Jobless Reincarnation: Sword, Magic Hat and Love System

I stayed up all night and finished reading it all night The conclusion is: it is highly recommended and worth watching! ! ! The writing is excellent, and the plot advancement and character creation are very smooth There is neither the phenomenon of using too much force (a common problem in Japan), nor not enough ink, nor the occurrence of running accounts (not enough to read, not enough to read), a very clever balance point As the author himself said, it is the characters themselves who promote the development of the plot according to their own personalities (plus a little guidance from the author) Although it is a second-generation novel, it does not hinder direct viewing (it is originally intended to break the heavy future of the original novel). It is better to know the original plot, and it does not matter if you don't know it (it will be revealed later in the article) The most praiseworthy thing is the emotional connection and expression of the overall novel. Whether it is the layer-by-layer preparation for the emotional connection or the smooth completion after the emotional expression, it makes the viewing experience increase. I am very much looking forward to the author's follow-up efforts...

The author's writing skills are really good, but I only watched two episodes of the anime Mujo Tensei and couldn't get enough of it. On the contrary, this novel is very enjoyable to read. It has the sweet daily life of light novels, but does not have the common problem of most light novels - unnecessary moaning. Very good novel, I have to subscribe.

Reading along the way, I feel that the author's writing logic is actually similar to that of a light novel, with the "volume" itself as the focus of the story. So it was a good feeling to read the first two volumes in one go, but if it becomes a follow-up reading, I feel that frequent stops and not being able to see the actual progress of the plot for several days in a row will kill my enthusiasm. So I plan to officially adjust my mentality to chasing a wonderful light novel itself, "waiting for the official release of the third volume with full hope". I hope someone can remind me when the time comes. Thank you very much.

The overall performance of the first volume is on the high side. Whether it is the description of Luo Qishi or Sylphy, they are very natural. They have a deep understanding of the original character portrayal. It can be seen that the author is dissatisfied with part of the plot of the original work. He tried to use the male protagonist Allen as a "mouth substitute" to torture the original plot of kidnapping Janice through lies, deception and morality. There is no problem with the final processing method and the thoughts expressed here, and the analysis of the derailment incident is also very clear. But the main flaw is that the emotions expressed by the protagonist in this plot are too explosive, but the handling is completely inconsistent with his identity as a time traveler who is staying with his relatives. Instead, the author directly points out the ending and chooses to directly vent his dissatisfaction with the original treatment method. This is specifically reflected in the fact that the protagonist is clearly involved in the plot and knows that Lao Di can't think of a way to get the best of both worlds. He still asks Lao Di to find a way, and then scolds and kicks Lao Di who has the idea.

Most of the fan novels I read in the past completely followed the plot, but added an original protagonist and more interactions. After reading this novel, I feel that I can no longer read similar unintentional fan novels. The whole book is very wonderfully written, with various continuations, transitions, and connections. This is the first time I have seen someone put so much effort into careful design in the genre of fan fiction. I have only seen such well-designed plots in some original novels before. For me, the only two regrets about reading the book are that the plot of Yuanhai is very depressing. I feel that Aisha and others will be killed at any time when Allen is trapped. I scratched my head when I saw it. The second is that most of the time, Allen is exhausted fighting against the gods and humans, and his interaction with the heroines is not enough to watch. Most of the time, after spreading the candy, he has to think about how to avoid the conspiracy of the gods and humans and find a way to kill him. I thought that after the death of the gods, the author would write a vacation plot in which the protagonist relaxes completely and returns to the earth with the heroines to play in the abyss, etc. Unexpectedly, it ends so quickly... Damn it, I didn't enjoy it at all! ps: I will become a regular employee after I have some income. I will be the first to write this when the time comes. This fan novel is so wonderful

There are only a few jobless fans on the Internet, and even fewer of them can be read. It's rare to find someone who writes a jobless fan with logic and good writing skills. I support it.

