Two-Dimensional Empire

It's a bit awkward to write all the characters with black hair. Maki is also written with black hair, and Kotori is also written with black hair. I really can't stand it.

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I don't like Kousaka Kirino and I even feel a little disgusted.

As I expected, the start was absolutely disgusting. Younger sister? Life counseling? Kick him out, why should I listen to you? Xswl

Author, your book only has more than 400 chapters, and there are so many characters. What is the protagonist doing? You wrote more than 200 chapters in one month after time travel, and you wrote the remaining 200 chapters in the remaining month? This book is about 2 months of daily life in time travel? Too many characters are not a good thing. The protagonist has too many quest lines, and none of them are fully written. You are still expanding new lines. Aren't you afraid of biting off more than you can chew? You also adopted Mi Toma, an 8-year-old girl named Dad of a 17-year-old boy, you dare to write this. I have to say that you are really awesome. The main character's Virgin attributes are full, right? He traveled through time at the age of 30. He had a wife and children before time traveling. Three weeks after time traveling, he and Nan Xiaotiao fell in love. Do you want to commemorate his lost wife? When I first started traveling through time, I wrote about how much I missed his wife. I only thought about it for three weeks. In addition to his father, there is Kato and his uncle in the protagonist's circle. Are there any men? Oh, there is also Lun Ye. Every day when the protagonist wakes up early, he sees Lun Ye also getting up, and then disappears. There are 4 men, all 4 of them are making soy sauce. The protagonist is written like a breeding pig, surrounded by women.

I don't think a person in the real world can tolerate the actions of someone who is not a biological sister. It's already a good temper to talk to her at one o'clock. At three o'clock, the best way is to have a big fight with her and send her to a psychiatrist.

To be honest, although some places are a little bit toxic, it's generally good. It's a pity tj

Damn it, I had a daughter before time travel, so time travel is a hammer

To be honest, after reading more than a hundred pictures and seeing so many women having an affair with the protagonist, I felt that this book would collapse 😅

🙂 People who have been eunuchs once have no trust at all. I will not subscribe to this book until it is finished. 🙂

I hope the author can know - our current views on Nan Qinli (subjective opinion) Before mentioning Nan Qinli, let me briefly mention Yin Qing, the protagonist of the time traveler in my eyes: To borrow a sentence from Liang Tuzhen in the past: "My ancient soul has experienced countless ups and downs and great sorrows and pains..., I don't want to participate in all the joys and sorrows of success and failure." Although the protagonist has never experienced hundreds of reincarnations like Liang Tuzhen, he will awaken his memory every time he turns twenty. But I believe that the confusion of changing identities is not too far away from the feeling of being out of tune with what I (predecessor) have done even though it is not in my memory. In this case, the protagonist locks himself in his heart. Although he decides to make a career, he still looks on with a cold eye. It is understandable that he treats himself as an outsider. And the one who appears in front of the protagonist at this time is Nan Qinli. In our eyes, this is a girl who is both watery and jade-like. Although it is as bright as a clear stream and gives people a cool feeling like a clear spring, it is also like jade, which is flexible but extremely strong, exuding a dazzling brilliance. As the first friend that the protagonist accepts, Nan Qinli is a harbor that soothes the tired heart for the protagonist, and is proof that the protagonist begins to accept others again. (Not even my parents, Yi Lin Xue and Kousaka Kano, nor my superficial friend An Yilun can do this.) I don't know whether this impression of Nan Qinli is correct, because when the LL cult was prevalent, although we knew about it, we didn't pay much attention to it. And we began to have a deep impression on the name Nan Qinli, and even started to search for information like now, and wanted to explore more deeply what kind of person she was. Maybe I will have different thoughts after watching the video about the LL cult in the future, but for now, all of this is just my true thoughts about the person named Minami Qinri who appears in this book. This is the author's attitude toward the woman Minami Kotori in this book. Therefore, what I hope to express to the author is We don't dare to expect the author to make Nan Qinli stand out from the current slightly complicated characters. I don't dare to hope for monogamy, which will make this book lose readers. We only hope that the author can focus on the purpose of pure love (we were moved from the bottom of our hearts by the sentence "love is relative" mentioned by the author in the article before) Perhaps as the protagonist gradually grows up, he will gradually forget or no longer care about everything he was obsessed with in the past (in Ni Kuang's "First Reading of Jin Yong's Novels" and the first edition of "The Story of Heaven and Dragon Sword", Zhang Wuji had a monkey as his childhood playmate when he was on Binghuo Island. Ni Kuang judged that this is also Zhang Wuji's personal development. There is no sexual reason for becoming autistic. But after the second edition, the monkey disappeared. In Ni Kuang's view, it was because Jin Yong had grown up like Zhang Wuji and no longer cared about things after childhood. But for Zhang Wuji, who was still a child at the time, the monkey was his only friend and could not let go of the world. We only hope that the author will not forget that the harbor that once parked the protagonist's heart still quietly and silently watches and tolerates the protagonist's tired heart. I hope that even in the end, like the inertia of harem works, when he is reduced to a vase or a marginal figure, he can still be left with one or two small scenes to express his feelings, just like the author first met his beloved in the past. (The author wants to cry as he writes) I'm here to kowtow. (We really cried...) PS. After re-watching the scene where the protagonist confessed to Nan Qinli three times in Chapter 99, we suddenly thought of the sentence "I would like to be a winged bird in heaven, and a twig on earth", and suddenly came up with the idea of designing a wedding ring for the protagonist and Nan Qinli based on this sentence. The following is my current basic setting Match the Rings [Compare Wings] This is a pair of rings placed in a box and held together. On the walls of the box on both sides is written "I would like to be a winged bird in heaven, and a twig on earth." The entire ring looks like a black dead branch wrapped around the finger, but there is a glistening green light at the interface. This green light will tend to the direction of the other ring, far away from the other ring. And if the two rings are brought together, the dead branches on the ring surface will form a pattern of flying birds, dyed green by fluorescent light, just like the flying birds finally reunited and staying on the branches of the ring.

