I Am a Swordsman in Tokyo

I really can't stand the author's quibbles at the end of the story. If you don't want to offend your book friends, just continue. No matter how good or bad the rest of the story is, it won't be endless. You are escaping. You say you don't want to regret your book friends, but have you ever thought that when we spend money to buy chapters, it is not just to read this chapter. We will keep buying it. What we buy is an investment in the content of the book.

First of all, the book is called Sword Immortal, but can this kind of thing in the book be called Sword Immortal? Then the protagonist's personality is inconsistent. From the beginning, he was created as a calm and rational character, but after the supernatural incident, he became awkward. And how did he become a gangster by killing ghosts and absorbing spiritual energy? Oh right! This is a personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't spray it. I'm just trying to poison people who can understand.

The author should hurry up and finish the game. Don't write so many boring subplots. The protagonist's character is not suitable for ambiguity. If the Furukashi sisters are not the heroines, they should be dismissed as soon as possible. There are too many supporting roles. Sword Fairy hasn't even started yet. It's funny to be a harem king first.

The writing is very good, but the lack of love is always a pity. The female protagonist's feelings are clear, but the male protagonist's emotional changes are not clear and the female protagonist's emotions are not clear, which makes it awkward.

This book is such a pity. I really thought it was good at first, but later on when I started subscribing, it faltered, and it was too fragmented to make people lose patience. There were so many chapters about a kendo competition, and subscribing also made people read it unsmoothly, intermittently, and no pleasure at all. I won't read it anymore. Goodbye.

The positioning of this book is very vague. Personally, I think people who read this kind of books generally like to read about daily life. For example, my girlfriend used to be a villain. The early and middle stages of the book were very good. Although the characters were different, it would have been interesting if they were interesting. However, as a result, it took a long time to fight a monster from the front and then from the back. There were very few daily routines. The fun was gone and it wasn't any better. I hope the author understands who the audience for this book is.

I'm still reading, but I haven't finished it yet. This book is very well written. The male protagonist is cultivating immortality in Japan. I hope that in the end, there won't be any weird immortal cultivating family like some novels, and then this or that. I think it's good for the male protagonist to cultivate immortality alone. Otherwise, in the end, it will evolve into a tribulation and escape from this world, and the city will become a fantasy... Finally, come on, author! 🙂

After reading the first 20 chapters, I feel like there is something wrong with the character setting! ! In the two-dimensional category, most of the protagonist settings I see are funny, complaining, and making jokes, which are not novel at all. However, some authors only get good grades if their writing is good, but most of them are very embarrassing, not to mention making jokes. Then I read the author's book today. At first, the protagonist's setting made me feel like Skylark in Tutoring, or like the student council president in other anime. But when I saw the ghost fighting, it felt much different. The protagonist is so weak! ! ! From my personal point of view, the first highlight of this book is that the protagonist is chased by a girl because he has become different through practice. His daily routine is kendo. After all, kendo is quite popular in Japan. Occasionally, there are some ghost hunting interspersed with it, eh! Ghost hunting is not about the protagonist catching ghosts by himself and being beaten by them. But until now, the supernatural novels that I write in a two-dimensional way are still the same as those written several years ago. Obviously a good beginning, the character settings in the first few chapters are very strong, but when it comes to fighting ghosts, they are all gone.

I thought it was a good book, but unfortunately it ended badly. It's really a pity that we rarely see novels with well-characterized heroines and supporting characters.

There are too many tricks. The author may want to write a particularly awesome protagonist, so he adds a lot of settings, and then cuts them randomly for the sake of balance. For example, the highest level of swordsmanship, Kenshin Tongmei, is cut off and only one name is left, which is useless...

Just break it... I won't give you a monthly ticket anyway 😰

Finished? Raised to death again? I remember it was quite funny before. .

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

Brother, you are like this, aren't you afraid that readers will unsubscribe?

Very well written, please keep it up! Although the writing style is a flaw, it is very good in terms of plot handling and character selection! But I want to see a plot with more conflict, in short, a reversal! In terms of character creation, the characters are somewhat labeled. For example, the protagonist himself emphasizes "strong" and "follow your heart" at the same time. I mean the unspoken rule mentioned above is too violent.

Counting down, everyone who has fought with the protagonist before has understood the meaning of the sword. Why do the few who have appeared recently look so powerful? Especially when a few of the referees frightened the audience before they even understood the sword intent. I guessed that the two sword intents before were fake! Too casual

Japan's hierarchy is very strict. Generally, when you meet a senior in school, you have to call him "senpai" (unless you don't respect the other person or have a good relationship with him and he doesn't care) (otherwise others will think you are very rude), and the same is true in the company. But I'm sorry, here I see the lower grades talking casually to the seniors. I want to say, is this serious? I won't talk about anything else. You can find this information (you can find out by watching Japanese dramas or anime). I don't know all the basic information. To be honest, I didn't understand it... I won't say more.

