Dropped Novel Reviews and Rants 弃文点评/吐槽

1 我 I Grow Old Gracefully in the World of Classics 我在名著世界优雅老去 Forest's Love森森的爱Romance2.4M WordsCompleted 89.5kFavorites198.7kClicks/ch159.5kGifts

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Subscribe 9% For this kind of comprehensive masterpiece, firstly, look at how the author writes, and secondly, whether the protagonist can attract people to read. 1. Relatively ordinary. 2. Not interested at all. 3 Points.

2 被 A World Controlled by Dice [Western Fantasy] 被骰子控制的世界[西幻] Gentlemen, Get Chubby诸君肥肥Danmei (BL)3.0M WordsCompleted 89.5kFavorites98.1kClicks/ch284.4kGifts

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Subscribe 31% The emotional line is a bit abrupt When I saw the protagonist falling in love and then giving up, I felt like I could predict the rest of the plot. But when I looked it up today, I saw that I had only booked 31%, which made me a little curious about what could be written so long. Maybe I'll pick it up and take a look. I'll give it 4 points.

3 副 My Other Personalities Force Me to Fall in Love with Myself [Infinite] 副人格们逼我水仙[无限] He An鹤安Danmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 138.9kFavorites164.6kClicks/ch107.1kGifts

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Subscribe 11% It made me realize that even though I have some of the attributes of a nanny, I can't eat everything. I still need to reach xp.

4 失 Out-of-Control Evolution 失控进化 Seven Streams七流Danmei (BL)826k WordsCompleted 142.3kFavorites221.6kClicks/ch215.3kGifts

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Subscribe 87% of the viewing experience is that the world will be destroyed, there is no need to save it Comparing Tool Man, he was quite cute when he was a little black man. But he actually wants to turn into a human and fall in love with the protagonist. It feels like uh uh Open high and go low, three points

5 强 How the Strong Are Made 强者是怎样炼成的 Old Liver Mom老肝妈Romance1.4M WordsCompleted 160.2kFavorites215kClicks/ch2.2MGifts

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Subscribe to 46% upgrade stream, the setting is very interesting The plot is that every time the protagonist goes to a world, he merges and upgrades with monster bosses and the like. Like the more cliche superhero movies, it's not bad to watch them for two hours a year, but if you only watch them as long novels, you'll be tired.

6 我 I Can Keep You Until the Fifth Watch [Infinite] 我能留你到五更[无限] Have a Bite, A Ci吃口阿辞Danmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 203.1kFavorites258.9kClicks/ch258.8kGifts

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Subscribe 65% Although it is fun for the protagonist to crush the dungeon as the boss, it would be boring to write like this all the time. Later on, it becomes the protagonist and the attacker to crush the dungeon together... It made me realize that unlimited streaming still requires some serious breakthroughs.

7 论 When It Comes to Drawing Cards, I've Never Lost 论抽卡，我从来没输过 Young Master Muhan暮寒公子Romance1.4M WordsCompleted 205.9kFavorites377.8kClicks/ch870.3kGifts

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Subscribe 61% A novel with cards as a selling point made me not have the slightest interest in the cards. After reading it, I just felt like water flowing by. Now that I think about it, apart from the fact that the cards are very boring, I don't even have anything to complain about.

8 崩 After My Character Broke, I Became an Incubus 崩人设后我变成了魅魔 Su Xingchuan宿星川Danmei (BL)837k WordsCompleted 214kFavorites363.2kClicks/ch203.5kGifts

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Subscribe 54% The setting is interesting, but as I watched it I realized that the parts I wanted to see couldn't be seen in Jinjiang So I lost interest, 3 stars

9 和 After the Hype with Myself Narcissus 和自己水仙炒作后 Gardenia栀荷No CP410k WordsCompleted 25.9kFavorites39.5kClicks/ch31.6kGifts

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Subscribe 31% The setting is quite ingenious but the writing is so boring. You can't get the point of the CP written by the author... You can say that many real-life CPs are actually just based on appearance, but you are writing a novel. If you don't tell the readers, at least the writing is interesting. The current effect is like the protagonist playing house with his own vest

10 用 Getting to Know the Neighbors at 221B Baker Street Through Comics 用漫画看贝克街221B好邻居 White Sand Pond白沙塘No CP2.1M WordsCompleted 97.7kFavorites177kClicks/ch653.6kGifts

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Subscribe 65% For personal reasons, I simply don't like the protagonist's character. I really don't like weak protagonists, and I always feel inexplicably unhappy with the plot of the protagonist getting along with the people around him... Another point is the author's comprehensive "Moriarty". I just watched it and felt that the professor's motive for committing the crime [Joker] was very inconsistent with the IQ set for him... So when the professor's plot gradually increased, I couldn't bear the author's portrayal of the professor and his plot.

