Historical Fiction (Male Lead, Protagonist Top, Protagonist Bottom)

1 方 Square House with More Than Ten Acres [System]. Ning YannuDanmei (BL)791k WordsCompleted 31kFavorites111.1kClicks/ch27.3kGifts

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3.5 Stars "Fangzhai More Than Ten Acres [System]" by Ning Yannu, which describes the daily life in ancient times in great detail

2 带 After Taking the Stall at the New Year's Fair and Dressing up as a Concubine ModDanmei (BL)453k WordsCompleted 3.9kFavorites13.3kClicks/ch3.4kGifts

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5-Star "After Bringing the New Year's Fair Stall and Dressing as a Bastard" byMod, an excellent article, no stereotypical villains in the whole text, a cool article about golden finger plane trading in the early stage and infrastructure construction in the later stage

3 恶 The Evil Husband Has Not Been Divorced Today Making Grass in Leisure TimeDanmei (BL)338k WordsCompleted 1.5kFavorites744Clicks/ch518Gifts

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4.6 Stars "The Evil Husband Is Not Divorced Today" by Xing Xianzuocao, Shou's character is very cute, similar to the novels of Xiao Wen Dan, Yu Chun, and Lu Guilu

4 兽 The Arrival of the Orcs YosiiDanmei (BL)375k WordsCompleted 307Favorites529Clicks/ch200Gifts

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3.7 Stars "The Coming of the Orcs" by Yosii

5 在 Opening a General Hospital in Ancient Times Fake Liquor Gives You a HeadacheDanmei (BL)891k WordsOngoing 10.1kFavorites10.9kClicks/ch23.3kGifts

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3.7 Stars "Opening a General Hospital in Ancient Times" by "Having a Headache after Drinking Fake Wine", Golden Finger's Story of Practicing Medicine in Ancient Times (No Evil Villains)

6 在 Become a Gourmet NPC in the Holographic Game Fake Liquor Gives You a HeadacheDanmei (BL)468k WordsCompleted 6.3kFavorites7.1kClicks/ch5.8kGifts

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3.7 Stars "Being a gourmet NPC in a holographic game" by having a headache after drinking fake wine. It's equivalent to a Goldfinger food article

7 殿 Your Highness, Absolutely Not! Curly CatDanmei (BL)516k WordsCompleted 78.7kFavorites62.7kClicks/ch59kGifts

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4 Stars "Your Highness Must Never Do It" by Juanjuanmao, this author is good at writing ancient and sweet stories

8 修 Cultivation, but Make It Robots Shi Yoyo DaDanmei (BL)621k WordsCompleted 29.3kFavorites27.5kClicks/ch27.5kGifts

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4 Stars "Cultivation, But Robot" by Yoyoda, one of the few books on cultivation that I can read. I like the cute character of the protagonist Yuan Ai (a bit like Nezha from Inhumanity)

9 大 Headmaster of Datang Dynasty [Password] Bluebird Among the StarsDanmei (BL)1.4M WordsCompleted 9.6kFavorites30.9kClicks/ch16.1kGifts

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4 Stars "The Principal of the Tang Dynasty [Password]" by Jade Bird Linxing, cool writing, good reading

10 昏 A Tyrant, but Only Five Years Old Wu ShiDanmei (BL)701k WordsOngoing 90.9kFavorites122.7kClicks/ch323.8kGifts

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4 Stars "The Hunjun, But Only Five Years Old" by Wu Shi, Wu Shi's novels are quite good (ps: this is a cub-raising novel)

11 我 I'm Guarding the Gate of the Prison Wild Geese Crossing the Cold PondDanmei (BL)837k WordsCompleted 37.9kFavorites130.6kClicks/ch30.2kGifts

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4 Stars "I'm Watching the Gate in the Prison" by Yan Guo Hantan, the writing and plot are good, but the plot setting is not what I am interested in. (Looking at the table of contents for the VIP chapter, it seems that the protagonist becomes a royal guard to handle cases + plotting. Although the content is completely different, for me, it is the same as "Jiang Jinjiu", which is well written but cannot be read). I like the chapters before VIP of this book.

