Rant Notes 吐槽记录

1. 1 孤 [Naruto] Being an Orphan Samurai, Looking Good Is Enough [火影]孤儿武士帅就够了 Magic Stone Sprite魔石精Danmei (BL)422k WordsCompleted [An early work that's been neglected for a long time. It's very obscure, so this was purely self-indulgent. When I was writing it, I wasn't aware of the need to include content warnings. The story spans quite a long period, and I currently don't have the time or energy to add the missing warnings, so please read with caution. If anything makes you uncomfortable, please stop reading immediately. I beg you, please don't call me out or attack me.] Warrior of Light: Mo Mu (Level 70 Samurai) Height: 1.7kFavorites4.7kClicks/ch509Gifts

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   This book probably shouldn't be criticized; I think it's actually quite well-written. However, the characters' attitudes towards the protagonist in the early stages are really frustrating, especially when the protagonist isn't yet mentally sound.

2. 2 拿21+ I Got the Wrong Script as a Cool and Detached Immortal Lord 拿错清冷仙君剧本的我 Where to Go何所往Danmei (BL)157k WordsCompleted 56.9kFavorites83.5kClicks/ch14kGifts

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   There is absolutely no logic to it.

3. 3 绑 Bound to a Choice Simulator, I Was Forced to Become a Phantom Thief 绑定选项模拟器后被迫成为怪盗 Copper-Shelled Notebook铜皮笔记本No CP525k WordsCompleted [Comments are now open. Bookmark the story to leave a comment. Updates every night at 9. I also have other completed stories of this type: “The Research Nut Survives in a Manga by Relying on Tragic Beauty and Strength,” “The Scheming, Hated General Strives to Become the Game’s Most Popular Character,” and “A Background Character in a New Anime Keeps Dying to Save the Day.” Feel free to check them out. Thanks for all your support!] [My next male-lead, no-romance story is temporarily retitled “Th 6kFavorites6kClicks/ch10.4kGifts

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   It contains a large number of coined terms from other novels and games, and the later plot twists and character development became quite arbitrary.

4. 4 带 [Wuxia Crossover] I Take a Game System into the Martial Arts World [综武侠]带着游戏系统穿武侠 River Wind a Thousand Miles Away千里江风Romance1.3M WordsCompleted [Complete. Please read the reader's guide before starting.] [The next book is now underway: [Three Kingdoms] May a Strategist Not Ascend the Throne? (A female lead who conquers the realm and becomes emperor). Synopsis at the very end.] Synopsis: What's it like to transmigrate with a wuxia game System? Qi Xun: My martial arts manuals are sealed, and all my stats dropped to zero overnight. Luckily, I can still grind. So we conducted an anonymous interview with the friends and family of the person 59.3kFavorites128.3kClicks/ch165.9kGifts

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   The reason for the criticism is quite unusual; it's like leveling up in a game, with seemingly no emotional interaction with others. So I dropped it halfway through. This kind of dynamic is quite rare in martial arts, especially in martial arts romance. The female lead's rejection of people is also well-written, so I have no complaints.

5. 5 从 Starting Out as Companions [GB] 从同伴开始做起[gb] Hidden Pearl藏珠Romance150k WordsCompleted . Here's the blurb for this story~ . Wen Hao has a friend. The friend told her that when he was down on his luck, another friend had helped him. That friend was introverted and gloomy, and couldn't see. . He had to go on a long trip and worried that, after he left, no one would look after or cheer up his friend, who might get depressed alone. So he entrusted him to her. . She inherited her friend's f 20.9kFavorites33kClicks/ch9.6kGifts

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   This book shouldn't really be being criticized, but since I haven't finished reading the one next door, it's hard to recommend it. The pacing is too slow, the action is drawn out, there's too much dialogue with random characters, and the characters' personalities are too one-dimensional and illogical, plus it's not interesting. Perhaps this is the key to the development of their relationship and the readers' connection to the radio waves—a part that can be sacrificed, but...

6. 6 身 After Becoming Seriously Ill, I Got Five Bodies 身患重症后我有了五具身体 Li Zhu骊逐Romance566k WordsCompleted [A secret identity novel, one soul in multiple bodies. The official version is on Jinjiang Literature City. The main story has been revised many times; pirated versions are not the final edition.] Qin Chi is the fake daughter in a true-and-fake heiress story. After the Qin family recognizes their real daughter, she finds herself in an extremely awkward position. Worse still, caught in the whirlpool of a wealthy family, she is gravely ill and on the brink of death. The Qin family can't even come 21.1kFavorites53.8kClicks/ch13.8kGifts

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   It's too bland, there's practically no conflict, and every exciting moment feels like a half-hearted attempt to satisfy a thirst. It's less than 600,000 words, and it made me want to vomit blood.

