One Piece Explosion

The writing at the beginning is not bad, but the way you write is disgusting to me. You flirt with women at every turn. Why do you want to have a harem? And with Funaru, haha, with Funaru, it's better to watch the original work. Anyway, the plot is the same as the original work. At least the protagonist Luffy in the original work is not an idiot who chats about women.

Follow the boat flow. . Goodbye. . .

Isn't it silly to give away the secrets of Haki and 6 styles as soon as you meet?

Nowadays, everyone is following the trend of authors, and each one learns worse than the last.

When you write a pirate, don't use a Chinese name

... Who gives me the courage to write a novel at this level...

I don't know what to say. Do you like it now?

If she's a woman, just tease her. If you see someone, tease someone else.

"One Piece: Blue Phantom" has resumed update, full of integrity~ Boss, please show mercy~