12 在 Choosing to Be a Mascot Between a Workaholic and a Deadweight Mei LeDanmei (BL)390k WordsOngoing 41.7kFavorites44.4kClicks/ch51.9kGifts

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3.8 Stars "Choose between being a mascot and a waste" by Merle

13 穿 Time Traveling Station FengxiangDanmei (BL)719k WordsCompleted 8kFavorites54kClicks/ch5.2kGifts

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4 Stars "Traveling Station" by Fangxiang is good to watch, but Gong's character design is not likable. After reading more than 20 chapters, Gong's self-awareness is very excessive, but the other "infrastructure cool writing" parts are pretty good.

14 穿 After Passing Through the Book, He Became an Exiled Cannon Fodder Watching the SeaDanmei (BL)257k WordsCompleted 6.2kFavorites8.4kClicks/ch1.2kGifts

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3.9 Stars "Becoming an exiled cannon fodder after passing through the book" by Guan Hai

15 穿 After I Transmigrated into the Villain's Heart Demon Wen SangDanmei (BL)513k WordsCompleted 109.9kFavorites89.7kClicks/ch79.7kGifts

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3.9 Stars "Transforming into the villain's inner demon queen" by Wen Sang

16 穿 After Passing Through the Book, I Had a Baby with the Prime Minister [Farming] Old Tree IvyDanmei (BL)747k WordsCompleted 8.7kFavorites11.6kClicks/ch7.1kGifts

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3.5 Stars "After passing through the book and having a baby with the Prime Minister [Farming]" by Laoshu Qingteng

17 我 I Really Just Want to Take the Imperial Exams Doesn't Eat Sweet BunsDanmei (BL)784k WordsCompleted 45.1kFavorites40.7kClicks/ch34kGifts

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3.5 Stars "I Really Just Want to Take the Imperial Examination" by Don't Eat Sugar Packets

18 我 I'm the Villainous Chancellor's Older Brother [Book Transmigration] A Piece of Lotus RootDanmei (BL)598k WordsCompleted 85.2kFavorites82.4kClicks/ch70.2kGifts

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Four-star "I Am the Traitor His Brother [Chuoshu]" by Yijie Ou. It has no plot or infrastructure elements. It has many descriptions of "yellow heart" and "yellow pants". It has a good impression of the protagonist's youthful feelings and the image of a modern college student.

19 国 Daily School Life at Imperial College Seven Parrot FishDanmei (BL)407k WordsCompleted 6kFavorites13.3kClicks/ch4.4kGifts

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5-Star "Daily School Days at the Imperial College" by Seven Parrot Fishes, which is a "super good" article. It can be compared with the romantic "Green Bamboo", the rabbit pulling marshmallows "The Little Official of the Song Dynasty", Weiwei Duo's "School Days in Ancient Times", and Jin Gewanli "I Was a Princess in Ancient Times". They are all interesting daily stories for teenagers with a strong sense of life. They are well interspersed and will not be as boring as traditional imperial examination essays/farming essays.

20 我 I Work as a Purchasing Agent in Yuan Cloud-Turning SleevesDanmei (BL)820k WordsCompleted 11.2kFavorites41kClicks/ch13.9kGifts

