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Undercover Anti-Fraud APP
White KeyNo CP740k WordsCompleted
3.8kFavorites2.6kClicks/ch3.9kNutrition
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4/10 It was very boring and watery. The content before entering V was basically all about the mission process. I had no communication with the squad leader, and there was no interaction with Rai when forming a team. The part where Hagimatsu appears and recognizes Zero is a bit more interesting. There will be some current affairs jokes interspersed, not very funny. The app at the beginning is equivalent to a prophecy crystal ball, which will predict future events in advance. Jingguang analyzes how to use the events to better carry out undercover missions based on the prophecies. Later, the brainless stacking skills became almost omnipotent. It could help change the voice of the disguise, see through the disguise, obtain the information received by nearby people in real time, and easily hack into the intelligence agencies of various countries to find hidden information. The identity of Akai Shuichi, Isori Hondo, and Mizuno Reina was known in this way. The organization has also been strengthened, otherwise the organization would be destroyed in minutes by such a cheating Jingguang. The organization detected the time fluctuation and realized that both Jingguang and Sister Bei were related to it and had been observing Jingguang. At the beginning, Jingguang said that he had to be wary of this app no matter what, but later he just did whatever the app asked him to do. The protagonist was not so much Jingguang as the app, and Jingguang was just its carrier. The events that happened later were all deduced and analyzed by the app's customer service staff, with Jingguang only occasionally interjecting. The app is equivalent to more than 200 original OCs. It has been chattering in Jingguang's mind. He chats and gossips and bickers when there is nothing to do. It has no effect on the advancement of the plot. The word count is only low. When Jingguang talks to others, he will complain a lot of nonsense like a barrage, which greatly affects reading. The anti-fraud guys don't have their own characteristics, they can't tell who is who, and they don't know why there are so many points. Entering the plot relies on chatting in the mind, a running list of what this person has done, what that person is doing, and what we are going to do soon, which is very dry and boring. Anti-Fraud Lords are like plot commentators/narrations. Many times, paragraphs describing the weather, environment, and the actions of people around are spoken through the mouth of the system, such as: [Anti-Fraud Lord xxx: The purpose of doing this now is xxx], [Anti-Fraud Lord xxx: This car is about to lead to xxx], [Anti-Fraud Lord xxx: That person suddenly moved He kidnapped the passenger next to him, balabala], [Anti-Fraud Jun xxx: The glass of the shop next to him cracked, and people ran away balabala] (an analogy, not the original text), the author seems to have developed a new writing method with a low number of words, so that each paragraph can have ten more words [Anti-Fraud Jun xxx:]? I don't know how to calculate the number of words with numbers and punctuation, but at least 40,000 words out of the 740,000 words in the full text are [Anti-Fraud King No. Xxx]. There is a setting of traveling through time and changing the past, but the narrative is very confusing, there is no logic, and the storytelling level is a mess.
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Bourbon Opens the Door, I Am Really Your Little Tame Dye
Dog MachineNo CP535k WordsCompleted
5.1kFavorites4.7kClicks/ch9.4kNutrition
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8/10 Yes, it's good to watch. Before I watched it, I thought it was a serious drama about redemption, like real wine mixed with water. I struggled for a long time before I clicked in to watch it. I didn't expect it to be humorous. The plot is very exciting, Xiao Su is cute and cute, she often secretly plays crickets in a serious manner, and there is a lot of inner drama. Xiao Su Xiaojing's dual perspective, the mistake happened on the night of the massacre. Xiao Su in the closet was brought back to the organization by Oda, and was raised by Gin. He was very trusted by the organization, but he did not take the initiative to work, so his status was not very high. Xiao Su was influenced by the police academy team in Xiao Jing's world. Xiao Jing secretly obtained intelligence in Xiao Su's world and assisted the police academy team in handling the case, which strengthened the undercover team's determination to rebel against Scotland's cause. The character creation is very good. For the first time, I saw the career-oriented Mingmei. Mingmei in Xiaosu's world overthrew the old Rum and became the second generation Rum. Squad leader Matsuda plays a lot of roles. He often meets Jingguang when he is involved in a case, but he does not participate in the organizational line. Hagiwara doesn't have many roles, appearing in the middle and late stages. Hagiwara in Xiaosu's line was rescued by Xiaosu in time. After waking up from a vegetative state, he disappeared. After being rescued, Hagiwara in Kokage's line faked his death. He accidentally entered the bottom-level intelligence team of the organization incognito and helped during the decisive battle. Kudo Shinichi has not become smaller. Kudo Yusaku joins the resistance organization in Xiaosu's world, and Xiaoxin joins in the fun. Shinichi from Xiaojing World received a stick but was not given medicine.
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Is Akai's Innocence Today?
I Also Want to Eat Meat TodayDanmei (BL)1.0M WordsCompleted
8.1kFavorites11.5kClicks/ch26.2kNutrition
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7/10 The plot has the same style as the author's previous two books, with rumors spreading to persecute everyone's innocence, and all kinds of CPs stewed in it, but it's not as unrestrained as the previous two books, although it still doesn't teach science. During Akai's undercover period, he was very OOC in front of Gin, a domineering killer and his (fake) sweetheart, but Qin Chi didn't play a large role, and the plot basically focused on the police academy team, so it wasn't too embarrassing. After the defection, the emotional drama between Gin and Akai became the main theme. Qin Aka is not a love mind, and no one will change his position for the other. Every time the two confront each other, they seem to be compromising each other, but in fact they are secretly plotting. It wasn't until Teacher Aka overturned his car and was imprisoned, and after being plotted by Rum and Old Crow, that Gin and Akai officially joined forces to deal with the organization. Although they were attacking each other, Qin was always on top during the undercover period. After being exposed and defecting, the counterattack was successful. In the later stage, the outcome was determined by the outcome. Xiao Ke has very few scenes, basically none. The police academy group had a lot of scenes in the early stage, but after Akai left the organization, the scenes of the police academy group decreased significantly. The emotional lines of Hagimatsu Hagi and Rei Kagerei are minimal. The reader knows they have arrows and knows when they have enlightenment, but when the relationship is confirmed is not detailed.
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Scotland Has a Coal-Digging Cat
Tibetan Spring SnowDanmei (BL)94k WordsCompleted
2.9kFavorites2.2kClicks/ch3.5kNutrition
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8/10 It's a sweet short story. After Jingguang enters the organization and the Siamese cat lifts the bourbon vest, there are some memories of the two meeting and the police academy. After the confession, the two have a connection and it ends quickly. There is no original plot except kicking the lunch box. It didn't reach the first year of Ming Ke.
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Rebuilding Vongola in the World of Kexue
Very DifferentNo CP1.3M WordsCompleted
33.8kFavorites71.5kClicks/ch37.6kNutrition
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6/10 It's Jia Ke. I feel like I shouldn't put Ke in the book list. Fans of Tuo Tuo who use Ke's venue and NPC as extras will be confused if they haven't seen Tuo Tuo. In Ma Jiawen, the protagonist plays all the roles of the tutor. Although the protagonist does not appear much, it feels very subtle every time when I think that these roles are all played by one person. Writing a book review from the perspective of Ke Tong is okay. The characters are not broken. As a foil for everyone in the tutoring family, compared with being a mere background in some serious Ke Tong movies with original protagonists, each character has a highlight. However, with the increase in the number of tutors, Mingke's scenes became less and less. In the later stage, it was an atmosphere group of people watching the battle. No one except Gin awakened the flame. By the end, there was no Mingke scene at all. From the perspective of a tutor, the author has too deep a stereotype of Skylark. He is a violent maniac and will beat up anyone who comes face to face without saying a word. There are too many plots to persecute Levi. Although Fran is a venomous character, and the original novel also has plots to complain about Levi, but because he is ugly, it is too much to constantly attack him personally as soon as he meets her. Many plots have a strong sense of déjà vu, and the original plot has been changed. 99% Of Fran's appearance is copied from the comic agent chapter where Varya and Liu Daogui give up their children in France, except that Obsidian was replaced by Shuichi Akai. The plot of the finale also copied the entire strategy used in the battle against Bermuda in the Curse Breaking Chapter. The timeline is connected to the future chapter. Everyone returns home after fighting the future war. As a result, when they arrive at the Mingke line, everyone disperses and the Children of Rainbow become pacifiers. The main plot of the first chapter is that the guardians collect the Dragon Balls. After collecting the pacifiers to awaken the Sons of Rainbow, it becomes a conspiracy to overthrow Bailan. By the way, it gives the world of Kexue some shock of Vongola's combat power.
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Can I Get Relief from Being a Dog in Mingke?