There are four hundred chapters of Naruto and there are no three chapters. What kind of manga are you going to draw?

I can't complain, there are always missing chapters, and the heroine is a little bird. Why is she always the heroine in two-dimensional fan fiction?

To be honest, the settings are very good, but they should not appear in a book like this. It's a good idea to pop up a new setting and new direction every once in a while, but I've just read the first and middle stages, and I've already jumped to a new setting, new characters, and a new beginning of the plot more than ten times inexplicably. Let me just say that, I have read many books that randomly jump around characters and settings for more than ten years, and I have never seen one that didn't fail. . . There is another problem that is not a problem. You should unify the public circle of copywriters in a public circle. If the author randomly selects his favorite works and copies them for fun in his own private circle without thinking about it, it is easy to kick out readers who are not compatible with the circle. Many characters appear just to go through the motions. It is better to give the plot to the previous characters to make their images fuller. Creating a three-dimensional character card no matter what the background is is far better than stacking a stack of paper figures. Just a rant, casual novels and entertainment novels are meant to be read easily. There is no main line and writing here and there is not a problem, but this pile of fancy paper characters each adds a little bit of the original plot and adds a male protagonist, which made me a little irritated, but it's okay. . . This is a pity book. If 90% of the messy settings were removed and the plot was concentrated on a few characters or the works, it would be a much more eye-catching book. Instead of being like now, it is not even worth seeing, and it can only be called having nothing to do, passing the time.

I've read it several times. It's a pity that it's eunuch. After reading this book, I've been looking for these two-dimensional daily books. It's a pity that there aren't many that I can read.

What a rush thing, Kousaka Kirino is so disgusting and poisonous to death I thought I would be relieved after persisting until I moved, but it turned out not to be the case I could slap this kind of woman to death without even blinking.

The author actually came back to open a new pit, the old book should still be gone

I don't know why, this kind of book is easy to lose. I don't know the reason. It shouldn't be because I can't write it. There must be some 'special' reason.

Did the author delete the first chapter because he changed the historical setting in the first chapter, which led to large-scale dismissal? I had read the first chapter and had read novels of the same type as The Two-Dimensional Throne at the time, but I gave up on it because I was shocked. I will read it today.

A common problem among people who inherit the perfect inheritance from the starting point: a meal of water with all the bells and whistles, but you don't understand what you mean.

The introduction is to write an anime, but I haven't started working on about a hundred chapters yet.

Cross-dressing fetish, the kind who likes to act cute and then conduct PY transactions!

If all 35 or 34 pictures could be deleted, then more people would be able to read this book. Those few pictures are so convincing!

Chapter 1: Poisonous Disease Why is there still a cabinet chief minister when there is Zhongshu Ling? Why do we have an emperor and a municipal party committee secretary? How can these two systems coexist? The purpose of the imperial examination system is to eliminate aristocratic families, how could it still allow you to have a thousand-year-old family?

Go watch 100 pirated copies and then come back and write a 100-word review

There's nothing else. It's very watery. It's really too watery.

There is a ban on the cover [fn=2_4]

How to say it. I still prefer to read this kind of books, and then, as for the reference to the plot of My Sister, almost everyone has read My Sister, and everyone knows the storyline, so when you write, you can make this part of the plot a little simpler. Anyway, when I read it, I almost skipped over the plot of My Sister. Then the pace was a bit slow, I should say very slow, so it would be better if the pace could be sped up. It's almost 100,000 words and I'm just starting to submit it. It's too late.