11 穿 Transmigrated into a Universally Hated Student at an Elite Academy 穿成贵族学院的万人嫌 It's Also Dusk也是黄昏Danmei (BL)461k WordsCompleted 95.5kFavorites118.8kClicks/ch89.6kGifts

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Subscribe 26% I feel that F4 is similar to Tianmuwen. After watching the beginning, it's basically not interesting at all. Subsequent comparisons test the author's ability, and most of the authors I see generally show a plummeting level.

12 宇 The End of the Universe Is Selling Stuff 宇宙的尽头是带货 Wu Shi雾十Danmei (BL)335k WordsCompleted 30.2kFavorites43.5kClicks/ch63.8kGifts

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Subscribe 32% The disadvantage is that the author can often come up with some very interesting jokes and then write them to become more and more boring... The advantage is that the author can indeed come up with some interesting jokes. Sooner or later he will make progress as he writes them. I have a blessing attitude.

13 妄 Zhu Nao, the Madman 妄人朱瑙 Zhong Xiaosheng钟晓生Danmei (BL)1.4M WordsCompleted 53.8kFavorites106.6kClicks/ch182.2kGifts

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Subscribe 61% The plot is okay, but because the protagonist is not very attractive to me, I often get distracted while watching this plot. After watching so many plots, I still feel unfamiliar with the protagonist. I can't even describe his character, and his emotional line is rather hard. Overall, I would rate it at 4 points. It's the type of thing you might pick up and read when you're in a literary shortage.

14 主 Anchor's Thousand Layers of Routines [Unlimited] 主播的千层套路［无限］ Fengxuan风悬Danmei (BL)421k WordsCompleted 21.6kFavorites49.5kClicks/ch18.5kGifts

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Card V fried tail The setting is very interesting, but somehow it sucks. And the author is a mess.

15 猎 Thousand Layers of Prey Tactics [Unlimited] 猎物的千层套路[无限] Fengxuan风悬Danmei (BL)160k WordsCompleted 3.3kFavorites4.4kClicks/ch1.3kGifts

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The setting is interesting, but I got stuck after writing the opening chapter. The author's cheating is terrible

16 穿 After Entering a Cyberpunk Game, I Killed the Boss and Claimed the Throne 穿进赛博游戏后干掉BOSS成功上位 An Bai桉柏Romance1.5M WordsCompleted 833.5kFavorites1.1MClicks/ch3.4MGifts

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After reading more than 300 chapters, the plot is good, but I know the rest of the plot without guessing, and the protagonist is not very attractive to me. I have no desire to continue reading.

17 夺 Fighting for the Throne, With Qin Shi Huang and Emperor Wu as Rivals 夺嫡，但对手是秦皇汉武 Bear Bear Wonton熊熊云吞Danmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 83.6kFavorites97kClicks/ch413.2kGifts

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After reading more than 100 chapters, I feel that I don't have to guess the subsequent plot after writing this. The protagonist is not very attractive to me, and I have no desire to continue reading. The reason why the protagonist can still claim the throne among a bunch of powerful people is quite unexpected and reasonable.

18 运 Sports Anime Popular Character Simulator 运动番人气角色模拟器 Yami Yami芽米芽米No CP887k WordsCompleted 37.5kFavorites47.3kClicks/ch104.5kGifts

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After reading Chapter 85, the protagonist's character remains unchanged, and his character seems very stiff. It belongs to the type that if the author said so, then so be it. Although the setting is about a genius boy, the career line is not very satisfying... I feel that the author wanted to write about the love and hatred with his former teammates, but the writing is not very attractive. I give it three points.

19 被 The Novelist Who Was Forced into Fame 被迫成名的小说家 Green Radish Skirt青青绿萝裙Romance1.5M WordsCompleted 141kFavorites288.1kClicks/ch423kGifts

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After reading more than 290 chapters, I was dissuaded by the emotional line. The man got close to the protagonist inexplicably. He had no idea why. Anyway, he just made all kinds of intimate actions that had no sense of distance. I thought I missed something, but it happened so suddenly, and the protagonist accepted it naturally, which made me full of questions. Obviously in the plot, the two people met and became friends during the case, but there is no description of the protagonist having a crush on him at all. I was completely separated from the protagonist in this plot. Maybe the author wanted to write about a passionate puppy, but I just felt that this inexplicable man was so annoying... I didn't want to read it after I knew that this man would be the hero. 3 Points

