[Pokémon Fanfiction] The Story of Agate's Growth

After waiting for several years, can QWQ still wait for the second part?

I am particularly looking forward to the plot of the next part, and I especially want to see the scene when Xiao Agate and Xiao Yin meet!

I am particularly looking forward to the plot of the next part, and I especially want to see the scene when Xiao Agate and Xiao Yin meet!

I am particularly looking forward to the plot of the next part, and I especially want to see the scene when Xiao Agate and Xiao Yin meet!

I am particularly looking forward to the plot of the next part, and I especially want to see the scene when Xiao Agate and Xiao Yin meet.

A long review dedicated to my dear author and [Agate] (this is the point!). Now, this is my first long review in my life. I don't know what to write, so I will just recall it one by one according to what I think in my heart. Not convinced? Come and fight! Go ahead, author] I remember clearly that before reading "Onyx", I was shocked by the numbers in each chapter, and I was thinking that the author must be a diligent little bee! But after reading the comments... It turns out that the author is a [firm] [perseverant] person. Although it took so long, he still finished the article~ End! Fruit! After I finish reading this article! It turns out there is a second part!?? It's really [hard] [hard] for the author! I escaped the first ten years of Agate, but I seem to... Cannot escape the second ten years! QAQ also has Xiaoliang's article. Dear author, how long will it take you to finish it?! [Okay, I admit that you were already very fast with that article! But, I'm just greedy (turns head)] As I write this, I feel that I am actually here to urge the article←. ← Okay, back to the topic. It was obvious that the introduction of Agate was serious at first, but why did it turn into resentment later? Author, you can't be more handsome than three seconds! So the onyx in your painting is only three seconds more handsome than Xiaoliang! Hey, fortunately the male protagonist is not a guy who is no more handsome than three seconds [Can I say that I really want to see A Yin look more handsome than three seconds] Okay, I admit it. From the beginning, I was attracted by Itaki's father's transformation from the imposing owner to the gentle father. Long live Itaki-sama But what attracts me the most is the kind of - well, the relationship between Agate and Duoduo! The meeting of two stupid and cute guys, hey, it's so fun to use their strength to prove who is suitable to be the boss. In the end, it wasn't because of Banmu's father's eyes that he was suppressed. Agate, who laughs at fifty steps and laughs at a hundred steps, is still so cute! ≧ω≦ I have a big question!! How did Duoduo know where Mother Agate was?! Didn't he just come to Agate's house? Also, if you look at the "strategic plan" that Agate and Duoduo talked about, you can predict that Agate will be very good at the debate with Shun later! At such a young age, I learned to tell lies with my eyes open →_→ By the way, why is Agate's ability called "The Power of Viridian, right?" It's been so long that I kind of forgot] Can't you tell Itaki's father? It means I don't have a high IQ and I still don't understand it. I've been training intensively, oh~ the persistence of a child is so cute≧ω≦ He shouted that he was tired, but he still didn't give up~ He didn't mean it~ Also! Is it more appropriate to start with trust when handing your back to the other person? [Actually, I'm not sure either←_←] I just feel that cooperation is just about completing a certain task together, and then we go our separate ways after completing the task. Phew~ Duoduo and Didi were competing for favor, and Duoduo said: "He just can't stand the way that guy smiles!" ], But Didi said [I am a good boy∩?∩ Come and bite me]. Duoduo's straight rush is really pitiful, and Didi's natural black color -_- is really scary. Ah Duoduo's inner desire to become stronger and become the backing of Agate's sword is so touching! It is because of Duoduo's past sadness and present determination that I became a super supporter of him being the first elf of Agate! Duoduo's position is unshakable!! Not even Didi and Feifei!! [Hey, unless there will be an elf I like more in the second part! (Guilty×w×)I feel sorry for Duoduo_:(?□`‖ ∠):_ Seeing Agate and Duoduo holding each other and crying, Didi said, "Hey, why are you crying?" Didn't you look angry just now? ], Watari said [Hey, he also said that he has grown up and it's okay to cry like this╯^╰] Facing Du's invitation to fight, Manao said, "No, right?" Don't be so stingy, haven't I just done a lot of pranks on you~ Duan thought to himself, huh, you want to use me as a whetstone? You are miserable Agate! He secretly diverted Agate's attention!! Du, you are so... So talented!! Regarding Mo Haima, Didi said: "Don't look at me, I usually smile and I'm easy to bully. Do you want to attack me?" I'll bite you to death!! Speaking of which, with Xiao Huang's appearance, is it because Xiao Huang is about the same size as her that she likes her, or is it because Xiao Huang is so cute that she likes her? Readers said, Wow~ I discovered another great characteristic of the protagonist: he can't run away when big things happen!! Fortunately, Xiaoliang did not inherit this characteristic! Another feature is that you can only look handsome for three seconds! _:(?