[A companion work with the same protagonist is on the wishlist: *The Grassroots Heavenly Court Civil Servant’s Body Camera*. A story about Beiming working overtime to become a grassroots City God and joining forces with grassroots Heavenly Court officials to build a happy, prosperous life. Historical figures appear in modern life.]
[This book was rushed to a conclusion because I wasn’t in a good state, so I don’t recommend reading it.]
Beiming gets bound to a Villain System and learns from it that he is one of the villain bosses the destined protagonist of the game *The Immortal Realm* is meant to fight.
And that so-called chosen protagonist, the “Child of Destiny”… is actually the vocational-school nephew who just showed up at his junior sister’s house.
Beiming is utterly shocked and insists this can’t be right.
Villain System T44: What do you mean, “can’t be right”? Get to work, already! Or I’ll let the plot show you what real coercion looks like!
Beiming: Hah. There’s no way I’m going to work. I’d rather die.
Then Beiming discovers that whatever he does, the people around him misunderstand him.
Even greeting an old classmate gets mistaken for trying to kill them.
He rushes to the scene the moment he realizes his junior sister is in trouble, and even then, her nephew, Su Hang, is convinced he’s the murderer of his mother.
Beiming: ...Cut it out with the divine powers! Fine, I’ll work hard, okay?!
So, to complete his villain missions and move the plot along, Beiming begins his career as the God of Drama.
But... he absolutely refuses to just give in.
Beiming: What kind of crappy job is this? Do they even offer benefits? And you expect me to work?
To mess with his enemies, he turns around and suggests that the Villain System release a turn-based RPG in the real world, with a main quest that matches the actual events one-to-one.
Everyone in the Five Turbid Realms knows that the “Ghost Daoist” Beiming, one of the Ten Earthly Immortals, is a monster who stops at nothing. After killing his junior sister, he even hunts down his nephew Su Hang, the “Child of Destiny.” It’s downright reprehensible!
Then one day, during a live broadcast of a court assembly, viewers notice something: Wait, isn’t that the beast-silver mask beside Beiming the one used by Taotie, the ghost expert who saved countless people in real-life ghost domains through public education, to conceal their true face?!
On top of that, every plot point in the wildly popular card-drawing text game *The Immortal Realm* has recently been matching up with reality!
The forum users shudder, nearly driven to madness:
[Holy crap! No way! How can the expert Taotie, who promoted *The Complete Guide to Ghosts and Monsters* and helped countless people survive in ghost domains, be that lunatic Beiming?!]
[Wait! Isn’t the protagonist’s uncle in *The Immortal Realm* treated the same way?! He also fought his former classmates until they were bloody because they were on opposite sides... Holy crap, this can’t be right! It all matches up!]
As the truth in the game unfolds, the viewers discover that not only is Beiming the expert Taotie, who promoted knowledge about ghosts and monsters, he is also Taowu, the mysterious unknown hero who single-handedly slew ten million ghosts in an S-rank ghost domain to save an entire city; Hundun, who silently helped Su Hang fight “Beiming”; and Qiongqi, the beloved of the founding masters of every sect, who once wreaked havoc at the ancestral sects’ sacred site, the Hall of Eternal Life... They’re all him!
The leading talents of the various sects in the Domain-Breaking Alliance can’t help but shed tears:
[So Senior Beiming has been fighting us all along with the attitude of a mentor training his juniors?]
[Can’t even criticize him. He really is on the level of a founding patriarch...]
[I always wondered how the Judge, one of the Ten Earthly Immortals, could chase a high schooler for so long without catching him. Turns out he was holding back so much, he could’ve filled a whole galaxy!]
[Waaah, Senior Beiming really does have lofty ambitions. All this time, he’s been enduring humiliation and biding his time to change a fate that’s already been set. It must have been so hard! Waaah! And we nearly surrounded him and killed him...]
[Waaah, if it weren’t for *The Immortal Realm* giving me a chance to search for clues, I’d never have known that so many details had already hinted at Senior’s righteousness.]
[I really never expected... Beiming to be the shared beloved of all Ten Earthly Immortals...]
[Looking back at our fights with Senior, there are traces of him holding back everywhere. Tsk... How did we not see it at the time?]
Beiming: Hah, of course it’s because my acting is just that good!
Amid the chaos, Su Hang is bewildered: Can someone tell him why the comrade who sacrificed their life to save him was actually his greatest enemy?!
Worst of all, that person is his uncle! If his uncle was acting this whole time, then he’s way too good at it!
The founding masters of the other sects, Beiming’s old classmates: “...Nephew, there’s something you don’t know. Back when your uncle was in school, he had a nickname...”
Su Hang: “What?”
The founding masters of the other sects: “Drama Queen. Short for ‘dramatic lunatic.’”