I really like the daily life written by the author. It is very detailed. I am unemployed and have only watched anime and watched short videos. There are some characters I don't know about and I have to search online. Every time I see the foreshadowing of the plot, it develops step by step. I put my pen down and reach the point of emotional explosion. It's really cool. It's the first time I read a fan novel, and it feels like I'm reading an original novel. It's amazing.

In fact, the best way to deal with large-scale transfers is to dig a cellar and hide underground! The transfer magic only transfers the above-ground part.

I really can't find a book by an amateur fan, I didn't expect there to be such a good one, but don't stop. After all, it's a niche fan, so I'm still worried that it will be suddenly discontinued or unfinished. Also, don't always talk about later foreshadowing in the comments. Thank you for writing this book.

It's well written, with emotional interactions, a vision for the future, and a passion for practicing swordsmanship. All in all, it's humorous, serious, and fun 😆 Come on. I like to watch the talent flow of sword training and the somewhat sensational parts you wrote.

The book is very good, it can be said to be the best non-job fanfic I have ever read. But the title of the book is so unattractive that the author might as well have changed it to a better name. Really has fire potential.

Luo Qixi! Luo Qixi! Luo Qixi!

Don't worry about running away with a bucket. Everyone's support has made it difficult for me to stand here. If I don't get good grades, I will write this number of words. Even if I lose my grades, I will still have to write this number of words. About the quality: I will try my best to maintain it. To be honest, I have no hydrological habits. But I would prefer to write about love and emotional interaction. If this is considered to be a hydrology, to be honest, I have no choice, because this is my area of ​​expertise and it is difficult to make up my mind to abandon it. Thanks! I wish you all good health! Good luck with your studies/work. Love... Uh... Ahem, good night.