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5 Stars "I am a Purchasing Agent in the Original" by Fan Yunxiu, quoting other readers' comments "... I don't want to belittle other articles, but other original articles I have read are just primitive, infrastructure, and clichéd emotional dramas, which have no sense of reality. Most of them I completely lose interest after reading it to the end, but this article is really different, it is real but romantic, read The original characters in the article slowly grow up, which is really touching. Just like the initial ignition, the most touching thing about this article is that the protagonist is not a "leader", he is a participant and a bystander. The emotional line is not short. I can't spoil it too much, but I really have to say that it is the collision of two lonely souls, which is really beautiful. I hope the readers of this article can be more patient, because it is really different from other articles. The simplicity at the beginning is just superficial, and the core of it is really romantic. "[Rose] This reader's review is very good. This novel is like composing a human epic, but I always feel pity after reading it. The love between love and affection is like a flame hidden under the iceberg, which leads to them not saying sweet words. In the later stage, I always struggled with whether they were "living together" or "true love" (but at the same time, I firmly believe that these two people are willing to sacrifice everything for each other. They should be passionate. They were very passionate at the time), but when I saw their relationship, I always felt that the lightness was not enough, but when I recalled the plot, I felt that it was enough (for example, Gong said that it was not all because of Shou that he abandoned his family and career, but he did give up his original rich pasture, fertile fields, and comfortable bamboo house to join Shou's poor tribe, and Shou also directly exposed and shared all his golden fingers with Gong, who would threaten his life safety). What makes me most regretful is Shou's decision to travel around the world. I thought that the Sun and Moon Tribe were already Shou's relatives. It seems that even I, the onlooker reader, has feelings for the tribe, but Shou decided to leave forever (I don't object to his idea of ​​wanting to see all over the world. I just feel sorry that even if he travels, can't he come back every two or three years? Shou's "Golden Finger" in the mall made me originally think that this is a book. A cool article about cross-border management. I thought cross-border trade was the main line, but I didn't think so after seeing it. I can understand that if Shou's golden finger wants to play its greatest role, each tribe must go to trade, but never going back to the original tribe feels like a bite of a knife to me.) Also, Shou couldn't understand the language of the child Yan Xiaowang at first. Yan Xiaowang begged Shou to give him the feeling of family for the first time. Will you come to see me again? It's okay if I don't want sugar. Shou didn't understand and thought that the child's sticky eyes were just acting coquettishly and wanted snacks, so he touched his head and gave him a pack of biscuits before leaving. Yan Xiaowang burst into tears and said that he gave me food but he didn't want me. Gong said that Shou was "terrible" (at the time I thought this was just a misunderstanding caused by the language barrier, Shou himself was a A very affectionate and friendly person) I didn't expect that at the end of the novel, Gong and Shou would wander around the world together and abandon Yan Xiaowang in the tribe ([burst crying] I can understand that it is not suitable to live in isolation with a child. Being a lone wolf is not good for Yan Xiaowang, but how could they completely abandon this child)

21 穿 Travel Back to Ancient Times and Cook a Banquet [Food] Help Me up and I Can Still WriteDanmei (BL)461k WordsCompleted 3.9kFavorites8.2kClicks/ch3kGifts

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3 Stars "Go back to ancient times and make a big banquet [food]" by Help Me Up. I can still write it. The early stage is good, but the middle and late stages are ugly. I could have rated it at least 4 stars. This author is good at writing daily food. He also adds character interactions and dialogues when describing the cooking process. He does not completely copy and paste the cooking process. The food he describes is also very tempting. However, in the middle and later stages, all kinds of monsters and monsters appear. After leaving the novice village, almost all the powerful people the protagonist encounters are... The bad guy (only the young master of the Shao family is good), the other restaurant Fang family, the gambling house and the county magistrate related to the Fang family, the head of the Lu family who is a troublemaker and has bad intentions after being instigated by Gao, the Sun family, the shopkeeper near the protagonist... Jane Let's get it straight (spreading rumors, moral kidnapping, lawsuits... All kinds of messy things) [crying] In fact, the food articles written by this author are really good. It would be better if there weren't so many villains in succession.

22 围 Many Passers-By Watched the Tang Dynasty Wind and Rain GlassRomance529k WordsCompleted 5.4kFavorites26.6kClicks/ch5.7kGifts

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4 Stars "Watching the Tang Dynasty" by Feng Yu Liuli, infrastructure farming article, I ran out of money after reading chapter 28. From what I have read, although it is called "Watching the Tang Dynasty", it is more focused on farming and doing business rather than interacting with historical celebrities, but overall it is good to watch.

