
On the Compatibility of Demons and Cyberpunk
论恶魔与赛博的适配度
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After reading a few chapters, the pace of the writing was too fast. I felt like I was reading an outline. The behavior and psychology of the characters were not detailed. Then I simply narrated the plot. After reading it, I knew what the plot was like. The rest had no room for imagination at all. The setting of the world view was too partial and there was no explanation. Be clear about the world setting... I'm not nitpicking, I just feel like I have some suggestions for new authors (you don't have to adopt them). I feel that the author's plot development is very interesting and novel, and can attract some people, but if you want to be a good article, you have to do only a little more than the above. Come on
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