After reading Chapter 205, I guessed the causes and consequences of Allen's time travel in this week's episode. Based on the fact that the current system was manipulated by Lala, humans and gods hacked part of it, but not all of it. (You can probably block and add pop-ups. The pop-ups were controlled by humans and gods.) Coupled with the current plot, I can make reasonable speculations. First of all, this book may start out as Allen's second project, and the contents of the zero project and the first project may be very different. The human god in the original work was unwilling to be torn into pieces, so he bewitched another son of god (perhaps by other means) to break the world barrier in an attempt to create distortion and destroy the world. Due to insufficient power, he was unable to destroy the world but successfully connected the real world and the six-sided world. Allen died at that time and his soul traveled through to replace his dead original body. First week: Allen adheres to the principle of not changing the plot easily and learns swordsmanship in the royal capital while learning magic at the same time. During this period, the human god tried to contact Allen and found that Allen was very wary and knew him well. However, due to his powerful destiny, the human god kept him under observation, waiting for the opportunity to induce him to become a trump card. It is also possible that the transfer time has not happened now, and fate has not yet taken hold of Allen and has not attracted the attention of humans and gods. (Human-god mind readers can read the psychological activities of unbounded people, but cannot read all their memories.) Under the design and operation of James and himself, he became Ariel's bodyguard. After the transfer incident, Sylphy came to the royal capital, and Eren, Ariel and their group set out for the magical city of Shalia. During the journey, he resolved many crises and formed deep friendships with those he traveled with, especially Sylphy. In order to rescue Paul and Senis Allen, he went to the labyrinth city and fell in love with Luo Qixi at first sight while conquering the transfer labyrinth. Afterwards Rudy also came to Labyrinth City. Rudy and Sylphy were already married at this time, so Luo Qixi chose Allen. Allen's participation prevented Paul's death but could not avoid Senes' transformation into the Son of God. Rudy was devastated. Everyone returned to Shalia, and Allen and Luo Qixi got married. At this point, the goal of the human god seemed to be achieved. But the daughter of Luo Qixi and Allen is still Lala (or maybe she is not the same person as the original Lala, but she has a similar fate and special attacks against humans and gods). So Man-God started the second phase of the plan. Because Man-God had limited knowledge of Allen's plot, after conducting a series of tentative observations, he thought that only by muddying the water could he achieve his goal. First, while Sylphy was pregnant, Rudy released rats to make Sylphy contract the disease. When it was too late, Allen could think of a solution that was to ask the Seven-Star Dragon God. However, the relationship between Rudy and the Dragon God was very bad at that time. In addition, the man and God were sowing discord, saying that Allen was with the Dragon God, and Luo Qixi would be in danger of instigating Rudy and Allen to go to war in the future. However, it was not successful. During the battle, Allen accidentally killed Rudy. Sylphy died of illness due to delayed treatment. The Graylat family and the Allen family began to fight to the death. Allen had no way to explain, so he could only run away with his family. Luo Qixi was caught in the middle and couldn't make a judgment at all. Even though Allen explained the causes and consequences and even his time travel, Luo Qixi could not turn a blind eye to Rudy's death. After Alice came back and heard the news of Rudy's death, she went berserk and a wave of brother-sister war broke out. Luo Qixi was killed under unclear circumstances, and Allen lost his mind and began to take revenge. When the dust settled, Allen failed to save anyone he wanted to save, and then he began to take revenge on humans and gods. After that, Allen sought the protection of the Dragon God and raised his daughter. Finally, the Dragon God, Lara, and Allen worked together to manipulate the system and send it to the past to change history. The system has added a lot of compound magic to form an anti-virus software for the Human God, but it cannot completely replicate all the magic on the Dragon God, so there is a risk of the Human God breaking through the firewall. At the same time, it will consume Allen's magic power, so Allen's magic power recovery is very slow, especially after building the Dragon Saint Hatchling Core because the Hatchling Core is unstable and consumes energy. The main function of the system is to enhance Allen's strength and guide Allen to increase his bond with Rudy and others, at least to overcome the influence of Rudy on humans and gods after returning from the Demon Continent. Allen followed Rudy and reacted immediately to the news of humans and gods. In order to be able to find everyone after the transfer event, a world map was added, and in order to be able to meet the dragon boss without being killed as an apostle, other identification functions were added, and Lala's prank favorability task came into being. Ellen has a system for the second week. At first, the system was normal. It gave Allen the core of the Dragon Saint, guided Allen to Buena Village, and became friends with Luo Qixi, which improved the favorability of Rudy and others. However, Allen's acquisition system will bring much greater changes to the future than Zhoumo, which directly attracts the attention of humans and gods. Humans and gods rely on Allen to break through the firewall, which can block normal system text pop-ups and add misleading information. But the deeper rewards and mechanics cannot be changed. The firewall was breached before and after meeting Luo Qixi, which was about the time when the system finally contacted Orsted. The God of Man began to guide Eren and Sylphy to get along, trying to break up Luo Qixi and everyone else. For example, the part where Luo Xi's master and apprentice provoked conflicts, the part in Snow Valley where Allen was tempted to die, etc. Of course, you can't find any problems with the system, so you can't go too far. You have to trick it slowly. At critical moments, it's easy to be interrupted by Rudy or Sylphy. Basically, anyone who only adds quest progress but no actual rewards can be suspected of having a conspiracy involved. The purpose of the Human God is roughly to increase the distortion, provide Darius with more information for assassination, allow Allen to avoid Boss Dragon, and allow Allen to receive as little system assistance as possible.

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To be honest, when I first watched the anime Mujo Tensei, I was still worried about whether the protagonist's wife would be abducted by his father, but when I saw Luo Qixi being touched by the fat pig prince, I stopped worrying because I couldn't stand it at all. This anime was not for me to watch at all and it had nothing to do with me.