Hot FishNo CP186k WordsCompleted
2.7kFavorites3.9kClicks/ch2.2kNutrition
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4/10 Most of them are about the daily routine of raising pets. He helped Zhufu's father block a knife and died, and then he was reborn as a dog bought by the Matsuda family, and the five people in series got to know each other in advance.
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[Conan]hagi's Daily Life NazkiNo CP164k WordsCompleted 5.7kFavorites6.7kClicks/ch516Nutrition
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4/10 Hagiwara has no memory of his past life, but he often has stream-of-consciousness dreams. If he dreams too much, he can guess a little bit about what happened in his past life. It is about the daily routine of elementary school students, with no plot, just eating, drinking and having fun. I thought the police academy chapter would have some plot, but it turned out to be a purely text-based animation with some daily life, which is very boring.
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Hagimatsucan Humans and Ghosts Have a Future?
Tobacco and Wine KnifeDanmei (BL)31k WordsOngoing
2.8kFavorites4kClicks/ch1.3kNutrition
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6/10 It's a trap. If it wasn't a trap, it would look better. One year after Hagiwara's sacrifice, he turned into a ghost and came to Matsuda. Matsuda treated him as a hallucination and the two got along for a while. The influence of ghost Hagiwara on Matsuda was pointed out by an accidental scene. After discovering that Hagiwara might be real, Hagiwara had a physical body, and the two fell in love after they kissed.
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After Matsuda Was Reborn, He Found That the Young Tame Dye Had Become Smaller.
Snow Leopard Holding Long TailNo CP732k WordsCompleted
4kFavorites5.1kClicks/ch2.3kNutrition
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4/10 Following Ke Tongpi's article on rebirth of urban entrepreneurship and management. Hagi Matsukei has memories, the squad leader has partial memories, and Zero has no memories. Most of the content is daily life, including raising puppies, raising dogs, going to school, doing research and development, interacting with NPCs, triggering events, and getting to know important characters in the original work, including Dr. Miyano, Kuroba Toichi, Kenmura Tadaki, and Aso Keiji. They all kicked it off in advance. The plot is childish and idealistic, like an early family novel, bringing together the Kudo family, the Kuroba family, the Hagiwara family, the Matsuda family, the Kagemitsu family, Natalie's family, the monitor and Zero, all acquaintances to get to know each other and play together. Keimitsu programmed, Matsuda manufactured, and worked with Dr. Agasa to develop a large number of cross-generational technologies. Keimitsu bought the Dusk Annex when he was still in middle school. Hagiwara founded a company with the help of his father when he was 4 years old, selling products made by Matsuda and helping Keimitsu realize gold. This is a story about love reasoning and reborn entrepreneurship. If there is nothing to do, I will talk about product functions, design ideas, material usage, technical breakthroughs, finding partners, etc. It is boring and boring, and then I will start building satellites. Jing Guang also has the super power of creating copies. After reading half of the book, I still don't know what its use is. It's too boring to read.
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There Seems to Be Something Wrong with Hagiwara's System.
LantaDanmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted
12.8kFavorites20.9kClicks/ch16.3kNutrition
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0/10 Move the lightning protection first, and then try to step on it when there is a shortage of literature. The author's original villain OC brainwashed Hagiwara and turned him from a policeman into a criminal who killed countless people. In the early plot and the dialogue, it was expressed several times that this OC is Hagiwara's biological family. It is described that Hagiwara does not think about his family very much but regards this OC as an important person. The person he wanted, and the OC even said to Matsuda, "What does my Hagi like in you?" In the final ending, the author wrote that Hagiwara was deeply grateful to the OC for saving him and let the OC go at all costs in the end, and Matsuda also expressed his understanding.
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Outstanding Hogwarts Graduate Jinpei Matsuda
The Clouds Are Rising, the Pines Are Rising, and the Wind Is DawningDanmei (BL)174k WordsOngoing
7.8kFavorites12.1kClicks/ch6.2kNutrition
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2/10 It was a trap. I jumped in after reading the copy that was really attractive. But I found out that I wanted to abandon the article before I saw the cheating part. I thought it was Matsuda who came back from Hogwarts to study and easily controlled the organization and led the massacre at the same time. I didn't expect that it was a dark lone wolf fighting alone. It's not as lighthearted and funny as other variety comics, but the protagonist is able to write such a heavy plot with the almighty invincibility. A bad guy, a genius academic master, proficient in potions and spells, can improve potions by himself, is proficient in Occlumency, has learned the Animagus, and can command wild cats to obtain information. Proficient in ancient magic patterns, hand-made double-sided mirrors, Quidditch seeker, successful entrepreneur and very wealthy. In the 1980s, he produced 2000 technology products to help undercover teams deal with organizations. A bunch of personal items from Hogwarts life, very boring and full of bad memories. He is a junior student of James and Sirius, and a member of the team that made the Marauder's Map. He was ostracized by his Gryffindor classmates because of his excellent grades. He was imprisoned by Death Eaters during the Voldemort period and suffered from ptsd and aphasia. After Harry was born, he was cured and had no problems. It uses a lot of memories to show the psychology of the characters, but the plot is boring. He has a twisted personality and misses Hagiwara in the HP world, and mourns the Potters when others in the police academy are laughing. Many times it feels very pretentious. When helping Harry to face the Dursleys, he showed the wizard's condescension in front of Muggles to the fullest. In the chocolate classroom, he gave a long speech to the instructor about his opinions on making chocolate. He revealed to young Harry the past of the Potters and the wizarding world, and revealed to Hagiwara what he saw and heard when he was the ghost of Toru Amuro. There is an inexplicable pursuit of rigor in some irrelevant places, such as how Japanese law sentenced people during Voldemort's time. The plot is also full of loopholes. For example, he wanted to pave the way for Zero King and ran to confide a bunch of fabricated information about the Sorcerer's Stone to Sister Bei. He also said that someone named Amuro Toru and Midorikawa Hikari knew the story, but he did not tell Zero King in advance. All the incidents at the police academy and the Asai Villa incident were solved by Matsuda alone. Others were so anxious that he kept silent and never asked for help. He wanted to pave the way for Zero King and designed himself to be caught by the organization. Hagiwara contacted Harry and guessed Matsuda was reborn, and the police academy team got the opportunity to cooperate with Matsuda. Hagiwara became proficient in hacking skills in a short period of time. He and Matsuda, one mastering technology and the other mastering technology, acted as public security liaisons, using the technology of the current era to communicate openly and openly under the nose of the organization. Everyone in the Metropolitan Police Department was eating Hagi Pine like a nymphomaniac, cheering and assisting the two of them to explore the progress.
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Has Fang Gu Transformed Today?
I Also Want to Eat Meat TodayDanmei (BL)522k WordsCompleted
6.3kFavorites9kClicks/ch7kNutrition
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7/10 The adult version of Martin's Morning includes snake tails, cat ears, abo, succubus, etc., As well as a story about turning into a rabbit and having a false pregnancy. Of course, there are no cars, but there is a lot of exhaust gas. It is similar to the book about Death. The main character spreads rumors and indiscriminately persecutes everyone's innocence. Bourbon, Scotland, Rye, and Matsuda stage a four-person Shura scene. There are a series of bloody scripts such as chasing his wife in the crematorium, NTR, and robbery. There is no Conan scene. The police academy team deceived the world's consciousness and artificially advanced the timeline. When Rei Fukiya turned into a wizard, he made a shrinking potion for Hagiwara. Hagiwara turned into a child and took the name of Edogawa Conan and ran through the main plot. The golden finger is very thick, and the transformation will follow your wishes. When you need to explore, you can transform into an animal-controlling one. When you need buffs, you can transform into a wizard and make magic potions. In short, there is no plot such as careful layout and organized divisions to fight against each other. It is just mindless and fun.
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Matsuda Jinpei Wants to Break up with Kodome Small BurgerDanmei (BL)495k WordsOngoing 5kFavorites4.3kClicks/ch5.6kNutrition
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0/10 I didn't read it, but I saw the lightning protection. I was afraid that I would forget to step on the trap, so I copied and pasted it: In the original line, Matsuda traveled to the world where Hagimatsu was already together. Not long after 1107 proposed breaking up, he woke up again and faced the young Tamede who had turned into a black man and joined the brewery. Possible lightning points: There is an updated IF line in the middle of the text, in which Hagiwara did not pursue Matsuda again in the end. There are plots such as the original Matsuda wife, Matsuda's marriage, the darkening of Hagi's affair with Matsuda after Matsuda's wife became pregnant, and this IF finally became
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Is Hagiwara Unemployed Today?
