His Secret Guard

I found that the author has a problem. The connection between the previous and next chapters of each novel is not smooth enough. The first half of this article was written very well before the heroine got pregnant, making people want to keep following it, but then it started to fall apart in the middle and later stages. Your pen control skills still need to be improved. It's really like riding a roller coaster, with your level rising and falling.

This martial arts novel is so awesome. It has a very authentic cologne flavor and is full of childhood memories. When I read it, I was still wondering whether the emotional drama would be weak like traditional martial arts novels. I was pleasantly surprised to find that it is getting better and better, and the integration of emotional advancement and plot advancement is getting better and better. Young people in the world and old people in the world, each character reflects some of the involuntary push and pull between martial arts morality, sects, family and friendship, and there are a group of people struggling to do the right things between dilemmas. The overall story line is still "forging good causes and getting good results", which makes the whole article very "chivalrous". The characters are all very three-dimensional. After reading it, I am curious about a few blank character points. For example, what opportunity does Leader Duan have to change? Is it related to his predecessor (the old leader who adopted Leader Chi as his adopted son)? Are there some tragedies that are passed down from generation to generation? Another example is Hong Zhidou, what is his last resort? Why is he so obsessed with whether the descendants of the people he harmed will grow up well? Does he have any other stories? And Xiao Jia, did he get a new name, or is this name not that important anymore? In short, this is a good article that will make people read it again and again. The martial arts article is too cold. If my wife has another martial arts article, she will definitely support it! !

The writing is very good, the emotional and psychological development of the male and female protagonists is very good, and the image of the female protagonist is also very three-dimensional. Haha, I will go and catch up with the author's other book. It is also very good. I have been waiting for it [Qingxin] [Panda Head] [Orange Candy].

The equivalent of reading it in one day [Come on] is so beautiful! ! ! The plot is very compact. I really like [Three Flower Cat Head]

It's over, I'm so sad

I took half a day off to read the second half in one go. It's heart-wrenching to write.

It's been three weeks~ Shuhuang is currently reading the previous book [Orange Candy] and I've finished it

I like the heroine who writes in a big way

[Purple Sugar]kswl Why is it so beautiful! ! ! ! !

My long comment is stuck, ahhhhhh, I'm so annoyed that I'm too lazy to type anymore. It looks good and tastes good. Just take this bite.

After three brushes, it still looks good! I feel like the overall rhythm is better after I finished revising the text.

I hope they can live happily in that world

It's been a long time since I came back to watch [Three-Flowered Cat Head][Three-Flowered Cat Head]

"He was so upset that he almost didn't drink..." This is a big bug for the author~

It's good to watch, the plot is relatively compact, and I like some settings (such as Qing's return to her hometown in panic). However, the emotions in some parts are too complicated and tactful, making me dizzy while watching it (of course, it may also be because I stayed up all night to read the novel and I was dizzy)

Can you also change the name of the male protagonist? It won't be Ningwang Ningwang [Chigua]

See if I've booked everything