The Alchemist in Fairy Tail

There is a kind of novel that I hate recently. I set up various characters and characters at the beginning, but then it all turns out to be farts. The protagonist pursues magic and occultism in various ways, even robs tombs, kills people, and writes a suicide note. As a result, once time travels through time, the pursuit of mysticism does not exist. First of all, as a businessman, you can talk about the pressures of life, but there is no sign of learning and pursuit from beginning to end, so why bother with the character design at the beginning.

The rare Fairy Tail, but it's a pity that the plot is so clueless.

Double penetration, harem, poisonous tongue, bad mouth, and book-destroying elements are all put together.

The author has never seen Steelmaking, right? If you don't understand it, just don't write blindly, okay? Even if the formation formation is your own setting, it is enough for you to write the alchemist's battle like this.

It feels like the protagonist is always talking to himself, all kinds of things are out of place, and it doesn't feel like it's engaging.

Does the author's writing style simply exist?

Almost every sentence has one or two but/but. . . Author, don't you think it's unreasonable?

Chapter 16 is incomprehensible, what does it mean?

As a fan of Fairy Tail, I decisively abandoned the book.

Another carefree protagonist 😰 abandoned

Author, do you know what bullet core and charge are? Now the 12.7 Bullets can be made like small artillery shells Smaller ones are only limited by cost and technology. In addition, this kind of alchemy is actually afraid of wear and tear? You can repair or make stronger pipes at any time. The effective range of 50 meters means that a person can control the shooting accurately. If it exceeds 50 meters, the spread will be too large, and the hits will basically be blind. Some long-barreled pistols such as box guns, modified PDW, etc. It can stably hit 150-200 meters with the same type of ammunition.

How should I put it? The writing has been too sloppy recently, and the plot is progressing too fast. There is not much writing about fighting and character psychology. Author, you should be more knowledgeable.

I thought it was Steel and Fairy Tail, but after reading a few chapters, it turned out to be a fake Steel...

If you write about Western fantasy themes, the most important thing is to have Chinese elements. The same goes for writing about Chinese elements. Otherwise, it will be as uncomfortable as eating a piece of shit after eating sweets. I hope the author can improve it.

This is not alchemy at all, this is already modifying the world according to one's own wishes.

🤫Is this the only Fairy Tail fanfic that is still being updated? It's too unpopular, Fairy Tail is not bad at all.

The fighting and emotional scenes are not very well written, which makes me sad as a Fairy Tail fan.

Damn it, the plot develops too fast... One chapter can tell a story for several years...

Abandon the book, the emotional writing is not good, I don't like the Holy Mother, and it's not that great.

Newcomers, don't read it. The writing is so disgusting. Not only does the Holy Mother have no brains, she forced the settings

Two time-travelers, are you kidding me? Goodbye, poison people to death. . . .

Water experience! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ·

As a fan of Fairy Tail, I am decisive...

In fact, as an alchemist, I prefer the setting of stigmata to steel refining.

The author's typos are a bit serious. I just read Chapter 15 and I think it affects my reading 😭. I suggest you find a way to fix it.

I remember alchemy can decompose atoms into nuclear fusion.

A good reader should have a typo correction function

I've written twelve books, and it's still level-1, which is so scary (ŐдŐ๑).