I Also Want to Eat Meat TodayDanmei (BL)660k WordsCompleted
12.6kFavorites23.5kClicks/ch10.9kNutrition
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7/10 This is the first time I watched Mingko from the Bleach series. Many of the Bleach settings are very interesting in Mingko. For example, Hagiwara used Shunpo to kill himself, and the misunderstanding caused by Hagiwara Yoshimi being seen persecuted Matsuda over and over again. The story of Death does not account for much. Hagiwara was sent to take the writing test by the novice guide NPC store manager Urahara and Yoruichi. After becoming a Shinigami, he became the Shinigami in charge of the rice flower area. During the debriefing, he participated in a little rescue of Rukia's copy and got the Bendama buff. After that, he entered the first year of Ke Xue. Rice Krispies was isolated from the Soul Society, and the plot no longer involved Death. The extra story also includes a story about a character called Ghost Lantern. I haven't seen it and I don't know what it's called. After the Whiskey Team passed away, they all went to hell here to work as jailers. The undercover team's IQ was particularly high. While Hagi and Matsu were still working diligently on the script, they took off Hagiwara's vest from the smallest detail. The two of them didn't pay much attention to the organization in the early stage. Jingguang's exposure crisis was automatically avoided due to the butterfly effect. Gao Ming was officially involved in the struggle with the organization after it was noticed by the organization. For example, in the copywriting, everyone's reputation was harmed, and some plots were awkward, embarrassing and funny. The rumors of Gin and Akai's relationship were killed by Mr. Chi's mouth. Scotland also got the title of a cursed detective before Kogoro and Conan. The plot in the later period is quite free, changing from big to small, from human to cat, from men to women, the golden finger is particularly thick, the two "double cultivation" of spiritual energy transmission, Matsuda has spiritual power. In the state of death, only Gin can see it. In order to prevent him from being discovered to have contact with Zero King, he also learned to transform into a cat from Yoruichi. Participate in the Syndora game and bring Noah home. Conan doesn't have many roles, and I didn't deliberately exclude Conan. There will be some concealment, but if Xiao Ke finds out that he is involved, he won't stop him.
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Matsuhagi, Kagereilove Game Dream Before DawnDanmei (BL)189k WordsCompleted 2.8kFavorites4.1kClicks/ch1.1kNutrition
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4/10 The CPs were Matsuhagi and Kagerei, and they almost turned against each other. Jing Guang and Zero are a bit ooc. One-third of the plot is Matsuda and two-thirds Kere. The plot of Matsuda is similar to the original work. The young tamed Ran has been together since childhood. However, Matsuda will encounter various small accidents. Hagiwara needs to read the files repeatedly to reach the ending after catching the Ferris wheel bomber. Jing Ling's line is quite twisty. Jing Guang is a newbie in the game. When setting up the character's background, he stepped on all the pits, resulting in a hellish start. Fang Gu Ling joined the organization at a young age and had a very low sense of identification with the world. He slowly opened his heart under the influence of Jing Guang's companionship. However, because of the character setting at the beginning, there was an underworld and an ending. He could only load the file and start from the beginning, growing up as a young tame dye, but Ling Ling's subconscious was still affected by the last archive. It's not too sweet. For Matsuda and Rei Fukiya in the game, they have really lived for decades and died hundreds of times, but Hagiwara and Kagemitsu have only played the game for dozens of days. Not very friendly to Haiyuan's shaping.
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Matsuda Jinpei Also Died in Society Today Five Autumns in One DayDanmei (BL)281k WordsCompleted 6.8kFavorites8.6kClicks/ch3kNutrition
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4/10 "I Really Don't Have PTSD" is a similar type of story. After Matsuda was reborn, his contemporaries discovered something was wrong and then made up the script. Although it is not as far-fetched as PTSD, it is also a misunderstanding caused by not talking long. Matsuda was reborn, but if he wanted to achieve full survival, he had to perform a script to satisfy the high-dimensional audience's It's a bit messy. In short, Matsuda is portrayed in a beautiful, strong and miserable direction. He has to get hurt from time to time to satisfy the bad taste of the high-dimensional audience. The purpose of all the scripts is to be misunderstood. The characters in this world are treated as the audience. Acting for the sake of acting is a bit boring. At the end, the truth was not told to the companions.
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Kexue Pet Simulator
PorphyrinbaguDanmei (BL)371k WordsCompleted
4kFavorites4.4kClicks/ch1.8kNutrition
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7/10 Cute Cure Xiang Xiaotian's novel does not involve any main plot or participate in the confrontation organization. It is a cyber pet-raising plot. It is similar to the setting of Traveling Frog, but there is no persecution plot. I haven't read the original work of Shukai, but I've only read a few of the fanfiction of Shukai, so it's not very influential. Although it was Chiqin who bought stocks in the early stage, it can be seen that he is biased towards Qin. Hongqin is OOC for sure, with a cold-faced and cool persona. There is no emotional line, Chiqin has a single arrow, and in the last chapter the protagonist suddenly realizes and chooses Qin, without any explanation from Chi's perspective.
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Kuroko's Daily Life in Yoneka Town
PorphyrinbaguNo CP807k WordsCompleted
32.3kFavorites39.4kClicks/ch49.5kNutrition
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10/10 It's nice to watch, well written, and super humorous. I've only watched a few episodes of Kuroko's Basketball, but I haven't watched King of Nets at all, so it doesn't affect my reading. Except for the Mingke characters, other anime characters are NPCs who provide clues and props. However, there are so many new characters that sometimes it's hard to tell who is who, but that's not a big problem. The red side and the black side have both been strengthened. The red side has Heizi and his friends to provide help. The black side has added two new wines that study memory implantation, brainwashing, cloning and memory uploading. It is quite oppressive. After all, you must always beware of the people around you being brainwashed. Although Black has been strengthened, it does not affect the humor of the plot at all. Akai may be a little frustrated in the early stage, but it is really not black against Chi. Teacher Chi is very helpful and charming in the later stage when the situation is reversed. This Akai is the most slutty of all the fics I have ever read. He starts off by slandering the person's innocence. In the end, Jing Guang even started to snipe at him to interrupt the reading, which was hilarious. Hagiwara has been trying to study the magic principles of Kuroko since he met Kuroko. He found that Kuroko's friends are all colorful, and he also wanted to change their names to the same color system in an attempt to add them to the color palette. Heizi plays the supporting role, and the police academy team is very involved in the plot, and the interactions are also very interesting. Conan was not very involved in the fight against the organization, because the organization immediately began to doubt the efficacy of aptx4869 after discovering that Haiyuan had become smaller and escaped. The adults protected Xiao Ke very well. However, Conan's highlights were not cut, and Xiao Ke always cooperated within his ability.
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[Hagimatsu]flight Number SK0106 Honcho Reincarnation BoardDanmei (BL)67k WordsCompleted 677Favorites892Clicks/ch398Nutrition
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4/10 Idiots who only read ordinary novels will not be able to appreciate this kind of prose-style youth pain literature filled with words. The text is complex and redundant, one-third of the plot, one-third of various details and psychological descriptions, and one-third of inexplicable sadness. The plot is like panning for gold in the sand. The time was after several people died in the line of duty and were reincarnated. Chisu had grown old and the organization should have been wiped out. Without any external factors, Matsuda did not dare to approach any acquaintances. He accidentally met Kagemitsu Hagiwara during vacation. Kagemitsu then helped create opportunities to get along with each other. Hagiwara carefully tried to please him and tried to close the relationship. There is no squad leader and Fangtani Rei in the main story, but there is in the extra story, and Zero has always had memories. Everyone later remembered them, and it feels like the main story was reincarnated without memories just to engage in pretentious literature. The main text is about the 14 days they spent together on vacation at the beach. One developed a crush, the other rekindled their love, but there was no formal relationship. Very OOC, Matsuda, who knows how to step on the accelerator, was reincarnated with memories but inexplicably escaped for 20 years. Fortunately, it didn't last long. I haven't read such a tooth-ache-inducing novel since I graduated from junior high school. Extras available
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After Being Reborn, I Worked Part-Time as a "Father" to the Same Generation
All Grass BallsNo CP581k WordsCompleted
5.2kFavorites4.1kClicks/ch6.8kNutrition
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5/10 There is too much useless content and the pace is too slow. Only after reading the commentary did I realize that it was written by the author of Biochemical Environmental Materials. Does that book have so many metaphors and psychological descriptions? Although the writing is quite beautiful, it is not the kind of plaintive lamentation, but there are too many, too many, and a large metaphor is inserted into every three sentences. There is an imbalance between the literary nature (showing off language skills in a limited space) and the functionality of the novel (using language skills to set the stage and let the plot and characters sing). When writing a novel with literary thinking, half of a chapter is devoted to psychological description, metaphor, rhetoric and life insights. If the 150-chapter article is removed from the piling of words, 50 chapters of effective plot are considered too many. If it is a composition for high school students, it will definitely score high. I recommend it be published as "Excerpts of Excellent Compositions, Good Sentences and Paragraphs". However, in the novel, the plot is cut into pieces by the writing style of a virtuoso composition. The plot is moving forward, stopping repeatedly to express emotion. The coherent narrative rhythm is frequently interrupted, and the text is dragged away as soon as it is inserted into the plot. Often when the characters are still having a conversation, most of the character's personality and psychology suddenly emerge, and then a bunch of life philosophies are introduced. The dialogues are specially translated, and a word is always repeated twice for emphasis, just like the sequel to Journey to the West. Two of Hagiwara's three vests are related to the organization, and the other one also carries the system. The mysterious man who always changes the plot one step ahead of Hagiwara thinks it is a foreshadowing to fight against the organization. However, it turns out that everything happened around the organization. The plot ended abruptly when Belmod was caught, and the ending was unexpected. Hagiwara was bound to the system and reborn, preferring to hide everything he resisted, but Matsuda, who was extremely understanding of Kodame, and his extremely observant contemporaries, could always find something wrong with Hagiwara, but after the showdown, everyone was very bland and there was no lyrical interaction. Hagiwara wears the trumpet of Rei Fukutani's father and lurks in the organization. The peripheral members do not play much roles. His main role is to pave the way for Rei Fukutani and arrange tasks to cooperate with the main body. She also made a shell generated by the system, and was accidentally spotted by Bellmode, who wanted to use her to fake the growth process of his daughter's identity. She was arranged to form a band with Whiskey, and Hagiwara and Matsuda took turns to control the account. The plot is very fragmented and inconsistent. Event A is often resolved without going into event B at all. Even with a bunch of useless content, when you see event B, you often have to go back and read how it developed to event B. By the time I finished reading it, I still hadn't figured out the main plot. It was probably about teaching the system how to behave.
