Hyacinth

The chosen hyacinth flower language fits the plot very well, but the writing seems to be rushed and a bit fluid. There are relatively few descriptions. Usually, I just tell the protagonist directly. Well, it would be better to have more descriptions~ This will give the readers a deeper impression~ Maybe because I haven't finished watching it, I can't tell any difference between the two male protagonists, except that Ai's sissy character is a bit memorable, but I personally think that the sissy character under the smell of sweat is very strange... The heroine is sometimes a bit excessive, such as the reason for breaking up the relationship, and the fact that the contact with those unfamiliar people is very natural, well, of course, people who are more open-minded are not excluded, and the heroine cries without moving at the initiative, which is a bit embarrassing. Also, during the period when Korean novels with □ emoticons were popular, I shuddered when I saw one or two inserted emoticons. A little suggestion.

Reminiscent of reality. . .

Baili Bingyan's book is good!! Quite!!!

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Speeding... I didn't notice, but I ended up finishing another article. I'm going to hit the wall!!!!!!

Author, since your self-recommendation has a format, let me remind you that you did not include the address in your post. Go and make up for it, there are too many articles with this name.