7. 7 B21+ Western Crossover: The BE-Obsessed Producer’s Everyday Life [综英美]BE狂魔制片日常 Ran Ran Ran然燃繎Romance758k WordsCompleted 38.4kFavorites81.6kClicks/ch64.9kGifts

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   The movie review section was well-written, but it's fucking tedious! I can't stand it! It's constantly throwing in tens of thousands of words of crucial information, all completely irrelevant to daily life, and this is supposed to be a daily update! That section is so tedious and awful, you know? It's the kind of pure, unadulterated dryness.

8. 8 旅 [Genshin Impact] The Traveler Is the Strongest Temp Worker in Anime Crossovers! [综原神]旅行者在综漫也是最强打工人！ Weary but Not Dead困而不死No CP441k WordsCompleted While fighting in the Abyss, Aether accidentally fell into a rift in space and time. When he awoke, he was in an unfamiliar world, filled with all kinds of strange energies: cursed energy, supernatural abilities, and more. The only thing missing was elemental energy. But the System told Aether that he could use wishes to summon his companions from Teyvat and have them join his party. Oh, wishes. Aether knew all about those, so he expertly opened the wish screen, only to find “Where did all the P 22.6kFavorites41.8kClicks/ch8.3kGifts

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   The characteristics of the working class weren't really shown in this book, while the overwhelming power in Genshin Impact was quite obvious.

9. 9 沙 Can These Goofy Players Save Humanity? 沙雕玩家能拯救人类吗 Heavenly Thunder, No Delusion天雷无妄No CP498k WordsCompleted One-line summary: The Three Great Calamities, humanity’s end, goofy players, transmigrating to save the world! Fang Fan transmigrates two thousand years into the future. The Earth has exploded. Humanity is doomed. With no other choice, Fang Fan summons the goofy players from two thousand years ago to save their unworthy descendants. After all, goofy players are also known as the Fourth Calamity. Fang Fan is serious: Humanity is going to disappear. This is real. The goofy players: “So what 8.8kFavorites31.3kClicks/ch5.1kGifts

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   Ughhhhh, it had such a terrible ending! I'm so angry! It just abruptly ended like that, what a stupid, terrible ending! They forced a romance into it and forced it to a conclusion. The beginning was so well-developed, and then this just happened! What the hell is the difference between this and fighting in the same world?

10. 10 不 Don't Be a Bad Influence [Showbiz] 不要学坏[娱乐圈] Yi Cong Yin一丛音Danmei (BL)530k WordsCompleted Lu Shiqing is the entertainment industry’s undisputed heartthrob. His fans praise him as a cold, world-weary beauty, while his haters accuse him of pulling faces and acting like a diva. After the Chinese-language film awards, #LuShiqingActsLikeADiva# and #LuShiqingIgnoresBestActorRong# suddenly trend. Gossip accounts spread rumors that the two don’t get along in private. A few months later, Rong Xu runs into Lu Shiqing on a live-streamed variety show. Fans of both stars get their keyboards r 139.4kFavorites169kClicks/ch138.8kGifts

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    Although I subscribed to the entire book, I inexplicably fell in love with the inexplicably formulaic plot, and the description of one of the parents is severely lacking. Thumbs down.

11. 11 卧 After the Undercover System Went Haywire, I Switched to Grinding Suspicion Points 卧底系统抽风后我改刷怀疑值 Ye Xilan夜夕岚No CP2.1M WordsCompleted [Coming soon: danmei novel My Boyfriend Has a Mental Illness, but He's Actually an Evil God] After Bo Ye Zhaiji died, he got a System. An entity calling itself the Undercover System offered him a chance to come back to life. How long he could live depended on how much trust he could earn from key figures in the new world. What kind of world? A death-obsessed little detective versus a distillery? Got it! It's all just a bunch of tropes! As long as he nailed his character, earning the trust of bo 167.1kFavorites341.3kClicks/ch1.4MGifts

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    A decline in quality? Or perhaps it's become bland and the unequal friendship has been ruined by a mindless cat.