When you say that Chachacha was given to Rudy, do you want to destroy the author? 😂I have been reading at Qidian for so many years. It's rare to see a fan fiction author arranging a marriage for the male protagonist of the original work. I don't know how many people would welcome this kind of plot, but there are definitely many people who don't like it. The opportunity for a plot like this would cause the general comment section to get into an uproar.

In the novel, I saw the doorknob twisting in the dream and the picture of the Aishan Orphanage. From the beginning of the big transfer, my impression of this book obviously dropped... It wasn't until I saved the town, everyone shouted for the savior in unison, and crushed Beishen III that my impression started to pick up, and I regained some of the previous feelings. Just by looking at the "author's words", the author should have a clear understanding of himself. Good at writing character growth and emotional interactions. The second focus is on the refreshing feeling brought by upgrades and positive feedback. Then why do you have to be persistent and engage in tricks with treacherous thoughts under the water? It can be done, but its impact is obviously super-model. Yes, it makes sense to target Allen. But as a story, the tension has been rising since the disappearance of the family. Hanging in the story are the anticipated reunion with parents, further positive feedback in the royal capital, the shock brought by the name of the genius water god, the anticipated Paul meeting his family, the anticipated reunion of Sylphy with everyone, will Rudy cry, and so on. Only these emotional responses can dilute the waves of tension. To keep the emotional aspects of the novel in a reasonable range... The book has become too intense at this point. Is the author a little too immersed in his own plot design... In fact, readers may not really care that much about how to solve the human gods. Whether you are three consciousnesses competing, or even "developing summoning techniques to attract the energy of the earth world to join the world model to replace the magic power and delay the increase of entropy", it actually doesn't matter... Don't be too immersed in your own design. Is it the design we want to see? What we want to see is: 1. Everyone's growth, the positive feedback (get) brought by growth 2. Everyone's growth, interaction after growth, reaction to setbacks, interaction after getting over setbacks, and changes in mutual impressions. (For some get, the frequency of interaction decreased significantly after the big shift, and extra chapters interrupted the emotions of the main text, resulting in the accumulation of emotions and poor emotional venting. What is the current situation? If you look at the protagonist's strength display, it will constantly affect the pleasure of the people around you and make you unable to concentrate. If you look at the interactions and emotional connections with the people around you, it will only be frustrating and heartbreaking.) 3. The growth of the male protagonist, and the positive feedback brought about by growth. Including but not limited to Liangxiang - the situation before growing up and the situation after growing up, comparing the two. Compare the situation of the people around you before you grow up and the situation of the people around you after you grow up. Compare the dilemma of others not being able to handle the problem, and the shortcut of the protagonist having enough ability to handle the problem. (Get, the author is relatively good in this aspect. But he can only write brilliantly when it comes to feedback related to society. He is obviously not good at describing feedback in remote areas after being separated from the social environment. There is also a serious lack of enjoying the fruits of his own labor. It is important to have a degree of relaxation and cannot be ignored. The proportion of dilemmas and troubles in the writing is too large now, and it needs to be relieved. Let Sylphy and Rudy Knowing that the male protagonist is worry-free and causing trouble in the outside world, they come to find it with peace of mind. In the end, everyone can enjoy the journey together, which can relieve the tension. How about fighting the gods after a break? Wave after wave, not only Allen is tired... The readers are also tired... Allen has been on the road for more than ten days to relax... But the readers have a lot of new things chapter after chapter. The oppression of the human god Dragon God, the worry about Aisha's life and death, and the expectation of changing Aisha's attitude to gain unconditional trust. Why did the audience feel better when they saw the rescue of the town? Because the positive feedback brought by the powerful stone tablets, the adventurers and the townspeople, and the easy solution of the second prince gave the readers a sense of relief. What happened next? Shillong should also enjoy another period of fruitful results. I was relieved when I saw everyone moving into the same house, and I was also relieved when we had dinner together. As a result, I started to review my thoughts before I felt relieved... I hope there will be a plot later to relax, otherwise Allen may have the energy to face the Dragon God, and readers may not have the energy...) I hope the author can improve the rhythm of writing. Your characters are well developed and the book is beautiful, with more pros than cons. The author should maximize your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and try to play to your strengths. I miss Rudy and Sylphy. Watching the extras can't alleviate my missing. I miss meeting them all and their warm atmosphere. Of course, if the author has his own unique idea, then just follow his own idea. If he is really good at plot design, he can come up with something exciting. The solution to the struggle between the three consciousnesses is not very exciting anyway... It does not allow people to breathe a sigh of relief and feel positive feedback.