□`∠):_ It's school! This part is super fun! Being late on the first day, Manao said, if he had known that the teacher was so easy to deal with, he would not have run so fast! The teacher said, "It's a beautiful idea, let me give you more hatred points!" I was late on the first day [especially since it was even later than Agate! ] Ah Lu said calmly. Agate said, Damn, teacher, please stop making trouble! QAQ Also, when Onyuki knew that A Lu was the grandson of Dr. Omu, he slapped the table and stood up, which seemed like an act of scolding and quarreling. Seeing Alu's arrogant behavior of dragging him to the sky, Agate said, this person has an appetite for me! Seeing Alu and Manao deserting in private, the teacher said, do you think I am blind?!! Even if it's a desertion, the range of movements is still so large! Seeing Alu making a date with Onyx in front of her, the teacher said, is it really okay for two guys who are late for school to have a fight? Is it common these days for good students to be late for appointments? Alu and Manao, who felt that they had found an organization, said that good gay friends share blessings and hardships! Let's go train together! So! Agate, don't be lazy just because your dad favors you!! ——A Lu said that he agreed to share the blessings and hardships together?!! Readers said, that's good for you ~ Look at you, at first, you were too dissatisfied with the dirty floor and refused to sit down [Agate, don't snicker! You too! ] Now, I dropped my bamboo sword and sat on the ground! This is an improvement of the mind!! [Agate: No, that's just the young master's temper. When Ah Lu said, "Hey, I'm leaving. I can't bear to leave my good friend. How can I break up with him?" ], Only Agate would you worry about making your father angry and be punished! Now Alu and Agate have grown up, so being late for work and all that is a trivial matter! Skipping class early in the morning, we are so handsome!! Ah, what to do? The more I recall, the more I like Ahlu. Why? Strongly requesting that Alu be given more roles in the second part!! [Shun said, as the male lead, my role is so small, forget about Alu, who is not even the second male lead! The author said, ah, just kidding, it's not clear how long the second part will be released, what kind of scenes will be added So, author, how long will it take for you to release the second part?!! [Okay, I'm really not here to rush you. Look at my pure eyes! Found it again! The third major characteristic of the protagonist is the atmosphere destroyer! Agate has it, and so does Xiaoliang! Personally, I think Xiaoliang is more powerful! [Ah hey, what's so awesome about this! Congratulations! The most historic meeting of the hero and heroine! Although the heroine is in such a state of embarrassment that she wants to die_:(?□`‖ ∠):_ Agate, a little expert in committing suicide, said that the degree of committing suicide this year is higher than in the past combined!! How could it be broken? She went directly to another world! Readers expressed their anticipation for the meeting between Onyx and the TV Rockets trio [you will know this is impossible if you read this author! Will Agate say, hey, it's all my fault that I didn't listen to mommy and watch daddy carefully, and actually accepted a subordinate like this who is more capable of seeking death than her?!! Shun said, "Hey, it's so embarrassing for you to be embarrassed as soon as you show up." Agate said that it was okay, she was embarrassed every day and was more embarrassing than you, one ugly was worth the other. What do you think of Xiao Shun who saved you in Onyx's most critical moment? "Promise me with my body!!" Agate said she was interrupted by the reader before she could say anything urgently! By the way, after reviewing the article again, I discovered that the second male lead is Watari!! [What logic! Look, in the extra chapter, pooh~ there is the first complete sentence spoken by Agate! It's about crossing! (Haha, although the content is not very good, we just want the results, right_:(?□`‖ ∠):_) Also, why does Watari in the extra story look so much like N? ×_×Is this my imagination? Ah, the weather is so hot that it burns my brain! Ah, Xiao Huang in the extra chapter, if you don't read the previous content, just read this sentence, "They all thought Xiao Huang knew nothing, but in fact she knew everything." Does anyone feel that Xiao Huang is like a child who is having trouble? [Don't tell me you don't think so! And that "Brother Du is gone..." Hahaha, doesn't it feel like saying that Du is dead? Ah, just skip those experiments and don't comment! Skip directly to when you're with Shun! What? Any objection? Come and fight! Go ahead, author! Agate means that she is no ordinary child! [That's right, Agate is a master at seeking death! So Mommy Mom, don't worry! Regarding not forgiving Brandt, Agate said that she was just venting her anger! How? Who told him to be at this critical moment? ╯?