20 我 I’m Still Better Suited to the Olympics: An If Storyline 我还是更适合参加奥运if线 Jun Xing菌行Danmei (BL)390k WordsCompleted 69.7kFavorites157.2kClicks/ch247.9kGifts

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I've read about 60 chapters, and I'm almost halfway through this article. The author said that there are no if lines with the same plot, but the emotional line of the protagonist remains unchanged, the plot arrangement of the supporting characters and the relationship with the protagonist remain unchanged, and the career line is not described in detail. The only difference is that the protagonist's mother was in a car accident and became a vegetative state. But after dozens of chapters, she suddenly received some kind of treatment. There was not even any description of rehabilitation treatment. I thought this was a key plot for the protagonist's growth, but it ended up being passed over so lightly. I was baffled when I saw it. Since there are so many plots that remain unchanged, even if I am not repeating the text, I am just writing the key points of the text in a different way. I feel like there is no need to write this if line at all? I can't even understand the author's purpose in writing this article. I feel like it's not as good as writing about the idol line of the protagonist in the previous life.

21 重 Back to Ninth Grade 重回初三 Duo Mu Mu Duo多木木多Romance682k WordsCompleted 109.3kFavorites294.1kClicks/ch43.9kGifts

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After reading this, just treat it as a simple complaint. The ending was very painful for me. This was my evaluation after watching it. After a few years, I organized my thoughts again After watching the protagonist work so hard and get into a good school, I am still looking forward to his bright future. The author turns to the so-called "realistic direction" and lets the protagonist choose to get married and have children. It makes me wonder. Is this why you work so hard? ? ? If this is the author's intention, it is very successful. The level of anger was like when I watched Kyobuki San. The protagonist failed to play Soli in the end, and then the scene changed and the protagonist became the new teacher. Everything settled. It makes me look like a clown [clown] when I had expectations before 5 points for the learning line, 2 points for extra points

22 我 I’m Human, Aren’t You? 我是人啊，你不是？ Lady Lotus Crane莲鹤夫人Danmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 171.3kFavorites181kClicks/ch737.7kGifts

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I read more than 160 chapters, but this article is a unit drama, so I jumped on it and only read the part that interested me. The author can often write some interesting combinations that make me look forward to the development of the story, but just watching it makes me feel like the development of each pair is so cookie-cutter. It becomes boring once you get familiar with the author's routines, so I'll give it three stars.

23 奸 My Treacherous Minister Account Is Ruined, So I’m Starting Over [Reborn] 奸臣号废了，我重开[重生] Riding a Whale South骑鲸南去Danmei (BL)1.5M WordsOngoing 112.5kFavorites119.7kClicks/ch331.2kGifts

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Saw around 50 When I was attracted by the early plot and expected how the protagonist would rely on his new identity to navigate the officialdom, the protagonist's old lovers suddenly began to appear one by one and began to write about their past. I regretfully realized that the part of the plot I wanted to watch was just the beginning and might not even be called a dumpling [Joker] The emotional entanglement between the protagonist and his old lover is the main line that the author wants to write. In fact, there are two parallel lines between us and they met by chance. Although I'm not interested in this part of the plot, it's not really a point deduction. So give it four stars

24 天 The Boy Band and the Crown 天团与皇冠 Green Rhythm青律Danmei (BL)1.0M WordsCompleted 98.7kFavorites206.4kClicks/ch243.4kGifts

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See Chapter Thirty or Forty The emotional line was abandoned when I discovered that the protagonist Gong and the protagonist not only have a slight age difference, but also have a superior and subordinate relationship of teacher and student, and the plot currently shown is the protagonist Gong's control over the protagonist (of course it does not exceed the scope of teacher and student) The protagonist currently does not have a strong character to neutralize this plot. It made me uncontrollably think of many incidents. Even though the review of this article was good and I knew that there would be no such incidents in the novel, I still chose to give up.

25 朕 I Insist on Dying [Book Transmigration] 朕偏要死[穿书] Forget As Soon As I Pick Up the Pen提笔就忘Danmei (BL)341k WordsCompleted 55.1kFavorites99.8kClicks/ch19.3kGifts

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See Chapter 51 The author wrote a character design for the protagonist that I really like. He is beautiful, strong, miserable, and a little sick. But the specific plot cannot support such a character design. At the same time, it makes the protagonist look very unsmart and can only give it 3 points.