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How to Achieve the HE Ending of Puppet Master Hagiwara
DeviationNo CP524k WordsCompleted
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8/10 It's a cheating novel, the writing is good, the plot is mindless and exciting, not as exciting as the first two books, there are no twists and turns, it just keeps putting puppets in, controlling the members of the organization, and going deep into the upper levels of the organization to find the boss. The two pairs of young tamers interacted a lot and were very good at fighting, but there was no CP. The police academy team exchanges information, occasionally leaks information to the FBI and shares some work, protecting Conan but not stopping Conan's investigation. The police academy team helps wrap up the plot with Xiao Ke's reckless behavior. The puppet master is a dimension-reducing blow to the people in Ke Xue's world. The puppet's power is almost at the Saiyan level, and it is unscathed even if it is in the center of the explosion. As long as they absorb the necromancy power from Hagiwara, Matsuda and Jingguang will have endless power, and Hagiwara can obtain endless necromancy power from Xiao Ke.
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Since Everyone Is in the Second Week, You Can Save Yourselves.
Crunchy Cheesy PotatoesNo CP623k WordsCompleted
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4/10 Only the beginning was good. After entering v, the protagonist's personality changed drastically after going to school. The plot was very complicated and confusing. Past life memories were inserted in small paragraphs. The writing was very fragmented. Halfway through, the plot became more and more confusing, and I wanted to know how to round it out. It was very painful to watch. The ending is very confusing, the protagonist loses his memory and becomes smaller and needs to grow up again. The title of the novel accurately summarizes the plot. The protagonist has not made any interference in the plot except for allowing other people to recover their past life memories. The survival of the original characters who have not recovered their memories is just a matter of butterfly wings. The person who changed the plot was the father of the protagonist, a crazy father who was obsessed with his son and tried every means to get his child. But the love for the child is inexplicable. If the child is born and not raised, he will only pay for it. It does not matter if the ex-wife remarries. In the ending, the protagonist is given a drug and has to abduct the child and go abroad. It is a growth diary of the popular Korean truant. The other characters in the original work take the initiative to stick to it like cats and dogs, while the protagonist is unmoved. The plot is very open. The main character is a little prince of the South Korean Yakuza. He is so powerful that even the organization dare not provoke him. He controls all the underground power intelligence networks. The Japanese police are begging to share information. He can beat Hideyoshi in shogi. Teacher Chengchi, a sniper technician, is a bodyguard in Curaçao. The FBI shamelessly recruits people and has superb cooking skills. The protagonist doesn't seem to have any charm in the text, and the more he goes on, the more he looks like a showman, but everyone on the red side likes him. There are a lot of characters and scenes, so I'm a bit confused if I haven't seen it. Sculptures of cats and dogs are cute in moderation, but this article is too large. Many settings were thought to be foreshadowing. For example, the main character was of Japanese and Korean descent, thinking there was some inside story, but in the end it was just to make fun of Korean absenteeism. There are also other people who can recover their memories. Gao Ming Ganshu recovered, but Jiangu Ling did not. There is very little interaction among the police academy team. When they appear, they always stick to the protagonist. When Jing Guang faces the protagonist in the later stages, he becomes humble. The protagonist has a very average relationship with the police academy team, relying entirely on others to take the initiative. He and Matsuda are step-brothers, but only Matsuda is unilaterally close to the protagonist. He is Hagiwara's first love interest. He hates Rei Sutani to the point that it will affect Kagemitsu. He is Kagemitsu's childhood neighbor. After recovering his past life memories, the relationship became estranged. The author is probably a fan of Akai, and he praises the FBI and belittles the Japanese police, because he feels that the Japanese police have no reliable people, so they caught Rum without telling the police. Compared to the alienation of several people from the police academy whom I have known since childhood, I can be considered close to Shuichi Akai. I cooperated with the FBI in my previous life, and even joined the FBI in this life. He only relied on hints to give information to Jingguang, but he gave complete information to Akai Shuichi.
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Raising a Jingguang Cat
DeviationNo CP10k WordsCompleted
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6/10 This is a free short story. After Jingguang committed suicide, he turned into a cat and was picked up by the heroine. He took him home to recover from his injuries. There was no emotional line. After recovering from his injuries, he met Lingling, and then he was picked up by Fengmi who pretended to be the original owner.
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After Matsuda Was Hit While Racing
Green Plum CivetDanmei (BL)399k WordsCompleted
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6/10 The first part is quite interesting. The police academy team doesn't interact much, but it's fun. The first half is basically about organizing rumors to persecute everyone's innocence, Kurohagi and red pine, Matsuda trying to protect everyone under his wings, and Hagiwara secretly making small moves behind Matsuda's back. Before Ke Xue's first year, Xinyi had not become Xiao Ke. It's a bit unfinished, and the ending is too hasty. After catching Karasuma Renya, the organization will be wiped out. Many settings are not explained, why Matsuda has intermittent amnesia, why Hagiwara goes back in time, and the text becomes Hagiwara has no memory but Matsuda remembers the first episode.
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I'm Really Not the Light of the Police
The Book Has Been Around for a Long TimeDanmei (BL)362k WordsCompleted
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7/10 The writing is quite good, and the main plot is quite exciting. There is no plot involving the cooperation of the police academy team, but the interaction is very interesting. Xiao Ke will be involved in small cases, and Director Ke is not involved in the organizational line. It would be very interesting if there was no cp. There is a sense of separation between the emotional line and the plot line. Falling in love for the sake of falling in love is too blunt and not sweet. Chapter 7 They had just entered school not long ago, and they had not experienced any adventures together. Onizuka's murder, the convenience store, and the speeding incident were all forgotten. He only caught a guard, Rei Fukutani, and fell in love with him inexplicably. After graduation, they had sex and parted without saying goodbye the next day. They separated for two years, and then got the code name and just returned to the country. They didn't worry about their identity being exposed at all, and they immediately started dating again without any barriers.
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Officer Matsuda's Cardcaptors Journey
Gu ZezeNo CP1.1M WordsCompleted
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7/10 Miko is integrated into the setting of Variety Sakura. Matsuda and Sakura, Kenji and Tomoyo, Kagemitsu and Yukito, Rei and Momoya, etc. May seem unrelated at first glance, but if you think about it carefully, the small details of various characters can still correspond, which is very fun. It is recommended that you read the author's police academy friend's story first to see if the nonsensical daily life is to your liking, because the whole book is of the same tone, and does not involve organizational lines. It is all about the frantic daily life of Matsuda and his friends. The plot is not as exciting as the police academy friend's story. For readers who like to read the plot, it may feel a bit watery, but with two or three chapters and a small copy, you won't be enticed to catch up on updates when you have nothing to do.
