The Interstellar Top Tactician [Mecha]

This is the first time I have written a comment after reading the article for so many years. For no other reason than I got on the wrong CP and it really broke my defense! ! ! ! ! ! [Cracked][Cracked][Cracked][Cracked][Cracked][Heartbroken][Heartbroken][Heartbroken]

Another all-nighter! I have to say that although the male protagonist and second male lead are average in their portrayal. But the heroine is really well portrayed and very charming. Strong yet gentle, majestic yet compassionate. It is a masterpiece.

This interstellar novel is well written, and the career line and rhythm are well grasped. The several crossings of the gentle beach should be imitated from the four crossings of Chishui. It includes the three-three system and the standard strategic interspersion of the poor and the firepower coverage of the rich. The biggest boss in the later stage is The enemy camp has a different flavor from other late-stage bosses. I think this kind of interstellar mecha is written in a group-oriented style, and the personal style is okay. The female protagonist is indeed very enjoyable to write. The only problem is the common problem of interstellar mecha writing, the emotional line. But I think it's acceptable. Anyway, I don't usually care much about it, but the emotional line is indeed relatively strong. In fact, I prefer childhood sweethearts in any novel I read, and I like the pretty boy type hahaha, so it's a pity that Xiaobai didn't become the male protagonist, but it's also fun to guess the male protagonist when reading mecha novels. Xiao Bai said frankly that he did not take the initiative of Lin in the early stage, and later felt that he had a tendency to be depressed. In fact, he was very internally consumed, with a mixture of family and love. For the heroine, she was very careless and sometimes could not take care of Xiao Bai's inner activities. What she needed was to move forward indomitably. Lin's character was also revealed later, and he was more compatible with the heroine. There's nothing wrong with it. The writing is pretty good.

Woohoo, my little white It doesn't matter As long as I pretend not to know that Lin Biao exists That little guy will always have a chance

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha indeed those who are brave enough to take action enjoy love first

Tianxiang defeated Zhuma [burst crying] [burst crying] Although, I really want Xiaobai and the others to be together

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Whether heressings.

? ? ? Isn't it true that Xiaobai has a sister-brother relationship? Wrong payment, damn it! It's actually love

I stayed up late to read it. The tactical description is really awesome! The emotional line was so tangled that I wanted to give up the story for a while, but in the end I persisted because the tactics were so exciting. Although I kept complaining about the emotional line and Xiaobai in the middle, I suddenly understood the author's good intentions at the end. Rather than writing about emotional lines, it is better to use emotional lines to write about the impact of war on people's lives. Xiaobai wants to be a normal person! He wanted to be optimistic and cheerful with Yang Dong, but the life in the war zone as a child had a great shadow on him, and his unfortunate childhood took a lifetime to heal. Even though he was later adopted and grew up to become a very powerful person, he still could not get out of the shadow of the war and was destined to miss Yang Dong. Lin Biao is right to say that one person cannot treat another person as a life-saving straw. This is unfair to the other person. If there was no war and he and Yang Dong lived in a peaceful area, they would definitely be together naturally. It was described in the article that Yang Dong actually liked him. But the war destroyed everything, preventing this relationship from blossoming, and making Xiaobai spend his life in self-healing. It feels like the author cares about the children in the war zone. Many scenes describe the pain of these children. The others are group portraits, and Xiaobai is a typical individual. But I still want to say that the emotional line is so cruel! ! ! It's not anyone's fault, we are all good people, it's the war's fault!

I read it in one go, so happy Wuhu