I have already given you my first monthly pass this month, and I will give it to you again if you have more in the future. Please add more for the first time.

Since I have the essence, I will vote 13 every day.

I'm convinced! Why is it so difficult to find a novel about Japan's rebirth with a normal protagonist? Nowadays, it's standard to have a man with a strong character and an ascetic character? Everything else is pretty normal! Once he talks to a girl, he immediately puts on a dead look, as if the girl owes him millions! And then there are a lot of girls moving forward to add more? I don't need you to have a harem! Just 1 heroine! I just want the protagonist to be normal!

To be honest, I just started watching the show when I saw that the character of the protagonist suited my taste, but I felt that the character of the character changed a bit after the supernatural started. At the beginning, the character described for the protagonist can be said to be rational, but still affectionate (from the perspective of bad education, and described later), and he can do things such as helping others by lending a hand. I can't say that he is a good young man, but he is not ruthless, and he still has a sense of justice. Later, the supernatural phenomena began, and the protagonist's personality began to change slightly. The purpose of doing things has become slightly stronger, which is not a big problem. After all, killing evil ghosts → obtaining spiritual energy, and obtaining the spiritual energy of good ghosts whose consciousness is about to disappear. The way of dealing with it is also in line with the previous personality. But later on in Yingjiu, things started to change a lot. First of all, this is a conscious and clear good ghost, and he has the idea of ​​​​keeping himself in this world, but the protagonist said very ruthlessly: You will eventually become an evil ghost, so he refused directly. Secondly, the author has to write many times about how much spiritual energy Kimura thought that completing Yingjiu's obsession would provide him. (Some people think that because of the quadruplets, if Yingjiu is left behind, or something else, the protagonist becomes a licking dog. But what does this have to do with the quadruplets? Even if it is a man he does not know, his father turning into a good ghost should not be this way.) It starts to feel like ghosts are treated as experience babies, and even everything cannot be separated from the description of the desire for spiritual energy. (For example, you can kill an animal at will, but when the animal can think and speak, can you still kill it without any burden?) However, the protagonist can, for the sake of aura, without any burden. It will give people the feeling that their character has become ruthless and they have a stronger sense of utilitarianism in doing things. Finally, the last few pictures explain the protagonist's experience and show that he also has feelings and understands family ties. I want to say that family affection is not love. After all, if you don't love your relatives, you can't call it family affection. So the protagonist is actually a person with flesh and blood and emotions, but he still seems emotionless in his actions. Some people may say that the latest one has let Yunzi go, and are you still planning to let her become a witch? However, I want to ask, what would the protagonist do if there was no such request from the earth spirit? From the previous point of view, I can only think that he will kill Yunzi's father, and eventually Yunzi will turn into the protagonist's aura, an experience baby on the road to practice. The last thing is the point I am not here to find fault, nor am I here to say that the writing is poor, nor am I asking the author to change the text. I just want to say, couldn't you write less about the protagonist's inner activities of longing for spiritual energy? Every time I see a ghost, I have to say, "What quality and amount of spiritual energy will it bring to me?" Even if you don't want to describe this as a ruthless character, I think the protagonist is ruthless after reading it. Finally, this is my hope. I hope to change the way we deal with good ghosts who have normal sanity (Note: This does not refer to Yingjiu specifically, but all good ghosts who have reason, lest anyone say I am a licker). Of course, this is just my hope. It is up to you to decide whether to change it or not. However, to be honest, based on the current plot, everyone knows that Yingjiu's ending will not be unexpected. I hope it can exceed everyone's expectations and give people a feeling of being unexpected and reasonable. Judging from this stage, if the ending does not change, I am very curious, how many people will abandon the book by then? After all, if the analogy continues, the ending of the next "Ying Jiu" is also fixed. The character of this protagonist is actually different from before. The protagonist cares about family affection, but when it comes to dealing with good ghosts, I don't feel that he has any feeling for family affection at all. I can only say that he is ruthless.                                                                                                                                                                                   <  Even if you say it, I won't pay attention.

9 Votes can all be perfect! So what do I say about 10 votes?

Well, it sucks. The author will inevitably see price increases when buying groceries, his computer will crash when playing games, he will forget his ID card when going out, and he will be short of cards when playing straight cards. I can't make it up, so I'm offended! Farewell!

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Don't worry, Zongqi. There are a lot of people in the group waiting and watching. I estimate that a lot of people will come after Chapter 100. You should treat it as a new book in the front. Don't do it just because of poor grades. There will be more people in the back. Brother, please finish this book once.

13 Votes support, please give me some highlights.

What the hell, a person without cultivation qualifications can create his own cultivation method. I gave up

The more I write, the worse it gets. The author is lost.