23 殿 Your Highness, Think Twice Wu ShiDanmei (BL)357k WordsCompleted 34.8kFavorites41.3kClicks/ch43.1kGifts

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3.5 Stars "Your Highness, Think Again" by Wu Shi. At first glance, it seems to be an ancient setting, but in fact it is more of a story about supernatural powers (almost every character has a supernatural power or golden finger)

24 九 The No. 1 Boyfriend in Kyushu [Through the Book] Xiong ChunDanmei (BL)412k WordsCompleted 51.6kFavorites99.6kClicks/ch20.4kGifts

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3 Stars "The No. 1 Boyfriend in Kyushu [Passing a Book]" by Xiong Chun "Long Aotian got pregnant after being her boyfriend" by Northeast Big Bad Wolf, cultivation background, okay in the early stage, but not good once the ambiguous period is over

25 魅 Succubus' Manor Shu QiDanmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 111.1kFavorites260.3kClicks/ch132kGifts

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3.9 Stars "The Succubus's Manor" by Shu Qi, a Western fantasy background infrastructure novel. Because the weaving and house-building technologies are relatively primitive, it is also divided into the ancient area.

26 古 Daily Life in Ancient Greece Youbi VineNo CP607k WordsCompleted 17.9kFavorites32.4kClicks/ch20.7kGifts

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5 Stars "Daily Life in Ancient Greece" by Youbi Tengluo, the plot and characters are very good, it is rare to write a good novel with the background of ancient Greece

27 半 Half of the Court Are My Disciples (Imperial Examination) Moon Moon Pounds HerbsRomance659k WordsCompleted 11kFavorites14.4kClicks/ch13.6kGifts

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3.9 Stars "Half the Court is My Disciple (Imperial Examination)" by Yueyue Paiyao,

28 夫 Husband, I Ran Back with the Ball Chinese Valentine's Day Is a Big-Headed CatDanmei (BL)528k WordsCompleted 76.1kFavorites127.1kClicks/ch46.5kGifts

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4.5 Stars "Husband, I ran back with the ball" by Qixi is Big Head Meow. It is a novel with a very interesting plot. The title of the novel sounds like a brainless sweet novel, but in fact it is not.

29 我 I Am a Powerful Official in Troubled Times Jin Ge Ten Thousand MilesDanmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 46kFavorites91.3kClicks/ch37.3kGifts

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4 Stars "I am a powerful minister in troubled times" by Jin Gewanli

30 大 Dajin Soap Is a Bit SlipperyDanmei (BL)318k WordsCompleted 11.1kFavorites31.5kClicks/ch3.1kGifts

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3.9 Stars "Da Jin" by Soap is a bit slippery, it is a speedy version of career and love lines

31 回 Go Back to the Early Ming Dynasty to Engage in Charity Shu QiDanmei (BL)687k WordsCompleted 37.6kFavorites87.7kClicks/ch52.3kGifts

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3 Stars "Back to the Early Ming Dynasty to Engage in Charity" by Shu Qi, a male-flavored article

32 恶 A Vicious Husband Rules the Whole Family SeelightDanmei (BL)459k WordsCompleted 4.5kFavorites5.2kClicks/ch4.6kGifts

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4.5 Stars "The Evil Husband Rules the Whole Family" by Seelight,

33 如 How to Properly Capture the Prince? Xiong ChunDanmei (BL)687k WordsCompleted 82.3kFavorites88.9kClicks/ch53.9kGifts

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4.5 Stars "How to correctly promote the crown prince and second concubine" by Northeast Big Bad Wolf, "How to correctly promote the crown prince and second concubine" by Xiong Chun

34 太 That's Too Much, Second Senior Brother Magical Girl Tu YingjunDanmei (BL)705k WordsCompleted 146.8kFavorites147.9kClicks/ch363.1kGifts

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3.5 Stars "It's Too Much, Second Senior Brother" by Magical Girl Usagi Handsome, Cultivation Text

35 余 Mr. Yu's Stingy Son-In-Law JiaoyangDanmei (BL)482k WordsCompleted 7.1kFavorites13.7kClicks/ch2.3kGifts

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4 Stars "The Husband's Stingy Son-in-law [Farming]" by Sijiao. Although there is a minor villain, the protagonist is not angry and can snuff out any signs of cowardice and fight back on the spot.