The male lead is scheming, dark-hearted, and sharp-tongued, with a fondness for snide remarks and sarcastic jabs. As usual, there’ll be plenty of injuries and frailty. He seems like a twisted, gloomy beloved with arrows sticking out of him, lying flat and drifting through life, but he’s actually a devoted, career-minded workaholic, a true beloved with arrows sticking out of him. His real identity is connected to *The Fishing-Tackle General*, so consider this a little cameo Easter egg.
A dark, wandering tale set in a Chinese-inspired fantasy world where the Five Turbid Ages have fallen into chaos and the immortals are gone, while “ferocious beasts” protect the world. Chinese horror / supernatural resurgence / Chinese-style Cthulhu / card-drawing plot and roguelike text game / the forum includes shipping, but it makes up a very small part, and most pairings are platonic.
Theme: The road beneath Beiming Mountain, past and present, is covered in yellow dust that has outlasted heroes. Life’s greatest sorrow is that the river keeps flowing east.
Beimang: Super dismantling!
Other earthly and heavenly beings: super assembly!
It's so fast. I feel that this book is progressing too fast. Many things are not written in detail and are all written in one stroke. Many of the jokes in the copy are not written. Are you planning to write them as extras? Being in a hurry gives Yuga the feeling of being a colleague
Mom, after reading it now, I actually feel the same as the new plot of a certain game. It's a little weird and difficult, and it stops abruptly. I don't know what to say... [Lemon] I hope the next one will be normal.
After reading it, I will talk about the bugs I found. I hope the teacher can use them when revising the article.
1. Taotie's vest only appears once, and there are plot bugs. It is known that the protagonist and Xuantong wrote the complete record of ghosts and monsters, so why are many people who started describing it clearly seen the complete list of ghosts and monsters narrated by Taotie, but Xuantong seems to have no idea at all. After all, this book is very old. It was destroyed before, but I can still remember it now, and apart from the Earth Immortal, the young man probably doesn't have this kind of existence anymore, or maybe even Xuantong doesn't know about it. His partners should also know that they wrote it, but in the later and mid-term, the Taotie Vest is completely invisible, and it doesn't have much effect.
2. In the same way, Chaos disappeared completely after the mid-term. Judging from the original plot, Chaos should have died to save Su Hang, but in fact, he completely disappeared after that, and everyone seemed to be in no hurry.
3. Yi Yi Qiongqi could have talked about this, for example, what disputes would he have with the Celestial Dynasty regarding the first "man of destiny"? After he stepped into the ghost gate, what happened to the Heavenly Immortal Dynasty and was recognized as a "man of destiny"? He knew the attitude of the Tianxian Dynasty towards the Tianming people. Did he encounter it there?
4. The two most important bugs:
(1) In the early stage, the Earth Immortal's understanding of Beimang was that he had entered the ghost realm and disappeared for hundreds of years. Why did it suddenly change to entering the gate in the later period? The key is that the Earth Immortal did not watch the movie at all, and the change was very abrupt.
(2). There is no description of what happened after entering the gate. This point is completely blank.
5. In the copywriting, Taozhu's fight against heaven-level ghosts and gods to save a city and being stripped of his waistcoat are not reflected at all.
6. Suspected talent bug:
(1). The white thing was given to the underworld from the sky, and the pomegranate was given to the sea pomegranate after the red thing. So why can the scene of killing ghosts and monsters be used? This is very strange (and the performance is that he has seen Beimang use it before, but this can at least explain that there is a red thing, but what is going on now?
(2). In the known ending, Bai Shi returned to the underworld to be repaired, and Hong Shihai Pomegranate did not show up and was returned. So I would like to ask: How come the protagonist has talents after he is resurrected? Is it given by the World Administration after upgrading?
PS: I have no ill intentions towards the teacher, and I like the teacher's settings very much. I propose these only as a reference for future revisions. I hope it can be of some help🥹
It turns out to be Xijun! It's so unlikeable! What happened? You have become this character. Baby, there was such a big difference between you and the general back then! [Crack][crack][crack]
When I was guessing, I would rather guess the original author of that world than dare to guess that you are Xijun [Clown]
I didn't expect Xijun's personality to change so much in this novel [dog head]
Ahaha, I finally finished reading it after finding some free time. I really like that all the series are set in the same world view. It gives me a sense of surprise that everything is connected together, and a sense of peace of mind that I can see familiar people in strange places from time to time. But the teacher must have discovered the problem himself. The progress of these recent books has been too fast. Many details that can be written have not been written, and it feels a bit rushed. To be fair, I think the teacher should slow down. On the one hand, it can make the plot flow more smoothly, and on the other hand, it can also organize his own thoughts. Teacher, you are very good at writing about people, and the people you write about are particularly poignant to me, but the foundation of writing about people must be supported by enough specific examples and descriptions. I hope the teacher can adjust the rhythm. I want to write a lot but don't have enough time and brain. It is really annoying, but the quality must also be ensured. I hope the teacher can bring more good-looking works! [Orange heart][Orange heart][Orange heart]
It's too rushed. Like the previous books, the plot is very good, the spiritual core is super good, and the characters are super cute, but the details are not enough and the progress is too fast. It would be better to stretch it two or three times and have more copies.