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What Happened to My Best Friend from the Police Academy! Gu ZezeNo CP2.0M WordsOngoing 7.9kFavorites2.7kClicks/ch19.2kNutrition
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9/10 Free group portraits, such as copywriting, are not in Japan in the early stage, and basically do not involve the original work, so you can skip it, but this part is actually quite fun, the plot is exciting and humorous, and it is not a joke piled up with jokes. The author is modest about his immature writing style. I personally think that the writing is quite good. It is much better than some authors who have written several articles. The long content of more than 500 chapters is not watery at all. They are all solid plots. I stayed up all night and couldn't stop. It was so refreshing and interesting. After Hagi, Matsu, and Kei died, they were thrown by the system into a utopian city that had been destroyed by the organization's experiments and then rebuilt and armed by the locals. It's a bit like a farming game. You open a store, collect clues to explore the city, complete various small tasks to obtain resources, get to know local forces, and reach cooperation to fight against the organization. After returning to Mihua, we followed the original plot. It was very simple to deal with the organization. The Ke Yuanqian organization was taken care of by the forces that the three of them now belong to and had to live in Japan. The reason why it is so long is because it triggers the classic main plot and the theatrical version one by one, and also intersperses a lot of original light-hearted and funny nonsensical daily routines. Part of the daily life follows the perspective of two original high school students, and the adults do not interfere too much. Xiaolan knew Conan's identity very early, but she would not interfere with Conan's decision and would help cover it up. Everyone on the red side has a long mouth. Except for what the system does not allow, the information is completely interoperable. He didn't steal director Ke's highlights and famous scenes, and even actively included Conan in the plan. In the end, it was a pity that he did not return to his original identity and continue to be a policeman, but continued to run a small restaurant in a foreign country.
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When Matsuda Was Picked by the Dice
Three Hook FeathersDanmei (BL)632k WordsCompleted
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7/10 As the text says, it's very slow and it's all about daily life. It took more than a hundred chapters to get into the police academy. But it's not watery. The plot is compact, with three days of kidnapping and five days of bombing, one small incident after another, and there is no random content to make up the word count. The interactions are quite cute, but occasionally a bit childish. The various unlucky events that occurred when Matsuda's dice failed were very interesting, and there were no particularly embarrassing plots that would make people dig their toes to the ground in order to highlight the unlucky settings. None of the five people in the police academy had any regrets about their childhood, and they made money out of everything they could, including the Miyano family, Haneda Koji and Amanda, excluding Ethan Hondo. The gold finger is very thick, and it only brings bad luck in daily events. The dice never fall off at relevant moments. He gave Matsuda a background of the third generation of the organization, with a higher status than Rum, and he also controls an underground force that he has been running since he was a child. The other three people in the police academy rarely appear, not even as much as their elementary school classmates. Without sharing information with the undercover team, it was Hagimatsu and the two who used their own power to fight against the organization. It's up to the squad leader to reveal information to the police. Ling Jing only has scenes in the police academy, when Jing Guang is exposed, and in the finale. The daily life in the first half is cute, the police academy chapter and the part about joining the organization are exciting, but the ending part against the organization is the "single fight" that I dislike the most. Apart from my own power, I only have information exchanges with Xiao Ai. In the last few chapters, Matsuda appears in front of all the organization members, and only in the scene do I know that Matsuda is there. Revealing a little bit of information to Conan was forced to do so due to world consciousness. Director Ke was deprived of all the highlights of the plot. In the plot, he is just an unlucky child with strong curiosity. Note: Extras include Hideaki CP
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After Jiang Gu Became the Script Team
Jun QingsuNo CP558k WordsCompleted
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4/10 It has the same problem as the Shrunken Furitani-kun book, the content is very watery, and it likes to steal other characters' scenes to highlight Rei Furitani. When I read it, I had a sense of déjà vu. When I switched to the author column, I saw that it was written by a single person. Authors with zero singles are terrible.
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End of Life Hotline Matsuda-Kun
Thousand Miles of Evening Mountain RedNo CP366k WordsCompleted
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4/10 There are too many unnecessary explanations, too much repetitive content, and it is verbose. Even when I was trying to escape, I was still talking nonsense. I saved Jingguang and messed up a bunch of scripts that neither solved the problem nor had anything to do with the rest of the story. It was very poor. Most of the backtracking is in vain, because the early backtracking time is too short to find out the cause and effect of death. As the backtracking time gets farther and farther, only after the real hidden dangers are found can we officially start to explore how to survive the death node. Hagiwara Kenji was the one who was saved in the early stage, and Matsuda was always the only one working hard. In the Jingguang chapter, he is the vehicle provider and background board, and has basically no role. He only joins the cycle in the Squad Leader chapter. Jingguang was added to the cycle in the middle of the Jingguang chapter. Together with Matsuda and Zero's assistance, the three of them worked together to find the mole in the Metropolitan Police Department. The monitor did not appear until the squad leader chapter. After being rescued, he had no further scenes. Zero and the monitor did not join the cycle. The ending is very stream-of-consciousness, similar to the book where you meet the young tame dye in the winery. The reason for the loop is not to lay down the foreshadowing and reveal it bit by bit as the plot develops, but to focus on the ending and hit the reader in the face. It's like you thought you could chew slowly and finish the meal, but the cook suddenly stuffed the rest of the food into your mouth. Although you were full (the loop was closed), you almost choked to death.
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The Mingke Five Met in a Winery After Being Reborn
White Burning SummerNo CP278k WordsCompleted
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4/10 At the beginning, Matsuda was too OOC, so pretentious. Unnecessary things are written in too much detail. There are often whole chapters of fighting plots, how to perform moves, how to block, each move is written clearly, and the details are too fussy and very procrastinating. It is not a martial arts novel. The chapters where you meet Jing Guang are almost all about the Gu-raising battle royale that has nothing to do with advancing the plot, and the secret room is too heavy on writing. The same goes for playing volleyball. Every move is written in detail, and irrelevant plots are written in too much detail, which slows down the pace and makes you anxious if you want to follow the main plot. The rhythm of the plot is like the Western Fantasy I watched before. Every time you pass a small copy, you pick up a companion, and then the friends work together to deal with the big devil. Inconsistent, the organization was created to be extremely scary in the early stage, and even after being reborn hundreds of times, there was no way to compete with the organization. As a result, after joining the organization, he let himself go and had no scruples about anything. The mentors who always led the new ones were all undercover and water wine, and even gin and vodka Chianti turned into two-and-a-half-year-olds.
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Cats in the World of Conan [Luo Xiaohei's War + Conan]
Egg SandwichNo CP29k WordsCompleted
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6/10 Cute, the fairy-sealed memory of Luo Xiaohei's world traveled to Mingke, and his ability is to control fire and extract condensed spiritual bodies. He was picked up by Xiaojingguang and took him home. He saved the Morofushi couple and Hagiwara. As a prank, Zero accidentally merged into the memory of the original Zero. The undercover team obtained future intelligence and destroyed the organization.
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After the Scottish Raiders Failed to Descend into the Valley
Tibetan Spring SnowDanmei (BL)440k WordsCompleted
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6/10 I came from the book that the author exchanged for young children. The wife's zero scene is particularly fragrant, and it opens the door to a new world. The sugar content of this book is very low. If the sweetness of You Tie Dian's book is 100, this one is only 30. Adding the extra can make it even higher. If you want to see sweet love, you must be careful when entering the trap, and don't hit the cook. The subject of "Chasing the Wife at the Crematorium" is very controversial, so please read it like a dog-blood novel. The relationship between Zero King and Hagimatsu and the way they get along with each other are completely different from the original work. In the early stage, they pulled each other, and there is a little bit of sweetness in the bitterness. After the organization was wiped out, the "Chasing the Wife at the Crematorium" and the foreshadowing of the exchange of hearts were revealed and it ended immediately. There is no sweet love routine, there are only two kisses in the whole story, there are no signs and there are no children, and the Hagi pine content is very low. The plot logic is clear, the writing style is humorous, and the writing style is online. You can see the author's writing skills in this book. The previous whiskey group was particularly fun to get along with, and Teacher Chi showed his skills in making Ling Ling angry. This part is in the free chapter of Submerged V. If you are interested, you can have fun. Excluding Conan, except for the police academy team and its related characters, Shuichi Akai, the Miyano sisters, Gin and Belmode, no other original characters appear. Zero scene AO, Hagimatsu AA. Jingguang was reborn very early, and his parents saved him. The beginning of the article is in a state of memory loss, so there is no need to worry about two Jingguangs. Doesn't it feel like abuse personally? But it's really super bloody! The native dog quite liked watching the part about chasing his wife at the crematorium. Neither Rei Furitani nor Hagiwara was wronged. Ling was better off. Due to his position, he kept ignoring Jingguang's feelings, which hurt Jingguang's body and heart. Until the final battle, he discovered that Jingguang was not only the person he had been looking for, but also the person who had been passing on information to him. He regretted it and immediately started pursuing Jingguang after finding the amnesiac. But Kurohagi! Too crazy, too sick and too manly! In order to monopolize Matsuda, he secretly attacked people who had a crush on Matsuda, drugging Matsuda so that he could not smell pheromones other than his own. He also wanted to destroy Jingguang's glands because Matsuda and Jingguang were getting close. Without giving away any spoilers, I can only say that there is a reason for everything. The truth is revealed at the end and all the foreshadowings are fulfilled. There are no loopholes in the plot. The only regret is that it ended just after the relationship was established, and the ending was a bit hasty. The interaction between Matsuda and Jingguang designed by my wife is really interesting, and they get along sweeter than the two pairs of CPs. Unfortunately, there is too little plot in this part.