╰Brent's dad is so pitiful. So warm! Agate is the child of Mom and Dad, Ah Yin's sister! [It is strongly recommended that the author add "Duoduo and Didi's partner"!! It means that Vincent doesn't have to worry about Agate being picked up by the villain organization and possibly being taught something wrong! Because Agate's own father is the boss of the biggest villain organization!! Get√! I found that Agate became a talkative person when she was shy! Although it seems that Xiaoliang does not have this characteristic. Hey, Itaki's father is so pitiful. His only daughter went to a parallel world to fall in love [x], and his only son was abducted by Guliu. I wonder if he will recognize him when he grows up. Just look at Ah Yin on Xiaoliang's side and you will know that he will definitely not recognize it!! Author, you are so awesome! QAQ Huh? Even if Brandt doesn't agree with Momoe, will he still agree? Is that so? ——"Brent! If you don't agree, don't even think about entering the room this month!" [Look at my innocent eyes∩?∩] Mom Baihui, how can you comment so much on agate? What does it mean to be pretty cute! It's super cute, okay?!! After all, she is the biological sister of the handsome Ah Yin [Ah hey!! Yes! Agate is red hair and eyes! Shun has green hair and green eyes! They are so worthy!! Brandt's father and Baihui's mother don't have to worry about property inheritance at all!! Banmu's father is also very rich!! We quarreled as soon as we came here, and there will be no shortage of big and small quarrels in the future. Hey, Onyx and Shun Na, can you still get along well with each other? Whew, Agate was so frightened that she cried [x] Banmu's father, come and help Agate fight it back, even if the author says that everything is Agate seeking death! Banmu's dad loves to come! ——By the way, Shun, do you really not want to be the male protagonist? X It's campus life again! As expected, I still prefer Helu's campus life! Being late, skipping classes, etc.! I've wanted to do this for a long time!!! It's the opposite! How dare the elf hit his master?!! Ibrahimovic, you are really... Well done! The little devil agate finally has an elf in charge!! Kanbanmu's father is used to it!! When Shun said that they were family members, Onyx was secretly collecting information on how to get home. Are you feeling guilty, Onyx? ^V^ ~,! Shun, do you dare to say that you didn't like agate at that time? If you didn't like it, you wouldn't help Agate fight the vines. You should be watching the show from the side! X Hey hey hey! Something must be said here! This is fate!! In that article, forget about bullying Ah Yin. After all, Ah Yin and Banmu's father are still having trouble. [Ah, hey] Here, Lance, you actually dare to kidnap your boss's daughter!! Be careful, Agate will give you some shoes when she goes back!!! Haha, young man, I see that you have a strange skeleton. May I ask if you have a younger brother named A Lu? Haha, A Lu said that he is an only child! And even if he had an older brother, his older brother wouldn't be like this! Evolve in crisis! Feifei, you have enough! Why are you so warm? ≧ω≦ The combination of naughty kids and naughty kids! Riolu is so handsome!! The long nose leaves are so cute! How good or bad the bell rings! Wind chimes are silly and sweet! Riolu is so cute! Secretly helping Agate pick tree fruits and roast them, he still pretended to be so fierce. And that sentence is so lax, it feels like a deputy minister~ The princess hug is so loving! [I feel like Duoduo has been thrown into some corner by me←_←I can't help it, Riolu is so handsome╯^╰] So handsome!! Lucario's princess hug (☆_☆) No, no, no, let me show off my infatuation, it's so handsome!! Ah, will Lucario appear in the second part? Even if you are a foreign aid, that's fine! Strongly request Lucario to appear!! Author, you really can't be more handsome than three seconds!! When you saw Mana Fei throwing Lucario's mother's crystal into the water, Agate's naughty speech, couldn't you be more handsome?!! What a solemn atmosphere!! And about that theory of time, if you tell Agate, Lucario will definitely beat you up!! They may meet again, or they may not meet again. Ahhhh! The article only talks about Lucario and Onyx! Can I interpret this as a hint that Lucario will appear in the second part? Author, you are an atmosphere destroyer!!! Lucario finally cried and complained, you actually made the Hippo King have an avalanche?!! Believe it or not, I scold you QAQ In fact, I think, given Agate's temperament, she shouldn't say goodbye softly. You should shout out!! Also, I only said goodbye to Lucario, and completely ignored the Hippo King. To be honest, author, did you plan to pass Shun at the end of writing? I support you! (☆_☆) And the last one! Let me ask one last question!! Agate, did you ever think about Shun when you went back? Definitely not, definitely not! ╯^╰Shun is so pitiful. Okay, this is the end of the long review. If it is not well written, there must be many problems, right? If you, the author, have any dissatisfaction, feel free to mention it! I won't change it anyway╯^╰Once the long review is posted, the manufacturer will not be responsible.