12. 12 眷 Every Follower Wants to Rebel 眷属个个想造反 Drunk on the West Wind西风醉Romance624k WordsCompleted Su Mi played a game called Conquest of the Demon King, raising forces and conquering territory as the Demon King. After reloading her save a hundred times and earning the achievements “Conquer the Divine Kingdom” and “Blasphemy,” she transmigrated into a parallel world. The parallel universe had three superpowers: the Human Alliance, ruled by humans; the Radiant Divine Kingdom, which worshipped the God of Light; and the Final Empire, which revered the Demon King. She had just been forcibly se 113.8kFavorites205.1kClicks/ch106.7kGifts

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    Frustration

13. 13 我 Making a Fortune as a Screenwriter 我靠编剧发家致富 Far Up the Tianshan Mountains远上天山No CP622k WordsCompleted My new novel, I Write Novels Purely to Make Money, is currently being serialized. Thanks for your support! Lin Ji wakes up to find that he has transmigrated into the body of a third-rate screenwriter. In this world, screenwriters call the shots on television productions. The previous owner of this body had just achieved an extraordinary record: the lowest ratings in the history of the TV station. The show had flopped spectacularly, making its name known throughout the entire entertainment indust 51.7kFavorites106.8kClicks/ch127.3kGifts

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    This is a scam, I'm so sad to see my money go to waste. +1

14. 14 硝 Shoko Wants to Retire 硝子想要退休 Assorted Snowballs什锦雪球No CP1.3M WordsCompleted Going premium on October 31, 2023! 10,000 words dropping that day! 6,000 words updated daily! Updates after noon every day! (Posted as soon as it's written) After finishing overtime, Shoko only realized that day was her twenty-fifth birthday. With only a little time left in the day, she made a wish. I want to retire as soon as possible. Then the next day, she became an elementary-school nurse raising two children on her own. And she no longer had Reverse Cursed Technique. Shoko was very ada 33.3kFavorites60.2kClicks/ch36.9kGifts

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    The numbers just popped up uneventfully, and I don't know how they got to 1,193,400. It was so boring.

15. 15 制 I Became a Creator God After Making a Game 制作游戏后成为创世神 Red Fluorescence红荧No CP811k WordsCompleted [This is my first time writing a Fourth Disaster story, and I’m not quite sure I’ve got the hang of it, so I don’t really recommend reading it] Q: What’s it like to create a world from scratch? A: Thanks for asking. I found a bunch of free labor. They cleared the maps, made up the legends, and built the cities, too. Then they praised the “game” for its amazing immersion and realistic NPC interactions, calling it the gold standard of full-dive gaming. It feels ridiculously good. * Not long aft 23.7kFavorites42.4kClicks/ch9.1kGifts

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    Why would a player who overemphasizes the protagonist's beauty, who's unparalleled, want to have no romantic pairing? Another player praising the protagonist, yet the character development is poor, illogical, and idiotic.

16. 16 我 I Built an Entertainment Company with My Secret Identity 我靠马甲开娱乐公司 Yuzu Is So Delicious柚子好好吃Multi-Orientation283k WordsCompleted [Manually changed to remove the multiverse element. The main plot is the focus, with a little self-romance. Thank you to everyone who supports the official release. New readers, please check the content warnings in the author’s note for Chapter One.] 1. Ming Yudu, architect of the full-immersion game “Battle of the Gods.” He made the holy son born of light stain his hands with blood, made the knight sworn to punish evil and uphold justice pledge himself to a demon, made the banshee who had lived 22.8kFavorites48.7kClicks/ch14.5kGifts

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    Besides the common issue of unworthy characters in interstellar settings, the protagonist also appears outwardly strong but inwardly weak, lacking both prestige and actual ability, barely making any progress.

17. 17 我 I Have the Tragic Yet Beautiful Protagonist Script 我手握美强惨剧本 Li Zhu骊逐No CP702k WordsCompleted Related secret-identity novels in my column: My Hands Hold the Tragic Beauty-and-Tragedy Script and After I Became Seriously Ill, I Got Five Bodies. Feel free to click and read~ Zhou Jiao may be the protagonist with the most scripts in hand in the entire world. She has the scripts of a wealthy family's adopted son, a domineering CEO, an ambitious heroine striving to succeed, and a universally adored heartthrob... She was even forced to take on a script where she plays both sides of a relations 22.3kFavorites71.3kClicks/ch21.4kGifts

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    My heart aches from all this money! I didn't realize how much I had until I counted it.

18. 18 马 The Secret Identity System and the Conquest System Are Fighting 马甲系统和攻略系统打起来了 Ye Yaoyi夜妖仪No CP275k WordsCompleted Entering the paid section on September 19, 2023, with ten thousand words posted that day. Thank you all for your support. On a peaceful afternoon, Tian Yuanxici was bound to two Systems at once. The Secret Identity System demanded that he walk in both light and darkness, becoming an immortal legend to both sides of the law. The Romance System demanded that he win over every outstanding man in this world and earn their affection. But Tian Yuanxici refused. "Setting my sexual orientation aside, 3.9kFavorites6.1kClicks/ch1.6kGifts

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    No good stories that glorify the protagonist are interesting.