26 [ [The Lord of the Rings] The First Elf Baby in Middle-earth, Frieren [魔戒]中洲第一精灵宝宝芙莉莲 Frog-Mouthed Night Hawk蛙口夜鹰Romance894k WordsCompleted 4.6kFavorites5.5kClicks/ch5.8kGifts

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See Chapter 45 I quite like the story about the protagonist traveling into this world, it feels like an adventure story. It was still because the love line was abandoned, and Simmel was mentioned so frequently that it completely lost the light regret and melancholy of this relationship in the original work. It makes me feel that Fulilian has become a love brain... But the above are just my subjective feelings after comparing this article with the original work. Regarding the adventure plot alone, there are no problems with what I have seen so far. If it weren't for my sense of fragmentation due to character issues, I would probably continue to read it. To sum up, I give it 4 points and it's worth watching.

27 退 After Leaving Showbiz, I Decided to Become a Champion [Esports] 退出娱乐圈后我决定成为冠军[电竞] Surprise Feather, Taming the Wind惊羽挽风Danmei (BL)1.3M WordsCompleted 132.5kFavorites180.4kClicks/ch203.6kGifts

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I've read about 200 chapters I like the career line of this book very much, but as soon as I wrote the emotional line, I entered a very cliché boring plot of an innocent little white flower and a domineering attack... I can't help but let me? ? ? Even if you say that the author's purpose was to write about a person who is professionally strong but emotionally weak, I still feel that the author did not write it well. At least it gave me the impression that the protagonists of the two lines are not the same person at all. The reason why I gave it four stars is that I think the career line is well written. If it were a waste of literature, I would probably pick it up and continue reading.

28 磨 Sharpen Your Axe Before Chopping Wood [Esports] 磨刀不误砍菜弓[电竞] Lin Fengzao林风早Danmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 107.4kFavorites150.8kClicks/ch211.4kGifts

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I read more than 100 chapters and was persuaded to give up by the emotional line. The general plot is that the protagonist was a martial arts master in his previous life. In this life, he is born into a relatively weak body, but he can continue to be a martial arts master through holographic e-sports. The general plot is that the protagonist uses martial arts with his real body to teach a gangster or the like a lesson, and is criticized for not paying enough attention to his body. This super classic plot that warms up the relationship between attacker and opponent made me complain - the protagonist is a martial arts master in his previous life. Even though he is in poor health in this life, besides playing games in holographic e-sports, he doesn't do any basic exercise at all in reality? It seems that the setting of the protagonist as a martial arts master only works when the author needs it. The above has created a sense of separation between the entire novel and the protagonist, as well as an emotional line that makes things worse. Give it 3 points here

29 [ [Female Wearing Men] the Story of the Promotion of a Prince in the Western Han Dynasty [女穿男]西汉皇子升职记 Bamboo Forest Courtyard竹林院No CP1.7M WordsCompleted 39kFavorites100.9kClicks/ch93.5kGifts

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I read more than 290 chapters and abandoned this article twice. The first time was before entering v. The author wrote about a spy who was placed in the palace by the Mo family. At the same time, he spoiled in advance that this spy would have very high achievements in the future. But in terms of the specific plot arrangement, it seems very unwise to write this spy in this article. At the same time, we have to let this unintelligent spy suppress the protagonist and point out the protagonist's mistakes. The author's explanation in the comment area is that "the protagonist was just an ordinary college student in his previous life." But before the spy appeared, the protagonist had several confrontations with the emperor and the queen mother, which had nothing to do with "ordinary college students". So the protagonist in the previous plot was a smart guy, but his IQ was lowered when he met this spy [Joker] After encountering a plot like this, I should have never read it again, but the overall evaluation of this article is pretty good, and it is a literary shortage, so I picked it up and continued reading. Fortunately, the plot after the author joined V has returned to the previous level. At least the plot before the protagonist becomes the prince, I would give it a rating of 80 or above. Then after the protagonist becomes the emperor, what I want to complain about here is not the plot, but the author When the author describes the plot of other regions after the protagonist becomes emperor, he often inserts a large section of historical materials told from the perspective of the protagonist or the author. The ratio of basic to plot is 50/50 But a lot of the historical materials here are actually not that big related to the plot, and there is absolutely no need to insert so much. Many of them are at a level that I feel is enough to just mention what the author has to say. Moreover, these areas will change due to the actions of the protagonist. Why is it necessary to write so much about how this area will develop in the future in history... Even if the author writes it out of necessity, and evaluates it from a completely abstract perspective instead of integrating it into the plot, I cannot agree with this writing technique. Instead of reading the article, I feel like I am already reading the history of the author's comments. Moreover, the author of this article has written more than 600 chapters. If the level is still the same later, I don't think there is any need to read it. Overall, I highly recommend the plot of the protagonist before he becomes the emperor to be rated at 4 to 5 stars. But the plot after the emperor is too high, so I gave it a 3 points