36 无 Infinite Retracement, I Win by Lying Down Jiang HongjiuRomance990k WordsCompleted 37.9kFavorites63.6kClicks/ch31.8kGifts

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3.5 Stars "Rewind Ten Thousand Times, the Emperor Begged Me to Become the Throne" by Jiang Hongjiu, everything else is good, but the plot of the rebellion is too similar (the former prince, the previous prince, the previous prince's son & Concubine Wen) (Prince Chiayi, King Nanyang, the third prince & Concubine Wen), the palace is like a sieve, full of loopholes, every time the villains rebel, it seems like the whole palace is their backbone

37 匡 When Kuang Helped the Han Dynasty, He Took the Wrong Path [Three Kingdoms] NanwuRomance1.0M WordsCompleted 28kFavorites38.3kClicks/ch58.7kGifts

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3.5 Stars "God knows, I am Wenhe?!" [Three Kingdoms]by Nan Wu

38 假 What If Er Feng Were the First Emperor's Crown Prince? Frying Salt, Piling SnowRomance832k WordsCompleted 111.3kFavorites172.9kClicks/ch360.8kGifts

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3.5 Stars "If Erfeng Were the First Emperor's Crown Prince" by Jianyan Diexue. The author is very good at portraying the human version of Li Shimin, the kind of cute boy with unlimited possibilities. However, too many extras have affected the experience of the text.

39 夫 The First Son-In-Law of the Husband's Family Lu GuituDanmei (BL)2.0M WordsCompleted 228kFavorites375.3kClicks/ch783.1kGifts

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4 Stars "The First Assistant of the Husband's Family" by Lu Guilu, although there is "the first assistant", there is not much content in the imperial examination book bag, it is an ancient daily text, not bad

40 炮 After the Cannon Fodder Was Heard by the Villain [Through the Book] Bluebird Among the StarsDanmei (BL)513k WordsCompleted 26.6kFavorites30.5kClicks/ch15.7kGifts

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2.5 Stars "Cannon Fodder After the Villain Hears His Voice [Through the Book]" by Jade Bird Linxing, it may be a new attempt of Jade Bird Linxing. This article is no longer the routine of infrastructure construction that the author is good at, but has become a routine of slaps in the face and abuse of scum. The reason why it is not good-looking is that the villain is entangled in the later stage like an unbeatable Xiaoqiang.

41 穿 Time Travel House Living in the Wild Plains Murong LibaiDanmei (BL)733k WordsCompleted 9.1kFavorites32.5kClicks/ch5.7kGifts

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2 Stars "Life in the Wild Plains in Time Travel House" by Murong Libai

42 直 Live Broadcast of the Daily Lives of Celebrities Refining IntentRomance460k WordsCompleted 6.2kFavorites26.6kClicks/ch7.5kGifts

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4 Stars "Live Broadcasting the Daily Life of Celebrities" by Lian Yi, the article is good-looking, although the title says "live broadcast", it is not a live broadcast commentary stream, the plot is an ancient novel similar to "Huan Rong"

43 锦 Jinyiwei Related Accounts Wind and Rain GlassRomance603k WordsCompleted 20.4kFavorites56.2kClicks/ch33.2kGifts

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4 Stars "Jinyiwei Guanhu" by Feng Yuliuli, the Northeastern flavor is very good at playing the protagonist of the world

44 我 My Husband Can't Possibly Be a Tyrant Emperor! Childe Yu GeDanmei (BL)444k WordsCompleted 270.5kFavorites300.5kClicks/ch294.5kGifts

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3 Stars "My husband cannot be a tyrant emperor!" By Gong Zi Yu Ge, the early writing is very good and attractive, and it has the explosive point of not losing the waistcoat and the warm feeling of two classical beauties with excellent temperament.