Ibrahimovic: ... Look, I forgive you because it can still be treated!

I was about two and a half years old when I first started watching Pokemon. I was two and a half years old, and the 21st century had not yet arrived at that time. It's still the tail end of the 20th century. It's a square little TV with a small screen and impressive picture quality. But at that time, watching TV was definitely the most colorful entertainment for a child who was ignorant and had a blank slate for the world. At that time, the most attractive thing on TV for me was the children's channel of ccxv, followed by the on-demand channel. Where can there be such a thing as a video-on-demand station in today's set-top box? At that time, for children, the on-demand station was a treasure with infinite possibilities, full of unknowns and surprises. You never knew what the next on-demand station would be. You watch the focus on the TV flick back and forth between different options without any control from your tiny wishes and will. You will always pray crazily in your heart that the unknown person can request what you want to watch. The countdown in the lower right corner of the screen is about to end, but the person who chose it hasn't decided yet what to watch. Why couldn't he just be simpler? I want to see this, this, this, and that! ... Well, this is okay too! Why didn't that person just be more honest? Like what? Chibi Maruko-chan, Ultraman Tiga, Sailor Moon, Tom and Jerry, Teletubbies, Detective Conan, Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck, Bugs Bunny... Pokemon? Encountering it is a treasure and a blessing. It is a treasure of mine that deserves patient care, careful dusting, and letting its unique light shine brightly. It is the inner pure land. What kind of world can be filled with so many desirable things? Freedom, passion, perseverance, dreams, innocence, bonds, friendship, and unreserved trust - it represents my childhood. Children are the most innocent, their hearts are unfettered and pure. They can always look at the world with the most straightforward eyes and express their inner feelings and desires without any pressure or scruples. However, in the process of growing up, it was dyed with other colors, and both thoughts and behaviors were shackles by layers of reality. I often feel like I was really stupid when I was a kid. He didn't understand anything, and he made a lot of jokes about human relations and sophistication that parents can still laugh at. But who doesn't say that that time is the most carefree? I long for that kind of world—I have longed for it since the first time I encountered it. Childhood is like living in a dream. Just by simply "thinking about it", I feel as if I am actually there, and my body and mind are satisfied. It seems that I am also traveling in that magical and vast land with the protagonist who always has a smile on his face, making new friends, entrusting trust, delivering sincerity, meeting elves, fighting together, and even understanding each other with just a look. At that time, when I fantasized like this, I felt as happy as a fish in water. And when I fantasize like this when I grow up, I look at the plum blossoms to quench my thirst, and my heart bursts with unbridled joy like a wild monkey. At the end, my heart swells slightly, just because of the simple and crude words of reality—— Ah, that kind of thing, just think about it, how is it possible, how can it be realized? Now I am 19 years old. If you calculate it this way, it has been 16 or 17 years since I started watching Pokemon, which is longer than me learning piano. (Although I haven't finished watching the anime, I really loved the special episode.) In 2014, I encountered the article "Agate" in Jinjiang. When I met it, this article had been serialized for a while, with more than 30 chapters, and almost every chapter has more than 8,000 words. But there are only about 30 comments. And as soon as I encounter it, I face the crisis of having the entire text locked and waiting for revision = = The author is really in the late stages of obsessive-compulsive disorder. I thought so at the time. But it was those few chapters about Agate's training as a child and her interactions with her family and elves that attracted me. So I silently clicked on the collection. In fact, this author's writing style is not what I like. I prefer paragraphs with some complicated and delicate descriptions, and writing styles that are funny but have connotation. But this author didn't. Her