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When Matsuda Bound the Sticker System
Pillow BearDanmei (BL)724k WordsCompleted
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6/10 It's a bit like "If you don't fall in love, you'll die", the difference is that the mission objectives are not limited. The first half of the police academy plot has nothing to do with Mingko, it just follows Hagi Matsuhi's love story. Everything centers on falling in love, Matsuda deals with the murderer, Kage Rei only watches without helping, watching Hagiwara chase the escaped prisoner on his own, and the other three people in the police academy are all tool men who are pulled out to advance the emotional line when necessary. Hagiwara is described as a yandere who is very OOC. He is full of brains every day. If he doesn't pull the lights, it is more than enough to be in Begonia. He takes off every three days because of certain things. He doesn't feel any sense of responsibility as a policeman. He doesn't deal with the winery for the sake of the people, but just for revenge. After Matsuda died in the line of duty, he was bound to the system. He was reborn before graduating from the police academy in the third week. On November 6, he received a system task and started the task to enter the second week. In the second episode, Matsuda and Hagiwara exchanged bomb disposal locations and successfully defused the bomb. Four years later, he died on the Ferris Wheel on November 7. Hagihara joined the organization in order to catch the bomber. Ke Yuan later caused a plot loophole for some reasons and returned to the beginning of the third episode of Matsuda's rebirth to start the timeline of this article. When Matsuda entered the second season of the third season, Hagiwara returned to the first season and died in the line of duty. He accompanied Matsuda through the four years after his death as a transparent person. His mentality became distorted at the winery in the second season, and he became even more yandere because of his inability to communicate. Relying on system plug-in props to deal with the winery, the two made up a mysterious organization and used system props to make deals with black organizations. Because the technology of the props was too high-end, and it was revealed that the mysterious organization also aimed at immortality, the organization was eager to seek cooperation with them, and with the cooperation of the public security, they successfully set up a trap to wipe out the organization. The missions in the beginning were awkward, but the memories of the first and second rounds in the middle were terrible. At the end, the winery was dealt with not by strategy, but by stacking props, mindless cheating. In addition to system props, Hagiwara only relied on the second round and organized three years of training to single-handedly wipe out all codename members.
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Meet the Baby Tame Dye at the Winery
Thousand Miles of Evening Mountain RedDanmei (BL)383k WordsCompleted
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2/10 The amnesiac, sarcastic and hilarious version of Matsuda is a dramatist, especially OOC, not like Matsuda or Hakuha Saiki. Everyone loves to talk about cross talk, it's not funny, it's too much nonsense! Regardless of the red side or the black side, even if they are discussing serious matters, they will start talking nonsense. The plot progress is very, very, very, very slow! The main body of chapter 107 reaches chapter 60, and Matsuda Jinpei is still alone in Mingke. In chapter 62, the two discover each other's existence, and they meet in chapter 63. The first person to recognize Matsuda was the squad leader, and Hagiwara learned from the squad leader that Matsuda was still alive. After the two met, they both felt that the other had amnesia and that they were talking nonsense without serious communication. The plot is very confusing. Kuromatsu died for Kuromatsu, Kuromatsu got Pandora to reverse time, and Kurohagi exchanged his life for Kuromatsu. Pandora fell into Kurohagi's hands and started various attempts to save Kuromatsu. Kuromatsu used Pandora to make a deal with the Time and Space Administration for Kurohagi, which led to the main plot of the book. It's not good to watch. There is almost no interaction between the police academy team. Most of the plot is about Matsuda's involvement in Conan or Kidd's incident. The latter part is full of confusing timelines. Kage Rei basically has no role and no emotional line. My feeling after reading it is just incomprehensible.
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What Should I Do If My Baby Seems to Have Turned Black?
Frogs and CicadasDanmei (BL)303k WordsCompleted
10.1kFavorites14.1kClicks/ch9.3kNutrition
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3/10 The first half of Jing Ling's script is a bit awkward. The two of them created each other's scripts, a schizophrenic perverted stalker, a paranoid and dank control freak, and a group of dog-headed military advisors who constantly helped to add to the script. It was quite funny that Jingguang joined the winery department after the formal showdown between the two. Most of the plots were various scripts made up by everyone, which was very simple and easy for the organization. There is no main plot of the original work, and it does not enter the first year of Ke Xue. The role of the other three people in the police academy team is to write various scene-based scripts. They have no memories of the police academy in their previous lives and are not familiar with Fangtani Rei.
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Winery BOSS Relies on Joint Branding to Dominate the Academic World
Rabbit Store ManagerNo CP458k WordsCompleted
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4/10 It's a funny story, the protagonist's mental state is really advanced and he persecutes everyone equally. But it basically has nothing to do with the original work, so it's not my cup of tea.
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What Evil Intentions Can Hagiwara Kitty Have?
Snow Leopard Holding Long TailDanmei (BL)57k WordsCompleted
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4/10 Free text, a bit boring, the timeline is confusing, and it feels unfriendly to Akai. After Hagiwara's death, he turned into a cat. He contacted Kagemitsu and Zero in advance to help snipe the Ferris wheel bomber, defuse the bomb in the hospital, and participated in the rooftop incident. Kagemitsu faked his death, and saved Akemi with Matsuda, and turned back into a human after blocking the bomb for the two of them. Other than that, there is no key plot, it is just a daily routine of becoming a cat.
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On Bourbon's Love at First Sight for Scotland Three Rivers and One MountainDanmei (BL)493k WordsCompleted 9kFavorites14.1kClicks/ch4.4kNutrition
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0/10 One look at it, it's weird, another look, it's even weirder, save... What's this domineering Scotland and his sensitive and sexy little wife bourbon? ! ! The reviews said it was staged, but it was really painful to watch! ! ! The beginning is too discouraging! I really tried my best! I really can't stand it! I almost vomited after reading Chapter 9! I skipped through the rest of the plot and found that not only Zero and Kagemitsu, but Matsuda and Hagiwara were even more OOC. The dialogue is extremely childish and the writing is extremely naive, as if I was reading an ancient romance novel (Subway, Old Man, Mobile Phone. Jpg), and it felt like it was written by a junior high school student. It's been a long time since I've read a novel with so many flaws. One star is the minimum I can choose. How does a copywriting that is obviously very interesting achieve such an effect!
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When Matsuda Exchanged Cubs for Tamede
Tibetan Spring SnowDanmei (BL)477k WordsCompleted
10.7kFavorites13.1kClicks/ch12.4kNutrition
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10/10 It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, CP Hagimatsu, Zero King, very sweet and healing, the plot is compact, the writing is delicate and smooth, and it's also very humorous. The young tamers were exchanged, Rei Hagi was undercover, and Kagematsu was a police officer. Because Rei Juan took Hagiwara to skip a grade, the five-person group did not meet each other in the police academy. The interaction between the exchanged tamers is super fun, Kagematsu dotes on each other, Rei Hagi loses his friend and fights against the tamed tamers, Hagiwara always runs to show affection to Rei Ling, who has not yet met Kagemitsu, whenever he gets a chance, and Ling Ling is often jealous of Matsuda, the cub in Kagemitsu's life. There are very few organizational lines. The main plot is to recover the memories of the past life. The five people cooperate to survive their respective death points. After rescuing the squad leader, they quickly fast forward and wipe out the organization in one chapter. The romance and plot lines are very compatible, and you won't be in love all the time without developing the plot. The bittersweet memories of my past life are so wonderfully written, the half-empty umbrella that is always empty, the text messages that have not been answered for four years. There are no messy misunderstandings or twists and turns of pulling each other. Hagi and Matsu are both straight goals. Hagiwara falls in love at first sight and pursues her directly. Although Matsuda is a well-known idiot who can treat love letters as letters of challenge, he also admits his feelings straightforwardly after he realizes his feelings. Zero is also a piece of wood, but after regaining his memory, he immediately jumped up and overtook the car in a straight line. It's a pity that the zero scene part is a little short. This couple is so sweet. After reading this article, I fell in love with zero scene. The cat sculpture is so cute. Grandma Jingguang is rising soon! There is so little food!
