The Vampire's Diary

I wrote a lot before, but I deleted them by mistake x Now I have time to write my previous long review, and I'd like to give it a thumbs up by the way. In fact, these have been written in the final score, but the final score has a word limit, so I will write a longer one here. Let's talk about the main text first. The rhythm at the beginning is very good. Whether it is the development of the emotional line or the plot line revealing the story of De and Xie, the viewing experience is very good until the end. Unfortunately, at the end, there is a feeling that the story has not been told and the dust has not been settled. For example, Luther's friends (because the friends are related to Luther's life experience, I classified it as a plot line), I don't know if the author is trying to avoid taking the spotlight. The story of the friends and the devil is not enough. It feels that it has been told, but it also feels that it is not finished, and Luther's story is not fully presented. Later in the extra chapter, some of the young lovers' plans are explained. I like the fact that Xie Xiang has always been a human being. These make up for the completeness of the story. But at the same time, there is no obvious foreshadowing of "Xie wants to remain a human being" in the text. It does not mean that Xie wants to express clearly "I prefer to be a human being (?)", But it is reflected in some very small details. Perhaps due to space limitations, I did not clearly see Xie's choice, I could only vaguely feel it. Sorry, I can't give you an example of this as a short story, but I have seen a long story. In this article, there is a supporting character who is the only human in the protagonist group. As a human, she has human pride and human wisdom. When the powerful beings in the protagonist group are at a loss, it is she who helps them as a human. Although humans are weak, humans have their own wisdom, their own persistence, and their wisdom and courage. Let's talk about the extra part. It was mainly the supporting character that impressed me. This is my purely subjective rating. Xiao Xie is so pitiful. Why does life treat him like this? As for the theory of lifespan and the eternal sword, I think this is more OE, the main text and the extra chapter OE. I don't believe in the theory of reincarnation in this world view, because I haven't talked about it before. What if this world only has vampires and demons, and there is no six paths of reincarnation in the underworld x Finally, I am a lover of both long and short stories, and both types of lengths particularly test the author's abilities. This is the author's second book and it's already great! I have seen very few short stories with complete stories. The most powerful authors really have the ability to convey information in every word, giving full play to the short story's "short and concise" advantage, so that I can discover new things every time I read it, and I have a sense of surprise like "It turns out he really loves him so much/He actually did so much/I didn't expect you to be such a person! I didn't find it when I read it!" Due to space limitations, the best way to convey emotion in a short story is through the character's behavior pattern. The character does not need to say "I love you", but the character must embody love in his behavior. It can be a silent gaze, a long-term commitment, or casual protection. It is so obscure, and it is our unique beauty of implicitness and blank space. Unlike long-term battles (the kind that start with a million dollars), it is really not easy for short stories to show so much content in such a limited space. Really enjoyed this! It hit my xp perfectly! ! ! Outside of man is God! ! ! The author really has potential! You, please add it to my collection (Ba Zongyin) (whispering bb: I've also read the newly written book about the deceased husband. It's really a qualitative leap. Whether it's the ending or the extras, there are no problems with this book! I love you!)

So Victor and the Devil are a couple, and Gong is a part of their relationship? So miserable

Your Chinese listening skills are pretty good

I want to see the extra story about Victor and the Devil [poor] [poor] begging for food, mommy [cat's paw] [cat's paw] [joined hands]

It is really a very good article. The writing style is relatively concise and vivid, the plot line is smooth and gentle, and the emotional line is like a glass of fruit wine, sweet and refreshing, and it is told eloquently. It's a refreshing find that I've recently found among a bunch of highly homogenized novels. Although the character design is a common blood clan attacking human beings, the story is also very brilliant, and the writing is better than other novels of the same type. Come on, madam!

I really like this subtle feeling of being separated from another world.

I feel like I can also write about the daily life of a young couple and the side story [Hold the Thigh] The Little Couple for a Long Time [Cat's Claw]

I mentioned earlier that vampires have chains on their feet, so how do you solve the problem of wearing clothes now?

Has shelling become a vampire?

So pretty! ! I feel like I have dug up a treasure [poor] [poor] [poor]