​​Excellent book, one of the best among Qidian. The writing is smooth and not stiff, and there are many jokes that make you smile. The key thing is that the author has a deep understanding of the original work. When writing a fanfic, he is not afraid of not having a good plot, but of losing the character. What is admirable is the author's restoration and completion of the original work. As for the plot, it still feels like a jobless one, with growth, adventure, and reflection. Therefore, the protagonist travels through time, and does not have a clear goal and a complete outlook from the beginning. Instead, he will grow up slowly, but during this period, there is no sense of cowardice in the original work, which is a good comment. The protagonist's character design is good, the original plot is reasonable, and it has been well received. Overall, as a jobless fanfic, it is undoubtedly fairy grass. (As an aside, in my opinion, the worst thing is the description of various streams of consciousness and the pursuit of psychological rationality. When it comes to the psychological changes of the protagonist, they always like to use the stream of consciousness to describe it. This is not to say that the author cannot write the stream of consciousness well, but this obviously raises the reading threshold. Once Not being able to keep up with the loop is completely negative feedback, but this is not a shortcoming. After all, I read unemployed fanfics, so I won't be too repelled by this. But the author still writes too often, and there are definitely better directions to write. In my opinion, you write it entirely to show off your skills. )

Isaruti (left) Her parents passed away when she was very young. Her grandmother was very busy and had little free time to take care of her brother and sister. The elder brother Tantorius took on the burden of life early and helped his grandmother run the dojo. Four-year-old Isaruti would wait for her brother to come back at the gate of the dojo every evening. She could only see her brother during dinner time. She wanted to share what she had seen today with her brother and tell him that her swordsmanship had improved a little, but her brother always had a straight face, as if he was suppressed by something and couldn't breathe. My brother is also under a lot of pressure and I can no longer make him unhappy. Thinking of this, Isaruti stopped, her bright eyes gradually dimmed, and she continued to eat obediently with her head lowered. Four-year-old Isaruti misses her parents very much. She also longs to hang around her father's neck and act like a spoiled child like other children. She also wanted to grab her mother's hand and run to the snack shop on the street. She also wants to be taught angrily by the whole family because of her naughty mistakes, and then make peace with her noisily. She also wanted to happily show off what she had seen today among the pampering of her family. But the sensible Isaluti knows that she cannot be willful. She needs to be a "good child" and not cause trouble to her grandmother and brother. Her grandmother taught her aristocratic etiquette, but Isaruti did not make any aristocratic friends. Isaruti could not understand their topics, and they did not like to talk about swordsmanship during breaks. Isaruti has always been a good child, obedient and sensible, but has no opinions of her own. "Boring brat" They said this about Isaruti. If there were no accidents, perhaps Isaluti would have grown up like this, without the company and guidance of her close relatives, suppressing her own nature, wearing the shackles of a good child, becoming gentle and polite but without any opinion. I don't know what I really like, I don't know what I really want, and even the partners I consider for marriage only have a superficial and superficial image of being handsome, rich, and status. In the end, under the pressure of the outside world, she married someone she didn't seem to like that much, cultivated feelings as a matter of course, and lived her life in an ordinary way. But one day, a boy changed everything. "Why are you always alone here in a daze?" A strange and tender voice sounded in front of me. Isaluti raised her head, and the boy stood quietly under the setting sun, with the afterglow of the setting sun dyeing his dark gray eyes... From that day on, Isaruti was no longer alone. The boy liked swordsmanship very much. The boy never found Isaruti boring. They had endless things to talk about together. The boy will comfort her when she is sad, encourage her when she is depressed, guide her when she needs to talk, and then listen carefully. The boy's name is Allen. He is very talented and his grandmother also likes him very much. After every day's swordsmanship training, Allen will give Isaruti a small lesson alone. Sometimes Allen would take Isaluti to sneak out of the city to play. At this time, Allen would always take out a map and record something while walking. Sometimes he would also talk to passing adventurers and ask about some places that Isaluti had never heard of. Allen would tell her all kinds of interesting stories. Even though he was of the same age, she didn't know where his stories came from. Whenever she asked, Allen would mysteriously say that adventurers told him. It's strange, she always follows Allen every time we go out to play. How could an adventurer tell such a long story. Isaluti learned about Allen's birthday from her grandmother. Allen didn't like to go home and would practice late at the dojo almost every day. The