Speaking of which, Linyue is also the second Lord of Taishan Prefecture in charge of the underworld [laughing and crying]
Although Xijun is not as obvious anymore, Yuga is still the fun-loving person as always [dog head]
Beimang: Super dismantling! Other earthly and heavenly beings: super assembly!
It's so fast. I feel that this book is progressing too fast. Many things are not written in detail and are all written in one stroke. Many of the jokes in the copy are not written. Are you planning to write them as extras? Being in a hurry gives Yuga the feeling of being a colleague
Mom, after reading it now, I actually feel the same as the new plot of a certain game. It's a little weird and difficult, and it stops abruptly. I don't know what to say... [Lemon] I hope the next one will be normal.
After reading it, I will talk about the bugs I found. I hope the teacher can use them when revising the article. 1. Taotie's vest only appears once, and there are plot bugs. It is known that the protagonist and Xuantong wrote the complete record of ghosts and monsters, so why are many people who started describing it clearly seen the complete list of ghosts and monsters narrated by Taotie, but Xuantong seems to have no idea at all. After all, this book is very old. It was destroyed before, but I can still remember it now, and apart from the Earth Immortal, the young man probably doesn't have this kind of existence anymore, or maybe even Xuantong doesn't know about it. His partners should also know that they wrote it, but in the later and mid-term, the Taotie Vest is completely invisible, and it doesn't have much effect. 2. In the same way, Chaos disappeared completely after the mid-term. Judging from the original plot, Chaos should have died to save Su Hang, but in fact, he completely disappeared after that, and everyone seemed to be in no hurry. 3. Yi Yi Qiongqi could have talked about this, for example, what disputes would he have with the Celestial Dynasty regarding the first "man of destiny"? After he stepped into the ghost gate, what happened to the Heavenly Immortal Dynasty and was recognized as a "man of destiny"? He knew the attitude of the Tianxian Dynasty towards the Tianming people. Did he encounter it there? 4. The two most important bugs: (1) In the early stage, the Earth Immortal's understanding of Beimang was that he had entered the ghost realm and disappeared for hundreds of years. Why did it suddenly change to entering the gate in the later period? The key is that the Earth Immortal did not watch the movie at all, and the change was very abrupt. (2). There is no description of what happened after entering the gate. This point is completely blank. 5. In the copywriting, Taozhu's fight against heaven-level ghosts and gods to save a city and being stripped of his waistcoat are not reflected at all. 6. Suspected talent bug: (1). The white thing was given to the underworld from the sky, and the pomegranate was given to the sea pomegranate after the red thing. So why can the scene of killing ghosts and monsters be used? This is very strange (and the performance is that he has seen Beimang use it before, but this can at least explain that there is a red thing, but what is going on now? (2). In the known ending, Bai Shi returned to the underworld to be repaired, and Hong Shihai Pomegranate did not show up and was returned. So I would like to ask: How come the protagonist has talents after he is resurrected? Is it given by the World Administration after upgrading? PS: I have no ill intentions towards the teacher, and I like the teacher's settings very much. I propose these only as a reference for future revisions. I hope it can be of some help🥹
It turns out to be Xijun! It's so unlikeable! What happened? You have become this character. Baby, there was such a big difference between you and the general back then! [Crack][crack][crack] When I was guessing, I would rather guess the original author of that world than dare to guess that you are Xijun [Clown]
I didn't expect Xijun's personality to change so much in this novel [dog head]
Ahaha, I finally finished reading it after finding some free time. I really like that all the series are set in the same world view. It gives me a sense of surprise that everything is connected together, and a sense of peace of mind that I can see familiar people in strange places from time to time. But the teacher must have discovered the problem himself. The progress of these recent books has been too fast. Many details that can be written have not been written, and it feels a bit rushed. To be fair, I think the teacher should slow down. On the one hand, it can make the plot flow more smoothly, and on the other hand, it can also organize his own thoughts. Teacher, you are very good at writing about people, and the people you write about are particularly poignant to me, but the foundation of writing about people must be supported by enough specific examples and descriptions. I hope the teacher can adjust the rhythm. I want to write a lot but don't have enough time and brain. It is really annoying, but the quality must also be ensured. I hope the teacher can bring more good-looking works! [Orange heart][Orange heart][Orange heart]
It's too rushed. Like the previous books, the plot is very good, the spiritual core is super good, and the characters are super cute, but the details are not enough and the progress is too fast. It would be better to stretch it two or three times and have more copies.
Speaking of which, Linyue is also the second Lord of Taishan Prefecture in charge of the underworld [laughing and crying]
Although Xijun is not as obvious anymore, Yuga is still the fun-loving person as always [dog head]