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The Ke Xue Five-Member Group Reborn Together Ice LingyuNo CP232k WordsCompleted 13kFavorites20.1kClicks/ch7kNutrition
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4/10 90% Of it is daily life, there is no plot about the five people working together, it is basically just gags. Campus Life combines King of Nets and Magic Kaito with very little plot, which is a bit boring for people who like to watch the main storyline. The five-person group participated in the beach incident where Akai and Shinichi first met, and there was no new scene anymore. Once again, Rei Fukiya took everyone involved. Fast forward to the police academy, and they graduated quickly and started undercover. The Twins and the squad leader did not participate in the resistance organization, and only helped when saving Mingmei.
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After Hagiwara Lost His Memory, He Fell in Love with Matsuda at First Sight.
Ice LingyuDanmei (BL)371k WordsCompleted
20.2kFavorites33.6kClicks/ch28.1kNutrition
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4/10 It can be summarized as "The Daily Love of Chivas Regal". After falling in love with Matsuda at first sight, Hagiwara chased people, chased people, chased people, chased people, chased people, fell in love, fell in love, fell in love, fell in love, fell in love, until Hagiwara discovered Matsuda's text messages from those four years and thought he was a stand-in. After the blackmail failed, he decided to become a stand-in. In the last few chapters, he learned his identity and officially contacted and cooperated with the Red Party. After destroying the organization, he barely regained his memory after meeting his parents and sister. The writing is okay, but after they started dating, she felt a bit like Matsuda. It was Hagiwara who was obviously tempted to pursue her first, but after the two of them fell in love, Matsuda always gave in for love, and indulged Hagiwara without any bottom line. He found out that Hagiwara killed someone for him and didn't have any grudge against him. After Hagiwara chased the man, he worried about the pros and cons and felt that he was in love too deeply. He stayed away from Matsuda and tried to calm down, as if he was reading an ancient romance novel. After Hagiwara discovered that Matsuda was using him as a "substitute" for the young tame, he also blindly avoided it, and finally relied on Matsuda to take the initiative to seek peace. 90% Of the content is about falling in love, with a small amount of plot in a lot of candy. There are very few main plots, and it was only in the first year of Ke Xue that he began to seriously fight against the organization. He should be considered Kurohagi, but he has been pretending to be in love, and he and the undercover two are plastic colleagues. Later, he discovered Kagemitsu's undercover identity, and was afraid that Matsuda would come into the organization's sight, so he started communicating with Kagerei in order to protect Matsuda.
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Matsuda's Little Boy Who Died in the Line of Duty Is Back
Ice LingyuDanmei (BL)719k WordsCompleted
37.9kFavorites78.5kClicks/ch76.6kNutrition
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5/10 The writing is okay, and the whole story is basically about falling in love, without any violence or abuse. It's very sweet to read as a love story, but it's not up to standard to read as a Ke fan. 80% Of the content is the emotional pull between Hagi and Matsu. He loves me, he doesn't love me, he loves me, he doesn't love me... A lot of daily love mixed with a small amount of main plot. After Hagiwara was reborn, he knew the future fate of the same period. He silently made a plan to save the remaining four people. In order to protect Matsuda, he kept himself from getting close until Matsuda accidentally broke into the organization's mission site. Kagemitsu and Rei were always wary of Hagiwara until it was confirmed that Hagiwara had all the memories. The exchange of information between them was quite interesting. There is not much of a main storyline. A few people have been fishing in troubled waters out of Conan's sight and cooperated with each other to obtain information about the organization. They saved Miyano Akemi and obtained Haibara's cooperation. They successfully learned the true identity of the boss. With the intelligence accumulated over the years, the organization quickly disintegrated not long after the full moon episode.
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Starting from Seeking Death, Provoking the World of Kexue
The Poem Is HereNo CP1.2M WordsCompleted
37.6kFavorites48.8kClicks/ch179.9kNutrition
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5/10 The writing is okay. The protagonist kills God by blocking God, and kills Buddha by blocking Buddha. If you want to attack him, you will be disabled first. Early police identity: In order to go undercover and enter the organization, he used the system to kill people through the air (suspended death, teleporting to prison, creating replacement bodies, forging new identities, one-stop service). In the eyes of others, it was accidental/suicide/mutual killing. Except for the fake death, it basically takes the main plot of "Death Note" and incorporates it into the characters of Ming Ke and then expands the plot. Mid-term undercover identity: The plot is similar to "Suspicion", using chicken feathers as arrows, constantly spreading rumors and slandering the boss. Members of the organization secretly spread rumors and the CP was stewed, and they also put their code names in public to attract fire. They used another identity to move around the organization, which gave them a sense of familiarity with the "Second Weekly Project". Identity of the successor of the organization in the later period: Replaced Rum as the boss of the intelligence team, second-in-command of the organization, one person is more powerful than ten thousand people, but he has lost his memory, and his subconscious will let loose at the same time. He will not show mercy when he investigates Conan. If Bellmode hadn't dealt with it, Xiao Ke Majia would have been reported in minutes. The third stage can be summarized as "What can I do to save you? My mistake happened at the same time". The police academy team encounters the protagonist one by one → discovers that the protagonist has amnesia → approaches the protagonist → makes friends again → collects information by the way → discovers that he is being used → can't bear to start → keep a distance → restore memory → destroy the organization. The protagonist's personality in different periods is very separated and does not look like the same person. It felt like watching a shitty TV series where the main character doesn't have a mouth, and it was very frustrating to watch. The protagonist is fighting alone from beginning to end and does not communicate with anyone. The reason why this article is so long is because of the twists and turns in the plot caused by the lack of information exchange. In other articles, the protagonist is forced to conceal and will try various methods to hint. This protagonist has never thought of communicating with anyone. Most of the plots are about the protagonist fighting against his own people in order to fight alone. Because he is afraid of the undercover of the Metropolitan Police Department, he has to hide the secret even from his most trusted friends. There are so many reliable people around him, but he insists on pushing everyone away, and even bans Yan Er and fakes his death without revealing any information. In order to join the organization and become the enemy of the whole world, he "killed" the Hagiwara family with his own hands. Everyone in the Metropolitan Police Department believed that he had defected/died. The red side does not communicate with each other. They fight independently and are scattered. Sometimes they even hold each other back. The first half of the plot is basically: the protagonist keeps killing people--being discovered--disappointing everyone and constantly betraying everyone's trust. There is no police academy team to cooperate and fight against the organization. In the later period, the protagonist lost his memory and finally cooperated. The cooperation was how to get close to the protagonist. It was not until the protagonist finally regained his memory in the finale that they started to join forces. I really don't like this kind of individual heroism. What I want to see is teamwork where everyone communicates and cooperates seamlessly, breaks down information barriers, and works side by side for the same goal.
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[Conan] Hagihara Kenji's Compatibility with Organizational Members
DeviationNo CP87k WordsCompleted
3.9kFavorites8.3kClicks/ch420Nutrition
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8/10 Although the free article is short, it is very rich in content and compact in plot. Another author could have written a hundred chapters. Ke Yuanqian's organization was wiped out, so there is no Shinichi Conan scene. I really like the police academy team written by my wife. IQ Online knows how to communicate and the interactions are very interesting. The deep bond between the police academy team can be depicted in just a few strokes. It's too short, so there's nothing to spoil. Anyway, it's good to watch, but the ending is a bit regretful. Hagi's original character died completely at the beginning of the article. In the end, he needs to continue living as a tissue experiment, but it's good to be alive. My wife used this article as a basis to expand on "The Adaptability of Hagi and Organizations", which made up for the regret.