45 和 A Love System Is Bound to the Founding Emperor Twilight and Cold for a Long TimeDanmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 150.2kFavorites149.1kClicks/ch516kGifts

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3 Stars "Binded to a love system with the founding emperor" by Mu Hanjiu

46 穿 Time Travel: Li Jin's Farmer's Daily Life Looking Back at Half SummerDanmei (BL)511k WordsCompleted 59.6kFavorites196kClicks/ch49.2kGifts

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4 Stars "The Daily Life of Li Jin's Farm in Time Travel" by Looking back at Banxia. Shou was her husband, and later wrote the story with Gong's encouragement. The first scroll in Chapter 88 is not big. When it is slowly opened inch by inch, the first thing you see is the... Tail of a chicken. Then the chicken's head also appeared in sight. The chicken was very impressive. Matching the background of the courtyard, Qin Muwen recognized it as his own chicken at a glance. ——The chicken I raised when I was still living in the village. When the scroll was fully unfolded, Qin Muwen saw that he was holding a bunch of persimmons in his hand, and two chickens behind him were so arrogant, as if the persimmons Qin Muwen was holding belonged to those two chickens. Qin Muwen couldn't help but laugh, covering his lips with surprise in his eyes. If Ah Jin hadn't painted this incident, he would have forgotten it. Now looking at this painting, he completely remembered his helpless mood at that time. Chapter 94: Find a bookstore to publish a book for Shou at his own expense; Chapter 98: The content of a book written by Shou: In the year of Xinchou, it was the fourth year that my husband and I got married. Recently, my family bought a maid to take care of the children. I am not as busy as before, and my life is more leisurely. My husband practices calligraphy as usual every day, and I grind ink, pick up lamp wicks, and serve him tea and water as usual. Before, I had to spend most of my time taking care of my children, feeding them when they woke up and putting them to sleep when they were sleepy. The children were still young and could not be separated from anyone for a moment. Now in the evening, while the maid is coaxing me to boil water for my husband, I take the time to see the child, who is sleeping obediently. I felt relieved, poured water for my husband and watched him practice calligraphy. When he was not practicing calligraphy, he would look at me, his eyes dark, and I couldn't guess what he was thinking. My husband took a rest the next day and saw that I was really free, so he asked me if I wanted to write something. But I am not a person who writes stories by nature, and the only stories I know are the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, and the Snail Girl. But I still agreed to my husband. I wanted to spend more time with him and have more conversations with him. Because the beginning of this "Miscellaneous Notes" goes straight to the point, many people read it before they even realize that it is a storybook. The sixth page lists the wedge and three other short stories in total. They are not written according to the timeline. The author is just like what he wrote on the wedge. He did not write a storybook specifically, but just jotted it down casually in order to have more topics to communicate with his husband. The next three stories are very daily and have a miscellaneous style. However, in just a few words, the author outlines the image of a wife and husband with a generous personality and admiration for her husband. The most striking thing is that his husband seems to be domineering, but he is always gentle to him and dotes on his little tricks. The story is short and effortless, and it makes people feel better after reading it, as sweet as eating candy. Many loyal readers of Fucheng tabloids read these three articles in one go, then shook a thin page of paper with a look of confusion on their faces: "What's next, there's candy!"

47 冒 Fake Prince Childe Yu GeDanmei (BL)457k WordsCompleted 306.3kFavorites321.1kClicks/ch254.8kGifts

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3 Stars "The Fake Prince" by Gongzi Yu Ge, the early stage is good, but the plot is boring in the middle and late stages, and the writing becomes a novice and routine (it feels like the author can't write anymore or is in a hurry, so he writes very perfunctorily)

48 寡 The Widow's Tavern Lu GuituDanmei (BL)941k WordsCompleted 69.8kFavorites77.5kClicks/ch168.3kGifts

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4 Stars "The Widow's Little Restaurant" by Lu Gui Tu. Lu Gui Tu's writing is as reliable as Yu Feng and (early) Xiao Wen Dan. It is the kind of writing that is warm but not boring. Although the title of the novel contains the word "widow", it is not a bloody story about an adopted son falling in love with his stepfather. The "widow" is just a background role.

