddhism, and their family members will no longer want her! Then the heroine was hunted down by the monks from the Southern Region to no avail, so she could only resist the expulsion! The result is that you in the Southern Region are blind! This heroine will have to fight against the pseudo-Tiandao in the future! The heroine shouldn't be too strong! This novel is highly recommended to those who don't have male protagonists! ! ! I don't remember the name, so I'll search it myself! If there is a male protagonist in the novel, of course it will influence the female protagonist. It cannot even influence the female protagonist. It can only be said that the female protagonist does not love you. Two people in love will always influence each other and undergo some changes. As long as they do not hold back, do not commit any principled issues, and do not affect their spiritual character, that's fine! There is nothing wrong with having someone seek enlightenment with you and supporting each other! Reading the comments, it was said that the author had originally positioned the male protagonist, but when there was no male protagonist, he had to "abandon the article if there was a male protagonist", so the author changed the setting! My sympathies to the author here! Why is it now called a "cult without a male protagonist"? That's what he did! This "setting threat" kidnapped the author! It also affects readers from other civilizations! If there are now another group of readers who say "abandon the novel without a male protagonist", what should the author do? Should I change the settings back again? Therefore, many introductions to immortality novels now specifically emphasize "no male protagonist." When I saw this emphasis, I stopped reading it! Personally, I like to have a male protagonist, after all, it can be read as a romance if it's not well written! If it's well written, even the romance will be exciting, and even the icing on the cake (such as the cute mortal female fairy) if it's not well written, the heroine will hate it! My personal opinion about whether it is good or not is: Basic world layout settings. Plot: Like a fairy. Cultivation system: Taoism, demons, Buddhism, Confucianism, witchcraft, etc. Details of Taoist practice: Like Immortal Crossing. The impermanence of water includes characteristics such as swallowing. Fighting scenes: weapon characteristics, swordsmanship moves, spells, secrets, magical powers, etc. Enlightenment: Like the female thief who controls the spirit, the three thousand avenues are not just the so-called supreme and ruthless path without male protagonists! There is also Liu Rumei in the fairy tale. The way of killing, the way of medicine, the way of painting, the way of nature, the way of cause and effect, the way of life and death, the way of inaction, the way of action, etc. All roads lead to Rome, and all laws are Tao! If the spirit of craftsmanship is put into the literature on cultivating immortals, isn't it just the way of mortals? Character description: Like the Chu Qiao biography novel, not to mention other things, the background and personality of the characters are very vivid. Emotional relationships of characters: family, sect, interest involvement, love and friendship, etc. As long as it is not a waste or a Mary Sue, the scope of control of the thunder point is not too large!

I saw a lot of people saying that the heroine is dark. In fact, being dark is not a problem, but being wordy is a big problem.

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 26. The heroine is dark and wordy. I don't know what's so interesting to write about and interesting to read.

The first and last part were not written by the same person. After the middle part, the heroine's character completely changed, and the content description also became a lot more burdensome. It was not the same style as before.

Too wordy. If you want to leave, leave. If you want to kill, kill. So much nonsense. It almost ended with more than forty chapters of nonsense.

The heroine is very perverted and depressing. I haven't finished watching it. I actually wanted to see how the poison of the heroine and his seventh brother has been cured, but it gave me a headache and I couldn't stand it.

Isn't it a genius article? I looked at the second one and it turned out to be a piece of trash.