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Furuya-Kun, Who Has Become Smaller, Is Also Working in Zezan
Jun QingsuNo CP636k WordsCompleted
10.8kFavorites17.8kClicks/ch12.4kNutrition
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4/10 The writing is average, the narrative ability is poor, the plot is slow, there are too many psychological activities and protracted plots, and there is a lot of redundant content. If there is nothing to do, I will write a short psychological biography of the characters. The plot that can be written in one chapter can be written into four or five chapters. I can still read it when I am submerged in v. The further it goes, the more boring it becomes. The plot is loose, there are no transitions, and the multiple lines are written in parallel. One second is Conan, the next second is Mary, and the next is the winery. The plot design is very idealistic, and the battle of wits with the organization is like child's play. The way to strengthen the pressure of the winery is to strengthen the red square pig teammates. Other Ke Tong's copywriters are labeled OOC for modesty, but this copywriter is labeled OOC for being honest. No one is consistent with the original work. Except for the police academy team, who are all iron-headed, the police academy team is zero every day! As expected of zero! If you can't write an original plot to show the charm of the character, you will transfer the limelight of everyone in the original work to Rei Fangtani. Even as a professional hostage, you have to change Ayumi to Rei Fangtani. The classic plot and theatrical version of the original work have all been modified, and all the highlights and strategies belonging to Director Ke have been modified. Zero is found to be the role of Bai Gan, Zero is the central figure in the young detective team, Zero is the one who captures Kidd, and Ayumi has a crush on Zero. The murders that were not discovered in the original Conan were discovered and terminated by Zero in advance. Even Subaru Okiya passed Conan and moved into Kudo's house in disguise after the cooperation between the FBI and the Japanese police. He also likes to use children in zero costumes to pretend to be like Conan's acting. Many times Zero does more showy things than Conan, but the author just wants to write that only Conan is noticed. Red Fang and fake wine can easily detect Conan's identity, but Zero is always regarded as a real child. Even if he is suspected, Conan will be implicated. Everyone is wise! Gin [many times] discovered something was wrong with the red character and had to deal with it in a roundabout way to leave a way for the target to survive. The red side relies entirely on coincidence, and the so-called battle of wits is all elementary school-level stratagems, full of loopholes. The organization accepts everything as if it has been outwitted. There is no sense of tension in the game, and it just makes people feel haha, that's it. Judy was a very reliable FBI agent in the early stage of the original work. She was written to be both love-minded and reckless. Sister Bei had installed a bug on her but she didn't notice it. I don't know if the author is Lan Hei or if he wanted to highlight Xiao Lan but used too much force and made Xiao Lan look so stupid. In the animation, the detective team level stupidity was for nothing. He revealed the appearance of Gin Vodka to Sonoko, Kogoro, and the newly met Hattori and Judy, and when he saw Gin Vodka, he was ready to rush straight up. Conan was written as being reckless and aggressive, and he often asked others to clean up his troubles. The police academy team would rely on their status as adults and police officers to exclude Conan when solving crimes. Conan is deaf and blind, wandering on the edge of the main plot, and his situation is the same as that of the original Haibara. He participated in everything but was kept in the dark. He did not know the cause, process, and ending of the incident. Until the finale, he did not know the identity of Haibara, Fukiya, and Okiya Subaru. Later, the author simply stopped acting and excluded Conan from the main plot. After Hattori discovered Conan's identity, he notified Xiaolan directly without considering whether the person concerned had any difficulties and needed to keep it secret. The way to whitewash Ireland is to write him as a silly, foolish, good old man. Although there is interaction between the police academy team, the dialogue is very childish. When I watched it, I wanted to scream that you are adults!
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The Spirit Behind Jiang Gu
DeviationNo CP165k WordsCompleted
6.2kFavorites8kClicks/ch2.9kNutrition
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8/10 After reading Hagi's original novel, I still didn't get enough of it, so I found this one in the author's column. My wife's Ke Tong is really very comfortable to read, and it's so to my liking. Although this book is short, the plot is particularly compact. In just 40 chapters, it covers Scar Akai, Mall Bomb, Conan Kidnapping, Suzuki Train, Detectives' Requiem and three original cases. With Matsuda behind him, Zero's intelligence acquisition progress has improved by leaps and bounds. However, Zero's cheating does not weaken the others. Each character has its own shining point, allowing readers to feel the unique charm of each character. I really like this kind of Ke Tong with all the characters in the original novel being brilliant and interacting with each other interestingly. Unfortunately, the basic setting of this book is that only Zero is left in the police academy team, so there is no way to get the others back. Fortunately, the extra story brought information back to rescue the police academy team in the parallel world.
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Hagi's Fit with the Organization
DeviationNo CP579k WordsCompleted
9.5kFavorites9.3kClicks/ch8kNutrition
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9/10 This book is very good, but why is it so cool? If I hadn't accidentally seen the tweet on Sweet Potato, I would have missed it. I think it's better than most of the books I've read on this list. The writing is very good, the plot is exciting, the logic is clear and there are no bugs, and the police academy team has a tacit understanding of information exchange and cooperation. I really like watching the interaction between the police academy team. It is a pity that the two pairs of cubs are separated to work undercover, so there is no chance to meet, but every time they meet, it is so sweet! No cp is better than cp! After Hagiwara falls asleep, his consciousness will be transferred to an experimental subject of the organization. In order to investigate the organization, the two of them joined the police together after graduating from the police academy. Matsuda went to work as an undercover agent, and Hagiwara acted as his liaison. He personally designed the undercover character for the young tame, making Matsuda feel comfortable in the organization. Jing Guang did not go undercover but became Zero's contact person, and the death nodes of the four people in the original police academy were avoided. The daily life of an undercover agent is super fun. The filthy and innocent Teacher Chi from Ke Tong's novel who is eight hundred miles away still plays a stable role here. Without Scotland who knows how to adjust, the undercover trio get along with each other more lively. The new version of Station·Xiu Ge is super funny, but it's a pity that I didn't get Ethan. There are not many scenes of Conan, and the last dozen chapters only enter the first year of Ke Xue. At that time, the organization was under joint siege by several countries, and the high-level code-name members were almost out of real wine. As long as they found the location of the boss, they could start a decisive battle immediately. I thought Xiao Ke had no chance to appear, but I didn't expect that the stick on the back of the head could not escape hahahaha. It's a pity that there is no tradition of Ke Tongwen: fake wine scares Xiao Ke. There are so many fake wines in this book, it will be fun if we take turns to scare Xiao Ke. Hehe. There is no fake knife in Relaxation. Although Hagiwara's winery body is an experimental subject, his consciousness is in his own body when he is being experimented, and he will not feel anything. His status in the organization is similar to that of Belmode. When he is out in the field, he is a fragile intelligence officer whose wrist will break if he fires a bullet. Except for the fact that Hagiwara can transfer consciousness, there is no super-scientific element in the plot. The elimination of the organization relies entirely on undercover intelligence collection, careful layout, and everyone's tacit cooperation. There is no one person taking the lead alone and letting others become the background. Everyone is working hard to destroy the organization.
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Crow Fold
Kitano BoatingNo CP3.5M WordsCompleted
35.4kFavorites49.8kClicks/ch102.8kNutrition
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4/10 Because the rating is very high, I tried to watch it several times. I just wanted to watch Conan fandom, but I really couldn't get into it. After a few glances, I got bored and cut out to read other books. The current highest record is 90 chapters, but I only read the beginning (sluggish). The plot is similar to Mr. Criminal? Or Gintama? It's the type of book where characters make official complaints. There's a lot of cross talk that contains a small amount of plot, so I thought it could be read as a comedy. Aunt Gin wrote it, and the taste gets stronger as it goes on. If you keep talking about cross talk, you can finish it even if you are OOC, but since you start to decipher Gin's life experience, the plot is like a wild horse running wildly in the direction of Ginjiu. His life experience is beautiful, strong and miserable, both red and black care about him, and the dream of Red Mansion has changed into the dream of Qinlou. Gin has a silent and forbearing attitude towards everything without asking for anything in return. He does good deeds without leaving any name behind them and relies on others to realize them. We are all friends with the same goal, so it doesn't matter if he hurts me. A young tameizen who only met Akai Shuichi once when he was a child, classified Akai Shuichi as his property, because Akai started to grow his hair long after saying a word. After meeting again in the organization, he believed that people still remember him. Shuichi defected to Gin and stepped into a trap and was seriously injured. After that, his attitude towards Shuichi was "You betrayed me." Instead of calling it a fan, it is better to call it the same name. The author should write original work. Except for the world background and character relationships, which are basically all second creations, the characters basically have nothing to do with the original characters, like a novel that has been adapted into a TV series. The police academy team only picked up Jingguang. Since everyone was too OOC, the entire team had no feeling about not picking up anyone else, as if they were reading a novel that had nothing to do with "Detective Conan".
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How Real Wine Became the Light of the Metropolitan Police
Meng Mengmeng NankeNo CP797k WordsCompleted
99.9kFavorites191.4kClicks/ch132.6kNutrition
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4/10 After watching halfway through, I started skipping through it and glanced at the ending. I only saw the protagonist's deliberate calculations, false feelings for everyone, and approaching and befriending the original characters with purpose. Power, people's hearts, friendship, and trust are all pawns that can be used. All the members of the red team have their wits, and they are all tools used by the protagonist in order to survive in the world. It's like watching Qi Tongwei's promotion story.