body of Allen's wooden sword was already scarred, with traces of training all over it. I want to give him a suitable sword, Isaruti thought, and decided to use the money she earned. Because grandma likes Allen very much, she will definitely give him gifts. If I use the money given by grandma to buy gifts, isn't it equivalent to grandma giving two gifts? Isaruti hasn't been Allen's little follower for a long time. Even Allen refused her invitation to skip school and go outside the city. One day, after Allen left, Isaluti sneaked to the door of the weapons shop. She has been secretly accepting odd jobs from the Adventurer's Guild recently, such as helping a little girl find cats and dogs, helping an old lady clear the yard of weeds, and so on. I have saved money for a long time, but unfortunately I only had enough money to buy a wooden sword handle.             ，，，，， "Senior, senior brother... Why are you still here?" Isaruti hurriedly hid the gift box behind her back. "Isn't today your birthday?" As a proton, there is no way for him to have his own birthday. In order to prevent him from recognizing his relatives, the birthday must be fake. The birthday party is just a pretext for James to pursue fame and fortune. Allen knows this very well. "Birthdays are not important, what is important is who you celebrate them with." Allen shook his head. Instead of staying at the banquet and being played around like a puppet by James, it would be better to come to the gym to practice swordsmanship, but he didn't expect to meet a little girl like Isaluti here. Izaluti's face suddenly turned red, she looked down at her toes, fiddled with the gift box behind her with her fingers, and said in a mosquito-like voice, "So, senior brother came to see me on purpose?" Taking a deep breath, Isaluti handed the wrapped gift to Allen as if she had made up her mind. "Ai, senior... Senior brother, happy birthday" I originally wanted to call Allen, but she didn't say it out loud, although Luti didn't know the difference. "Ah, thank you" Allen stopped the sword in his hand and looked at Luti in surprise. There's no need for this, I don't care about birthdays, and besides, this birthday is also fake, Allen thought to himself. Looking at Luti's expectant eyes, she couldn't throw cold water on her now. "Can I open it and take a look?" "No, no, we can't look at it now." Luti's eyes full of expectation turned to panic. She suddenly thought of what her gift was, an ordinary wooden sword hilt. Allen would definitely dislike it. It was so embarrassing. Alan abandoned the grand birthday party and specially celebrated his birthday with me, but I gave him a wooden sword hilt as a gift. How could this be done? If I had known earlier, I wouldn't have been brave. Luti suddenly wanted to get the gift back from Allen, but of course this was impossible. "Okay, okay, I'll keep it first and then take it apart when I get home." Allen smiled and touched Isaruti's head, but Isaruti avoided it. "You haven't had dinner, right? Your stomach is protesting." Allen blinked. "It's okay, my brother should have left some leftovers for me." "That's not possible, I don't want to eat the leftovers." Allen took Isaruti's hand, "Let's go, I'll take you to eat something delicious." Isaruti followed closely behind Allen, and Allen's footprints were so clear under the moonlight. Take a step forward and settle down. Step by step in Allen's footsteps. The temperature in the palm of my hand is so reassuring. The footsteps stopped in front of Allen's locker, and Allen took out a very exquisite small cardboard box from it. "Every time I take you out to play, you have to stare at this snack. Have you been craving for it for a long time? There are a lot of things today. I almost forgot about it. It won't taste good if I leave it overnight." "But Isaruti clearly wants to eat it, so how can it be considered a waste?" Allen laughed. "But, but..." "Isaruti must learn to say what she wants. It's not good to keep it secret and be a good child." "Isn't it good to be a good child? But adults always praise you like this." "Then the adults who say this are good children?" "How can adults be good children?" "They themselves are not good children, why should others be good children?" Allen patted Isaluti's head dotingly. This time, the little girl lowered her head, her shoulders shook slightly, and she couldn't see the expression on her face, but she didn't move away. "How does it taste?" Alan opened the carton and found three snacks inside. "Can I take it back and eat it?" Isaluti looked at Allen, but there were tears in her eyes. After all, Isaruti still didn't get the snack she was longing for. She put the snack away, but it ended up being broken. After the senior brother was promoted to a small dojo, the senior brother's father asked his grandmother to hold a commendation ceremony for the senior brother. After that, the senior brother moved into the dojo and rarely went home. The senior brother seemed to hate his father. Later, my senior brother became busier and busier, and he seemed to be avoiding me intentionally. Did I do something bad that made my senior brother angry? Senior brother is still the same as before, he will do whatever he wants to do, his resolute eyes are still the same as before, his goal has never changed, it's just that I don't know it. I want to get to know my senior brother, but it seems a bit late. When I was nine years old, my senior brother said he wanted to go on a trip, but there was no news after he left. I will find my senior brother back.

