The Prey's Thousand-Layered Schemes [Infinite]

It's too sudden. I feel that many of the hidden threads buried by the author have not been explained clearly before, and the world view has not been fully developed before it is over. Moreover, the emotional line of the protagonist is also very inexplicable, and it is not even clear about the emotional lines of the protagonist and the NPCs in each copy. I really like it forcefully. It feels like a dog's tail. I have waited for so long.

Author, are you digging holes that you can't finish filling? . So it was finished hastily? According to the development of TV series, your plot has only reached the stage where the male and female protagonists first meet, right? ? ? After getting along, falling in love, and having twists and turns, it ended with nothing? !

Ah... The ending was too hasty, Na Feng Xuanxuan. I feel like you originally had a lot of stories you wanted to write, but for some reason you cut the outline again and again and then only picked out the most important parts. Although the emotional line was a bit confusing, I had a lot of fun watching it, not to mention the plot line, from the death banquet in the first book to the forbidden love to the bloody city and finally to the puppet show. , I like every white fish in it (well, forget about Lin Henian, I don't know why I don't like him very much), and each of the 4 copies has a place that makes me cry. I often burst into tears when I read it. In fact, Feng Xuanxuan seems to be suitable for writing Infinite Flow. After all, it is really good-looking. If you have time, will Feng Xuanxuan improve this book again? For example, after writing or something, it would be better if it could be made into a physical form! Originally, unlimited streams like this usually start with a few hundred chapters, but I was really not used to it and reluctant to do it so quickly. If something really happens in Feng Xuanxuan, no matter good or bad, I hope they can develop in a good direction, come on (? ??_??)?!

This emotional line is so abrupt, I didn't see anything at all. I just felt that Hee Kwang regarded him as a close friend, so I fast forwarded.

It's okay, but I feel that the first part is more interesting, but there are too few copies and the text is too short. Finally, the second part and the ending are a bit rushed. The main character's emotional development is very weak, and he becomes a lover inexplicably. In fact, it would be okay if the author turned the big boss in several copies into a split attack. Some novels are set up like this.

Alas, the extra chapter is so boring. The other one is very good at the front but not so good at the back.

This is the first novel I've ever read that ended abruptly. . . . It feels like the plot line has just begun. . I thought they were going to start doing tasks together and develop a relationship. . . . Are you telling me it's over? ? ? This is only 20% completed, right?

I hate myself for why I still refuse to change my order. Maybe my expectations were too high. When I saw the previous chapter, I felt that the progress was very fast, but it was gone. When I saw this chapter, it really cracked. It was too perfunctory, really too perfunctory. I didn't expect that the novel I had been waiting for so long would turn out like this.

? ? ? Wflbb This chapter is so abstract, eh, is it a bit watery?

The ending is a bit rushed, but I really loved the early plot.