After Reaching an Understanding with the Protagonist's Love Interest

This article is actually good overall, with a light sweet, bitter, and astringent feeling. I really love the front and back. Although I feel that the teacher could write it in more detail, I also feel that it is already very good as written. I don't know how to make it more detailed. I feel that the more awkward part is probably the middle. The two are forced to separate and are controlled by the plot. Why do they look so strange? The tone or rhythm is wrong. The rest are generally good. Then, the tone of the whole article is light, and the position of recycling copy is not bad. I look at the reasons for this article. I laughed so happily. Xu Zai Zai, who boldly pursues love, expresses his love in this article. Xu Zai Zai is a bit more direct. This may be because Xu Zai is the kind of college student who is sunny and sometimes full of a sense of death. It may also be because he is the main point of view. Anyway, Xu Zai is really bold in pursuing love and fighting for himself. But Xu Bao's love is also very obvious, you just need to observe it. Anyway, Xu Zai gets it every time, such as Qin, and another example is Hua, and another example is that after his consciousness was tampered with, when he met Xu Zai, he felt that he was his boyfriend, and then his feelings were confirmed later. And if you work hard, you can also find that there are several subtle jealousies in Xu Bao. I really laughed. Then there is the saying that life is hard. There is a saying, everyone has a hard life. My life is hard because I saw these cubs, and I was a little speechless in the middle of the plot. But later I found out that the plot control that made me speechless was that the unlucky roommate was also an unlucky boy with a miserable fate. Although the plot was changed to force the plot, Xu Zai and Xu Bao suffered hardships. I was an orphan and came to this world to mine for two years. At that time, I really didn't know what to say. I was really speechless. I was an unlucky boy. Even scolding me felt a bit like that. Then Xu Zai, this is also a miserable person, the kind of parents in the previous life, the mother is a little better, at least she is willing to give birth to him. Then in this life, the initial state is really familiar. Isn't this the feeling of death that we college students feel when encountering exams and other difficult-to-complete tasks? But chasing love later, senior, you are so lively, you don't seem to have that sense of death anymore, you are such a strange man, but in this world, boy, do you have a grudge against the country? Once again, once the public opinion comes, life is really hard, even your fans will admit that life is hard. Then there is Xu Bao. Can I say that he is worthy of being the protagonist? It's really a disaster, you'll encounter all kinds of shit, and if you have the unlucky child to touch it, your life will be more than a little miserable. But in the future, all your hardships will be rewarded. I wish you love and companionship forever, without worries. Overall, the reading experience is good, except for the middle part. It would be better if the teacher could revise the text and change the rhythm of the middle part. However, the teacher is already very good. I will continue to work hard. As long as the teacher guides us to CP, writes the plot well, and does not do any miscellaneous things like backstabbing our readers, we are already better than many people. Other teachers can practice. Come on, dear teacher~

How much do you hate your buddy 💔

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There are so many things I want to say. After reading this, I really feel sorry for the two of them, especially Xiao Xu. How could a child have such a hard life? Rather than being a star, I hope he can do a career that he likes more. Being the chief in the original world is really touching. 😭 Because it is a full subscription, I want to say more, and there will be some spoilers later! The full text is bland when you read it. You can tell that the author is trying very hard to complete the story he wants to say. However, sometimes, some parts are not told very well. Some storylines can obviously be written with more conflict and arouse emotions, but it ends with a bland sentence, like only drinking soup without eating meat. There are also many unfluent and unreasonable things in some dialogues. On the other hand, if it can be revised, I believe it will be better. For example, the emotional line in the front changes too abruptly. I don't understand why I fell in love all of a sudden. It is not well written, but gives people a sense of chaos that I can't understand. In the middle period, Xiaoyan forces himself to be cold after falling in love, and then changes his attitude. The writing is also very abrupt, giving people a feeling of, ah, what the hell? It feels like I'm doing something (ah, I feel like I've been exhausted by Xiao Xu's slight sense of anger), and in some places, the connection is very stiff. For example, during the Cold War, it could be more conflicting. Xiao Xu is too indifferent no matter what. In the early stage, I was given an emotional doll with the anger stripped away. It shouldn't be like this. There are things about Xiao Xu that are more worth writing about. Correspondingly The same thing happened to Xiao Yan, and the arrangement of amnesia is unnecessary in my opinion... Because it has no impact on emotions and career, so it is very unnecessary to arrange this. Alas, it can be written as bloody, but unnecessary bloody writing will cause heart attack. The existence of the original protagonist Gong feels like it is unnecessary to background it. In fact, I think his scenes are okay No matter how hard you work, I think it will be very touching if Xiao Yan confronts him and teaches him a lesson. The venomous young master and the financial sponsor bow his head for love, and he is a pure and sensual male who is the former, chief and back star. He is a very touching character, but why does he seem a bit uncomfortable (in reflection) It is really miserable for Xiao Xu. He is always inexplicably hacked in his career, and he can be really hacked. Obviously Xiao Yan and He They are always there... I feel that this world is controlled by the audience, and capital is of no use, and Xiao Xu is inexplicably blamed for his original life (so powerless), and is forced to leave due to plot manipulation, and his amnesic face is scarred (hopefully healed). What's more, what I care about is that Xiao Xu's parents are actually still alive in the original world, and I'm quite cut off. I couldn't let go of this. I thought that Xiao Xu would wake up from the novel and return to the original world to meet Xiao Yan again (what a pity). It was really good emotionally, and I really liked the interaction. I still liked Xiao Xu and Xiao Yan after reading it, and the fact that the plot can control people is amazing. Sometimes it seems like you don't care, and the key points are all there. That's it. The arrangement is very special, because it seems that only one friend and Xiao Xu are being manipulated. The original work is really good at picking people. I think it can be improved on this point. Someone should find out about plot manipulation. Regarding Xiao Yan, I think it is too fragmented. Emotionally, words and actions are not right, but I believe you can do better 💪

Will this memory be restored later? Can any teacher explain it to me?

It's a nice ending. It's a very bland story, but I'm surprised that I finished it, because there are actually very few stories on the list that I can finish. I'm actually quite surprised why there are so few comments on this article. In fact, I can't sum up the feeling this article gave me from the beginning to the end. I can only say Little Couple 99

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After reading this novel, I felt that my life was a bit miserable, not only mine, but also that of several other children. I originally started reading this book before taking a nap, and then I read it in one sitting. When I wake up, I will write a review.