It's really good. I haven't read it because I don't have the same views on my childhood. I still prefer to read the fanfics written by myself😁

I particularly like Ariel's contrasting cuteness. Can you turn her into a hook? I have no resistance to the cute contrast between white on the surface and black in reality.

After the big change, the explanations in the previous paragraphs are indeed quite discouraging. Although I can understand that it is for rationality, it still looks bad. It is better to mention the age less like other books. When mentioning the age, mention a sentence in the chapter to reduce the age by 13 years.

I have seen the ceiling of no-job fandom so far. It has its own thing, and it is not the kind that needs to be lost. I recommend it!

The best jobless fan on the Internet. It has the most words and is also the most thoughtful. If you haven't read the original work, it won't affect your reading at all. The emotional lines are pretty good. There are no particularly annoying points. The plot is also good. In some ways, I read it as a Western fantasy Dragon Quest. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The author is better in terms of daily life and emotional lines, but he especially likes to create a big boost throughout the whole text. The high point in the early stage is basically the explosive climax of the relationship. By the end of the work, it is less and less. It is basically pressure. Pressure. Pressure. I feel quite pressure. I really want to see everyone's daily life... There are still some supporting characters that have not been explained. It feels a little hasty to end. I hope that I can have more time later. I want to see the daily life of love. I would like to explain the more important supporting characters such as Ariel and Dragon God.

The third season of Jobless has started. This should be the ceiling for all jobless fans on the site. Those who like jobless or light novels can read it without thinking, and don't step on the wrong side.

After reading it again after a few months, I can still be moved by the plot of "Is it the moonlight that has fallen to the bottom?"

It was really uncomfortable to read Yuan Hai. The protagonist knew that the flow of time was different. The focus should not be to quickly write about the protagonist's sense of urgency. Instead, he suddenly wrote several chapters of Ai Xia. The tension and relaxation should be the end of the key events. The reader felt relaxed before writing. The rhythm here is not good. The previous ones were really comfortable.

Invest at the end of the month

The writing is really good (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