19. 19 我 My Mimic Form Is Everyone from the Classic of Mountains and Seas [Interstellar] 我的拟态是山海经全员[星际] Jin Yi矜以Romance930k WordsCompleted [Main Story Complete. Please add my upcoming novel, The Real Heiress Is a Bureaucrat of the Underworld [Supernatural], to your collection~] Shi Jianxia transmigrated to the interstellar era and awakened a Mimic. The bad news: her Mimic was only C-rank, and it was a book. The good news: the book was titled The Classic of Mountains and Seas, and it could summon second-rank Mimics. On the day her Mimic awakened, Shi Jianxia spent ages chanting a spell at The Classic of Mountains and Seas. A tiny, 85.6kFavorites139.8kClicks/ch98.1kGifts

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    The setup for the match (the exciting part) was changed (I'm not happy about it). The writer almost disappeared after the protagonist was recognized as the granddaughter of a powerful figure. The change in combat power was too drastic. The elimination of the villainous organization was glossed over, and an even bigger villain was introduced without any foreshadowing.

20. 20 白 The White Moonlight's Will to Survive Is Too Strong 白月光求生欲太强 Mao Kou猫蔻Romance1.0M WordsCompleted Lin Chacha died from overwork in her previous life, then transmigrated into the cultivation world as the daughter of an immortal cultivator. Lin Chacha: Why work hard? I'll just lie around like a couch potato. Just as Lin Chacha was happily imagining a life of comfort and good food, she sudd 79.7kFavorites137.1kClicks/ch90.7kGifts

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    The protagonist, who is popular with everyone, seems to have lost his intelligence.

21. 21 病 Sickly Male Insect Breaks Steel Armor with Bare Hands 病弱雄虫徒手碎钢甲 Black Cat Beneath the Snow积雪下的黑猫Danmei (BL)562k WordsCompleted What is a male insect? After undergoing a tribulation, Jian cultivator Li Fuqing closed his eyes and opened them to find he had become a demon… no, a male insect. Now he sat upright at a desk, poring over a little notebook and researching what a male insect was. According to his research, male insects were frail and arrogant, and always had female insects by their side. That was all the newly discovered male insect, Hiser Atikas, had learned so far. Carrying his notebook everywhere, he followe 47.3kFavorites85.3kClicks/ch45.6kGifts

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    I wanted to see a story where brute force overcomes skill, but this one... Was bland and unremarkable. The main character was somewhat pitiful, and the overall effect was incredibly dragged out.

22. 22 五 Gojo-kun Is the Strongest Batkid Too [Western Crossover] 五条君当蝙蝠崽也是最强[综英美] A Yang Wants to Eat Meat阿羊想吃肉No CP532k WordsCompleted A note for readers before you begin Content warning: Geto Suguru appears, and he and Gojo are close friends. Please don't read if that bothers you. The author wants Gojo to gain everything: his close friends, friends, family, students, and teachers; everything from past and present lives, everything he missed or lacked, and everything he was meant to have. Choose carefully, observe carefully, and purchase carefully. Extreme comments will be deleted. Slowly revising the story and fixing typos 27.9kFavorites72.5kClicks/ch15.2kGifts

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    I didn't see Xia Youjie, which was boring, and I didn't see any other problems. Of course, it's also possible that I forgot.

23. 23 攻 [Western Crossover] Romance Route? But It’s Gotham [综英美]攻略向？但是哥谭 Li Jiusheng璃九笙Danmei (BL)529k WordsCompleted I've opened a new upcoming novel: [Western Crossover] A Butler's Self-Cultivation. Please see the pinned comment for the blurb. Thanks! Blurb: A corporate drone who'd been unemployed for eight months wished before bed that she'd wake up to a new job, with health insurance, a retirement plan, and an immediate start date. She opened her eyes to find she'd landed in a video game world, working multiple jobs. She h 12.5kFavorites19.5kClicks/ch10.7kGifts

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    Unreasonable, out-of-character, awkward, etc., Seems like it's still edible? So awkward yet addictive? No, definitely out of character. The romance seems to involve multiple characters. I don't want to read it anymore. Thinking about it, the out-of-character is outrageous. Of course, my understanding of the characters isn't very good to begin with, I just have this impression.

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