descriptions are very simple, and she writes like a child who doesn't know what romance is. She writes every word seriously and honestly, and at the same time she can't stop talking about trivial matters one after another. The number of words in each chapter is really fat, plump and juicy, but after reading it, she concluded: there are not two serious things in the plot. But this is the feeling I want. Simple, everyday, with a human touch, that is the life in the pure land world in my heart. One after another, the nagging little things make the characters gradually become fuller in their hearts. The world is like a huge puzzle, splicing the colors bit by bit to fill the world. Just like a good night's dream, that dream is plain and sweet, quiet and peaceful, with lingering tenderness. Although I couldn't recall the specific scene after I woke up, the soft mood still remained in my mind and could not dissipate for a long time. I envy agate. Although she lost her mother when she was young, her younger brother disappeared, and her father went anti-social, she was forced to travel through time to a strange world, and all her previous bonds were severed because of "traveling". But she still has a lot of things. For example, faith, persistence, dreams, passion, and unquestionable belief in the existence of this world. She never seemed to question the world. She encountered misfortune, but she still moved forward strong and persistently, with the faith in her heart as strong as diamonds. She firmly believed that she could go home, she believed that she could find her brother, she believed that she could find the lost elf, she believed in it. So it happened. It is not just luck (and the author's arrangement), Agate is not a weak girl, she is not an incompetent dreamer who only sheds tears when facing misfortune. I saw her hard work, her dedication, and her seriousness. This is indeed a beautiful world like a fairy tale, and everything is fair. Because of her faith and dedication, she was able to reap the ideal things. She recovered her lost Didi and found her way home. Not only that. She also gained friendship and bonds from another world. Although separated, the thoughts and memories in the heart cannot be blocked by space. That invisible force can overcome all obstacles and give people spiritual support and happiness. Speaking of which, it was really difficult to follow this article. After I clicked on the collection, this article fell to the lower end of my collection due to the author's laziness (or obsessive-compulsive disorder?) And was not updated for a long time, mixed with some works that had full-text archives. When one day I suddenly discovered that it had broken through all the obstacles and made the headlines in my collection, I was a little stunned for a moment, and even spent some time thinking about what I had read before (laughs). Not long after the update resumed, this article was thoroughly disliked by its creator inside and out (to be honest, I didn't think there was anything to change), so the article was locked for revision. Later, the update was suspended due to various reasons from the author. After all this, the first part of Agate was finally completed. It's been a long, lonely run. Almost everyone has seen Pokemon, but how many of them have really followed it for so long? How many people are chasing fan fiction? This is a small circle, and everyone in it is holding their own treasures and giggling, feeling a little self-treasure, but they are content with it. I admire all authors who persist despite having unsatisfactory data. When I first saw the numbers in the article that were inversely proportional to the bleak data, I was probably a little impressed by the author's persistence (hey). Of course, naturally, I happily hooked up with the author who originally only existed in "The author has something to say" and "The author replies"√ He didn't seriously thank this silly confession. Now that we have finally finished this long-distance race together, let's talk about it a little more seriously. Thank you for persisting in writing the first part. I like this story very much. Please continue. I also hope to walk with you on the next road.

Why do I have such a subtle feeling: the male protagonist knocks the female protagonist unconscious and then says "I love you, live on! Farewell!"

As soon as Xiao Shun came out, the heroine became more determined to leave. Author, do you still remember that Xiao Shun is the hero of your article?