The setting and characters are very good, a complete fairy tale. However, the plot development is relatively simple. Many things are summarized by a few sentences from the narrator. When the camera shows the protagonist, it is the result and summary after the incident. This is a bit regretful and makes the ending a little thin.
It's like a novel on the basis of a novel. The writing style is relatively immature, a bit eloquent, and occasionally interesting. I like the two protagonists very much.
Although it was written by the author five years ago, the writing style is quite good. It's a sweet young couple~ Although it's a little green, it's not embarrassing.
The two of them were really awkward in the early and middle stages. They were always talkative but didn't talk well. Every time when the critical moment came, they would be distracted by various things. It was very frustrating and uncomfortable. In the later stage, after their vests fell off and the two talked about being together, things gradually got better. I like watching ambiguous lovemaking, but I don't like this kind of "hurt you to death".
Gu Chengyi was strong from the beginning to the end, and the young couple was always sweet! The author likes to use some Internet slang, and the writing seems a little cramped in some places. The plot is simple, some scenes are grand and the descriptions of the God of War are cool, but some later plot scenes are a bit bland.
In the early stage, the ambiguous period of pretending to be a couple was quite interesting, but after they got together, it felt like every chapter was filled with thoughts about bed. . . The author's writing style could be more refined, with some anecdotes and all the inner thoughts of the protagonist written out. If some words that are repetitive and meaningless in the heart are written into text, the content of the novel will be very boring and the number of words will be low. Write about the inner activities of the protagonist≠tell all the inner thoughts in a straightforward manner
Both the early and late stages were great. In the middle stage, the awkward and tangled relationship between the protagonists was very awkward and slow. The plot of misunderstanding was repeated many times and the progress was a bit long. However, the flaws do not hide the good points, and the overall story is a warm one.
It's a sweet story. Shen Du sometimes really speaks out loud and awkwardly, which is very interesting. However, the author's grasp of the ambiguous period where Shen Du was entangled in the middle was not strong enough, and the pulling feeling that was supposed to be very exciting was sometimes a bit awkward. Overall, it's pretty good. The young couple is full of sexual tension. I love watching Qin Yi being obsessed with Shen Du.
There is no misunderstanding or miss, the sweet doting wife maniac and the beautiful baby, but the writing style is a bit awkward, as if reading an ancient bloody novel
I really like the author's farming articles! The first book I read was Veterinarian of the Beast World, and it turns out that the ending of that book is linked to this one! I really like the trivial but happy daily life in the author's article. Every character is great and the writing is very interesting!
It's okay, I like the ancient imperial examination farming infrastructure in the second world the most. The first world is a bit shabby, and the subsequent worlds are a bit messy.
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