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Some people are really fed up with it. Can you read the literature you like? This person is just pointing fingers here after only seven chapters. Isn't it the same as the most annoying kind of SK people who like KY? The copywriter has already mentioned who the cp is. If you really don't like it, I suggest you write it yourself. If you want to change the cp, can you just read this kind of article yourself?

Bao, there is nothing wrong with you writing about the crematorium. The hidden secrets of suffering must be slowly revealed. The existence of the perspective of the past life is also necessary. This is to ensure the completion of the plot. There is a deviation in the perspective of the reader and the author. All the information released in the early stage needs to be retained. Otherwise, what will be written in the subsequent plot. But since you posted the outline, I guess I won't write this book again, but I still want to tell you that with this kind of subject matter, the last thing you should care about in the early stage is the reviews. No Crematorium will satisfy all readers. You have to write the story you want to write. Like many other articles, one article will not be liked by everyone, but as long as some people are willing to listen to you tell the story, that is enough.

The main text is okay, but the clips from the past life shown in the text are too heart-wrenching. The text seems to be just that Shou didn't have a long mouth in his previous life, but the excerpts from his past life feel like Shou didn't love Yaoyao when they were in love (like the Phoenix man who deceived the love-brained lady).

Be more confident, author. Your writing is very good. There has to be a reason to get excited about hzc. And it's only a few chapters. I understand that some babies are deceived by false hzc and have PTSD, but this one doesn't look like it. I'm not sure if I'll wait until it's finished.

Ah??? I'm confused, no, because I didn't feel that I didn't write the plot of being chased by the crematorium in the copywriting of the top article before. I didn't pursue it until the end. I really want to be chased by the crematorium in this article. You won't update it anymore. Help me. I'm broken.

I admit that I saw hzc unable to walk... I want to see if there is still a chance in the follow-up, madam...

The wife's emotional flow is very well written! When will the book be released? I actually really like this book! It's cute, cute, and delicate.

I have always wanted to say that the fire of hzc is not easy to burn. The different thresholds of each person represent different levels of acceptance. There is also the asymmetry of information in the writing process. The teacher must be strong when writing hzc for the first time. The reason why hzc is hzc is to be buried. It is normal for readers to express their dissatisfaction with the characters. If plq is all peaceful, it means that this is not hzc. The premise of hzc is sadistic attack, so most people tend to change sides; if not, then the degree must be balanced according to the premise, and at the same time, the attack cannot be based on moral points (for example, if he does it for your own good, the other side will still be scolded if he doesn't have a long mouth) A few personal thoughts. I have always liked the teacher's writing. I hope the teacher can take a rest before picking up the pen. I will support him whether he is writing a new article or continuing to fill in the gaps. Readers' opinions are certainly one-sided, but some topics are themselves very controversial (please compare)

Finished reading the outline. Then let me share my thoughts. In fact, I have always said that Lu Bu has a long mouth with a somewhat joking attitude. Because the story has not been fully unfolded and the events of the past life are not known to the readers, I personally did not sentence Lu to death. Chasing Husband hzc also limits the readers to a certain extent. They are all biased towards Yaoyao. So far, all I have seen is Yaoyao's past of being abused, so I am somewhat unhappy (?) In fact, the people I hate the most so far are the person named Lu and Yuanyao's cousin (maybe he is a cousin). Although Yaoyao doesn't care about Lu now, I am somewhat disgusted. The topic comes back to hzc, because there are a lot of cheating behaviors in jj's husband-chasing hzc, such as some people are reconciled with a light-hearted apology... So everyone may subconsciously distrust the subject of husband-chasing hzc, and thus they will be more harsh. Moreover, everyone's values ​​are different, so the requirements for pursuing a husband are also different.

Baby, I think your emotional processing is very delicate, I really like it! Reading this article, I don't think I am dissatisfied with Lu or want to accept anything in exchange. As mentioned below, the plot has not yet unfolded. If I have to say it, I feel that there may be a problem that the plot is not clear (?) I don't know what to say. On the one hand, it is much more difficult to deal with two timelines than a linear narrative. On the other hand, very little information about the past life is indeed revealed. It mainly relies on believing that Lu has hidden secrets (I also had a little bit of this feeling in the previous article, that is, I roughly know what happened in the past, but it feels a little foggy when I read it). But I think your writing is still very good, baby. I really like it! Come on!