The Half-Demon’s Restaurant

No wonder it's not very popular. The first few chapters were about the female character, which caused a bad misunderstanding, and then nothing happened. It was as if the character didn't exist. I looked at the catalog and found that the character has not appeared until now. It's hard for people to watch without beginning or end.

I think the reason why this book is not popular is probably because the writing style is a bit shabby and sometimes typos are made Sometimes the preface and the follower are inconsistent

The writing of this book is average. I feel that many things are not described clearly in the front, which makes it awkward to read.

The protagonist's sister is just a drag.

To be honest, the protagonist's sister is so annoying

The creativity is good, but the writing is not. It is too idealistic, the protagonist has no scheming, and the whole thing feels silly, and sometimes the character is forcibly changed. I was having a good conversation with someone before and suddenly I became "sarcastic" and had a "cold look on my face". And the strength is vague, giving people a particularly distorted feeling. And the character at the beginning doesn't even have a phone call yet.

The reason why the author's book is not popular is that the protagonist is actually a variable, and what the author needs to write is whether he can combine the settings of various comics, movies, etc. To create the most interesting and fun thing. The story is not very good. . . . Some supporting characters forcibly lose their intelligence and ignore the story of their own world. For example, Tony, as long as he has an Internet connection, he knows everything, including all fan fiction. What will be the consequences of letting these people read your fan fiction?? There are many things that are unclear. The author wants to write them well, but unfortunately his writing skills are not enough.

The subject matter is okay, and the writing style is gradually getting better, but this sister feels really awkward and uncomfortable.

I especially want to know where Wu Waner went

So is this the case with the girl I met in the early stage, or did I just jump to see it?