I'm Dating My Idol! [Showbiz]

The writing is quite good, but after reading some, I found that there are too many elements, involving the system, favorability, and entrepreneurship. Of course, the first three points are not redundant, but after reading a few chapters, I found that it also involves amnesia, the first love of my ex, and most importantly, it also involves the darkness of the entertainment industry. This part It's the hardest to write, so the whole thing is messy. In fact, it can focus on a certain point very well. The first few chapters are pretty good, but the more I write, the more stuff is packed into it. Everything is mixed together and it becomes messy. I just don't feel that I can control it well. I feel a little tired after reading it. Keep up the good work.

??? The main character was written as G-Dragon, but it turned out to be Lee Dong Hyuk after a long time? Mullet roe

It's hard to comment. I was deceived by the protagonist's appearance.

Why does it start to get weird 💔 in the chapter of Li Donghyuk? The heroine suddenly becomes a very small woman, obviously not to the point of liking her. She is sad for the hero and she sheds tears. The character collapses so much. The writing is good, but this chapter doesn't start. Do you know what you are writing? Author, do you know how many question marks came to my mind when I saw that chapter? It's in Chinese but why can't I understand it? It's like an alien language and I can't understand it. After reading the previous book, I clicked on the update recommendation, and it turned out emmmm hard to comment [question mark]

The heroine design is very interesting ~ there is quite a bit of sexual tension with Lao Long ~ but Yesung's part is more fragmented and feels a bit abrupt. I hope it will be rounded out as soon as possible ~ ~

I said why it looks so familiar. Your article is very similar to a Korean entertainment article written by the author of Xinghe. Even many fragments of your chapter are exactly the same as his first chapter with some words changed. Are you borrowing from it or plagiarizing?

"Forget it, Jin Mina looked up and sighed, and could only pat her face, "Mina, Faiting! GD is a target for strategy! As long as you are not a love brain, then let's develop as friends..." "Catch a big bug for the author~ fighting [covering face, laughing and crying]

In fact, Lee Tae Hee resigned a long time ago. I think Long is older than him. I remember 😂

Why does the heroine feel a little nervous? She gets angry for no reason.

"Your idea of being passive and sabotaging work is too literary and will never work! You have to stand up!" "Catch a big bug for the author~ too dangerous