49 在 During These Years of Doing Business in Ancient Times Looking at the Moon with HandkerchiefDanmei (BL)353k WordsCompleted 9kFavorites38.4kClicks/ch3.5kGifts

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4 Stars: "Trading in the Ancient Times" by Handkerchief Wangmingyue, is similar to "The Golden Tang Dynasty", there is no delay in getting rich and building infrastructure, and a few chapters explain a lot of the transformation and application of modern technological civilization in ancient times. However, in the later period, the plot is not as tight and ups and downs as "The Golden Tang Dynasty", so that book has 5 stars and this one has 4 stars

50 穿 A Story About Dressing up as a Villain and Raising a Family Yu JiuDanmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 26.7kFavorites68.3kClicks/ch17.9kGifts

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4 Stars "The Story of a Husband Dressed as a Villain to Support a Family" by Yu Jiu. Overall, the plot and writing are good, and it makes people want to read more [Red Heart] However, this may be the author's early practice work, and there are inevitably some contradictory omissions in the novel. ① First, he said that the embroiderer was disliked for having dark spots on her face, so she encouraged herself to apply for the job (her mentality was that if she failed to apply this time, she would not dare to ask for anything more in the future, after all, she had been rejected many times). In this case, she should cherish this job opportunity particularly, and the author uses the words of Aunt Wang to describe the embroiderer who should have low self-esteem and sensitivity, but is honest and kind-hearted. As a result, her character became arrogant, selfish and sinister within a few chapters. As a married woman, she also fell in love with the protagonist's husband. Let's not talk about the fact that she, as a feudal woman, wanted to cheat every day. According to her original character, I think she would not dare to hope that she would fall in love with a bright scholar. Her character was completely reversed without any foreshadowing or transition② Let's talk about Xu Zhang first. As the protagonist's competitor, the shopkeeper bribed Xiu Niang to steal the formula. He was obviously a follower of the trend and was jealous of the protagonist's business (the protagonist first started the food business, and they started to imitate it when the protagonist went out of business for decoration, making it seem like the protagonist violated their interests first, but it is normal for the novel villain to be so brainless and vicious). Later, it was hinted that this shopkeeper Xu is a black paste (Han Shi San, d The boss behind the u product), since he sells black ointment, if he adds some black food powder to his own restaurant, he can smuggle cold food powder to expand profits, and seize the protagonist's business and squeeze the protagonist's shop out of business. This is illogical [cross hands] I think the author of both places should set up separate villains to avoid the appearance of logic Editing contradictory issues, for example, the bad things done by the embroiderer can be done by the third person who was originally recruited (two people will do the dishes and one will wash the dishes. If the third person steals the recipe in return for kindness, it will not only establish the original character of the embroiderer who has low self-esteem and honesty, but also will not hinder the story of Aunt Chen exposing the person), such as the plot of the evil lady Chen The rival villains Shopkeeper Xu and the Black Cream Seller (set up one more villain as a seller of cold food powder. If the author wants Shopkeeper Xu to be punished more severely, he can also design content where Shopkeeper Xu and the black cream villain get together and work together) Black Cream Seller ③ This is a small bug, but it seems insignificant at the moment. As soon as the protagonist traveled back in time, he pawned the dowry silver bracelet prepared by the original owner's parents and the jade pendant the protagonist hired for the victory. They said it was a pawn and would be redeemed when the money was earned. As a result, after making money, the protagonist first renovated and then thought about opening a branch, and did not deal with this situation at all (although not writing it will not affect the plot direction)